A most awsome Fan Fic : - FL CL - 2ND CO M.M. ING.

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

thankx dennis..
I've been looking at alot of peoples fan fic's on this site as well..
you all do great with free writing and trying to keep a basic plot,
keep at it guys.
( dennis, dark otaku, flcl freak, ect.)
I've seen alot of diffrences between,
plot's and sceptical refferences to the original anime/manga..
and from how I develope a plot.

i almost feel if we all were to pull out ideas together,
maybe we'd come up with a half way decient story.
but you know there are alwyes opinions that we wont agree with,
that other people will continue to post about.

let's all try to keep an open mind when reading someone else's story,
and try not to critisize too much on one specific thing.

this originally was all I had ever asked of,
the fans, mods, and admin on this site.
we all know words dont hurt, but damn they are so F**king annoying.

*Till next week guys.*
And I would love to see some posts for ideas and/or comments,
within the discussion thread gang.

*ATOMSK*

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

what's up FLCL fans..

i got comletly bored this weekend,
so i decided to post one act continuing my fan fic.

hope you guys like it.
either pm me with a comment, or send a post to the discussion forums.
enjoy it.

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*Previously, on FLCL - 2nd comming
OST - Bleach* : Battle on the beat.
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Avalisk : " I.. don't think this is the time..
to be flaunting over such an exotic creature like that, mamimi san.."

but sure enough mamimi begins to tap along the cage,
and pets the creature..
it gives off low sounds, as if it were despratly seeking attention.

Mamimi : " it really likes me, avi kun..!"
Travis : " i wouldn't get too attached.. it's being brought up, for bid.."
mamimi : " ooh.. you mean, there selling this creature.?"

Traivs: " the tag says, it's starting bid is at 2,000 seroids.. "
Mamimi : " 2000? isnt that a little steep.?"

Travis : " don't ask me.. ask the peddler, who's selling it."
Travis point's as the peddler begins to puch the carrage once more..
the little creature begins to howl again, with a very lonely tone..
the peddler strikes the cage, to shut the creature up.


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Naota : " all my life..
I've been pushed around, stomped on.. and kicked, like i was dirt..
At first, it seemed like everyone around me..
was controlling my actions..
then once haruko came back,
everything sort of fall's into place..
like nothing bad, has ever happoned..
It's sort of funny when I think about it.. but, eri san.."
Naota turn's to eri and speaks with sensarity.

Naota : " I've.. never felt this way..
this serious feeling, that i've never been able to doubt before.
not from anyone, even you.."

eri turn's and asks him..
Eri : " naosan.. I.."
Naota leans in and gives her a passionate kiss..
she begins to feel his embrace and begins to kiss him back,
as the gas planet begins to raise from behind them,
haruko finally comes forth from around the corner..

Haruko : " ok, ok.. enough with the passion, it sickens me.."
Eri jumps back with a blushing expression,
naota turn's back toward the gas planet..
and both are in silence panic striken,
from haruko's sudden interuption..
haruko soon leans into eri's ear and speaks..

haruko : " you know, a little fooly cooly.. never hurt, ither.."

Naota turns with an embarassed expression,
and screams toward haruko with a furious tone.
Naota : " HARUKO.!!?"
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but.. not all is well, with other members of the crew.
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As amarao and trask speak about the recient events on earth,
the loudness of the bar around them continues to grow.
Trask : " tell me..
douring the past ten years of observation..
did you witness any.. hostillities, whille on that mudball of a planet.?"

amarao : " huh.?"

Trask : " forgive me commander..
I'm simply implying, were there any odd occurances..
whille in contact with the massive, n.o. readings..?"

amarao : " if youre implying about any enomolus acitivites..
then yes,
there deffinetly was a sudden and rappid incrase,
of n.o. activity.. arised on the planet earth.."
trask : " interesting.."

takes yet another drink..

Trask : " then tell me commander..
what makes you sure that those two crew members of your's,
were in fact not involved in the caprican inncodent.."
amarao slams his fist upon the table and glares toward trask..
amarao : " o..k.. thats it, general..!!!
Just what the hell are you implying.?!"

Trask : " ..commander..?"
commander : " yes sir..?"

trask : " if you were in my position and had to choose wether to assume,
the earthlings had something to do with the recient dissapearance..
or you choose that they might afterall be the ones who are in fact innocent..
what would you're thoughts be on the concept of motive.?"

commander : " sir.. the turnout would be the correct, and obvious awnser..
the earthlings are not infact the ones responcible,
for the sattarian's dissapearance.. "
Trask : " correct.. but truth be told,
we did have a hand in ressurecting the mecha..
laying dorment inside of the caprican's silo.. "
commander : " well..
you did give the order, to reactivate that thing..
ontop of which, the young king did destroy.."
Trask : " -sigh- but was it the right choice..?
I mean, the manipulitive thoughts of amarao really got me sturring inside..
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amarao : " you did, WHAT ?!?!? "
amarao screams to mamimi as she hands him trask's credit card..
Mamimi : " you dont have to scream at me, god.."

amarao : " you spent ten.."
amarao cuts himself off and grips mamimi's arm,
then pulls her in close as two of his officers walk by..

amarao : " you spent ten thousand seroids, on a frikkin dinosaur.?!"
Mamimi : " trust me, i have a feeling that this will pay off..besides.."
she begins to cuddle with the rhinoks head,
as it brushes its self aginst mamimi making cooing sounds..

Mamimi : " it's just a baby..
- she speaks with a pout -
think of how scarred you would be,
locked in a cage in a strange place.."
amarao : " i dont care.. and, besides..
this is rediculous, you know this will come outta my pay..?!"

amarao - speaking of pay.. maybe i should check my bank account,
and see if its still active.. -

Mamimi : " i knew you would understand.."
she says with a smile on her face..
amarao just sighs and drops his head..
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Haruko : " and now, the conclusion.. "
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for the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fifth, opening.
( Scryed - Magma Remix. )
Yet, another donation. n.n - thank you -

Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite..
**Shrio Sagisu**
**Shoji Meguro**
Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 4 * Galactic Revelations.

ACT 72 : Amarao's Suspicion..
- Aginst the brotherhood. -
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OST - Death note : L's theme.
( somwhere in space.. )
Zeromus continues his course toward sillios,
paciently awaiting to meet his rival at his destination..
the pod races onward as zeromus calmly look toward the monitor,
now viewing his progress....
Zeromus : " very interesting.. seem's this man has quite an arm..
too bad i couldnt see, the results.."

Zeromus - The Desisive Combatant. -

he continues to watch untill the display image dissapears,
he then presses a button on his left console..
and proceed's with a transmission..
Zeromus : " are you there brother..?"
unknown zobuzon. : " yes brother.. i've seen the footage..
there manipulitive capabillities are strong, but they lack in resolve.."

Zeromus : " that shall not be a problem for me, brother...
just make sure that cannon, is conpleted for mother..
she need's power, to fuel her cause.."

Unknown zobu zon : " i shall assist you by any means necessary.. "
Zeromus : " good.. i shall see you, once i've taken care of.. these.. "

Zeromus smiles deviantly, once he speaks the name of our race..

" ..Earthlings.."
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Meanwhille..
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( Location : planet sillios - sillios galaxy )
OST : Bleach #3 - Stepping stone.
Tasuku : " alright..
but make sure he understand, he's only there till we get back.."
Kamon : " and tell you're nice friend,
i appreciate the new hot tub, and video phone..
heh, I'm calling from the tub right now.."

Miyu Miyu : " tasuku... "
she sings with a tone..

Miyu Miyu : " make sure naota does his best..
i dont wanna be let down when he gets home.."
Kamon : " aint she just a peach.?"
kamon asks with a large grin on his face..

Tasuku : " - sigh -
..just make sure you relay the message to grand -dad, ok.?"
Kamon : " you can reliy on me, son..
and talk to naota -kun, he's becomming distiant since you guys left.."
Tasuku : " dad.. it's only been a week, since we've left.."
Kamon : " no more outta you, let me talk to naota -kun.. "
Tasuku : " ok ok.. here he is already.."
Naota soon sits down and begins his conversation with his father..
Naota : " dad.. i know what youre gonna say, and.."
Kamon : " youve been fooly coolying already with that girl, havnt you.?"
kamon begins squeezing his face aginst the screen,
in a vicious manor..
naota : " no.. ive been taking it slow, like you said.."
Kamon : " oh my poor boy..
he's already been manipulated into fooly coolying with his girl,
by that hussey of a house maid again.."

Haruko : " WHAT DID YOU SAY..?!?! "
Kamon cringes once he hears harukos voice,
come from the background
Kamon : " ..nothing.."
Haruko : " that's what i thought.. now listen, miyu miyu.?
naota's fine with eri..
they are taking it slow, no worries..
but you two..
I'd like to see a little more outta you, before we get back alright.?"
Miyu Miyu : " boy you didn't tell me she was strict,
and a bitch on top of that.?!"

haruko : " hey what the hell ?!
you want you're scrawny neck wrenched, huh.?!"
Haruko : - salty fucking bitch! -

Haruko begins to grip the screen and strangle it,
as naota backs her away.. and continues with his conversation..
now both tasuku and naota each grip an arm,
as haruko continues to wrench the monitor screen.

naota : "dad remember the pictures you took all those years ago..
well they were about the facillity right.?"
Kamon : "why, yes.. but, how did you know.?"
tasuku : " theres alot worse things out here,
then he can imagine naota kun..
don't reviel too much, or you'll trigger the channel.."

naota : " maybe he is the right person to tell..
after all, he was the original photographer on site..
the day medical mechanica opened.."
Naota : - besides what else could of happoned douring that time,
what experiments were they undergoing as the facillity opened.?

Kamon : " well I had a little help from youre mother.."
Miyu Miyu : " oh cleria how i miss her little rants.."
Kamon : " you had an obsession with her passion, miyu..
please, whats this about naota kun.?"
Tasuku : " naota believes all the ocurrances,
that tie the nandaba family name together..
may string a chain reaction to the dissapearance, of our planetary cousins.."

Kamon jump's and begins to shout..
Kamon : " you mean there are more pritty girls out there..
shit !, ..an I wanned to come with you..!!!"

Kamon folds his arms in with a disgusted expression.
Miyu Miyu gives kamon a sarcastic glare before speaking.

Miyu Miyu : " oh sure, leave me to rot here.."

Miyu giggles a bit as she lift's her curvy leg into the air,
and begins to sink her top half into the hot waters..

Miyu Miyu : "mmmm ...nice hot tub.. "
she then stands streight up naked as a jay bird,
and points toward kamon..
her busty figure is plain for all to see.

Miyu Miyu : "ok.. get him outta here,
I simply must have a small vacation.. "
Kamon then jump's up and everyone closes there eyes,
saying obscene things toward the screen.

Kamon : " in my hot tub ? ...i dont think so.."
Miyu Miyu : " and why not ?
it's not like you're going use it,
being 6 billion light years from home.!!"
Naota begins to see the tension flare between the two,
but the unsightly sceene make's the crew feel uncomfortable.
Naota : "ok, you two have fun now.. g-gotta go.."

Naota presses a button on accident,
which in turn turns the volume on the screen up..
he then bats at the remote, untill the screen shuts off..
all the whille kamon and miyu miyu continue, to argue about ..space..

Naota and tasuku sigh and both hang there heads,
whille haruko sneers towards the back of their heads..
Tasuku & Naota : " we herd that haruko.."
haruko look's back suprised, as they say this both simoltainously..
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FLCL 2nd comming...
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OST : *Bleach - On the pricepice, of defeat..


naota : " I don't know why but the brothethood thinks,
i have something to do with the dissapearance of the satarians..
this race is better known to us, earthlings as.. the capricans..

this has been bothering not only tasuku and myself..
but everyone who has called our planet home.. even if for a time.
even canti, haruko, travis, and amarao himself..
have concidered our planet, a second home..

home is never easy to leave, even if for a time..
it's a place you rest youre head, and gather youre thoughts..
so when the next day comes around,
you are able to face it with deturmination..
the thought of survival is our necessity, just to make it through the day..
so when we do come home..
we are burdened with that days stress, no more..
we rest our weary bones by the fire,
and try to make the best of our life anyway we can..

but what of our consequences for our actions..
sometimes they eat at us like a small carpenter ant,
nawing away at a giant piece of wood.
i wouldn't be in this position now,
if it wernt for the strange and oddtistic ways of haruko reharu..
she has to be the start.. all along i couldnt see it.. untill now..
haruko reharu was our beginning.. but what of the end..?
who can i reliy on now since this chain of events began..
there was only one being i could confide in..
and he was dead..
trapped within the submission, of the n.o. vortex..
his purgatory, his repentance..
A being, known as atomsk les'casse` ..pirate king, of desoliea..

Naota : "..Atomsk.. what do, I do.?"
As naota speaks, his thoughts are channel through his essance..
excelcia protects him, within the channel..
atomsk continues to be his consistiant advisor, within the abyss of the void..

atomsk : - I'm happy to see,
you've survived jaiden's attack.. naota -san..
you are indeed progressing even faster, then i had forseen.. -
naota - ..i must ask you..
what do i do.? the brotherhood places sole blame on myself,
for the disappearance of the capricans..?

Atomsk : " you must sway the senate,
once you've reached dargon and the galactic trade federation.. "

Naota : " i know but how how ? -
- Snap -
Naota : -wait a minute..!?-
naota quickely understand what atomsk had forseen..
Naota : " one voice, to sway all minds.. "

Atomsk : " I told you..
you catch on quicker then I had expected,
you're becomming one with excelcia.. "

naota : " how will I sway the senate though..?
by telling them of the zobu zon.? "
Atomsk : " that, I cannot awnser..
but trust in your family, naota san..
they may, hold the key to many mysteries..."
Atomsk forces naota away, as the channel slowly closes..
naota finally understanding that the idea,
may not come to mind right away..
for now atomsk leaves him to his own thoughts..
as naota silently sit upright in a meditation position..
eri laying silently asleep, in the bed beside him..
naota thinks to himself as he blows the candle out,
and sits in the dark.. contemplating his next move..
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FL CL - 2nd co M.M. ing...
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OST : Bleach - Head in the clouds.

Dravendell stand's upright continuing to think to herself,
as she catches a glimpse of atomsk from her right eye.

dravendell : " so.. the boy has contacted the king, again..
at this rate he'll figure everything out..
he may even come to me for advice, aginst my brethern.. "

dravendell : " why do you haunt me.. my life's past..?
the thought of haruko wanting to destroy me,
sends chills up my spine..
but how, can i feel this.. ...emotion..?"

- I am a machine i can not feel,
only logic consumes my everlasting thought.. -

Dravendell - but if i can see these invisions..
then maybe my logic is not so absolute..
I have severed my link, with mother's mianframe..
maybe i am imagining this, but i can see atomsk..
he is not dead, but.. trapped..
forever in a void..? how can this be..?
noone has ever channeled themself, to one point in the void..
they all become lost, with in that abyss..?
what the hell is happoning, to the universe..? -

Dravendell - i need to find out more about this channel, and the void..
i have to stick around, a little longer.. gain, their trust..
eventually come to understand this ..essance.. -
but in this state i can not..
the brotherhood will eventually destroy me, for what i've done..
unless..?

as she thinks about her current situation,
haruko once again walks inside alone..
she talks to the two guards and they both begin to leave,
and haruko with a sneer walk forward with a trey of food..

haruko : " are yah hungrey yah little bitch..?"

dravendell : " come to mock me again, dear sister..?
or is it, you're lonely for a story..?
- gasps slowly -
or maybe it's youre confussed about youre lover,
and have no clue what to do about him..? "
Haruko : " no, even better..
youre gonna tune into youre brethern,
and tell me what there planning.."
dravendell begins to laugh in her cell as haruko,
slowly drops the trey of food before her sister..
food is spilled over the edges of the trey,
and haruko continues to stand there in silence..

Dravendell : " you know i can not do that any longer, dear sister.."
haruko : " well sis.. i see it this way..
you had the capabillities, and now you dont.. "
haruko begins to grin deviantly,
as dravendell looks onto a small tool pulled from haruko's pocket.

haruko : " but with this little tool, i snagged from travis.. "
Dravendell's eyes become wider with fear..
haruko : " i can reactivate youre sonic pulse net,
and reconverge you with the mainframe..
haruko : " that way, i can hear every little thing mother has planned.."
dravendell : " you.. you wouldnt do such a thing.."
Haruko : "try me.. dear sister.."
Dravendell's eyes become wider, as haruko opens the door to her cell..
the chain's the bind dravendell, are tightly locked on each end of the cage..
haruko approches dravendell, and is eventually face to face with her..
haruko glaring onto the signa with a vial grin..

haruko : " now stay still..
cause this is gonna be, one hell of a headache..!"
And begins to surgically remove her skin..
Dravendell doesnt move an inch.
but once haruko places the tool toward her head,
the shock is painfull and dravendell screams..
haruko : - that's it sister, endure the pain..
this is gonna be, quite a whille.. -
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FL CL - 2nd comming..
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OST :FLCL original - Little busters.

Meanwhille..
the rest of the crew continue to devise a plan, to detur the general escort..
so they can continue there investigation, of the capricans dissapearance..
Naota : " atomsk said that one of you,
may hold the key to sway the senate.. huh.?
....wheres haruko.?"
Travis : " she said she had some questions, for our signa captive.. "
naota : - sigh, she's as sure footed as ever.. -
naota : " well then she's gone and tried to reaccess,
the mainframe.. correct, travis san.?"
Travis : " if you mean she stole a piece of my equipemnt,
and is using it to reastablish connection to mothers net.. then yes..
dravendell, is currently undergoing ..surgery..."
Tasuku : " boy does she got balls.."
Mamimi : " wouldnt that trigger a becon of sorts,
to let mother know where we're at naosan.?"
Naota : " not if haruko can reactivate it, without triggering the becon..
have faith..
maybe she's got an idea on how to bypass, the becons emmition pulse.."

Tasuku : "like you said, she's smarter then we give her credit for.."

chery : "you're kidding.. right, tarokun..?"
tasuku : "afraid not, love..
this has become more of a burden then the capricans dissapearance..
if haruko triggers the becon, then mother will know our exact location..
we can only pray, she doesnt fuck this up."

eri : "haruko san's tampering with that signa's head,
nao kun this isn't good.."

naota : "I know.. but there's nothing we can do about it right now..
we can only have faith, that haruko knows what she is doing.. "

Gaku : " well?
she has screwed up before, even if it was in a good way right.?
then we have to trust she knows what she has to do.."

gaku is cut off by the preasence of amarao,
walking inside of the small room..

amarao : "how gave haruhara permission to enter that cell.?"
Naota speaks as amarao approches,
naota continuing to watch haruko and dravendell converse.

Naota : "actually, it was me who gave the order..
she is attempting to reactivate the main net of mother.."
amarao out of shock and slight confussion, spits off at the mouth.
Amarao : " are you insane naota..?!
that will trigger the becon to initiate.."
naota shakes his head, acknowledging amarao's concern
naota : "not if she can bypass the becon's pulse trigger..
it's a pressure sequence in drevendell's cerebral core,
and haruko is almost half way done..
we had to mute the sound,
cause of the intense pain that signa's recieving.."

amarao : "so you're gonna once again, place youre faith in that rouge..
gotcha.. but, how will this help us out..?"

naota : "well with the mainframe reactivated,
it'll be masked by our n.o., so mother won't catch on to our ..spy.."
amarao itches his chin as he speaks,
clearly intreagued by naota's idea.
amarao : "pritty clever, if i say so myself..
use one of her own as a spy, to evesdrop on her plans.."

Tasuku : "exactly.."
Taru : "well in all other cases,
this might just be our best course of action.."

sota : "this is insane..
she's tampering with alien technology,
she has no knoweldge of tampering with..
and you're gonna sit here, and let her go through with it..
that's nuts.?!"
Naota continues to watch as he speaks,
trying to calm sota down.
naota : "sota, calm down.. she's not gonna trigger the becon..
if she does then, i'll just have to destroy her..
once she's reached her full potentiall."

Mamimi : "but then..
you'll be in danger of mother's manipulation, nao -san..?"

Naota..
clearly clairvoyant to the consequences of triggering the beacon,
awnser's mamimi with a calm tone.
naota : "that's a chance i'll have to take.. if it arises, to that point..
meanwhille,
everyone just continue your duties as if nothing is going on,
I don't want trask finding out we're tampering with dravendell.."
the crew finally in agreeance, concurr's with naota's decissiopn.
Crew : "right.."
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FLCL - 2nd comming..
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( Location : On route, toward sillios.)
OST : FLCL - Fool, on the planet.

As the stumi and the prometheus begin there couse toward sillios,
trask ponders his thoughts as to amarao's sudden bust of anger..
Trask placing sloe blame on naota for the dissapearance of the capricans..

Trask : - what are they up too, now..?
tisk figures they would shun me off like this.. they dont trust my intellect.. -

Trask : "resume course for sillios helmsmen,
and make sure that the stumi is kept in sight at all times.."

Helmsmen : "compliance.."

Trask continues his frustrating thoughts,
about the arguement between himself and amarao..

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Trask : " tell me..
douring the past ten years of observation..
did you witness any.. hostillities, whille on that mudball of a planet.?"
amarao : " huh.?"
Trask : " forgive me commander..
I'm simply implying, were there any odd occurances..
whille in contact with the massive, n.o. readings..?"
amarao : " if you're implying about any enomolus acitivites..
then yes,
there deffinetly was a sudden and rappid incrase,
of n.o. activity.. arised on the planet earth.."
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trask : - maybe amarao was right about the earthlings after all.. ? -
Trask continues thinking things through carefully..

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Trask : " then tell me commander..
what makes you sure that those two crewmembers of your's
were infact, not involved in the caprican inncodent.."


amarao : " ten years ago...
we managed to free the pirate king known as atomsk,
usaing a channel inbedded within a twelve year old boy's head..

that boy is now the man that stands between,
total and complete annilation of the universe..
and complete and ever lasting harmoney, between all races..
to tell the truth general, im not sure how to describe it.."
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Trask : - maybe this kid really does have what it takes,
to free us from this scurge..? -
trask sighs slowly,
then begins to think about the conversation once more..

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Amarao : " ten years later..
atomsk returned to basically hand the torch to someone with capabillities,
of handling the extreeme and emmense pressure,
channeled within the void.
naota nandaba maybe the only one,
who can channel it's extreeme pressure,
and focus it at one spacific point in time.."
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trask : - but noone not even atomsk himself is capable of controlling,
such a mass amount of n.o.
how is it this boy has the potential of controlling it,
as naturally as basking in the sun.? -
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amarao : " thats exactly my point, general.. noone has..
you have to figure with all the pressure surrounding the user,
the user has to have a consequential balance..
to counteract and bring order to the unstable channel..
untill now.. noone has been able, to do so.."
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Trask : - this is unfathemable..
its too frustrating, to even think of such a thing. -
trask continues watching the monitor,
as the stumi continue its course toward the sorority's homeworld..

Trask - i have to keep an eye on this 'crew' of his, a little whille longer..
..just to make sure my suspicions are not, what i fear.. -

Trask : " commander, i'll be in my quarters..
let me know if any strange or enomolus readings, ocurr.."
commander : "yes sir.."
trask slowly walks to the lift and as the doors close, he sighs heavily..
his thoughts racing about the conversation,
and the disturbing news from douglas had..
made his mind go haywire..
Trask had to relax, and place his thoughts on the back burner for now.
amarao was his most trusted friend, as well as his subordinate..
trasks thoughts on the other hand, could not be swayed so easily..
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FLCL 2nd comming....
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*To be continued *
- was this a little better.? -
see you in september.

[yellowrock]

dear lord this thing has gone on forever

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

Yellowrock.. Bro....
give more feed back then : this thing's gone on long enough..

least give me more detailed info, about what you thought of the chapter..

[yellowrock]

i didn't read it, any of it.

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

Lots of people thought i dissapeared,
and I'm sorry if i worried anyone..
Really.. i've been so concentrated on many diffrent things around me,
that i havn't had much time for posting on the site..
I'm back now, for the time being..

good news for people who like bleach,
the 3rd movie sub is comming out at the end of the month (the 31st).
and will be available soon via bit torrent, hosted by dattebayo.

finally how long has it been ? 8 months.. somthin like that..

anyhow..
I'll post my next chapter of this fan fic,
in hopes that readers will enjoy it.
*till next month people..*

*Previously on FLCL 2nd - Co M.M.ing. *


Naota : " all my life..
I've been pushed around, stomped on.. and kicked, like i was dirt..
At first, it seemed like everyone around me..
was controlling my actions..
Then once haruko comes back,
everything sort of falls into place..
like nothing bad, has ever happoned..
Its sort of funny when i think about it.. but, eri san.."
Naota turns to her and speaks sensarally.

Naota : " i've.. never felt this way..
this serious feeling, that i've never been able to doubt before.
not from anyone, but you.."

eri turns and asks him..
Eri : " naosan.. I.."

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amarao : " you did, WHAT ?!?!? "
amarao screams to mamimi as she hands him trask's credit card..
Mamimi : " you dont have to scream at me, god.."

amarao : " you spent ten.."
amarao cuts himself off and grips mamimi's arm,
then pulls her in close as two of his officers walk by..

amarao : " you spent ten thousand seroids, on a frikkin dinosaur.?!"
Mamimi : " trust me, i have a feeling that this will pay off..besides.."
she begins to cuddle with the rhinoks head,
as it brushes its self aginst mamimi making cooing sounds..

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Zeromus - The Desisive Combatant. -

he continues to watch untill the display image dissapears,
he then presses a button on his left console..
and proceed's with a transmission..
Zeromus : " are you there brother..?"
unknown zobuzon. : " yes brother.. i've seen the footage..
there manipulitive capabillities are strong, but they lack in resolve.."

Zeromus : " that shall not be a problem for me, brother...
just make sure that cannon, is conpleted for mother..
she need's power, to fuel her cause.."

Unknown zobu zon : " i shall assist you by any means necessary.. "
Zeromus : " good.. i shall see you, once i've taken care of.. these.. "

Zeromus smiles deviantly, once he speaks the name of our race..

" ..Earthlings.."
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As she thinks about her current situation,
haruko once again walks inside alone..
she talks to the two guards and they both begin to leave,
and haruko with a sneer walk forward with a trey of food..

haruko : " are yah hungrey yah little bitch..?"

dravendell : " come to mock me again, dear sister..?
or is it, you're lonely for a story..?
- gasps slowly -
or maybe it's youre confussed about youre lover,
and have no clue what to do about him..? "
Haruko : " no, even better..
youre gonna tune into youre brethern,
and tell me what there planning.."
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haruko : " now stay still..
cause this is gonna be, one hell of a headache..!"
And begins to surgically remove her skin..
Dravendell doesnt move an inch.
but once haruko places the tool toward her head,
the shock is painfull and dravendell screams..
haruko : - that's it sister, endure the pain..
this is gonna be, quite a whille.. -

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Naota : " and now, the conclusion.. "
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fifth, opening.
( Scryed - Magma Remix -)
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Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite..
**Shrio Sagisu**
**Shoji Meguro**
Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 4 * Galactic Revelations.

ACT 73 : Unruly alliance.
- Desprate acts, for a desprate cause.. -

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OST : Hellsing - Vadican Cathedral..

Naota - By now..
you're all wondering why I've been feeling, so down lately..

I mean, look around me.?
everyone i know..
has been drawn into this entire mess,
and i've been the direct cause of their actions..
the betrayel of atomsk relates to this hypothisis, i've been having reciently..
but how in deed, did atomsk betray jeriah ?
i felt myself painfully striken in my mind, about this thought..
untill i decided to ask the man directly.. through the void..
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Within the N.O. void..
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Atomsk : " jeriah.. jacobi..
now that's a name i havn't herd, in an eons time..
i'm suprised, haruko even remembers.. she was so young.. "
atomsk, bound to the mass of land within the void..
continues his conversation, with naota..
naota paces around the darkened figure,
with white hair and goldish lighted eyes..

Atomsk : " i killed him because it was the only way to absorb his force,
to overpower jaiden douring the kelido star inncodent..
jeriah, actually wanted me to do him in..

he was so happy, to finally fight me..

i took his life in exchange, to destroy jaiden..
his selfless act,
allowed my soul to be spared..
even if it's this, plain of existiance.. "

naota : " what about these, ..zobu zon.?
what are there intentions, with the cannon.?"

Atomsk : " A propulsion cannon's density is probably negitive proportions,
which mean's they are hell bent on trying to destroy something,
with the same compounds..
thinking that the mass amount of negitive energy,
would cancel out mother's cpu drive. or mainframe.."

Naota : " so what actually would happon,
is mother would feed off the negitive energy..
and her powers would enhance, ten fold.."

Atomsk : " be weary of this species,
for they maybe collaberating with mother..
as for the capricans, there abduction was no coincidence.. "

naota : " so the zobu zon are using the capricans as slaves,
to build the giant propulsion cannon..
but how do you know all of this.?"

Atomsk : " i am ages old, and have witnessed this before..
this is all too common, in warfare..
the children of this universe, are still in their ..primal stages.."

naota : " that's not vary fair to say..
especially from an ancient, such as you.."
naota looks around himself, at the vastness of the void..
then begins to question atomsk's own existiance..
naota : speaking of which how can you still exist through this void.?"

Atomsk : " this is my pentance, for holding a grudge aginst the all mighty.."

Naota : " you who speak as a god, knows no god.
how is this possible..?"

Atomsk : "ooh, there is a god.. and he is very real..
the only regret of life i had..
was the failure of never forseeing, mother's birth..

for that..
I've let countless lives befall tragic fates..
lives that have had meaning before the inncodent, have been lost.."

naota : " and with that, lives have been born..
without you're sacrifice, i could never have existed.."

Atomsk : " no.. was not my will, but god's own.. "

naota : " then why.? why would he ask me of this.?"
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OST : Bleach * - Soundscape To Ardor.

Atomsk : " that is not my awnser, to give to you.. ..naota. "
Naota turns and looks to him as he speaks..

Atomsk : " I was, never mortal.. that, is what seperates us..
you're species cherishes life, and mine never did..
we thrived because the universe needed caretakers,
douring the infant stages of it's own birth..
that, was god's will to have us surve.."

naota : " then all of this was, mearly accidental..
and you choose after the destruction of youre homeworld,
to persue and destroy mother.."

Atomsk : " i was not alone.. many lost their lives, to the mechanical threat..
and if all goes to mother's will, many more will continue to die.."

naota : " then our meeting wasnt conincedential.."

Atomsk : " I'm afraid not, my son.."

Naota - i had wondered for so long,
why my life was standing at the edge of chaos..
as i looked to him he gave off a serene glow,
within the darkness of the void..
he was content, with his punishment.

- I was beginning to wonder,
if i would ever feel the same way.. -
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OST : Bleach - Recollection 3.

eri : " nao -kun.?"
Naota : " yeah, ..this was confussing.."
Eri : " what did he say.?"
naota : " basically in a nut shell.?"
naota looks down and to the left, away from eri..
she gives off a worried look, as to his actions..

Naota : " let go ? ..and let god.. "

eri : " would make for sound advice..
but knowing you, you've never really been too good on faith.."

Naota : " it's not that, i'm worried about.. - sigh -
it's when i asked him, about jeriah "
eri : " well ? talk nao kun, don't bottle it up.?"

naota : "He said, he killed him..
because it was the only way to absorb his force,
to overpower jaiden douring the kelido star inncodent..
jeriah, actually wanted him to do in his best friend..

he was so happy, to finally fight atomsk..

once atomsk took his life, he destroyed jaiden..

jeriah's selfless act,
allowed atomsk's soul to be spared..
..he actually, was ok with.. being, in the void.. "

Eri : " pentance, for his envyious act..
so does this mean he trully was forgivin?
or does this mean his work is still not done.?"

Naota : " who knows, but only god.. right.?"

eri : " faith nao -kun.. the awnser's around the corner.."

Naota sighs as he places both hands, on each side of his face..
showing the clear expression of frustration..
eri calmly hugs him, and places her head on his shoulder..

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( *Meanwhille, in the depths of space..* )

OST : Bleach - Princess in captivity.

Zeromus : " computer, e.s.t. to arrival.?"
computer : " e.s.t. is exactly 2 weeks,
12 hour's time to arrival on sillios."

zeromus: " ..good.. open a channel.."

Computer : " channel open, designate location.?"

Zeromus : " planet : Ias.."

computer : " begin transmission.."
suddenly a figure in dark appears from the screen,
inwhich the communication was locked.

Zeromus : "i trust everything is going, according to plan.?"

Darkened figure : " once the stabilization and recalibration is complete,
i will be running a few minor diognostics...
something the matter, dear brother.?"

Zeromus : "..these, kids are not like the others we've faced before..
somehow they know of mother's plan..
I'm not completly sure how as of yet,
but they've obtained the knoweldge.."

darkened figure : " worry not, brother..
our siblings are currently at work, restoring our fallen brethern..
patience, and our victory will be assured..
after all, it is mother's will.."

Zeromus : " on another note..
i want you to track any information, leading to the fallen timelords..
i have a feeling anything we can obtain, will be quite usefull to our cause.."

darkened figure : " i will access the mainframe..
and gather what information i can.. safe journey, zeromus.."

Zeromus : " untill our reunion, brother.."
the channel then closes and zeromus looks off to the side of his pod..
his thoughts are distracted by an unknown force..

Zeromus : -this little task maybe challanging...-smiles-
even if they've managed to capture dravendell,
there are many others they do not know about..
they think they've got tactics for defense aginst us.?
they don't have a clue..-

- miniacle laughter -
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OST : The pillows - Carnival.

Haruko : " of all the lousey things i gotta do.. this, takes the cake..!!"
Dravendell continues to scream in agony,
whille haruko tinkers with her cerebral cortex...

Dravendell : " AAAAAHHHH!!!! "

Haruko : " Oh, hold still damn it.!!"
Dravendell : " hara san.. please..
i cannot bear this, any longer.. AHHH!!"

Haruko : "just a little longer..! "

Dravdendell : "I.. didn't mean too.. PLEASE!!!! "
Haruko : " just a little longer..!!"

Dravendell : ..my father, ..bother, ..mother.. even you, I betrayed.."

Haruko : " ..don't think, just relax.."

Dravdendells pain subsides somewhat,
and she begins to tolerate haruko's tinkering.
dravdendell begins to look downward with a saddened face..

Dravdendell : "..I'm sorry.. "

Haruko : " hush now, this is still gonna sting.."

Haruko - noone cares about what happoned then..
you killed them, and tried to marter yourself..
through the most morbid, corrupted thing this universe suffer's with..
don't try to justify you're action's, sister..
you're regret is all the punishment, you will ever need. -
Dravendell continues to think,
and thus she repents her actions.. beging for forgiveness..

Dravendell : " WHY ...? " - she begins to cry -

haruko : " because, sis.. you needed to know.. "

Haruko finally drops the tool she was using,
and calmly solomly closes the exo flesh back up..

both now stare off in opposiate sides of eachother,
with saddened expressions..

Haruko : " it's done..
you still have mobillity, and with the use of the mainframe..
you can connect to mother's nural net, without being detected..

i have also disabled part of you're controlls,
especially those weapons in youre arms..
so you're basically defenseless..
but, we.. could still use you're help.. "

dravendell contionues staring off with no expression in her face..
the only expression is of distraught.

haruko : " give it time, dravi -kun..
I know.. i had to give it time too.. "
haruko say's her final word, before walking out of the cell..
leaving dravendell alone.

Haruko calmly walks out of the cell, wiping some blood off of her hands..
onto a damp towel..
as she exits the cell, she is soon met by naota..

naota : " how did it go.?"
haruko : " for her.? terrible.. she'll be woozey for a whille..
but I've disabled most of her weaponry,
and reastablished connection to mother's nural net.."

Naota : " are you ok.?"
Haruko : " me? oh, i'm fine.."
haruko suddenly looks down and to the right, away from naota..
Haruko : " .. just a little, concerned.."

Naota : " you know i'm here, if you need someone to talk with.."

haruko : " sorry slugger.. not this time.. "

she pat's naota's shoulder as she walks passed him,
and down the corridor..
naota look's back pondering what was on her mind, at that moment..

Naota -
with mother's nural net back online within dravendell's cerebral cortex,
i was suprised at how well haruko was taking all of this..
this was her sister.. her only family..
now, twisted machinery..
My thoughts dwelled on haruko's safty,
she was still hiding emotions from me..
which is to be expected.. after all, we no longer were together..

I knew in my heart if givin the time,
haruko would open up to us about her past..
she needed time alone, to gather her thoughts..
Dravendell batrayed her own, killed them without remorse...
then after eons of witnessing mother's cruelty,
sought out a scapegoat to end her misery..
which by recient circumstances, just so happoned to be me.

Whatever was ahead of us in the days to come,
had to be more disturbing and deadlier then we've ever faced before..

..It kind of made me wonder if what atomsk had said, was really true.. -


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FLCL 2nd comming..
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As the crew continues onward,
tension builds with mamimi's new found friend..
avalisk on the other side of the room,
continues playing a tune on his rickenbacker..
Listening and playing along with a song on his mp3 player.

mamimi tears up herb leaves that nicole provided,
from the stumi's arboritum.

the small creature perks up from the sounds made by the guitar,
turning its head toward avalisk every now and again.
the sounds make the creature slightly aggitated.
it continues making cooing sounds, showing its nervousness..

Mamimi : " avi kun you may wanna play that some other time..
the sounds are making our friend here, slightly annoyed. "

she continues filling the bin inside the creature's cage..

Avalisk : ' I'm sorry mamimi san, but it's such a good tune.."

Mamimi : " i know avi kun, and i like it too..but.. she..?
umm.. he.. is getting aggrivated, and is bumping aginst the cage.."
Avalisk slowly places the guitar on the bed and calmly stands up,
then walks over to the couch.
as he sit's down he calmly pet's the creature's head, and looks to mamimi.
mamimi finishes tearing the leaves from a small basket,
and set's it on the table next to the cage..
avalisk begins to look with some concern toward mamimi.

Avalisk : " something's been bothering you... hasn't it.?"

mamimi solomly looks down a bit,
then turns to avalisk before speaking.

mamimi : " at first i didn't realize it..
but the peddler we saw on the outpost, was a zobu zon..
it's posture was diffrent,
from the one we saw on the prometheus's monitors..
it made me begin to question, cirten parties motives.. "

Avalisk : " like who.?"
Mamimi : " well ? like.. our general escorts deturmination,
to make impossible accusations towards naota..
Or even amarao's thoughts for that matter.."

avalisk : " I'm sure naota has a plan up his sleave, for all of us. "

Mamimi : " that's not everything.. travis is another..
why is he hell bent on keeping things from naota.?
and then, there's eri and haruko.."

Avalisk : " i dont think you should be worrying about that..
i mean it's naota -sensai after all.."
Mamimi : " haruko's thoughts are beginning to scare me..
her regrets about naota and her persuit of atomsk..
those two reasons were her only purpose in her life..
but now with naota and atomsk merged,
and medical mechanica on the raise..
she's beginning to question her own existiance.. "

mamimi begins to break down and cry on avalisk's lap,
avalisk tries his best to comfort her..
avalisk : " mamimi kun.."

Mamimi : " i'm so scared for us, avi kun.. -sniffles- "

As mamimi cries the tension is felt by the creature,
and the cooing it made was a saddened sound.
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FLCL 2nd comming..
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OST : Bleach - Ola ! Arrancar. - Remix.

Travis begins to link the compad to the newly designed database..
and soon he begins to download the information from the mural,
and a mass amount of information is installed..
inside of the ship's new mainframe..

Travis sighs as his tireless work, is almost complete.
the console begins to retreive the data stored with in the compad..
he then lays back in his seat and closes his eyes, for only a second..
before the docking bay door opens, revieling amarao.

amarao : " having fun stealing my technology,
and using it to restore you're races history.? "

Travis : " making such a faulse accusation,
would lead to an abrupt and corhorse arguement..
which by any means, i will not do with you.."

amarao : " aww come on, I'm just making small talk.."
amarao sit's acrossed the desk, stareing travis and begins to converse..
amarao : " I see you're nearly done, with you're task.."

Travis : " i still have a few diognostics to run, before i can say that.."

Amarao : " so does this mean,
we'll be able to record this information once its complete..?"

Travis : " in a manner of speaking, yes..
you and the brotherhood will have full access to the entire desoliean database..
but i must ask you all to use extreeme caution,
whille flipping through our races files..
there maybe some things that you might find.. disturbingly, strange.. "

amarao : " i have to be frank with you..
and ask about naota's dissapearance,
douring three days of searching for the eye of atomsk.. "

Travis : " i was only witnessing naota's progression,
and his retreivement of the eye.."

amarao : " hence why i am asking you, in disclusion..
seems to me you and haruko were the only ones who could vouge,
for naota's dissapearance..
since we've only met you about two months ago,
and the fact that haruhara has been avoiding me.."

travis : " thats no suprise, i mean after all..
you do still work for the brotherhood."

Amarao : " i get to my point..
it seems trask is already concidering accusations towards naota..
I'm confussed as to how he would go about these, accusations..
but i'm sure he will figure something out.."
Travis : " then why not sit back and relax..?"

amarao : " trask was never drastic like this..
he wouldn't just jump to conclusions, without a just cause..
..i have a feeling he is fighting his thoughts,
because he doesnt wish to see what is happoning before his eyes..
the senate of the brotherhood is falling apart bit, by bit..
and im sure his diplomats are already agruing about, mother's plan.."

Travis : " you will only need one voice to sway the senate, commander..
naota has an enigmatic way of voicing his opinion, toward this threat.
he will face many trials along his way,
to defeating mother and her children..
once naota reaches dargon,
the brotherhood will realize that his voice is his resolve. "

amarao : " bold words for someone with, everlasting knoweldge.."

Travis : " as I've said before, commander.. I am mearly, an observer.."

amarao smierks toward the timelord,
as travis looks up toward him then back down to the compad.

amarao feeling slightly confussed but relaxingly assured,
leaves travis to his works..

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Sota, gaku, and Taru are sitting around a table in the stumi's lounging area..
nicole and travis soon walk by, as the trio continues playing cards..
Taru : " I'll take two.."

Gaku : " i'll take one.."

Sota : " ok whos going first..?"

Gaku : " full house.. 5's over 7's."

Taru : " streight flush.. diamonds.."

Sota : " four of a kind, ..Aces"

gaku : " aww damnit.. and how in the hell did you pull that off.?"

sota : " what can i say, i'm lucky tonight.."

Taru : " sota's been counting cards.."

Gaku : " WHAT.?!?!! "
sota : " what, you've never counted cards.. it's easy.."
Taru : " ..wish I could count the cards.."
Gaku : " how are you able to read these things.!!!?"
sota : " well for instance theres this little star, on one of the cards..
thats how you can tell it's an ace..
Or for instance, there's only so many dot's compared to others..
and then theres the numerical way, which is harder.."

gaku : " i cant believe you swindeled me.."

sota : " its not terrible, just so long as you know what youre doing.."

suddenly naota walk up behind sota and speaks..
Naota : " so i suppose even with counting the cards,
you believe you can almost beat anyone ..right.?"

sota : " well, i wouldnt go that far.. but i've had my share of wins.."

naota : " so mind if i join for a whille ?
- sigh - I need to get my mind off of things.."

Gaku : " ..I take it haruko's done with her task.."
naota : " dravendell's mainframe is reconnected to mothers nural net,
and her processor cortex is masked..
so mother wont know, we're watching her.."
Gaku : " well least we didnt blow up from the bomb implanted in her head.."
Naota : " bomb? what bomb.
that was a simple scare tactic of mother's to insure that,
noone would tamper with any signa's crebral cortex..
haruko know's better somehow, so she went ahead and did it.."

gaku : " well leave it to the space case to figure things out ..right.?"
naota chuckles a bit before speaking again,
as sota deals the cards out onto the table.
naota : " ooh,ho,ho..
she maybe a space case sometimes, but ignorant she is not..
but what bothers me is what happoned after that..
i.. shouldnt jump to conclusions, yet..
im going to wait it out, till she's ready to talk.."

gaku : " sound advice for someone who's dating, two women.."
- grins sarcastically -

naota : " you may want to believe that, gaku..
but i assure you, its only me and eri..
i mean.. if you wanna be controlled by a sadistic insane women,
whos hell bent on absorbing no energy for her own benifit..
then go right ahead, be my guest.."

Gaku : " umm.. maybe not, I've seen what she can do.."
sota : " so.. how is eri taking all of this change, naota san.?"

Naota : " its kind of hard for her..
especially when she only feel's comfortable, talking to me..

I feel burdened, but happy about having someone who understands..
but its kind of hard telling her everything, she on the other hand..

seem's like she's taking the change with a grain of salt, every time..
and i know, this hasn't been easy for her..
in a matter of speaking, shes been more cheery then usuall..
i'm kind of worried, if she's regreting doing this.."

gaku : " dont fret, naota san.. we're here for you too..
hell, we've been talking off and on about our situation..
and we feel that our strategy is a little, off.."

naota : " you guys too, huh.? - sigh - I guess it's only natural.. "

taru : " speaking of which, wheres the commander..
i havnt seen him in a whille..?"
Naota : " more likely still trying to deal with the fact that trask,
is hell bent on blaming this caprican inncodent on me.. "

Sota : " tough break bro.. i bet if you had servaliance footage,
you could prove youre innocence.."

Naota - at that moment something snaped inside my head.. sota, was right..
where was trask's footage of the missle silo's cameras..
and to top that,
we forgot to tretreive the information inside of the base for investigation..
things were not adding up, to our favor.. so i decided after a few hands,
to visit our commander and cheif..
to figure out the cause of trask's accusations..-
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naota : " douglas.. we need to talk about some things, that dont add up.."
amarao : " i kind of figured you would be comming to me again, sooner or later..
so i decided to go ahead and retreive the information,
from dargon's database myself..
.. youre.. not going to like, what i found.."

amarao tosses a compad to naota, and naota begins to flip through..
and scroll down the pages..

his expression turns from angrey, to distress..

Naota : " does he have the right to accuse me, of these charges..?"

amarao : " I'm afraid so, naota..
but in defense of you're race, you've saved the earth countless times..
and that in the senates mind,
is going to turn this whole accusation around."

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*To be continued.. *
- Hoped you liked this. -
*See you next month...

[zilabus]

To be honest? I feel like your missing the entire spontanious, funny feel of FLCL that makes it good.

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

understood bro..
but at this point in time ( timeline wise )

things are not ment to be funny.
think about it.
if you were in naota's shoes,
and had the entire quadrent of the universe aginst you..
there wouldn't be time, for anything funny.

[yellowrock]

still though, for it to be an flcl fanfic, it HAS to have some random craziness.

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

i will try to rework this into the next chapter then, till next month guys.

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

this little chapter has been due for quite sometime..
sorry to make all of you readers out there wait,
but things here have been hecktic lately.


Well i've changed my story up a little,
but not by much as you'll see in the comming acts.

now's when things between the new strange race of beings,
and our hero get a little heated.
..enjoy..


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*Previously on FLCL 2nd - Co M.M.ing. *
OST : Bleach #3- Quincy's Craft - Remix.
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Zeromus : " computer, e.s.t. to arrival.?"
computer : " e.s.t. is exactly 4 days,
12 hour's time to arrival on sillios."

zeromus: " ..good.. open a channel.."

Computer : " channel open, designate location.?"

Zeromus : " planet : Ias.."

computer : " begin transmission.."
suddenly a figure in dark appears from the screen,
inwhich the communication was locked.

Zeromus : "i trust everything is going, according to plan.?"

Darkened figure : " once the stabilization and recalibration is complete,
i will be running a few minor diognostics...
something the matter, dear brother.?"

Zeromus : "..these, kids are not like the others we've faced before..
somehow they know of mother's plan..
I'm not completly sure how as of yet,
but they've obtained the knoweldge.."

darkened figure : " worry not, brother..
our siblings are currently at work, restoring our fallen brethern..
patience, and our victory will be assured..
after all, it is mother's will.."
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( Meanwhille, on the stumi.. )

Travis : " that's no suprise, I mean after all..
you do still work for the brotherhood."

Amarao : " i'll get to my point..
it seem's trask is already concidering accusations towards naota..
I'm confussed as to how he would go about these, accusations..
but i'm sure he will figure something out.."
Travis : " then why not sit back and relax..?"

amarao : " trask was never drastic like this..
he wouldn't just jump to conclusions, without a just cause..
..i have a feeling he is fighting his thoughts,
because he doesnt wish to see what is happoning before his eyes..
the senate of the brotherhood is falling apart bit, by bit..
and im sure his diplomats are already agruing about, mother's plan.."
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naota : " dravendell's mainframe is reconnected to mothers nural net,
and her processor cortex is masked..
so mother wont know, we're watching her.."

Gaku : " well least we didnt blow up from the bomb implanted in her head.."

Naota : " bomb? what bomb.
that was a simple scare tactic of mother's to insure that,
noone would tamper with any signa's crebral cortex..
haruko know's better somehow, so she went ahead and did it.."

gaku : " well leave it to the space case to figure things out ..right.?"

naota chuckles a bit before speaking again,
as sota deals the cards out onto the table.

naota : " ooh,ho,ho..
she maybe a space case sometimes, but ignorant she is not..
but what bothers me is what happoned after that..
i.. shouldnt jump to conclusions, yet..
im going to wait it out, till she's ready to talk.."

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naota : " douglas.. we need to talk about some things, that dont add up.."
amarao : " i kind of figured you would be comming to me again,
sooner or later..
so i decided to go ahead and retreive the information,
from dargon's database myself..
.. youre.. not going to like, what i found.."

amarao tosses a compad to naota, and naota begins to flip through..
and scroll down the pages..

his expression turns from angrey, to distress..

Naota : " does he have the right to accuse me, of these charges..?"

amarao : " I'm afraid so, naota..
but in defense of you're race, you've saved the earth countless times..
and that in the senates mind,
is going to turn this whole accusation around."
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mamimi : " and now, the conclusion.."
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **

fifth, opening.

- Scryed - Magma Remix -
**Yet, another donation. n.n - thank you -**

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Kazuya Tusurumaki -
- where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I made this, in tribute. -
Special thanks to : shiro sagisu and shoji meguro.

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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 4 : *Galactic Revelations. 1

ACT 74 : - Journey toward sillios. -
- A provocation, from mother. -
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OST :Bleach #3 - Princess, in captivity.

Naota continues to ponder thoughts,
as to trask's sudden alligations towards our hero.
amarao atanding silently behind him ponders thoughts to himself..
naota : " so.. what do we do now.?"

amarao : " normally i wouldn't jump to conclusions about these alligations,
least untill we find some solid facts..
one, let's look over the distruction once you two arrived on caprica.. "

Naota : " the only thing that puzzled me was,
there was only one lifeform untouched on the planet..
his name was goyku..
he was a bike shop owner that gave me the vissago..
but other then that, there was no mecha facillities on the planet at all.."

amarao : " what about the intell, you found within the missle silo.?"

naota : " well..
aside of looking a few centuries more advanced,
then earth's technology...
and other then the fact there was a giant mecha,
hidden within the base..
Nothing.. absolutly, nothing..
everything was still, pritty much intact."

amarao : " I see..
editing and forging footage maybe the only problem here..
but what about haruko, what are her thoughts on this subject.?"

Naota :" normally she would spazz out,
and use copouts as a scare tactic..
but lately with the tampering of dravendell,
she's pritty much been keeping to herself.. "
Naota : - my god have i been this blind the whole time.?
I know haruko's not been much herself lately, but..
this whole mess with her sister, is really effecting her.. -

amarao : " well, you are right..
sound's like she's been hiding alot from us.. "

Naota : " ..probably not even the half of things,
that's been bothering her.."

Naota - But her thoughts and feelings,
are becomming more disturbing as of late..
as i thought about things haruko was looking,
more and more suspicious to my minds eye..
but eri said have faith, the awnser's right around the corner..
I just hope the awnser that I sought,
wasn't going to condem haruko's actions.. -
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FLCL - 2nd comming..

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OST : Bleach - Compassion.

Haruko : - dear dad.. it's been a long time,
since the distruction of our homeworld..
this is where you're life ended.. and my life began..
there's not much i can inform you, about my life so far..
I tend to keep myself from revieling those terrible moments..

I can't say my whole life was miserable, there were happier times..
but that.. was when i was still, innocent..

Once I fled with atomsk, my life seemed a bit more bearable..
Following him seemed like it was my only intention in life,
next to destroying mother..

I know you probably couldn't forgive my actions as of late,
but this is what i choose to do with my life..


I'm scared.. scared that my sister, youre daughter dravendell..
may betray us, yet again.
I'm also scared, that mother may win this war..

naota kun is our only best hope to stopping mother,
before she wreaks havock throughout the universe..

I only hope with burning this letter, my prayer's will be awnsered.. -


Haruko begins by folding the leter in half, then in half again..
she uses the wax from a nearby lit candle,
and begins to draw a single symbol onto the folded paper.
she then places the paper onto a metal bowl,
then takes a pile of sweet smelling herbs..
and places them ontop of the folded paper.
then with a lit wooden stick,
she ignites the small fire and begins to pray solomy.

haruko : " I know things didn't turn out the way you wanted it to..
but i know in my heart, this is the right thing to do.
please father.. watch over us. "

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FLCL 2nd comming...
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( Location : On route, toward sillios. )
OST : FL CL Original - Carnival.

Naota : - after 3 days of tension..
and countless hours of piecing together what exactly happoned on

caprica..
amarao, myself, eri, and haruko sit down for a serious discussion..
As we continue towards our destination,
confussion dampens our newly found evidence.
Trask really had us going in circles, but one thing he didnt count on..
was haruko's devious discovery.

Haruko : " and you really thought that i wouldnt take,
the databank located within the missle silo.?"

Amarao : "you have to forgive us for looking at you, with such suspicion..
thankfully now with footage of what happoned whille you two were down
there, we can finally put trask in his place..
the real question is..
what other reason would he have, to make such an accusation.?"

Eri : " would he happon to be holding some grudge toward us ?
i mean it seem's to me that everyone had problems with atomsk,
whille he fought with the signa.."

amarao : " atomsk had alot of problems,
when dealing with the races that inhabit the universe..
..but with the legendary weapon.. "
the commander ponders to himself for only a moment,
before speaking again.
amarao : " he was only one able to stop the threat,
from advancing pased the tambion galaxy..
the Phillax is an uncharted zone of the universe,
which borders passed tambion.. desoliea, and a few other galaxies..
with mother controlling the outer territories,
it's going to be hard to sneak passed her all seeing eye.
on a related note, there's only 2 galaxies left..
that still hold territory aginst the mechas and signa.
one is known as scapios, and the other is norallice. "

haruko : " both the desoliean galaxy and the sinactian galaxy,
have already been destroyed and taken over by the signa."

amarao : " this poses a heafty predicament for all of us.."

Naota : " in order to sway the senate of the 12 colonies,
I have to prove my innocence..
and to progress into phillax,
we have to get permission from all 12 colonies..

with the zobu zon being one major voice within the senate,
it's going to be hard to convince the others what exactly is going on. "

haruko : " well we're still a ways away from central station..
we may as well continue our detur to sillios as planned,
and ask serenity for guidence."

Naota : " i agree.. with the sororities help,
it will add another voiced opinion toward the senate. "

Eri : " we still have problems with our escort,
if trask is as crafty as amarao says..
then we may still run into trouble.."

Haruko : " there are still signa lurking within the shadow of the universe..
our best hope is to just act like we're still figuring things out,
to throw mother's children off.
acting like we don' know anything, would act as our trump card for now..
we cant loose, nor fail in our quest."

amarao : " leave trask to me then,
Throwing him off won't be so easy..
more likely we'll throw him into a position,
that will hurt our chances with swaying the brotherhood
not to mention,
we'll be defiying the regulations of the commerance defense.."

Naota : " well for now, let's not push things too far..
let's let trask think he's got one up on us..
that way if a bad situation arises, it'll be his responsibillity. "

amarao : " as much as i hated being under his command, naota is right..
we should let trask assume he has complete controll over our situation."

Haruko : " agreed, i think this will throw the brotherhood off as well.
not to mention this maybe the key idea we're looking for,
to sway the brotherhood's voice as well."

the four nod in agreement and begin to leave the room,
to inform the others of there plan.
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FLCL - 2nd comming..
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OST : Bleach - #3 - Distiance For A Duel.

Naota : - with only 6 hours left till our arrival on sillios,
the four of us decided to sit the seperated crew members down,
for a full breifing as to our secritive tactics.

eri sit's down with travis, nicole, and avalisk..

whille amarao debreifs tasuku, cherry, and mamimi.

which left myself with gaku, sota, taru, and canti..
after a long confussing discussion,
the crew soon understands to keep things under wraps for the time being..
except from eachother.

but little did we realize..
we were being monitored by our new found enemies,
who were keeping themselves a fair distiance from the stumi.

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( zobu zon war bird. )

Tactical advisor : " sir, the stumi is still on route toward sillios..
estimated time to arrival, is less then 6 hours.."
commander tal : " good.. maintain course and speed,
and make sure the stumi doesnt pick us up on their sensors.
we cannot alert the stumi, we're monitoring there progress..
maintain cloak, untill we arrive on sillios.
inform me once we've arrived, i'll be in my office."

Tactical advisor : " understood."

commander tal begins to leave the bridge,
and enters his office off the right side of the main deck.
he calmly sits down at his desk and presses a button on the key pad,
on the monitor a darkened zobu zon speaks from another location.

darkened zobu zon : " what is the status of the stumi.?"

commander tal : "sir, there maintaining course toward sillios..
and should arrive in less then 6 hours. "

darkened zobu zon : " have they spotted you yet.?"

Commander tal : " no sir..
our cloak is engaged,
and we're keeping a fair distiance from them untill they arrive. "

darkened zobu zon : " do not under any circumstances, engage the

earthlings..
our signa brethern has plans for them, once they arrive.."

commander tal : " sir..?"

darkened zobu zon : " keep youre distiance from them at all costs..
i do not want the sorority to find out, we're collaberating with the signa.
if they do, then they will have phisical proof of our collaberation."

commander tal : " understood sir, but what if they find out about us.?"

Darkened zobu zon : " if they discover youre tailing them,
then make an escape method.
the alliance will not condem you, for you're retreat.
this is mearly an observational mission, nothing more."

commander tal : " ..understood, sir.. commander tal, out. "

as the transmission breaks and the monitor screen shuts down,
the commander sits back in his chair with a worried look.

Tal : - if they discover us i will have to make a quick retreat, unless..-

commander tal looks to the zobuzon databank,
and throually checks through the star charts.
noticing a small asteroid feild, located not too far from the soroities

homeworld.

Tal : " if i can trap the stumi within the asteroid feild,
then i will have a natural advantage..
they cannot shoot at, what they cannot see.."
Tal turns the monitor off, then begins to pace around his office.

Tal : " but with the prometheus guarding any openings,
i will find it hard to trap them in one spot alone. "

- this may call for some backup..
i'll have to inform our leader about this as well.. -

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FLCL 2nd comming..
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( Meanwhille in the depths of space..)

zeromus continues his course toward sillios..
when suddenly a masked transmission, transpires on a subspace

channel.
zeromus : " hmm..?"
- what's this..? a transmission masked in a subspace channel.? -
zeromus begins to hack into the subspace channel,
through his on board computer..
in no time at all the channel is hacked,
and zeromus evesdrops on the conversation.

zeromus : " computer hack into the transmission,
and operate through voice only. "
computer : " compliance, channel open through voice only.."

zeromus begins to over hear the conversation of the zobu zon.

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darkened zobu zon : " keep youre distiance from them at all costs..
i do not want the sorority to find out, we're collaberating with the signa.
if they do, then they will have phisical proof of our collaberation."

commander tal : " understood sir, but what if they find out about us.?"

Darkened zobu zon : " if they discover youre tailing them,
then make an escape method.
the alliance will not condem you, for you're retreat.
this is mearly an observational mission, nothing more."

commander tal : " ..understood, sir.. commander tal, out. "
**************** *******************
Zeromus begins to ponder thoughts to himself about the conversation..
zeromus : " well, well.. it seems someone is becomming very impacient.."
- ill have to inform my brethern about this, sudden change.. in tactics.. -
zeromus : " computer, open a channel location : planet, Ias.."

computer : "masked channel open, beginning transmission."

zeromus : "brother.. it seem's someone is becomming very impacient..
i'm transmitting the sub space conversation i hacked into,
along with quardenents from the two spacific locations.

I guess our reunion will have to wait,
till i've disposed of these earthlings..
our dear sister is informing those earthlings,
with confussing inturpretations as well."

darkened figure : " maintain course till you're arrival on sillios..
so long as the earthlings dont know about our plan,
everything will go according to mother's will. "


zeromus : "understood...
I've got one method, that will ensure our victory.. "


darkened figure : "mother sent it, with you then..?"

Zeromus : " I'm modifiying the components, as we speak. "

darkened figure : " good..
then i will rest easier now, knowing that you have things under controll. "

zeromus : "controll.?
heh.. that is not even a fraction,
of what i have instore for this new ..king.."

as the pod races off toward the galaxy of sillios,
a darkened laughter echos through the void of space..
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*To be continued..*

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

hey guys I am still around,
although it's been a while since i last posted an act of this story..

and to those who question my method :
You may think this story never ends,
and I will not spoil anything I have in mind.

Just be mindfull in the acts to come, this plot may seem slow to some.
but without how would i ever manage to get you to read it,
if i ended it with in 6 acts or so..
just keep that in mind, and you'll understand where I'm comming from.

anyhow..
here's the next act to keep you occupied till i fix some more of this,
yes i've been reading the forums and i appreciate all the concerns..
even the questions and comments please, keep em comming..

makes me want to fix this even more when ppl tell me,
exactly what they think and not make a mockery of this story..

So without further to do.. enjoy..

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OST : *Bleach - Quincy's craft. - Remix -
*Previously on FLCL 2nd - Co M.M.ing. *

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As the crew progress toward the sororities homeworld,
they begin devising a tactic to throw the brotherhood off of their heels.
as naota, haruko, eri, and amarao continue their discussion..
they leave naota with a disturbing solution.
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haruko : " both the desoliean galaxy and the sinactian galaxy,
have already been destroyed and taken over by the signa."

Amarao : " which only leaves scapios, and norallice.. "

naota : " in order to sway the senate of the 12 colonies,
we have to prove our innocence..
..and to progress into phillax,
we have to get permission from all 12 colonies..

with the zobu zon being one major voice within the senate,
it's going to be hard to convince the other's..
what exactly is going on. "

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However..
an unknown enemy has been monitoring their progress,
from a fair distiance...
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darkened zobu zon : " what is the status of the stumi.?"

commander tal : "sir, there maintaining course toward sillios..
and should arrive in less then 6 hours. "

darkened zobu zon : " have they spotted you yet.?"

Commander tal : " no sir..
our cloak is engaged,
and we're keeping a fair distiance from them untill they arrive. "

darkened zobu zon :
" do not under any circumstances, engage the earthlings..
our signa brethern has plans for them, once they arrive.."

commander Tal : " sir..?"

darkened zobu zon : " keep you're distiance from them at all costs..
i do not want the sorority to find out, we're collaberating with the signa.
if they do, then they will have phisical proof of our collaberation."

commander Tal : " understood sir,
but what if they find out about us tailing them.. ?"

Darkened zobu zon : " if they discover you're tailing them,
then make an escape method.
the alliance will not condem you, for you're retreat.
this is mearly an observational mission, nothing more."

commander Tal : " ..understood, sir.. commander tal, out. "
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But..
even the zobu zon were being monitored, by an infamous signa..
known, as ..zeromus..
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Zeromus begins to ponder thoughts to himself about the conversation..
zeromus : " well, well.. it seems someone is becomming very impacient.."
- i'll have to inform my brethern about this, sudden change.. in tactics.. -
zeromus : " computer, open a channel.. location, planet Ias.."

computer : "masked channel open, beginning transmission."
zeromus : "brother.. it seem's someone is becomming very impacient..
i'm transmitting the sub space conversation i hacked into,
along with quardenents from the two spacific locations.

I guess our reunion will have to wait,
till i've disposed of these earthlings..
our dear sister is informing those earthlings,
with confussing inturpretations as well."

darkened figure : " maintain course till you're arrival on sillios..
so long as the earthlings dont know about our plan with the propulsion cannon,
everything will go according to mother's will. "

zeromus : "understood... I've got one method, that will ensure our victory.. "

darkened figure : "mother sent it, with you then..?"
Zeromus : " I'm modifiying the components, as we speak. "

darkened figure : " good..
then i will rest easier now, knowing that you have things under controll. "

zeromus : "controll.?
heh.. that is not even a fraction,
of what i have instore for this new ..king.."

as the pod races off toward the galaxy of sillios,
a darkened laughter echos through the void of space..
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Canti : " And now, the conclusion.. "
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **

fifth, opening.
Scryed - Magma Remix -
**Yet, another donation. n.n - thank you -**

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Kazuya Tusurumaki -
- where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I made this, in tribute. -
Special thanks to : Shiro sagisu And to Shoji Meguro.
- Best music composers of 2008. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 4 : *Galactic Revelations. 1

ACT 75 : - homeworld of the sorority. -
- The Deity Aspect. -
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( Location : Planet Sillios - Homeworld, of the sorority - )
OST : The pillows : Fool, on the planet.

Before the stumi pulls out of hyperspace,
a transmission breaks amarao's image of the planet sillios.
general trask gustaf's image breaks into the picture widely,
then the image centers it's self and shorten's toward the lower right corner..

the first images of the planet suddenly changes to grapix,
then the orb of the planet changes red..

General trask : " good i see everyone has gathered.
I'll be blunt, on this Debreifing.. "
As the general begins to speak..
blue dots begin to form on a small greenish glowing continent,
they move in all directions..
borders for territories form..
as the general begin's to show a squared off location,
where the blue dots originate according to the prometheus's scanners.

General trask : " we've been monitoring signs of signa
it is unknown at this time who they are,
but we can deturmine that there are several located on the planet's surface.."

naota cuts the general off for a breif moment.
Naota : " ok, before we go any further..
explain why and how you were not able to detect the cloaked ship,
scouting behind us a way's back there..?"

Eri - how could naota of known, about a cloaked vessal.. ? -

Haruko - simple, he used the data i retreived from caprica..
and found information, leading to the zobu zon's technology. -

Travis - Brilliant.! -

trask becomes upset then looks to his sub commander,
then toward his tactical advisor, then toward his head commander..

suddenly they all become nervously busy,
scanning the outter edge of the galaxy for the cloaked vessal..
trask turns with a grimm expression and looks toward naota..

Trask : " we didn't know, we were being followed.."


Naota : "need i remind you general,
mother's will, knows no bounds..
she is evil, vial, and very cunning.. "

amarao : " well general ?
I take it you have things under controll now..
I suppose it's best if we split up, and head for sillios."

Trask : " not so fast commander..
I still need to take naota into custody,
for the charges brought aginst him."

amarao : " but you know as well as i do, naota is innocent..
and any charges you have aginst him, will have to wait.
right now we have a threat to disspurse,
so im not letting him go.. he is under, my responsibillity. "

Trask : " very well commander..
once youve finished with youre task here,
feel free to contact me once you've done what you have come here to do.
in the meantime, i have a few things to scout for aside of that hidden ship."

amarao : " oh, off to destroy my career then.?"
Trask : " im not concerned right now, with the likes of you douglas.."
amarao : " the feeling's mutual.."

Naota : "i promise you general..
if we have to detur to another destination i will have the commander contact you,
and inform you of our preasent situation."

Trask : " ..please.. see to it that you do, young king."
the transmission breaks and the image fades from the screen.
the crew begins to look puzzled towards naota,
as he turns back and smiles to them all.
Naota : " see? things worked out, for now."
amarao : " yes..
but we still have signa to deal with on the planet,
not to mention whatever mother's plan is.. is still unknown to us."

Travis : " i have inputed the data from the prometheus into the ships databank,
once i've compiled a few tracking devices.. we can saftly head down there. "

amarao : "i agree let's not rush into things,
there is still much we cannot confirm about the sorority."

the crew nods in agreement before gathering necessities,
to head to the planet's surface.
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FLCL 2nd comming..
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( Location : Planet sillios. )
OST :*Bleach - Burden of the past.

The prometheus break's orbit around the large planet,
and begins to move toward the edge of the solarsystem.
they leave the stumi orbiting alone, around the grennish glowing ball.

Serenity of the sorority : -
I feel his preasence now, it is alot more then i first expected.
he is drawing closer to me.. -

serenity : " my children, it is time to greet our general king..
as a time lord's life is neverending,
thus their vessal changes and evolves..
we must greet our earthling guests, with the greatest of honors.. "

suddenly a larger older looking women,
bow's her self toward the child-like empress..
and turns to her loyal subjects, all women of this special society.

Alicia Gambit : " prepare the main hall, for our guest's arrival. "

she gives the order and the others frantically prepare the main hall,
for the arrival of the crew.
serenity smiles up toward her subject,
as alicia turns and smiles back toward her deity..
alicia then leans in, and whispers into the empress's ear.in a whisper.
alicia : " what if there's another signa attack ? "

serenity smiles looking forward, continuing to sit upright and speaks.
sorority : "i'm kind of hopeing that the end result,
will lean toward our guest's favor."

alicia gives serenity an evil eye, then ask's her another question.
alicia : " that sounds reassuring, you feeling ok today.?"

serenity begins to smile deviantly, as she speaks..
Serenity : " I've never felt better, in my life time. "

alicia gives a mooping expression, as serenity awnsers her question.
alicia : " *sigh* leave it to our empress to be mysterious.."

serenity closes her eyes, expressing a wide smile.
serenity : - giggles -
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FLCL 2nd comming..
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( Meanwhille aboard the prometheus. )

Trask begins to become impacient after explaining to naota, about his discovery..
his mind begins to wonder as his ship scouts the surrounding galaxy, of sillios.
Questions run through his troubled emotions as to his commrad.

trask : why would amarao deliberatly let this happon.?
how could he known about the vessal scanning us, whille in hyperspace..?
and furthermore..
why are there signa hiding on the planet's surface.? -
trask : " helmsmen what's our status, and is the scanner's online.?"
Helmsmen : " were on the inner strain of the outter system.
the sheilds are holding and scanners havnt picked up any signals.."

Trask : " if this kid's correct.. we should be, right on top of them..?!"
Tactical advisor : " may i suggest a tacion inverter, general.?"
Trask : " scan.. any way you can, commander..
we must find and destroy that ship."
Trask continues with his eyes glued to the screen, never blinking once..

suddenly the vessal comes out of nowhere,
and begins to fire upon the prometheus..
Trask : " Target the ships tactical scanners and blow it to hell, sub commander.. helmsmen, evasive menuvers.. upgrade to red alert. "

Helmsmen : " sir. "
Sub commander : " sir."

commander latrel : " sir, this isnt looking good..
they've just knowcked out decks 9-11,
and there's tacion leakage in decks 8 and 12."
Trask : " blast door's.. and fire on that damn, thing.!"
as trask yells the ship begins retalliating,
knocking the vessal backward and off to the lower left..
they begin moving around to center its self then begins to turn around..

Trask : " look's like we got their attention."
commander latrel : " engineering, whats youre status.?"

trask : " reflect their attack with the dish, and aim it toward their engines..
if we can't hit them directly, least we can stop them in their tracks."

as the ship's deflector dish begins to move,
we can see a clear shot on the zobu zon vessal on it's front.
they begin charging weapons, and soon fire upon the brotherhood.
as the ships is hit the sheilds begin to distort.. but continue to hold.
we leave them now admist battle,
as trask begins to figure out another strategy.
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FLCL 2nd comming..
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OST : FLCL the pillows.. ONE LIFE.
( Location : Sillios, homeworld of the sorority. )

The city looks as treasurous as a city cast in gold.
but it's beauty is not laced with greed..
no.. stone brick's and undanted cobble,
do not taint the environment.

the city instead is laced with flush marble..
vines of beautiful flower's and large plant's,
strech throughout the distiance of the horizion.

Larger tree's tower and branch out,
acting like large roads intertwining within one another.
some buildings are placed on the more stronger sections, of the trees..
and a gigantic palace sit, near the top..

the winds blow gently as people walk in and out, going about their daily lives.
the gigantic forest, is one large kingdom.


the stumi dessend's downward toward the kingdom..
slowly they begin to pull inward,
as a small group of scout vessals begin to guide it inward..
they begin to menuver around a few large building's slowly and cautiously,
and begin to dessend downward..
they soon see a gigantic platform, near the front of the kingdom's palace.
and slowly begin to land, turning around in a 90 degree angle.

as the sumi docks..
the small escorts begin to break off, and land at their own seperate docks..
one slightly above the other..
they all dock simultainously.
and begin to depart there own vehicles.

the stumi's launching bay begins to open, and the ramp slowly dessends.
the sorority guards begin to approch the vessal slowly and calmly,
serenity wearing a white gown and a small veil..
golden sashes strand themselves around her hair,
the blonde lok's running down to her midweighst.
her small frame and figure, made her look almost childlike.
her eyes once open are an icy blue.

they approch the ship and begin to hault,
greeting the crew and the begin to walk down the ramp..
travis lead's ahead of naota and the others, as they all walk down..
he begins to hault naota before taking one step off of the ship,
everyone begins to stop, and look down as travis speaks..

Travis : "Sillios is known as a holy planet.
the childlike empress or high pristess serenity,
is the living deity of the planet and as such..
nothing pleases her more, then her bond with it.
she is blessed with the gift of everlasting life,
she tends to her children, those living and breathing in her lifeforce.
the is the very sole of this planet's lifeline.

serenity was born from the creator's last touch, on this planet.
and thus what was left was a vast radiant garden.
this is not ordenary child please, be cautious whille you're here."
Naota - sounds,like.. -sneers- you dont trust them do you.?"
Travis shows a quick sign of embarassment, before clearing his throat..
and stepping forward.
he then bow's as the guards part, and reviel serenity.
Travis : " greeting's once more, serenity.."
Serenity steps forward and flips the veil over. revieling her face.
Serenity : " awww, whats with the formalities ?
come, give us a squench.!"
she smiles happily and begins to walk forward as travis begin to raise.
the two soon hug in a cheerfull embrace, then begin to glow.
travis smiles as the glow begin's to dissipate,
and surround them then begin to fade.
travis's glow fades slower then serenities,
as he turns back and begins to explain the reaction.
nicole begins to tap her foot then looks back to the commander..

Nicole : " commander, if its ok with you i think ill stay on the ship..

amarao : " oh no you're not, i need you right here..
and we're going off, together.."

eri begin's to step forward but stop's as naota takes his first step, onto sillios.
naota begins to go blank and a radiant light begins to glow..
soon rays from the sun begin to appear brightly from the tree tops,
and a voice is herd throughout the forest.
Serenity : " naota nandaba, remember it well my children.
for he is the saviour."
as naota begins to understand what travis was speaking about,
he realized just how importiant serenity was to the survival of this planet.
soon he begins to speak but in turn cannot. he has no controll over his mouth.
atomsk touches his shoulder and asks him..
Atomsk : " let me speak, naota. Let me speak for you."
Naota - ..Atomsk.. -

Atomsk : "let me speak for you naota.. Let me tell them.. "
naota - i..understand.. ok, tell them.. -
naota's resonance begins to glow calmly,
and a radiant veil of red and orange begins to spread from behind him..
eri steps back but notices she is uneffected by its touch.
the image begins to form a phoenix, and atomsk speaks..
Atomsk : " my friend it has been a long time, and I'm sorry to you for my failure.."
Serenity bows and speak's..
Serenity : " i.. understand my king. how can we help.?"
Naota's body begins to walk foward speaking, whille beginning to walk forward.
Atomsk : " he seek's that which i've hiddin.
the eon's gate must, open. "

she in turn curtiousy's toward naota's body.
Serenity : "i understand, my king."
Thus small symbols begin to glow about the platform..

Serenity : " one at a time, come now children of earth."
as the crew begins to step off the ramp they fill the small circles with there preasence. standing still and looking to the pristess..
Serenity : " this is a joyous time..
a time where our friend's find understanding, in their nature..
children please, lend me you're power.."

Atomsk : " Do not be afraid of what you find, children of earth.
When the universe was young, and all was only birthing,
the one sent us to guide you."
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FLCL 2nd comming..
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OST : Hellsing ultimate or, the beginning of time.

Atomsk : " eons over eons ago..
the desolieans were of a bright intelligent race,
known throughout the universe as the ancient ones or time lords. "

Travis :
"Roughly 14.12 billion years ago..
we desoliean's evolved to a point in our race's scale,
that haulted after conflict began within our race's senate. "

Atomsk : " I being king general, decided to emmediatly end the conflict..
but to no avail.. our scientist's, so to say..
had been remodulating mother's enhanced artifical intelligence.
they were bound and deturmined to make the vessal run,
at maximum effecientcy. "
Travis : " time after time, we began to show signs of weakening..
within our commune.
the scientists simply would not give in and went ahead without permission,
as if some unknown force was driving them mad,
to launch the vessal into hyperspace. "

Atomsk : " thus mother was born,
after an accidental explosion tore half of our galaxy apart. "

Travis : " we, are the last of our kind. "
Atomsk : " you have done well with them.. travis, loka`l.. "

Travis : " i do have one question that needs awnsering from you.."

Atomsk : " speak.."

Travis : " why me.?"
Atomsk : " still as theroretically questionable, as alwyes. "

Travis : " i see.. i am to watch over them, guide them along their way.
..but you said, this isn't my fight.?"

Atomsk : " no, you're wrong..
now, it is you're fight..
the fate of the universe, does not rest on nandaba's shoulder's alone.
why i had you brought to this time, was because i knew of my own demise..
i forseen this, all happoning.. "


Eri : " I.. understand now..
everything was a mistake to begin with.
..they.. were drivin mad, with ..fear.. "
Haruko : " everything is made up of, something else..
how is it that you can exist within the void,
after we deturmined that avalisk was you're incarnation.?"

Atomsk : " the universe has many mysteries, haruhara..
though i cannot reviel everything to you, i can tell you this much..
why i havn't passed on, is because of my will..
even chained within the mind of naota, my will can be extract..
Avalisk was my second chance to live anew,
and to extract my vengance upon mother again.

Avalisk : " i do not like being referred to as a pawn.."
Atomsk : " you are of my essance, avalisk.. you too, have a place on this board."
Naota : - why are you explaining all of this, now.? -

Atomsk : " this is a holy and safeguarded planet, touched by the creator..
with serenity's help.. i can fully explain to you, why the sitar is so importiant.. "

Serenity : " the sitar was the first weapon, wheild by the general king.
though ancient in his way's..
atomsk sought out mother's weaknesses,
by sonic enfluencial waves of energy..
the nurilogical waves of energy are strumed out, and as such..
can destroy, or create an entire galaxy.. "

Naota : "i understand now..
with the sitar i can penitrate mother's sheilding and break her in half,
but what of the second half of the eye?
we need to know where it is.. "


Serenity : " patience, young one.. there is much more.."

Atomsk : " we faced many mecha, and signa..
but none more terrifiying then, jaiden..
Jaiden was known as the knight of terra, the terraformation's he took on..
were an abundance of mother's joining with his mind.
and the comphression of star systems. "

Travis : " we.. known as the bad 7,
were the only desolieans left to purge the universe of this chaotic machine. "

amarao : " this all relates to that kelido star inncodent..
the inncodent inwhich two red giant's were comphressed and destroyed,
creating a gigantic black hole. "
Haruko : " this is all too confussing.."

Tasuku : " on the contrary, it makes perfect sence..
atomsk and his friends tried to stop jaiden,
after he threatened to destroy every ancient left alive..
after their homeplanet was destroyed. "

Atomsk : " ahh the mind's of youth.. very clever, tasuku..
you're as bright as you're younger brother.."

Mamimi : " so where do we come in, and the weapons..?"

Atomsk : " each of you choosen to carry my burden,
have been left with a spacific weapon..
that each of my companion's carried.
Mamimi.. those gun's are specially designed,
to trigger n.o properties and nutillize them.
Lyra.. would of been proud, to give those to you..

Travis.. you now hold Tidas's weapon..
the synthisizor's that seperate enable you to use moves,
conflicted with the environment..
be weary of you're potential....
for it may crush you're spirit, after using it contentually.

Tasuku .. you now wheild jeriah's weapon, the wishbone axe..
this was his original weapon, just like my sitar.
and it is especially designed,
to allow you to manipulate light and sonic speed.

Ronin would of been reveling with pride,
to know he entrusted the rickenbacker to avalisk..
the rickenbacker's ability is pure knoweldge..
just like the water, you now controll...

..and chase.."

Eri : " it was.. it really was ment for me.. i had this feeling, all along."

Atomsk : " ..Naota only need's to know love,
without love and trust in eachother..
you can never wheild, the same power ..as he."

Eri : "I.. have that kind of power.?"

Atomsk : " yes.. my child, you do.. and, so much more. "

Atomsk stay's silent for only a moment, looking onto each of them..
his image changes from the giant red phoenix, to that of a humanoid being.
as he speaks he becomes slightly corporial to them,
naota slips behind him now standing still,
Incircled by his surrounding crew.

Atomsk : " please, step onto the circle's created on the platform.. "

the crew looks on silently for a second, then begins to progress onward..
they all walk very cautiously amarao and nicole walking, dead last.

Haruko : " ..r-right.. "
silently each member of the crew steps into sided circles,
surrounding naota's body.
the circles begin to glow diffrent colors, as each member steps onto them..
slowly, then they begin to react as they stand all still..
each member now surround naota, each in a vibrant color.

Atomsk : " you know.. this maybe our last meeting, naota san.."

Naota : " I'm sure, atomsk san."

Atomsk : " there is one more task you must do,
before obtaining the other fragment of the eye. "

naota : " speak.. you're request, ancient king."

Atomsk : " you must seek out the one called, daggarous darunia..
he is a general king of a planet called Lan..
and is remotly located, surrounding the terra-sola galaxy..
you must seek out his knoweldge, about what.. I cannot tell you of..
you will also require his voice, if you should face the senate."

Naota : " Does he know of our comming as well.?"
Atomsk : " no, but fear not..
once he recognizes the outfit,and the guiitar..
there will be no question, in his eyes.
..only, absolution in his voice. "

Naota : " i understand.. ..and... ..fairwell.. "
Atomsk : " haruhara, you have done well.. you have grown.."
Haruko : " thanks.. if it's all the same though..
I would of made, a much more suited queen.. "

Atomsk : " keep thinking positive, and trust in you're friends..
you never lost the faith and the thought that I, am by you're side.."

Haruko : " you were alwyes concidered a love to me."
Atomsk : " travis.. there was so much i wanted to say.."
Travis : " say no more.. i understand the predicament.. "

Serenity breaks the conversation short,
knowing that atomsk's power was draining rappidly.

Serenity : " time is shortining, sire.."

Atomsk : " I urge you all to trust in eachother..
as family, teammates, companions..
don't doubt for one second in eachother, whille facing the signa..
for that maybe, you're willing downfall. their deception, is unevading..
..Serenity, you may proceed in the rite."

Serenity : " yes, my leige.."

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FLCL - 2nd comming...
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*To Be Continued.*

[dennis20014]

Hey man are you still writing? We both haven't been on for awhile, it's over due!

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

yes I'm still kicking..
not dead or fallen off the earth.... yet...

just a major case of writer's block..
not sure how to begin this next arc to my story,
seem's there are loopholes concerning how naota is exactly the new pirate king..
I've gotten the plot solid..
basically taking the toll of 13 planets in the galactic primary system..
along with our galaxy and medical mechanica.
my idea of a 7 story ending,
is still way way out of my reach.

( and people here thought that I'd never end this story, i felt like going out with a big bang.!!!)

but aside that R.L. is taking my time away from writing and placing the timeline as it should be..
Case and point : I'm still working on it..
rest assured ill be posting another chapter or two come this summer.. but i cannot garentee the side music for dramatic reasons..

(even though most of it was from bleach..)

*To Dennis and others*
Thank you for the support,
and waiting paciently for my replies..
even though I'm looking a little sketchy.

N.O._Creator.ATOMSK

[dennis20014]

I understand, that's the world for us all eventually (keeping us busy I mean)

I am not really in a slump, but more so just occupied usually as well. I will keep an eye out though from time to time (as always).

I just posted some new material. Hope you guys enjoy both of our fine works lol