FLCL New York

by **dennis20014** » Fri Aug 31, 2007 3:52 am

Sry for posting so much, new chapter, sorry it took so long. I wanted to show a little bit of Naota seeing how America would be to him in the first twenty minutes, on top of his recent Haruko flashback problems. I have more written but I'm away from home right now, so I had a friend email me some of it, instead of rewriting it all out again lol Enjoy

I posted like 2 days ago just forgot to post that I did

by **Mesmerize** » Sun Sep 02, 2007 11:51 pm

Well once again I don't really know what to say since I've already said great work like 7 times already, and once again you succeed at adding on to the story and continue to keep my attention.

I probably sound like a broken record by now

by **dennis20014** » Mon Sep 03, 2007 7:19 am

lol least ur not saying its bad, thats always good. Haha thats a good one, its not bad so thats good lol

by **PillowsFan916** » Thu Sep 06, 2007 1:40 am

HOLY *huge list of swear words*!
That's awesome!!!
Seriously and not even kidding, dude, this story is freaking sweet!
Uber props!

by **dennis20014** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 9:57 pm

Thnks a bunch guys, I have more written down but I don't have internet right now so I'm at a friends jz checking email lol I'll be back in a few days

by **Bluerose** » Sat Sep 22, 2007 7:29 pm

THAT WAS AWSOME!!!!!!! I love your story! It is so much better then mine. I hope you can keep writing.

by **dennis20014** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 5:36 pm

Oh yea definitely, I will keep adding on to it, I was only able to write alot in short amounts of time cause school hadn't started yet, so I admit I've been stuck on that. To give a little teaser though, since I guess some of you have been wanting more, no? lol

by **dennis20014** » Thu Sep 27, 2007 5:08 am

Just moved the teaser to the story section. So sorry I haven't updated lately, but I do still write a bit now and then, so don't lose faith.

Thanks for all the readers/views. If you haven't commented, feel free =D

by **dennis20014** » Sun Nov 04, 2007 3:53 am

Lol damn I haven't updated this in about a month or so, anyone want another chapter?

by **cantit42** » Fri Nov 30, 2007 8:39 pm

oh..... my.......god..... your my new frend.

by **N.O._creator_ATOMSK** » Fri Nov 30, 2007 9:57 pm

sure send us the next chapter, been reading up on this one. been doing my own work as well, so if i read your's.. you better, read mine ! *lol*

ATOMSK

by **dennis20014** » Fri Nov 30, 2007 10:02 pm

You know not to brag or anything, but I was re-reading my story (some of it at least) in my study hall and I was just amazed at what I had written. Going back and reading it really made me proud of myself lol It's inspired me to *gasp* WRITE NEW MATERIAL! First thing tonight, I'm going to write a new chapter, and even though it wasn't originally what I was going to continue, it's better than that! Thanks for all the wonderful comments, and check back tonight lol

To N.O._creator_ATOMSK, definatley man, I see you have added new material as well, and get this, we're bout to the 1k mark! That's another reason I want to write new stuff. If it can attract that many people lol hell yes

Happy Holidays (thats part of the story now haha)

by **N.O._creator_ATOMSK** » Sat Dec 01, 2007 10:31 pm

*Peter * : that, is.. awsome !

man, keep at it.. even people who didn't like how i started mine, said to continue.
just because someone doesn't like it, doesnt mean others wont.

yes.. I've added new material to my story, actually i've been so caught up with this. that i've been able to come out with about, 7 or 8 episodes. continuing from where i left off.. but i'm only posting one ep, at a time..
* gives the people something to wait for, whille i continue to work hard and produce my plotline.*

anyhow waiting paciently to see what your idea is, and cant wait to read it.
- like a fine art, you cannot rush my works.. lol. -
*ATOMSK*

by **dennis20014** » Sun Dec 02, 2007 6:04 am

K finally updated, with about 7 pages or more of material. Good stuff, you'll like it. I'm still writing too so

by **dennis20014** » Mon Dec 03, 2007 6:56 am

Updated with a few more pages. I thought I would put some more touchy input on the story, to show that Naota is maturing somewhat ya know? I took some notes down and the ideas I have are super awesome you will all love them. I incorporated some people from another series some of you might like. I don't think they'll play a huge role, but they won't just be cameo's. I know that one of them will have a nice talk with Naota, and OMG it's so cool how I have it thought out, I'm sure it'll be good.

The next input, we'll revisit Ninamori and see how she is doing, not having talked to Naota for two days, thinking he's ignoring her. Miyajun (I can't remember how to spell her name at the moment) and Mr. Ray will have some part in it. That'll just be a small part though. I know, your still waiting for Haruko to come back, I know, but I want to flush out the story greatly ya know? If you all like it this much, wait till she comes haha right? Enjoy, happy holidays

(If you haven't noticed, this has kind of been drama/comedy/romance so far. When Haruko comes back there will definitly be a good amount of action incorporated =D I mean what is she good for if not that? lol)

FLCL New York

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