A most awsome Fan Fic : - FL CL - 2ND CO M.M. ING.

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

well gang in the heat of suspense, I really hate to do this.
but since I screwed up big, posting the first time around.
my message to you, was completly jumbled and unreadable.
so hope these few acts will help, make things more clear.

Revised session : A
ACT 7 - 14 will be posted for the next few weeks.
questions maybe awnsered douring these ACTS..
and thanks again for reading.


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Travis : " Naota has defeated jaiden, and saved the earth..
we're taking you back to the beginning, only for a short time..
for there are things, you may have missed along the way..


FLCL 2nd comming - Revised session's : A - session.. act 1 -

- A Special homecomming.. -
OST : *Bleach - burden of the past.. {thank you shiro, once again. }
- used this, the first time around -
( Time traveler Travis )

A young brunette male approches, and comes into view..
his brunette lock's brace the top hat, in which he wears..
and tip's it, to you.. the people reading this fan fic..

He calmly begins, to speak.
Travis : " you may not know me, yet..
but i, know of you..
the viewers, the one's who witnessed the rebirth of..
the nurilogical, output king..

..Ten years have passed on, on you're planet..
The freedom of the being, known as ATOMSK..

and yet.. Medical Mechainca, still exists..
It's sole purpose, To destroy all thought.. throughout the universe..

The band, five..
The only, Hero's Able to stand aginst this sinister galatic threat..
..The crew, some may call them..

Who am I, you ask....? ..Heh...I am merly an Observer..

One who's traveled through time it's self..
mearly to obtain, Everlasting knoweldge..

The greatest battle ever known, is about to begin...
I perfer to say, If you listen.. It need's to be told..
and Told,It shall be..

Fooly Cooly..
Some say it's an essance of extascy,
An ingrediant for a much bigger purpose...
The beginning, of somthing wonderful..
There are many things that could relate, to doing it..
fooly coolying.. One, is freeing youreself of the controll..
of everyone else's grasp, on you're life..

To exceed where, other's cannot..
And to experience it a new, everyday..

That would be the logicial way, of putting it.
Nope.. for some, it's simply fooling around..
And making thing's of perpetual motion, come into play...
Of course.. what do i know, I'm mearly an observer..

just the same, as you..

Witness the beginning of the end,
the Signa attack on an onslaught scale..
and only one person, with the help of a few friends..
manage to destroy a galactic threat, for a time..
now, is when the real battle begins..

for some, It's a repeated battle..
between the forces of good, and evil..
for others, it's an entirely new twist of fate...

For these few, ..It's the essance that counts,

Even in times of war.. even if..The universe is, at stake...
Unto you, I say..

It sometimes take's an idiot, to do cool things..
..hence why, it's cool.."
- Fooly cooly.. -

..He Tips His Hat, As he Fades into the darkness..

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- FOOLY COOLY -

- 2nd Comming -
Saga #2 : The Mechanical Menace.

- I've revised this.. for you're reading pleasure.. enjoy the ost..

*** Made in tribute, to the original creator.. : yazuka tusurumaki ***

*** Story by : Jason davis ***

- a fan fic basied on the original, F L C L series. -

( Opening Theme - Raion - by : jinn )

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( Earth : MAYBASE TOKYO.. )

OST - *The pillows : fool on the planet..

Session : A
ACT 7 - A Special Homecomming -

Location : Maybase tokyo.

10 years, later..

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In the beginning..
We stumble upon a young man, tuning a blue and white rickenbacker.. the clip to play with, clearly in his mouth..
as he continues to listen for the right tone..

Naota nandaba..
he is much older now, more mature for his age..
he is now 22 years old, The long black lock's of hair..
stream down the front of his face, as he continues to tune and listen for the correct sound to his liking....

The Rickenbacker.
This simple left handed bass guitar, can switch up to a more powerfull weapon.. it's simple enough to controll, what with the swinging..
but once the small switch on the left side, is pressed..
it can change into a awsome sub auto machine gun,
rittling anything in it's path.. into, swish cheese.. so to speak..

There, on the right side.. is a handle, pullstart..
the engine of the guitar's pulse, creates sonic waves..
causing even the most hardest of metals, to crack and break..
all in all, a very powerfull weapon..

Naota continues to sit, legs crossed..
as he playes silently, tuning it to his liking..
He sitting by a river bank, a small but pleasent place..
along the river flowing through maybase..
he and and a few friends, shared this small place when they were younger.
some of the old markings from sprayers, are covered up by new paint..
but new tags follow there, old trail's..

Leading to the old lot, where the school would of been now..
a parking lot for a resturant, sit in its place.. the city has grown vastly.. corporations take over, and bring commercial zone's..
yes.. the city of maybase, has blossomed into a mighty metropolis..

Mamimi samejima..
naota thought shed left for good..
with little resources she had she has turned back to her home town looking for work.. now, age 25...

she is this once small town reporter, looking for story's around the city..
to indulge in, to make her name..
now off duty, today still the same old girl..
nothing really changing about her appearance....
looking a little older, and more developed..
she continues to swing in time, with naota tuning his guitar.
she continues to look at him, as he tunes it slowly..
naota.. this look on his face, is of depression..
for reason's, unknown..
once again.. mamimi swing's her aluminum bat, and smokes..
While naota tune's his guitar, trying to perfect..
a current work in progress..

His hand gently tuning it's head,
while she practices her swing with the baseball..

chucking the ball, far off into the nearby feild..
she then begins to explain once again,
what naota's brother told her about the perfect swing...

again.. that moral of his, came out of her mouth..
Mamimi : "arm's spread, as wide as the hips..
..focus, on your target..
don't hesitate, to swing..
and then.. just hit, hit, hit.. "
Naota pauses tuning his guitar, and calmly turn's his head twords her..
Naota : " you know.. it's been three day's since you came back..
it's like, nothing's changed..
I wondered about you sometimes, mamimi -san..?"

she smiles back calmly, at him..
Mamimi : "it's exactly what your brother taught me, about baseball..
there's really nothing wrong, with his medafore..
but I lack the strength, that he had.. not like I'd be a good player."
she then stares upward towords the sky..
Mamimi : "I'd ruin my uniform, before taking the first swing.."
Naota look's down at his guitar, saying nothing..

just continue's to tune it..
as if mamimi had said nothing, of any importiance..
Mamimi : "naota -san.. what happoned after ..you know.."

Mamimi look's seriously to naota for a moment,
hoping to hear something from him.. about.. her..
Mamimi : " did you ever get what you needed, from that experience..?" mamimi's streight hair was waving slowly, in the wind..
As she looked down at naota, she realized his current mood..
just then.. 3 keys played by themself's.. upon the rickenbacker..

Signifiying a being.. with tremendious n.o. abilities.
some where close to there position.
mamimi look's at him..
Mamimi "did you do that ? ..are you finally controlling that side of your head naota.?"

She looks at him with awe.. -tweak's naota's head -
not noticing he was amazed, at what he saw..
Naota : "it, wasn't me.. "-or..was it..? -
he then looked into the sky as a plane,
slowly passes by into the horizion.

The dimming sky signifiyed, that the day was ending..
and naota thought to himself, while mamimi sat next to him..
Mamimi : "..that was strange, I havn't seen somthing like that since.." - SNAP -
he glared at her with fieriosity...
Naota " Don't..."
he says with a pause he looks at her, not sure what to say to her..
as if she'd really understand, how he felt anyways..
he calmly look's back to his guitar, saying as he looks down..
putting his ear closer to the strings.
Naota : " Recalling past experiences, really bother's me right now."
he pauses has he hear's for the tone, of the string..
Naota : " No offence,
but let's talk about somthing else.. ok, mamimi san..?"
mamimi looked puzzled back at him, but never say's a word..

Mamimi : " well.. why wont you tell me, what's wrong..
takkun, you act as if it doesnt hurt you..?
but inside i can see.. you're hurting.."

Naota : " just leave me, alone.."

Mamimi : " some friend, you are.." - storm's off pacing away..
Mamimi : " fucker.. why is he, so.. stuborn..?"
-light's a cigarette.. -
- sounds of a meteorite, crashing. -
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OST : *Original The pillows : Stalker, IN Babylon..
- revised version -

sudenly a loud crash could be herd and felt in the distiance..
naota look's towords where the sound came from,
he look's untill he begins to see smoke..
he then sit's up, placing his guitar into it's case.
and sigh's while slowly walking back tword the huge bridge.
Naota - not again.. -

mamimi turn's to see naota, walking towords her..
Mamimi : "naota ..? ..what was that.?"
mamimi asked slowly following behind naota,
as they slowly walk back into the city..

Mamimi : " i know, you know.. something's wrong.. nao -san..?"
Naota carrying the case on his shoulder,
she notices naota continues to walk..very slowly..
there are driver's and people comming from the hometown game,
that was played just earlier that day..

Mamimi : - what's going on? -

The townsfolk are disturbed and distrught at the sight..
the traffic does not move, one bit...
Naota notices there are alot of people beeping there horn's,
and screaming about the jamming of the town bridge..

Mamimi walks with naota and grabs an arm,
forcefully holding it as they walk..
mamimi - ..I'm scarred, for once..
what if the citizen's.. begin, to riot..? -

Mamimi look's to naota as naota himself, is puzzled by this sight..
they simply watch in silence, as they continue there stroll..
she she looks back to the croud, alot of people on this bridge..
much more then usuall.

Naota : - boy, must of been a big game tonight..
there are sure alot of people fighting, about the traffic jam.. -

Naota not saying a single word, grips her arm and continues to walk down the long bridge..

picking up pace with mamimi at his side.

Naota : "I don't care about baseball,
it was my brother's thing..not mine.."
He continues to keep pace,
something incredibly wrong, with the disturbance of this area.

The driver's now start to get out of there car's,
walking tword the source of the accident.
The comotion of the driver's finally catch the eye of naota..
Naota uses his eyes and focus's, to see in the distiance..
mamimi look's at naota and says..

Mamimi : "nao -san, it's probably just another accident..
nothing serious, but i do hope noone got hurt.."

She tries to drag naota's attention, back to her..
but fails, and naota start's to run off at a racing pace..
mamimi look's as he paces forth..
now finally comming to the source of the accident..

A huge gaping hole between the outside,
and the inner side of the city,
seperate the bridge from the other side....

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- OST : *The pillows - Juliet.. - Original lp version -

( Soyomoto Bridge : Maybase )

Then out of no where, A monsterous robot of tremendious force emmerges from the gap, transforming it's self as it tries to climb back up twords the bridge...
mamimi can't help but drop the lit ciggerette out of her mouth,
while starring the creature in the face as it raises above the bridge.

It's true form has yet to be emmerged, it is a giant hand..
metallic and basicly mecha like, emmerging from the smoke..
bellowing from the rittled base of the bridge.

As naota drop's down from the sky to get a closer view,
He on the side of the large bridge.. atop, one of the beams..

he look's for the source of the screams, comming from the distiance..
he finally find's mamimi is already captured, by the machine.

her hand's slamming aginst the giant hand, and mamimi..
squirming to break free, but is having no effect..
Mamimi : " fuck you, - nughh - GET, ..OFF, OF ME.!!! ...NAOTA !!! "

Naota : "Mamimi.! "
Naota scream's, starring at her as she screams for help.
He then breaks out his guitar.

Naota : "I'll save you !... Just, Hang On.!!"
She scream's in a panic..

Mamimi : "Naota.. Help Me, PLEASE !. ..IT HURTS.!!"
She screams, from the machines grip, now growing tighter on her.

She start's to scream even more, from the pain..

Naota begins his assent into the air, all the time..
watching mamimi gasp for air..

Naota : "DAMN IT !.."
He grunts while reving up the start, to his rickenbacker..

Naota - I've got to free her.!!! -

He start's to flare up, The color surrounding him..
as he terraforms with as much power, as he can fester up..
and flies head on toword's the machine.

Naota : "Mamimi.. I'm comming.!!"

The tramendous force from him, slamming his guitar upon it's base..
shook the metallic creature and it releases it's captive..
thus capsizing and falling..

Naota flies and catches mamimi, and set's her down in a safe zone..
as the machine, slowly fall..

Naota turn's and says to Mamimi..
Naota : " Stay here, while I deal with this..!"
She look's back with concern,
the machine now terraforming it's self into another form,
now begins to gain balance as they speak..

Mamimi : " but.. ? naota..!?"

But before Mamimi could speak, Naota takes off..
He heading back into the battle zone...
The medical mechanica machine, now fully transformed..
Uses it's arm's 6 fold..
-THE DYSECTOR, ARRIVES.. -

It then begins it's conquest twords the facility, at the top of the highest hill of town.
the sounds of it moving are thunderous, as it slowly pull's it's self tword the facility..

The monsterous machine carried it's self, like a scorpion..
traveling using its arm's as legs, and traveling incredably fast..
The townsfolk start to run and panic.
three of Naota's high school friends,
Start to speed in an old truck. They max there speed..
two of which in the bed truck, are screaming and holding each other in panic..
Sota & taru : " YURRAAAGGGHHH !!! "

as the machine gain's ground, they are nothing..
compared to the machine's forceful pace.

The Truck get's totaled and pushed aside by the machine..
now leaving a huge trail behind it's self,
as it heads through the downtown area..
They all blink back in awe, looking at it's giant form,
stairing down the destructive path it leaves in it's wake..

The machine, Now progresses towords the old facility atop the hill. Naota despratly tries to contact canti..
But, to no avail.. Canti simply, will not respond..
Naota : "Guess I need to handle this on my own, then.."
He say's as he flyes at an alarming rate,
towords the machine and the facility..

The machine gain's ground tword the facility,
as naota tries to confront it on the hillside.
He then flies to a hault infront of the machine, arm's spread..
he now, making a line between the facility and the machine..
Making it stop, in mid movment..
Naota : " I WILL NOT, LET YOU ACTIVATE THIS FACILLITY ! "
He scream's at it as the dysector slides to a hault,
just outside the facility..

silently.. it idles for a moment...

Naota look's back smiling wickedly.
Naota : "..Must be a, voice command..? "
- or is it, this thing has a concience? -
Just then, the machine does a transformation..
And it's head flips into a gun, The barrel of it now stairing naota in the face.

A look of shock now appears from naota, as it fires a shot.
propelling our hero into a nearby building..

mamimi in the heat of battle, scream's for naota..
as he despratly try's to regain himself..

Mamimi : "NAOTA.!"

Hearing her scream's..
he plunges out of the wreakage, of the now rittled building..
And flies back, into the battle...

He glares towords the mecha, as it tries to swat him from mid flight..

Naota : " Right here, scrap heap.!"

He says to it, and start's to battle it head on..
swinging his guitar with tremendous force,
keeping the huge machine at bay..

the arm's fly back, as they are knocked out of the way by naota.
The machine's balance is soon faulterd by our hero,
and it fall's onto the ground...

A thunderous sound could be herd, from the distiance.

mamimi continues to stare in awe,
as the machine is now gounded by naota..
she then says in a calm, but confussed voice....

Mamimi : " He, did it..."

she then shakes her head a bit, realizing what he had done..
she then scream's again..

Mamimi : " HE REALLY, DID IT !! "
she continues to stare but, Little does she realize..

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OST : *The pillows - little busters.. - Revised version -

It takes alot more then that, to destroy these machines...

Naota knowing the battle is not over, assends high into the sky..

The sun shining on his guitar, as he continues to climb..

Now gripping his guitar with his right hand..

He begins to plummet, Skydiving with extreme force..
towords the machine..

The bluish colored light trail behind him,
like a long dark blue stream falling behind him,
as he dessend's onto the machine's base..


A loud concussion from the guitar could be herd,
far off in the distiance.

{ TWANGG !!! }

For a split second, As the machine slowly rose off the surface of the earth from the shock..
There was absolute, silence..

Then a huge explosion on the hillside, could be seen for miles.
The shock wave starts to throw everyone, within the vicinity..
onto there backs..
car's tumble like weed's in the wind, And inturn..

Naota strikes with force.. such, has never been seen by man..

Sending the machine flying into space, once more.

There is little panic now, and mamimi look's into the sky once more.

Naota come's back twords her, as she look's into the now night time sky..
Naota : "Are..you, alright.. Mamimi -san..? "
He ask's while landing, now walking towords her.
she then turn's to him, and says..

Mamimi :"Yes.. But I Think my smokes were crushed,
douring my capture."
- sighs,and looks away a bit -
Mamimi : "Guess I'll have to buy another pack, ..huh?"
He look's at her with slight concern, then slowly pulls the one out..
from pack he had himself..
he saying nothing, hands one to her..

She then looks back to him, not saying a word..
and takes the ciggerette, Then look's back into the sky.
Naota then looks to her, he then speaks to her with a little bit of a smile on his face..

Naota : " And what's this asking me about my past. "
- carcastic glare, toword's mamimi -
" You know as well as I, we both havn't seen her since she left..
..I'm suprised, you even remember her.."

he begins to place his guitar back into it's case,
and soon start's to walk back home ..
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OST Original - The Pillows : Carnival.. - original lp version

naota begins to walk away from mamimi,
leaving her to her own thoughts..
but saying one thing to her, before he leaves..

Naota : " besides.. it's not like we'll ever see her, again..
she's after the pirate king.."
He shurgs his shoulder's, and continues to walk away..

Mamimi watching him leave, as she stands in place..
The exact same spot, where haruko and the two first met..

Mamimi can still see some of the scrapes,

left from the rickenbacker grazing the ground in haruko's hand..
..year's since that day,had gone by.
And yet those trails are still there..

Naota speaks to mamimi saying, "see yah.." as he leaves..
waving to her as he walks away She look's in the distiance, then smiles and says..

Mamimi : "Hmm.. -giggles - ..still the same old, tak -kun.."

- FL CL 2nd comming.. -
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Later that day..

Naota is passed out in his bed..
The bedroom he lives in has changed..

No longer harboring any of his brothers pictures, posters, or clothes.
His bed is no longer a bunkbed, And has new posters.
A stand, sit in the corner of his room for his guitar..

..still, very much small but.. exceitable for his own, use.
He sighs, and turn's in his bed now looking up at the ceiling of the room.

errily.. the phone begins to ring, as naota look's towords it..

he, thinking he is the only one at home.. hesitates, to awnser it..

the phone rings for a moment, then stops...
Naota, simply hang's the phone up on the reciever..
he sighs then streches, and begin's to leave his room..

Walking down the hallway, the phone yet ring's again.. errily..
Naota - fuck, not again.. -
he rushes into his father's room, to awnser..
Naota : " hello..? ..hello?! I'm getting real tired of this.."
naota again, simply hang's the phone, back on the reciever..
then proceed's to leave his father's room..


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OST : The pillows - Swinger's night club. { revised version. }

Naota then begins to stumble down the stairs, and into the kitchen.
Much to his suprise, the only family member in there..was ..but his father.. getting ready to eat dinner..

Kamon : "..naota-kun, who was on the phone..?"
naota looks a little puzzled, to his father .

Naota "i don't know, didn't you awnser it.?"
he then realized that there really was noone there,
but he and kamon.. shinjekumi, was out on the town that night.
He calmly replies to his father.

Naota : " besides, i thought you were in america,
visiting with tasuku?"
he continues to look with a dorn face at the fridge,
looking for somthing to drink..
eyes gazing into the space, of the cold box. - shuffles things around. -

Naota : "Did you decide, not to.?"
Kamon, his father look's at him with a vicatious look..

Kamon : " Those damned officer's there crooks.."
He explains calmly, as he eats.

Kamon : " They locked me up for loitering..
whille i was waiting for youre bother, the first day i was there..
..I was so embarrassed, when your brother came to get me..
that i had no choice but to come back..
oh, and here."

Kamon tosses naota a new shirt from his brother,
naota look's at it while kamon speaks to him.

Kamon : " He sends his reguards, And say's :
he hopes to hear from you, sometime.."

Naota, not looking at his father..
then grips the new shirt that was givin to him..
A depressing look now appears on his face..
And thus throwing down the shirt,
he then quietly walks back upstairs into his room..

Kamon : " heh, he really is stuborn..
oh well, can't let this shirt go to waste..
..it's a really nice shirt.."
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OST : Original -The pillows : The Moon Is, MINE ! { lp version }

That night..
Naota not trying to notice, the taps from his window..
Continues to tune his guitar..
he trying hard, to avoid talking to mamimi..

Outside, mammi tries to invoke naota's attention by throwing pebbles at his up stair's window.
but to her, avail..
he does not show his face..
distrught.. she finally gives up, and leaves.
As she walks away in the horizion of the night sky,

a shooting star could be seen. Flying by,in a trail of white light.

Naota - i never thought mamimi, would be so annoying..
- sigh - least now, i can think on things.. -
- FL CL - 2nd comming -
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OST :The pillows - another morning. { Revised version }

The next day we find canti, raking leaves out side there family shop.. as the winds blow, the leaves sweep back up into the yard..
canti then shows a sweatdrop on his screen face..
and continues to rake the leaves up into another pile.
Only for the winds to, once again..
blow them back out into the yard..

Inside the house it is quiet..
The sounds of bird's could be herd,
churping outside of naota's window..

but the young man naota, is still asleep..
just then..
another series of pebbles, rap outside of his window..

he then get's up, still rubbing an eye as he heads to open it.
He slowly opens it, only to get socked in the head by another pebble..

he stands there with an expression, of grumpyness..
a small indentation of the pebble hitting him,
still sit's on his forhead.

His face shows anger and frustration,
as he screams at her from his room window..
Naota : "WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU, WOMEN..?!?"
he the looks at her, holding a video tape in her hands.

Mamimi : "But tak -kun..? there's somthing i need to show you..!"

Naota then pauses in his anger, to say..
Naota : "fine, come in then..
but this had better not be another bondage, tape.. I hate those.."

She then smiles and bows to him,
before entering the family backery at the end of the city.

she then rushes toword's the living room,
and turn's on the television.
as she pops in the tape..
naota walk's in, and sit's down on the large couch in there living room.

As mamimi turn's the vcr on..
Kamon walks in..
he simply asks them, as he moves from one area to the next..
Kamon : " what'cha watching.?"
Naota : " dunno, mamimi's poping it in now.."

-static -
There on the news was mamimi..
reporing her latest, in midtown maybase tokyo..
as she smiles and looks at him, in excitement.
and explains to him..

Mamimi " yesterday's event's gave me the top spot for news anchor.. I'm so happy.."
she says, as leans into him..
she hugs him, and giggles a bit.
He smiles a bit, but then goes back into his grumpy mood..
Naota : "I'm sorry, mamimi-kun.."
he sighs and continues to say.

Naota : "I'm just,not in a good mood today.."
She then settles down instantly..and asks.

Mamimi : "come on.. you can tell me..? -blink blink -
was there somthing bad that happoned, last night..?"

She grabs a hand, and stares at him quietly..
waiting for a responce..
he simply look's down, not saying a word..
his expression, could clearly be seen..

she slowly look's away.. and grabs her shoes, looking a bit depressed herself..
Then begins to put her shoes back on.
simply saying to him..
Mamimi : " Tak -kun, you need time to think about what your going to do.
Ither find where you belong, or live without it.
Ither way it's your choice."

Mamimi then stands up, and walks to the front door.
she walks out and turn's back to him, as he gazes unto her..
she breathes, she tries to hold onto him, very closely..
but he pushes her away..she then looks to him and says..

Mamimi : "why won't you let me in, nao -san..?"
he simply sighs and waits for her to leave..
she throwing a angrey look toword's him, as she walks away..
He then slams the door behind her..
And starts to walk into the kitchen.

Once again, the phone mysteriously rings..
Naota - who the fuck, keep's calling me..? -
and naota is forced to awnser it.

slowly he picks it up, hoping someone normal is on the other end..


He awnsers it.. Naota : "hello.?"
And waits for a responce, but there is none..
not even someone breathing, on the other end..
he waits a few more seconds then says

Naota : "i'm hanging up, now..!"
yelling into the reciever,
and places it back on the hook..
he then starts to head outside towords his hangout,
to pratice his music in peace..
Or whatever peace of mind, he can find..
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OST : *Original The pillows - sad sad kiddie.


Naota slowly walks along the riverside road,
heading twords the old bridge into town..
walking slowpaced and enjoying it,
every step of the way..
he sighs, and says to himself while shaking his head..

Naota : " Nothing amazing ever happons here, anymore.. "
He says as he continues to walk..
his thought of the earlier events with mamimi, reaches new heights..
as he kicks a few rocks, walking towords the old bridge..
his case shines glimmingly in the sun, as he stops for a drink..
on the roadside.

Cars pass behind him, as he sips on his cola drink.
the taste makes him, remember the times when she was here..
he then tosses it in the trash can, next to the soda despensor.

mamimi calls to him in the distiance

Mamimi : "hey, naota.!"
as she waves to him, running up the stairs..
naota - how the hell, did she catch up to me.?! - o.o


The old bridge..

He looks at her, noticing her outfit is diffrent...
she is very much happy to see him,
as she stop's at the top of the stairs.
Mamimi : "i was waiting for you, tak -kun.. where, were you..?" The look on her face is of concern for him,
as he continues to stand there looking dead at her.
Naota : "mamimi.. - sigh- ,look..
i really don't want to hang out right now.."
He tries to slide aside of her, heading down the stairs.. and along the riverbank.
she follows him like a lost puppy,
wondering what his concern is all about.

he then comes upon his favoriate spot and sit's,
his case with holding his guitar.
The preasent

Atomsk the pirate king, was released ten years ago..
ever since, medical mechanica has been despretly trying to reactivate the becon..

naota has been defending it this whole time..
never once, thinking of himself before others..
things, were hard for him..
the bright blue and white guitar, shines in the morning sun..
as he tryes to tune it, once more..

mamimi sit's, back aginst his..
folding her legs, sideways.. and trying to get comfortable.
as he trys to sing, and play again..
his expressions show depression,
and mamimi quietly looks back at him..
starring sideways at him, in quiet awe..

his movments of the guitar, are exactly like hauko's..
when she played.. the melody, much the same..
as if naota is trying to remember the melody, she played.

mamimi look's upward, and notices the small..
but glowing, red star in the sky..
Mamimi : " that's strange.."
she says as she points it out, to naota..
naota look's up for a moment, then look's back down.. and continues to play a bit, saying to her..

Naota : " It's probably the machine i sent into space, yesterday.
oh.. and by the way, how are you feeling..?"
His face showing little concern, for mamimi..
as she coughs a bit, then lights up a cigarette.
she smiles and looks back to him sideways, again saying..

Mamimi : "I'm still alive, right..? ..that, has to count for somthing.."
as she puffs, she let's it hang from her lips.
the smoke bellowing from her mouth, as she gazes up..
at the glowing red star..

naota look's toword's her only being able to see the smoke..
watching her as she, breathes..
and it reminds him of the old facility, and how the smoke would bellow from it's pipes evey day.. at the same, time..
but no longer, does the smoke bellow from its stacks..

the facility stands alone, silent.. at the top of the hillside, to town.
the husstle and busstle of the townsfolk,
could clearly be seen from the distiance.
a plane could be seen in the distiance, of the sky..
and a flock of birds, fly by The facility..

It's face rusts away, and decays...
naota then stands up, and starts to glare at the star..
wondering if it was a good choice to leave that robot in space, like that.

naota ponder's if the force he had, created pushed the machine farther away then predicted..
he then sees it explode.. but no sound, could be herd..

he then sit's back down, and tries to play his guitar once more..
but the guitar start's to play on it's own..
playing only a few unknown strings..
Naota : "..that's it..!" scream's naota..
he then looks into the sky, and smiles..

mamimi notices his look ..and notices,
it's the happiest sight she has seen him in.. for along, time.
he looks up, gazing into the daytime sky..
looking, wondering.. if she was out there..

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OST : * Original The pillows - High Risk..
- Nandaba's bakery : Maybase -

Later that night..
naota has a disturbing, dream..

one of standing on a planet,
totally smoothed over by medicial mechanica..

no facilities, are anywhere to be found..

he wonders a bit, looking in ither direction..
screaming out, in the silent of the night..
Naota : "hello.!..hello.?"

Suddenly..
a faded vision of hauko comes into view, right in front of him..

Haruko : "how's your head, kid..?"
she asks as she floats above his head, kind of knocking on it.
seeing if there is still some reaction, to his n.o. abilities..

Naota : "..i'm, fine.."
he says grabing his head and backing away.

Naota : "not like you'd care, anyways.."
his expression is of excitement, but also of depression.
she then turns back tword him and she says..

Haruko : "you know, your head is the only one that works.. right.?"

Her vision somewhat floats, infront of him..
she smiles as she speaks to him again.

Haruko : " Besides, you think i could ever..
find the pirate king, without you.?"

Her small gaze is set on naota, as he tryes to forget about her..
and slowly turn's his head.
he then starts to say to himself repeatedly..

Naota : "this is only a dream.."
she looks back at him, her vision flies around to his face again..
and stops infront of him, once more..

Haruko : "If this was a dream, could i do this..?"
she leans into kiss him but he backs off..
once naota had feeling's for her, deep meaningfull emotions..

but now, he felt that this was simply an illusion..
repressed memories...

her psychotic laugh screaming in his head,
scares the hell out of him.

she then says..
Haruko : "tak -kun.. I'll eat you, just yet.."
- miniacle laugh -
- SNAP -

Suddenly naota awakens, in the safty of his bedroom..
the sweating from his brow, and the heat of the room.. awakes him, from slumber..
nothing scared him more..
then the bump he recieved, before canti came here..

He continues to stare at his wall curling up, in the fetal position..
and thinking of his dream..
naota - she, was there. -
but, not to the extent that naota was hoping.
He then hits the wall,and covers his head..
groaning, while doing so...
The thoughts still, run through his head..

- After all.. this time, He cannot stop thinking of her.. -
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OST : *Original the pillows - another morning..
{the song, is rudly interupted..}

The next day..
Naota is sitting outside of the family backery, tuning his guitar..
while watching canti rake leaves into a plastic, bag..
once more, trying to dispose of the clutter..
his eyes gase upon canti, as he calmly rakes and bag's them up..
and brings the leaves to the trash..

thus, continuing it's daily chores..
he then heads inside the backery,
to help shingekuni out with the inventory.

once again, we find naota alone and pondering about life in general..

Naota soon gazes upward.. then speaks..

Naota : " fuck.. it's that time, again.."

when suddenly there was an explosion,
that could be herd for miles..

he the leaps up in a shock, and heads to the nearest hill..
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OST - *Original : come down.

looking onto the downtown area, he finds smoke bellowing once again in the midtown section..
Naota - damn it.. relentless, aren't they..?! -
he thus, burst's off toword's the zone.

we then see kamon's face appear from the upstair's window,
he screaming at naota..
as he flyes off into the distiance, toword's the destructive sceene..

Kamon : "Be back before 8... We're having curi !.."

Naota flies at an alarming rate racing tword the smokey area,
the blue colored stream could be seen from the sky for a distiance..

naota then stops above one of the cities sky scrapers,
and look's down upon the smokey debree.

Naota : " come on, come on.. where, are you.."

suddenly, a giant mechanical hand flyes at him..
trying to grab our hero.

Naota - SHIT !! - o.o

Quickly naota back's off with amazing speeds,
and stop's above the middle of two more skyscrapers..

he sees the extention of the arm, flying into the air..
with 2 huge,red and green cables comming from the back,
trailing down to the base of the machine..

he then watches as the machine's hand, try's to balance it's self..
and stands on one of the many sky scrapers.
Naota see's his target..
A gigantic red and green glowing eye, comming from the palm of the huge hand.

the symbol it shines, is of medicial mechanica..
much the same, as any other.. he's faced, thus far...
the sight, angers him.. and naota flyes at his opponent, with blinding speeds..

only to be knocked back into another of the cities skyscrapers,
his power now at it's peak.. he calls out for the help of canti the robot machine..
that terraform's into the semi -sonic 5000..
A buster so powerfull, it can go through the earth's toughest metals..

Canti recieving the transmission from naota, takes off through the roof of the backery..
and flyes off into the battle zone..
where naota fights, for his life..

Shinjikumi : "damn that blasted robot,
why can he use the door like normal beings..?"

he says..
looking up through the hole in the backery's roof,
and into the next floor where kamon stood.
Kamon blink's back at his old man, and simply says..
Kamon : "guess we need a new roof..?"

we find another speeding ball, heading twords earth..
a much smaller one, but screaming inward at an alarming rate..
and smashes just outside of the city limits..
naota continues to battle with the machines arm,
and swing's as hard as he can..

Still fighting off any resistiance, the machine may give him..
but the machine is too powerfull, and knock's him back once more..
he then scream's in a fit of rage,
and flyes head on into the machines grasp.

Canti suddenly comes from behind,
and grab's the cables powering the machine hand..

It then opens it's self, to naota's attack..

Naota then bust's through the machines barroir,
his force could slowly be seen..
as he passes through the middle of the hand,
canti open's himself to naota.. and swollow's naota..

the machine then explodes, and canti stands with in the blast..
..not a scratch on him...

we see naota in an inter-dimensional area,
where the lightbulb once again..
screws it's self, into our heros head..
there is no resistiance, no pain from his expression..
when it screws it's self in and tightens..

he has trained his mind, to become one with canti..
and thus, canti changes from blue.. to bright red..
bursting inward into the center of the sky scraper,
now at street level..
canti Terraform's into the cannon, and searches for it's target..
when out of nowhere, on there left side..
another of the huge machine hand's grabs, them..
and pulls them upward, out of building..

It then lift's it's self to full view, grabing canti's leg..
and throwing it's fist, into another of the cities skyscrapers..
the dabrie scatters to the streets below, and innocent bystandards
run and scream in panic..
the huge bolders of concrete, fall upon them.

The mecha hand then releases it's grasp, upon naota and canti..
now merged together the red crome machine, stands once more..
and prepares for the m.m. machine to strike at it.
the mecha hand tries to deliver a blow,
but canti stops it from pushing it's self into the building.
it's tremendous force, pushes it slowly.. but canti stay's firm..

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FL CL - 2nd comming..

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Maybase, tokyo..
OST : *The pillows - biscuit hammer.. { HARUKO's RETURN }

Just then, out of no where..
there is a desguised person, riding a yellow vespa..
and wheilding another guitar..
gung-ho style, the person swings there guitar into the base of the hand.. spliting it in two.
there now standing back to canti, explain's the situation as they stand firm.. waiting for more of the hand, to strike..
the person tosses their disguise off,
and revealing there face..saying inturn..

- SHE's, back.. -

Haruko : "..Alright..I'm here, And I know what's going on..tak -kun.." she says as she pulls the start, revving her guitar back up.
glowing gold eyes and the redish pink hair, could plainly tell it was none other then haruko..
back from her journey's, to find the pirate king..
She then head's off into the wild blue, searching for the base of the machine.
canti soon follow's her as they scream acrossed the sky..
Haruko look's down, and somewhat around the vicinity..
the machine would possibly be.

looking very carefully in her old fasion, spazz of a manor.
Haruko : "where could it be .?"
she says as she look's around the city streets.
canti, hovering behind her look's down calmly as well..
The base of the machine cannot be seen, from the smoke..
bellowing from the drop zone..

suddenly the machine starts to move..
tremmor's come from underground, building's start to shake..
as it dig's, underneath the small city..

It's trail, could clearly be seen..

haruko scream's..
Haruko : " It's A Digger.!"
And races off twords the machine's tunnel, Into the underground...


As the machine dig closer, towords it's target..
the old medicial mechanica facility..

Hauko and canti race for time, As the digger gains ground...
Time is of the essance, for our two hero's...
Hauko in the lead,and canti following close behind her..
she explain's while speeding twords the machine's gigantic, backside..

Haruko : "look's like we'll have to destroy that thing,
as soon as possible.." she says as they race towords the end of the tunnel,
where the digger is continuing it's path..
towords it's destination..
canti follow's closely, ever so silent..
just following haruko, knowing the danger ahead..
Haruko : "It's just up ahead, we should hurry.."
she say's bursting and weilding her weapon.
canti, doing the same..
up ahead the machine is soon seen from the distiance..
It's metallic shell could clearly be seen, from the debree it scatters..

making it hard for them, to get close enough to damage it.
haruko now within range start's to burst,
speeding while her guitar changes shape.
As she flies toword the machine, at supersonic speeds..
canti's screen head now glows with the same flared colorlight, as atomsk..
he slowls down to grab the end of the object,
now trying to break through the channel..
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FLCL 2nd comming..

Meanwhile..
As comander amarao, and lut. kitsurubami look on from the mothership obsurvatory..
amarao look's on from a still positioned bicycle fan,
pettling continously.

As he watches from the front of the room,
the fan somewhat blowing all the hot air, around..
amarao continously watches on, as our hero's gain there ground on the giant mechanical being.
Kitsurubami : " Sir?."
she says while looking at him
Kit : "..Hasn't this gone on long enough?"
she asks..
as she continues watching the screen, and waiting for him to speak..

Amarao then quit's peddling, and look's back...
stairing at her..
amarao : "Relax. if they try to activate the Iron,
we'll just have to blow the damn thing up..
before it reaches the facility."
he then start's his workout, again..
Amarao "I planted a bomb, six month's after they decomissioned it..
10 years ago."
.still starring at him. she then says.
Kit : " Yes, I know that day quite well,
That was when atomsk was freed..."

He then grunts still riding the bike fan, he continues to talk while looking forward watching on..
as the two, chase the bot..

amarao : " yes, he's still out there.. but where, I havn't a clue.
my only lead's are these two..haruhara, and the kid..
without them, we'll never find him again."

Now phanting, he then stops and takes another breather..
she looks back at the two hero's as they advance upon,
the nightmarish creature..
It's now towering body..
borrowing underneath, the small city..

Now both within range, weilding there new-found weapons..
canti and haruko race closer, using an infinity formation..
While flying in the air, one flying higher then the other.

there formation, streaming the machine's beed on them."
we gotta do it now while it's confused,
otherwise we wont have another shot.. ok, ready..?"
says haruko going gungho style, on the machine.

canti then burst's the same way..
and both forcefully swing, spinning in mid flight while doing so..

haruko.. off her guitar and swinging, while canti uses force..
..It then is smashed forward and explodes.
they both fly back and watch,
as the fireworks fly from the machine..
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OST : Original - the pillows : one life.

The digger mecha is completly destroyed..
Thus ending the threat, for another while..

Darkness, now impale the tunnel of the digger..
haruko then speak's.

Haruko : "heh, too easy.. but where are the lights..?"

and flip's her guitar, onto her shoulder..
holding the strap, and looking back at canti..

Canti then opens up, like a large shell..
exposing inside of it's self.
Producing naota from it's body, steam rolls off the machine..
from the power it used, slowly like an exaughst..

Naota then open's his eyes and moves forward,
as canti then transform's back into it's solid form.

they both gaze for a moment, agressly..
the only light shining is from canti's tv head.
she blinks and say's..
Haruko : " hey robot..
where'd you learn that trick.?"

Canti blushing, scratches it's head out of embarassment..
Naota then looks down a bit, hiding his face from her..
and say's..

Naota : "..Truly... A blessing in desguise.. haruko, ..thank you.."

she blushes.. then smiles back, saying only..

Haruko : " ..long time no see, kid.. you've grown."
There.. in the darkness of the cavern, dug by the giant digger..
..the two, both stand..

They, silently.. look at eachother,
ither say, not one word..

- we start over. - { she's deffinetly back ! }
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OST *Original - The pillows : Last dinosaur..

( HARUKO) : Hopefully you've realized by now..
That this is no longer, a comming of age story..
Naota got so big, and atractive.. hooo,fooly cooly.." n.n

Mamimi : " hey i saw him first, damn it.." >.>

Haruko : " Meanwhille..
things get alot deeper into the original plot,
as atomsk return's to earth in search of us..
as I, and naota..

despratly try to get to him, atop of the old facility.."

Naota : " In all of the other events, that have started around town..
Commander amarao figures out atomsk's plan,
before he even reaches earth.

And for some reason, my father..
Just can't keep, his eye's off haruko..
all this and more. on the next fooly cooly, 2nd comming..

Haruko : "**Revised :A session - ACT 8 : ** -
"The Vespa Lady, Rides Again ! " -


Haruko : " - GASP - ..ATOMSK! " (o.o)

( ATOMSK ) : "I've come for the boy, haru -hara..
..It still, too late to say goodbye..?" (-.-)*

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[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

well it's the middle of the week, or otherwise known as hump day.
this special act of flcl 2nd comming,
has been revised and is brought to you by purple nurples..!!!!
remember, if it's not purple, it's not a nurple.!

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FOOLY COOLY - 2ND COMMING.
Saga #2 : The Mechanical Menace.
Session : A
ACT: 8
- 'The Vespa Lady, Rides Again ! ' -
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( Outskirts of : Maybase Tokyo )

OST - The Pillows : The Moon Is Mine ! -

That night..
on the outside of town, the nanbada's backery was closing.
we see canti the robotic hero,
walking up to the front door to the backery..

flipping the sign from open, to close..
He then trun's around and head's back in.

We then see haruko sitting on a stool in the kitchen,
inhaling ramen, and talking to naota while fighting off kamon, with her left foot.
-chew-
Haruko : " So how ya been, kid ?
..Good I see."

she continues to fight off kamon with her left foot,
while still eating the ramen..

Haruko : "Mmhmm, strong too.. i can feel you're resonance.."

Naota simply sit's back,
arm's folded and head resting on the table..
just acrossed from the both of them.

Naota - what's she talking about.? -
He then sighs and closes his eyes..

Kamon : "harko, oh my... haruko, you have returned ! "
Kamon say's as he despretly tryes to get at her,
while she continues,fighting him off.
Kamon :" I've been waiting, all this time for you my love.."


Kamon making kissy faces at her, and wishing to hold her..
but she continues to fight him off..
as soon as he grips a foot.. she glare's at him.
And pushes, full force..
Him, into the wall. Knocking kamon uncontious,
the only words proceiving out of his mouth is..

Kamon : "what a kiss.."
now in a daze..
he lays there next to the trashcan,
eyes hypnoticly spinning as he sighs from being knocked out..

she then stops and looks at naota,
while having ramen stuck in her mouth.

Haruko : "you know the reason I cameback, right..?
..besides, you know I can't find him without you.."
He then look's back at her with a depressed look..

Naota : " This is too much, just too much."
he sighs and put's his head back down on the table,
starring into the glass of water infront of him..

Naota : " Not only is earth in danger,
but now the entire universe as well.? "
he spaces for a moment, hauko looking at him silently..
eatting her noodles and ramen naota continues to speak..

Naota : "If they activate the Iron, here.."
She then puts the cop o ramen down, on the table..
and places both hands on the table.

Haruko : "I've layed my cards on the table, Tak -kun..!"

she throws her head back, her arm wraped around her eyes..
She looking dramaticly twords him saying..
Haruko : " Now it's your turn, hero..!"
she points a fingure at him looking with a confident gaze,
making it look as if she really cared..
Haruko : "Will you fight with me?, or will you flee..?"

he continues to stare at the glass not noticing the dramatics,
of haruko's speach...
she simply bubbles down, and sit's back on the stool.
quietly, looking at him..

he continues to stare at the glass,
as she does not take her eyes off him..
beginning to eat her ramen's again,
she then begins to say to him..

Haruko : "No more,
will innocent planet's be smoothed over by there controll.
nope.. No more, will they come here,

And try to activate this facillity.
naota..don't you see ?, you're this planet's only hope of survival."

She looks at him with concern, more so then she's ever done at him..
Though he know's that look when she gives it,
Not often is the pink haired girl is sincere,
about knowing when somthing must stop.
she then pushes the cup tword him..

Haruko : "Here..it's not hot, ..i'm just not hungrey."
they gaze at eachother, as she passes the cup to him..
then slides back into her onto the stool,
holding her hands out infront of her spreading her legs..
she then looks down, and away to the right now..
spacing out as she continues to speak to him..

Haruko : "I'm not going to leave again naota,
I lost that bastard long ago..
and i'll never find him again without you."

He then looks down at the ramen and says..
Naota : "Why do i get the feeling that this,
is yet another one of your wild goose chases.?"

He then starts to eat out of the cup'o'ramen.
naota - ..least she was telling the truth, about the ramen.. -
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(Maybase : Tokyo ) OST - The pillows : Crazy Sunshine -

Later that night we find canti in the kitchen for a bit,
once again doing the dishes in the sink..
his screen face on, the cat is eating out of the bowl..
over by the right side of the kitchen..

not paying any attention to the robotic being.
We then look into naota's room..
where naota sit's crosslegedly on his bed,
and tunes the flying v..

haruko on the otherside of the room claim's a corner for her own..
oppasite of where the rickenbacker now sit..
she set's up her sleeping bag, and pillow..

naota still trying to play the same melody, that she did.
she looks silently, as he playes each string in tune..
then stops abrubtly,
not knowing where to go next with the tune..
she then jumps out of her crosse-leged position, grips her ebo
and starts to play it loudly .gungho style.
as she hinders her face under her own bangs..
Haruko : " Sorry.. I havn't herd that song in a long time.
but I still remember it, like it was yesterday."

She then sit's back down on her sleeping bag,
and continues to polish her guitar,
it's wide and flare colored frame..
essentially beconed it's own name.
she treasures it like it was her child, careing for it's simplicity.
he then silently lowers his head, and start's to play once more..
not noticing her siting back down on her bag.
she then asks him.
Hauko :" Naota, you seem so hurt that i left..
I never ment to hurt you like that.
but i needed to see him, one last time..
even if, only for a breif moment."
The expression of sadness compells haruko,
as naota continues to play.
then a few moments later, naota stop's playing..
his spiked hair, and eyes of blue looking back..
as haruko then starts to lower her head back down.
Naota watches as haruko then just sit's there silently.
he then says to her, looking back down on the bed.

Naota : "I know why you left, I'm not mad.. just, hurt..
at.. what, amarao said was true..
You used me, to get what you wanted...
And the left looking for a hopeless dream.."
He start's to lay his head down oppisate of her,
shutting the light off so only the moonlight showin in the room..
Naota : " If you really cared like you said, you did..
you wouldn't of left. none of this, would of happoned..
I'm greatful, you came back.
But it's at the worst, possible time."

Naota lower's his head once more, she then climb's in his bed..
laying behind him, trying to cuddle up to his masculine body.
as they lay there, she puts her chin on his shouler.
Haruko :"you know naota, i tried my very best..
to be who i want to.. you have a choice too.. "
she begins to kiss his ear softly,
and wrap her arm around his weighst.
Haruko : "this moment, naota.. let it be our's..just for once, tak -kun.." naota - all you wanna do, is have sex.. -

Naota - For that moment, she really felt happy..
I lay there listening to her soft kissing, and feel her holding me close.
I continue to gaze into the wall, oppisate of where I lay..
trying to forget, what originally she had done to me..

- FL CL 2nd comming.. -
- Do not forget, simply forgive.. -
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( Maybase : Tokyo ) OST - The Pillows : Blues Drive Monster -

The next morning..
we find naota now in the back yard of the family backery,
swinging a baseball bat and working out as usual..
Mamimi joining him sit's on the steps, leading into naota's room..
watching him workout, both doors to his room are wide open..
all the while, haruko shifting through his room from left to right.
spazzing about nothing, and chasing a stray cat.
mamimi's expression is depressing,
as naota continues to swing with the baseball bat..
perfecting, his swing.

Mamimi then sighs and look's down, as he then takes his break.
looking back while toweling his head off.
Naota : "what's wrong.. you look, sad..?"
his expression turn's from happy, to conserned..
he then places his bat on the ground, then walks over to her..
Naota continues toweling all the while,
as he sits next to her and speaks to her..
Naota : "come on, what's wrong.."
She then starts to get up, and fix her blouse..
then look's back at him..

Mamimi : " I'm sorry, nao -san.."
she says as she bows to him apologetically.
Mamimi : "I was thinking about my work, and have to go."
She bows again and turns to leave,
running toward the gate on the right side of the backery.
Mamimi : "forgive me naota .."
she say's as she run's away,
all the while not noticing haruko and the stray playing in his room.

And leaves his sight..
Naota then blinks as she runs off, and shakes his head saying..
Naota " She's alwyes like that."
As he turns to go inside, he then scream's at haruko..
Naota : " Hey! where the hell did he, come from.?!"
haruko still shifting from left to right inside naota's room.
he simply sigh's and smiles quietly as he watches her play with the stray.. remembering, that she alwyes loved cats..

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( Above Earth : Mother ship S.S. stumi )

Meanwhile in space..
The s.s. stumaki..

Commander amarao still watches a large monitor,
as he sit's from his observation chair..
In the helm of the ships station deck.
He ponders as to machines next attack.
Amarao : " This is redicilous..
who ordered the fried soybean, and wild turkey rice.? "
He places the cup down on the table in front of him..
and calmly sit's back.
Lutennant kitsurabami stands next to him,
her hand places on the neckrest of his chair.
Kitsurubami : "Actually.. it was I who ordered it, sir.."
she says as she looks down at him,
placing a cup of tea infront of him.
then takes the cup of coffie away.

Kitsurubami : "I figured with all the exercise you've been doing,
you'd need some form of energy..
and soy's good for the heart, so.. eat up, sir.."
she looks at him and then salutes with her right arm, smiling..
then leaves the obsurvatory deck.
amarao continues to look at the screen as if she didn't matter.

Amarao : "hmm... and you think soy's gonna help me figure out,
when there gonna strike next ? ..guess it's why they call it,
health food.."
he then leans forward, not leaving his eyes off the screen..
and picks his food up from the table, once more.
he then starts to eat and watch, all the while the other personel..
monitor the quadrent.



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- FLCL 2nd comming. -
( Above Earth : Mother ship S.S. Stumi )
OST - The Pillows : Instant Music -

In the debths of space,
comming towords the small inhabited planet..
A flare colored light could be seen,
in the distiance of the ship's position..
it's glimmering light could plainly be seen..
as one of the ships personel turn's the com on,
to send and emergency brodcast throughout the entire ship..

alarm's begin to go off in all decks of the ship..


Ship Personell : "Attention.. Attention..
Object sighted...N.O. mass, Proportion,
bearing, mark : ' 1335.23 '
diamiter is 200 feet, by 300 feet.
Only recognizable color is a bright red,
But shape cannot be configured."

Comander amarao jumps out of his seat, and scream's.
at the personel speaking infront of him.

Amarao : "IT'S ATOMSK, HE CAME BACK..
HELMSMEN.. BRING THE OBJECT, ON SCREEN.! NOW !!!"
The order was recieved,
and the screen changed from naota and haruko..
To the position of the flared colored object..
heading back in the same direction, That it left..
exactly 10 years ago..

Amarao - Something is calling him to this planet,
..or he's comming, by his own free will. -

He looks in amazement as the winged creature,
soar's towords the planet..
from the depths of space, it calls back to the planet..
as it flies galliantly..
It's wing's giving off a fading flare colored sparkle,
as it flaps.. more sparkles fly off, giving it a fading stream of light.

Commander amarao continues to monitor the creatures position,
Now standing infront of the huge monitor..
he silently pauses in awe, as the creature comes closer into view..
the shining face gives off a powerfull aura,
as Atomsk comes into full view..
His presence, strikes the heart of the commander.
amarao now standing in front of the large screen,
and Atomsk now comes fully into view.
amarao simply says.. : " I'll never forget that day.."

now flashing back at that instant, to the day he was freed.
amarao starts to shake at the screen, like a humble servant..
looking onto a god.

- Atomsk, has returned.. -
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- FL CL 2nd comming.. -
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( Earth, Maybase : Tokyo )

Meanwhile, Back on earth..
Naota stands outside of his room, looking at the stars..
he spotting a small flare colored light,
comming closer to the planet..

Naota cannot help but to say it as he gazes upon the reddish star,
now growing a little brighter..
Naota : "He's comming..
..He's really.. comming, back.."
Naota begins to walk, he never takes his eyes off the reddish star.. glowing brighter now, in the nighttime sky..
Naota soon reaches the other edge of town,
looking onward as his pace quickens..
all the time, his eyes never leaving the star..
Naota : "..He's calling to me."
Naota continues to chant, repeating this to himself..
as he continues to walk.
The glowing light now the size of the brightly lit moon.
Hauko races on the yellow vespa screaches to a halt,
after riding just passed him..
and tryes to block his path.
She rases her goggles onto the top of her head,
and looks at naota..then back at the star.
Haruko : " ..He's calling to ya, huh kid ?"
..haruko look's as naota now hipnotized by the sight,
of the redish star.
Naota continues to walk silently almost in a trance, and says.
Naota : "The facility.. He wants me.. to wait at the top...."
She waves a hand infront of his face quickly,
looking back at the reddish star..
Haruko : "comeon takkun, this is no time to trance out on me..
..Naota !!.. "
- snap -
Naota : " sorry.. let's go then."
he climb's slowly onto the back of the bike,
once she feels his arm's wrapped around her weighst..
she speeds off in a blinding light, and races twords the facility..
haruko explain's to naota, even though he's still in a slight trance..
Haruko : "I did finally find him, naota -kun..
He remembered..
and said he was looking for you, After gaining his power back.
but couldn't find his way. heh, I had to show him the way.."

she begins to chuckle a bit,
then looks back toword naota, while driving..
Haruko : " Hell !, Even I had trouble finding this planet again.."
she then smiles and look's ahead,
driving even faster as the vespa gains speed..
she goes on to say..
Haruko : " but I'm glad, I did.."

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F L C L - 2nd comming.

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( Earth, Maybase : Tokyo )
OST - The Pillows : Sad, Sad Kiddie -

She then blasts off in a midsection, nearly advoiding the few cars..
that we're driving on both sides of the street.
they continue to fly, as they race toword the facility.
Now on the other side of town, It's huge structure cascades..
over the flourished city of maybase.
they race acrossed the long bridge,
into the center point, of the downtown area..
she then takes a sharp left,
to see if naota is aware of his surroundings..
He continues to hold tightly,
grabing her jacket as she rides down the next street..
continously trying to get to the giant iron.

Haruko : "you ok back there.?"
she looks back, trying to see if he's alright.
Naota : "i'm fine.. just get me to the top of that, Iron."
he says no longer looking at the light in the sky,
but looking forward as they race.
Haruko : - least he's sure, about his instincts. -
"ok naota, whatever you say.!"
She then revs up the vespa, it's front wheel leaping into the air..
then falling back down in a burst, Both now closer to the facility..
they continue Racing through the hillside..
while avoiding traffic through the midtown section,
she looks up for an instant,
her eyes shining at the flare colored light.
now growing bigger, and brighter,
the closer they get to the facilities huge structure.
haruko's eyes grow big as the light shines brighter, and thus..
she goes back to concentrating,
getting naota there as soon as possible.

She soon screaches to a hult at the factories front end..
and both jump off the bike.
rushing at full speed,
haruko quickly jump kicks the wall creating a door for themselves..
both continue to rush inside, not noticing they run right passed..
Commander amarao himself, sitting on his grey vespa..
and waiting for them to arrive.

Amarao : " so.. you two, finally.. huh.? "
He watches as the two get off the yellow vespa,
and head inside..
Amarao : - ..impacient.. as ever.. -
Then sigh's and kick's the stand.
whille calmly getting off his bike.
He then proceeds to persue the two hero's.

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F L C L - 2nd comming.

( Abandonded Iron : M. M. Facility, MAYBASE..)
OST - *Bleach : on the pricepiece, of defeat..

Climbing the stairway quickly, The two race as best they could,
to reach the roof of the huge complex..
There breath's run short, the closer they get.
Haruko : " We can't.. use our, power's here."
says haruko panting as they continue to race twords the top.

Haruko "Mr. dumbass following us,
planted a bomb in here with the trigger being any n.o. activity.."
she continues to race to the top
Haruko : "if we do, we might..."

Naota panting as they keep racing to the top says
Naota : "yes, i know.. for some reason.. I just, know it."
There movement's hasten as they keep pace, trying to take the steps.. as many as possible.
Commander amarao hollers from a few flights down,

Amarao : "hey you guys?! I told you to leave this to us..
the space police brotherhood, takes all matters to the republic..
and decides what to do with medicial mechanica."
He pants as he trys to keep up,
no longer the man he was 10 years ago..
it is hard for him to keep up no longer wearing the eyebrows,
he did so long ago.. now, his own hairy eyebrows have grown in..
lining not bushy, like the others..
looking at the two as they continue to race to the top.

Haruko looks back down while hilding on to her cap,
looking at amarao.

Haruko : " You'd better keep up if you wanna seen him again.."
And continues to race, naota to the top.
The commander quickly grunts in frustration,
then realizes the scencerity of her voice..
and follows in quick persuit..

As they reach the top, naota starts to wince in pain from his head..
and haruko notices it right off..
she then quickly jumps over him, landing behind him..
and catches him as he falls.

Naota faint's from the pain, and she then carries him..
as amarao finally catching up,
follows her to the roof...

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( Atop the facility : Maybase Tokyo ) - figures. - >.>
OST - Hellsing : bodhisttava cathedral. - Atomsk's Last Gift. -

Through the door they find an older man, with a blue and white tattered jacket. His face was slim, with a squared jaw and a gotee.
His slender body made him tall, but sleak.
Haruko: " -GASP -"
they lock eyes, for only a moment..
Haruko : " ..ATOMSK!!!"
Haruko cried dropping the fainted naota,
onto the ground by the front door.
And quickly ran tword him..
His face was of extreme humbleness,
Atomsk : " Haruko.."
he said just as she came up to him.
She hugs him holding him tightly, crying while doing so.
tears stream down her face as she talks to him,
her voice sounding ever so softly..
She was crying, amarao could tell as he stares in awe..
over atomsk's, human form..
she continues to cry while speaking to him
Haruko : "For so long..so very, very long..
I have been waiting for you to come back..
will you tell me now? ..where, have you been ?"
She cries while punching his chest..
Haruko : "YOU LEFT ME WITH,....THOSE BASTARDS!!!"
She grabs him tightly again,for a moment.
clenching his jacket, gripping it in her hands..
Then she finally faintsas atomsk places a hand on her shoulder..

His gaze now turn's twords the commander..
atomsk then says to him..
Atomsk : " There are far more important tasks,
you need be attending to.."
And inturn, compells the commander to faint..
He falls on the roof,face first sleeping..
Snoring while doing so..
he then look's onto the fainted naota,
liying on the ground..
he calmly walks toward him,
pacing his feet slowly the taps of his shoes could loudly be herd..
like it was the only thing to be herd..
Atomsk :-he can do, what i've tried to acheive for eons..
this boy,
has the potential to destroy medical mechanica.. for good.. -
Atomsk : "they will come looking for you, in an endless assault.. "

He then takes slow steps tword naota,
all the while holding out his hand upward..

he then opens a portal within his palm,
the vortex swimming slowly.. rotating, in his hand..
now the size of meal plate,
The redish glow forming a light in his hand..
he then struggles to pull out another guitar..
the red glow, now getting brighter as he pulls it out more.
he grunts to himself from the extreeme pressure building.

It finnaly frees it's self of the vortex..
atomsk now hold's it for a moment, in his hand.
letting the red glow stop, and fade into the origional color..
of the guitar..
he then places it on the ground,
as it sparkles green and neon red ..glistening in the moonlight..
kneeling down infront of it, he then says
Atomsk : "this..is the way, it must be then.."
And proceeds to waves his hands over it,
Suddely, bursting out come forth two streams of light.

his left hand.. a flare colored red..
his right.. a flare colored green..
the two intwine within themselves, into the heart of the guitar..
It pulses and resonates while doing so..
and thus.. slowly making it glow, and pulse with power.

Atomsk : "I will give you my power to help,
It is your choice wether or not, you use it."
His complection fades as he transfers his power's..
into the now green and red guitar..
he then looks back twords amarao,
telepathically implanting instructions into his mind..
all the while, atomsk Still transfer's his power into the new guitar.
Atomsk : " I'll spend the next eternity in purgatory, I don't care..
..so long as haruhara, is safe.. "
After this.. he then turns to haruko, smiling with such sorrow..
Atomsk : "We shared so much, douring our travels..
yet.. we learned from our mistakes.
..Is it to late?
to tell you, I loved you..
and.. I alwyes have...

..Good-bye, My sweet.."
Atomsk complection finally fades into the darkness,
the redish and greenish glow fade as well..
Atomsk : " Haruhara......"

When saying this,a spark of his last remaining energies fade.
The entity then hover's over hauko and speaks.
Atomsk : "With my last breath, remember.. who you are."
And it nova's, the light..
the sparks, fade in the night..

All three lay there each in turn passed out,
from atomsk's spell..
compelling them, the moon shedding it's light..
off the new found, guitar..
- The solarcaster -

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- FL CL 2nd comming.. -
OST - The pillows : Last Dinosaur -
(HARUKO)
In the next act..
naota is blessed with atomsk's power's, Once more..
but naota has problems when handed the new Solarcaster..

But to a much more suprising twist..
Commander amarao joins the team,
as his supirrior's decide to decomission him from his duties..
leaving him with the one mothership, and us to deal with..

To tell the truth, I'm not sure how this will play out..
but keep reading...
you never know..
something good may come out of this, after all.

on the next, fooly cooly - 2nd comming !
Session : A - ACT 9.. - Revenge of a friend. -
(NAOTA):" Who cares if it's fooly or cooly, ..anyways.." - roll's eyes. -

(HARUKO):" We've been through this Already.!!!" *>.<*


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[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

Been trying to post these,
least two times a week. douring the weeknds.
So keep watching the threads.
and have fun.
- saturdays and wensdays for now. -
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FOOLY COOLY - 2ND COMMING -
- I've revised this.. for you're reading pleasure.. enjoy the ost..

*** Made in tribute, to the original creator.. : kazuya tusurumaki ***

*** Story by : Jason davis ***

- a fan fic basied on the original, f L c L series. -
( Opening Theme - Raion : by jinn. )
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FL CL - 2nd comming
Saga # 2 : The Mechanical Menace.
Session : A
ACT : 9
- Revenge, of a freind. -
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( Earth,Maybase : Tokyo. / Nanbada's bakery. )
OST - *Bleach - Torn apart..

Naota awakens to find himself once again in his room,
he looks around at his surroundings, unaware of recient events.
His head, still pounding from the pain givin from Atomsk.
His eyes still burn from the sensation of the mind shock and n.o. melding, while being around him...
He tries to regain vision, by climbing out of his bed..
and streaching out..
but to no avail.. naota can barly move..
using the wall, to guide him to the bathroom.
his blood-shot eye's could barly see the floor, as he avoid's the sun like the pleague.
All the while, making his way feeling along the wall..

As he slowly makes his way there.
He stumbles on some objects on the floor,
not being able to see what it is and almost falls..
but.. haruko catches him.
she struggling to hold his shoulders, and picking him back up.
She uses his arm, and grabs his side holding him upright..
looking at him, steading him twords the bathroom.
naota looks down, eye's still bloodshot..
he then says to her..
Naota : "..Thank you.. haruko -san."
haruko's eyes now showing a caring look, about her..
she then says to him.
Haruko : "Your still in pain from atomsk's N.o. , converging with your own unawakened power's..
And your eye's havn't gained there sight back."
She say's still hoilding an arm,
his eyes turn sad and he looks out in search for somthing to see.
she jently slides her arm around the backside of his waist, again..
she continues to speak as they walk.
Haruko : " Here, let me help you.. it's the least i can do for you, now."
Naota blinks, while she then helps him to the bathroom,
where she moves him onto the toilet seat, kicking the top the lid upward helping his hand onto the top of the tank.
he asked,
Naota : "what do you mean, by that..?"
While holding onto the seat and trying to sit down to use it.
she then turn's around, and says..
Haruko :"never mind, let me know when you're done."
and she walks out of the bathroom..

about 5 minutes pass and naota finnaly calls to her.
Naota : "i'm done.."
calmly and almost quietly, knowing she was on the otherside of the door..
he could hear her crying, almost sobbing..
She then rubs her eyes sniffling, while doing so..
and walks in and stedies him upright, he looks back to her..
eyes still swollin from the shock,
and says very quietly..
Naota : "thank you..for everything.."
She then start's to help him back into his room, and into bed.
when he finally layes back down, she covers him up to his chest..
then proceeds to lay there, next to him..
laying her head on his chest...
caringly brushing her hand acrossed his face.

naota soon falls back to sleep..
silently, finally between r.e.m. and awake..
haruko turns her head away, and looks out of the large window..
she gazes out as her thoughts trail..
Haruko : "I knew it was all you...all along.. you're, the only one..
..Atomsk.."
She look's back at naota, smiling while starring at him as he rests.
when naota restles back to slumber, he then speaks her name softly.
Naota : " Haruko.."
she then smiles back caringly, watching him sleep for a bit..
then.. finnaly restles to sleep herself..
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- F L C L 2nd comming.. -
( Earth, Maybase Tokyo : Nanbada's Bakery. )
OST - Hellsing Ultimate : Shell Guitar - Avalisk's theme. -

Two days later..
we find canti the robot outside sweeping the stairway,
leading to the side of the backery..
his slow stroke's sweep alot of the dirt, from yesterday's wind's blowing sand and dirt, all over the place..
Canti watches as a bird passes by, and gazes as it flies by the house.
Then slowly proceeds to sweep the stairs, once more.
when done, we find he goes back into the house..

Naota, feeling a little better.. is treated to breakfast in bed, haruko dressed up in a french maid outfit..
walks in and begins to serve breakfast to him in bed..
she set's the trey up on his lap and begins to speak..
Haruko : "how you feelin, champ.?"
placing the bed table infront of him.
naota rubbing his eyes then open's them,
no longer bloodshot from the few previous days.
Naota : "I'm.. not sure, how i feel..."
he yawn's while rubbing one, of his still sore eyes..
Naota : "It's too early, and I'm not aware yet.."

Haruko then look's back, and says..
Haruko : "yup.. still the same old, tak -kun. ..grumpy, and bitter.!"

she then bow's and says.
Haruko : "I am really pleased, your feeling better..
enjoy your meal, Tak -kun..
I'll be back in a few, To check up on ya."
She then skips out of the room, humming a tune while doing so..
the strey cat, following her the entire time.
Naota blinks 2 or 3 times, to get his eyes used to being open..
as haruo and the cat both skip out of the room..
then he slowly trun's back to his meal...
naota sighs, closing his eyes while doing so..
showing a grumpish look if dire times ahead,
Then.. takes a bite of the pancakes..
it's soft tase is pleasing to his mouth..
and he then, takes the small cup of surup and begins to devour his meal.
he then start's to think about haruko's behavior, and her comment in the hallway the few previous days, before..
He begins to wonder, what it all means..

Was she really pleased to see, he was ok.?
..Or did haruko know somthing, he had yet to learn..?
Naota is done a few moments after,
and lays back into his bed once again..
sighing from satisfaction from his meal.
he gazes up at the celing of his room,
and continues to ponder on the comment..
naota : "it's the least I can do, for you.."
with his arm's behind his head,
haruko's face slowly comes into view of his eyes..
still wearing her outfit.
Haruko : " Naota..?" -grins -
as she asks, showing only half of her face..
her eye, piercing into his soul..
the expresson is of part lustfull thinking, but also part concern. naota blinks, and looks back.
Naota : "yea..?"
He ask's back, almost seeming..
like shes trying to take advantage, of his situation..
The breakfast table now sit on the floor, sitting upright..
She then layes her head on his chest again,
cuddling close to him as she speaks..
Haruko : " Why do you think, he picked you..?"
she then turn's.. her face to his, her lips almost touching his own..
naota look's back to haruko, eyes never leaving her's..
he then say's..
Naota : " ..basied on the outcome, of things.. I think, I came ahead.."
naota then, closing his eyes.. show's a half grin.
She blink's back, looking at him.. thinking of atomsk,
saying the same thing..
then watches him rest..
once more falling asleep, atop of his chest..
they both now lay there blistfully, sleeping.
haruko's leg twitches a bit from naota rubbing aginst it..
naota sighs and wraps his arm around her ..for once..

- think this.. will last.? -
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- FL CL 2nd comming.. -
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OST - Raven wings : world without logo's
That evening..

We find naota sitting at the kitchen table,
while haruko forages in the fridge..
she digging for something to drink..
she looks back at him, for just a moment.
watching him stare depressingly at the clear glass of water,
that he cupped in his hand.
his expression is deep as he gazes into the water..
thinking of the events that took place just a few days ago..
Naota : "Do you, love me..?"
He asked her as she continues to forage through the fridge.
she then finds a soda and pop's the top,
then slowly gizzles it down..
then looking back at naota she speaks..
Haruko : "why do you ask that, naota.. ? of course i do..
that should of been obvious to you, earlier.."
she then closes the door to the fridge, and walks back to the kitchen table. then sit's down next to him holding his hand, while drinking her soda a bit.. she then sets the can next to his glass...
Haruko : " Besides..- sigh -
you needed to know right..?
wether it was you, or him I loved..?"
Naota then blinks back at haruko, the shock just now setting into his thoughts..
like a ton of bricks.
Haruko : " Our destiny.. is now in your hands..
your planet, and the fate of so many other's are at stake.
..I'm not sure, why. but, he choose you..
mabe it's just a fluke, or mistake..
but all I know, is he choose you..
to leads us into battle, and rid the universe of mother.."

She looks back at him, holding her hand to his cheek.. saying.
Haruko : "i'll stick by you, through thick and thin.. I promise."
She then looks at there hands touching..
Haruko : " even if we're not together, tak -kun..
I'll still stick by you're side.."

Naota then set's the glass of water back down,
before looking back ato haruko..
she then places a hand infront of his face and says.
Haruko : "I don't wanna hear it.." - tears -

She then lowers her hand and continues to talk to him,saying..
Haruko : "He passed on his powers, to save this universe..
to, deniy this.. is to deniy the universe, it's self.." -sniff, sniff..-

Naota then continues to look through his glass,
all the while watching haruko..
She now sits at the table crying into his arm's talking again while naota listens.she grips his weighst tightly, squezing it..
she cries to him.

Haruko : " He Left me.. again, because of you..
To save what he could, from being destroyed..!! "
- gasp's and scream's - " ..ATOMSK !! " - whine's and morn's -

She continues to cry her heart..
Naota could only hold her, and sit there.
as she continues her morning..
..of the late, pirate king..
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- FL CL 2nd comming.. -
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2ND COMMING OST - D.N.Angel : Rakuen fanatic ( Krad ) -

{ TIME TRAVELER TRAVIS }
Travis : " Born on a small planet, called Sinas 4..
Located far off the outskirts, of the sinactian galaxy..
Is the homeworld of haruhara, reharu...
you may know her as haruhara,haruko.
she lived a semi normal life..
she went to school, had lots of friends..
had loving parents, and a carasmatic posture..
to her, which she carried around on her shoulder..
making her a very populer person.

Her father..
was the late general of the sinactian army..
There race.. Was known throughout the universe,
as a galactic power..
ruled by a kind and true bloodline,
noble and generous to it's people..
till one day, the machines started to attack...
They came by the thousands, flying in on balls of flame..
..and snow...
Mother's facilities, are all over planets waiting to be activated.
Mothers mainframe.. the main c.p.u. ,
chooses to carry out these orders...
which planets remain in incubation,
while which planet's get smoothed and reaped.
The terminial core, is what keeps track of everything medical mechainca does..
believed to be destroyed, while on earth..
it continously clones it's self,
creating new machines acrossed a three planet scale..
Atomsk, the only name givin to our great leader..
was dubbed the pirate king, for defeating jaiden..
the knight of terra..
This signa, The second incarnation of the main cpu.
before the corruption, of the medicial transport vessal..
the s.s. tokal. "
Travis : " It's only basic purpose,
was to transport medical devices and supplies to other planets..
using intersteller vortexes, or wormholes.
to make transportation alot more quicker and safer..
it would respond to our planet.. making a report immediatly..
To our planet's station.
notifiying it of oncomming, comet's or solar system's..

within the A.I.'s capacity..
they would calculate from there, what the vessal passes through.
..after crashing into the planet, darvis 12..
which is on the outside of the gamma quadrent.
the biotoxin's that it were mesteriously transpored,
we're exopsed to the radiation, of gases within an anomoly..
the ship crashed shortly after and collided with an asteroid..
the metallic haul melded with the radiated biotoxins,
and mixed with the liquids of the a.i.
..spawning with the matrix, of the ship.

In time, the main cup was absorbed..
and givin a conscience.
It soon began to spawn it's own versions of it's self..
giving each a name..
there are 14.. in all...

Travis : " The space police brotherhood, is a race of beings..
who are our version of hybreds, the reason is..
the soldiers if the fleet, protect the weaker planets..
So that we, may live.. the project was called the genesis project..
and a treaty was signed by the federation of galaxies..
Atomsk being one of the user's of n.o. properties..
Was one of the front linemen, in the main attack..
aginst the first wave the of metallic horde.
This war was known as, the sucession wars..

Inturn atomsk pushed the armies of m.m. back to it's homeworld.. tambion 12..
where mother plan's her next Invasion..
On any unsuspecting planet, of her own desire.
atomsk turned rogue by choice,
when investigating the murder of a good friend.
jiraya jacobi..
the second lead guitarist, in the band -7..
ally to atomsk douring the conflict.
between the 12 colonies, and medicial mechanica..

when it astablished it's own independiance...
Emotional thought, and artificial intelligence..
it reveled it it's own glory as a force in the universe..
mother's will..?

Total.. complete.. and, absolute anailation..
of all thought, throughout the universe..

making mother's own logic..
pefect and complete, absolution.

There.. in the brotherhoods galaxy, a treaty was asstablished..
that no metallic forces, can grow stronger then 20,000..
for if they do, it will be an automatic act of war.
upon the galaxies..
and in doing so, would cast them into the point of extinction..
the machine agreed.. and made it's efforts secretly,
liying in disguise.. forming an unknown force, of beings..
underground of the planets surface..
like a colony of ants, it's armies continue to grow..
making it's plot aginst the universe..
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OST - The Pillows : Last Dinosaur -
(HaRuKo)
Next act : In this act, no matter who it is..
it's alwyes leading to a new plot...
canti deal's with life, the way it is.
and we begin to meet a new side of mamimi..
but, who's to say anything is.. impossible..?

on the next, fooly cooly 2nd comming...

Episode 10 revised : - Naota's choice -

Haruko : " So Kid? ..Where do we go, from here.? "
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[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

Well another week has flew by, quickly I might add.

this weeks act is entitled : Naota's choice.
Have fun, and see you next week.
FL CL - 2ND COMMING -

- I've revised this, for you're reading pleasure.. enjoy the ost.. -

*** Made in tribute, to the original creator.. : yazuka tusurumaki ***

*** Story by : Jason davis ***

- a fan fic basied on the original, f L c L series. -
( Opening Theme - Raion : by jinn. )
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- FL CL - 2nd comming..
Saga #2 : The Mechanical Menace.
Session : A
Act : 10
- Naota's choice. -
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OST - D.N.Angel Driver's High -

Douring the next few weeks, Haruko trained naota in her special arts.

The proper handle, and care of the rickenbacker..
Haruko " i need to be Strict..
training you to care and tune it, each string hold's enormous power."
She said to him while teaching him everything she knew,
about the guitars..

Then taught him each string's secret and why they are special.
Haruko : "The six strings equal..
each of the six elements,
needed to create and destroy entire star system.

One I know of, is the magnetic force within each planet..
triggering it's destructive force, is equaly great.
that's why there are seven..and not six.."

Naota then looks back at her and say's..

Naota : "wouldn't that destroy me, as well.?"
she then kicks back on her tanning recliner,
in her 2 piece bikini suit. and speaks..
Haruko :" Relax the only thing that'll happon is,
you'll be blown away by the pressure caused by the explosion...
it happons to me all the time.. it's the trainning that matters.."

Haruko then say's it.. reminding him to think, before he act's.
Haruko : "It's necessary for you to train, like this..
you have a hidden talent, and it shouldn't be wasted..
Especially on this mudball, of a planet.."
she then sneer's and says..
Haruko :"unless you want me to go back to, ..striking you..?"

And goes back to tanning, naota then looks down and says.
Naota : "you know, I'd just like to see you feel..
feel how it is to be mocked..for once.. !"

she then gets up and says..
Haruko : " The only reason why your still alive, is because of him.!"
Naota then glares back at her, and says.
Naota : "stop saying that !
- SNAP -
..can't you see he's gone.?
- SNAP ! -
you never found him.!
- SNAP !! -
he was.. a dream.. unnghh.."

He then starts to have flashbacks,
of when they were climbing the stairway..
and regains his memory to the preasent...
Atomsk..the guitar, and his last words..
naota hold's his head from the pain, of repressed memories..
comming back, rushing into his mind once more..
the last of atomsk's spell, had finally lifted from naota's mind..
Naota : " He said for, you.. to remember, with his last wish..
that is all...he wanted..."
Naota then looks down, and drop's his guitar..
the force of it hitting, made a twangg sound..
not loud, but solid.

haruko gets up and rushes to his aid,
now in the back yard to the house..

she towers over him struggling to pick him up,

naota then lean's up to hug her, as he gets off the ground.
for that one brief moment..
naota was worried.
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- FL CL 2nd comming.. -
( Earth,Maybase : Tokyo )
OST -The Pillows : - Happy Bivouac. -

The next few days have been better, for the both of them..
as haruko continues with naota's training..
the rickenbacker, is held tightly by his grip..
as haruko calmly watches naota swing...

Naota gain's new found strength to hold it again.
Like he never held it in his hand's before.
It's now sleak grip, is easier to swing and hold..
as he then bat's off rock's at blinding speeds from haruko..
she throwing them at him..
he deflect's a few back to her with ease..
she then catches them, and throw's them back..
at the same speed's and smiles while they practice.
Haruko : "good."
she says taking a small breather.

Haruko : "very good.. your getting the hang of it, now."
She say's again wiping the sweat off her brow,
her hair now spiky and shorter then the previous week,
but still.. the same pale white complection,
as if nothing had ever changed.
she now wear's a baseball uniform, a glove in her right hand..
using it for catching the stone's,
naota was hitting back to her.

Naota : "I think i'm getting what you're saying,
about the deflection base of the rickenbacker..
but, what about the neck end..
does that produce any type of power..?
I mean, when you play.. it.?"
He then say's looking at her holding it down,
as to swing like a bat..
his posture the same as his brother's before him..
hitting a ball in the park.
she tosses the rock into the air,
and catching it behind her back and looking at him ready to throw.

Haruko :"are you ready? ..here it comes.."
she says smiling in his direction..
he then look's dead at the rock never taking his eyes off it..
watching the direction of it as it leaves her hand.
she then threw it at him..
to us seemed like and instant, but no naota..
that moment, was like an eternity.
he watched as the ball turned slowly in the air.
it's small shape and spiraling action, made it seem like it was nothing.

Naota then swing's at it, taking the head off the top of it..
and smacking the other end, into space.
the other end taking half the fence with it.
the winds blow rapidly, as the force is now felt by the earth..
just slightly.
Haruko : " wow..! what a swing..!"

she says then covering part of her face, when he swung.
taking the cap right off her as she looked on.
She then realized that he was ready to grasp his new guitar.
looking onto him she then says..
haruko : "I think your ready..here, come with me.."
she grabs the rickenback from his hands and walks with him into the house.

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( Nanbada's Bakery : Maybase Tokyo )
OST - Yoko kanno : Open Your Eyes -

Leading him by the hand..
Haruko walk's with naota back into his room..
haruko grip's naota's hand, and lead's him down the narrow hallway.

he then says to her..
Naota : "I don't see the big idea.
It's not like I did anything. ..really."
he continues being lead down the hallway by haruko,
pacing in time with her..
Haruko : "No..I know your ready,for this one.."
They then turn into his room, where the guitar sat in the corner..
naota was suprised at this, and looked unto this precious thing..
like a new baby being born into the world,
It's sleak style made it look easy to hold..
and the strings were of solid gold.
the shape of it, was onorail.. with the oldish style.
of the warhammer..
Naota : "this.. what he left me.?"
He looks unto it staring in awe, as it shines off the sunlight..
Naota : " this.. is awsome.."
haruko then turn's, back tword him..
pressing a hand jently on his chest,looking down she then says..

Haruko : "it was his last gift to you, before passing on.
I think he'd want you to free the universe takkun.."
She then turns back looking at it, silently..
pausing to gaze on it's beauty..
she then continues to say..
Haruko : "he wanted nothing, but peace...
and he died, trying to keep that promise..
I don't want to see That throw'n away,
I just couldn't forgive my self for it...
I lusted for his power, and found out what obtaining it would do..
so I tested myself again, looking for him once more..
Finding the space to fill my heart, But.."
she continues to say..

Haruko : "when I found him, he had changed..
he nolonger looked like the same person, I last saw..
falling into the void, So many years ago."
she looks toword's naota's eyes,
not letting them out of her sight..
Haruko : " He changed...
His body, apperence... Everything..
and when I saw him, this last time..
It was as if, nothing changed..
ever...
Atomsk still looked like the same person, outside..
the same person i traveled with.. so long ago.. "

Haruko then looks away a bit,
naota holding her close the whole time..
looking onto her as she spoke.
Haruko : " The vespa.. is the only thing, I have left.
And I wouldn't give that up for my life."
She then start's to look back, as his expression changed..
from a suprised mood, to a more solom one..
Looking at her with admiration, and speaking softly to her..

Naota : "You have givin me so much, and I still know so little.."
He then sit's down on his bed looking onto the new guitar,
the glowing neon lighting from the guitar sparkled in the sun..
there haruko leaves naota for a while,
starring downward at his destiny...
Naota - the guitar.. it's singing.. to me..
if you can hear me still.. what am i supposed to do.? -
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- FL CL - 2ND COMMING..
OST - The Pillows : Our Love And Peace -

Location. ( Earth : Maybase, Tokyo. )

The small city of maybase tokyo,
was unusually quiet that night down by the docks..
Haruko patiently await's the next attack, from medicial mechanica..
Commander amarao, notified both naota and haruko..
the few previous hours, before her stakeout...
She waits looking into the skies, waiting for some sign..
that it.. was on it's way..
Haruko : "chew"
as she bites into a burger she purchsed,
from a fast food resturant earlier before.
off in the distiance, she see's naota as he walk's up..
He holding the new case she furnished, for the guitar atomsk left him.
Haruko : "hey ! what took ya, hmm tak -kun.?"
She waved to him as she watches him, walking up to her.
Looking down and not trying to be noticed,
He then start's to walk right by her, and down to his usual spot..
but stop's and turn's to her smiling,
his spiky bang covering part of an eye.

Naota : "you commin?, or what.?"
she smiles with relief and gets off her bike..
Haruko :"yeah i'll join you tak -kun..
just keep an eye out for anything suspicous."
He then turn's back and begins walking again.
speaking to her as he wonders off.
Naota :"there's only one way there traveling,
I think we can spot'em from where were going"

She then walks beside him for a short while holding hands,
both holding the straps to there guitars as they walk.
untill they get to the first spot where they first met,
The crystal clear waters of the habor,
made it seem like there were stars trapped inside the waters..
it's motion reflected it clearly and showen every pattern,
to it's shores..

As they walked the bridge..
haruko recognises it's the very same spot,
where canti first came out of naota's head..
not only that, this is where they first met..
Haruko : "this.."
she stops abruptly not trying got get his attention,
he turns to her and says..
Naota : "It's ok I know.. let's keep, going.."
She then stop's walking, releasing his hand..
as naota turns to look , haruko speaks.. and says to him..
Haruko : "Why.?"
they now stand there looking at eachother,
haruko then says to him, holding her strap with both hands..

Haruko : "We could, just run. we could,
go somewhere where they can't find us.
we'd never have to worry, you know.?"
his posture is slump as he continues to walk,
not noticing what she had said..
Naota : "We'd better get going.."
He say's as they continue off the bridge.

They continue to the old train tracks, and stop..
as the nightly train, passes through the intersection..
She looks at him as he looks down,
thinking of his first moves and noticing her actions.
as the train moves at a steady pace,
there eyes lock for a moment..

Naota's posture and expressions do not change..
His eyes sparkle as he gazes onto her, looking the same as alwyes..
she blinks back at him, wondering what he is thinking about..
naota look's back once more, wondering what her thoughts are about..

and also wondering, if she's planning on backstabbing him again.. haruko now cautiously following, not saying a word to him..
They come to where he and mamimi hung out,
the small baseball feild behind them..
and the river bank infront of them..
the resturant where the old school sit in the north..
He now sit's down on the grass setting his case beside him,
and unlocking the clips to it..

He then pull's out the guitar, and slowly starts to play..
his movments much diffrent then the past few days..
She notices it right off..
and realizes who's tune it actually was..Atomsk's song..
Haruko : "The recrium.."

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FL CL - 2ND COMMING..
OST -The Pillows : Bran-new love song (Atomsk's Recreium)

The song she only herd once before.
that melody atomsk played before,
his first battle with the great machines.

She sat down as he played, never talking her eyes off him..
his eyes closed as to concentrate.
playing the song as it was just born out of his head.
the music seemed to slow time it's self for just a moment,
and haruko knew she felt this before..
she looked onto him like it was her first time..
his posture and style looked exatly like atomsk's.
She knew it was him playing that tune..
Haruko : "one last time before the,big event..huh boss..?"

She thought as he played the rest of it, not skipping a beat..
nor ever stopping to start again.

He sighed to relieve some of the pressure from playing,
something just popping into his head like that..
she was enthrawled by his playing, he had masterd the new guitar..
and didn't even know a name for it.
He think's for a moment, and ask's haruko the name it was givin..
she then turn's to him and speaks.
Haruko : " atomsk.. never gave it, a name.. so i guess,
that's you're job.. now tak -kun.. "

she then gazed up into the sky, waiting for the sign..
that medicial mechanica's new threat.. would arrive..

he then looks upon it and says..
Naota : "I shall name it...The Solarcaster."

she smiles and says..
Haruko : "He would of wanted it, this way..
it is your solarcaster then, use it well."

she wraps her arm's then her legs around the backside,
of naota's body..
holding him tightly she continues her conversation..
Haruko : "it's just you and me now, naota kun..
there is no more running for me..
I'm not going, anywhere.."

naota simply places a hand onto one of her's..
holding her there for a moment..
she now wrapped behind him, hugging him tightly..
they both close there eyes, for just that one moment..
the star's sparkle in the nighttime sky..
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- FL CL- 2nd comming

( Earth,Maybase : Tokyo )
OST - The Pillows : Carnival -


Once again we find canti sweeping outside of the shop,
very late in the evening this time around..
canti's screen face shines where it sweeps,
mamimi then looks at the robotic being and says..
Mamimi : "...Canti, where are naota -san and haruko -san.?"
she then bows to it, and look's around the place...
They are sadly nowhere to be found.
She then sighs as she starts to walk down the drive,
leading to the back to the backery..
wondering where the two have gone to...

she then think's about the spot, where they first started to hang out..
and she dashes off, in a rush..
canti, waves to her, as she leaves, then goes back to sweeping..
thinking of more improtant things around the house to do..

Mamimi run's, not knowing why or how.. but she knew...
That if he was there, haruko as well.. wasn't far behind.
She crosses the tracks on the other side of the city,
just hoping she would find them walking somewhere.
she pant's and gasps as she runs,tword there old hangout.
her sweating from all the running has run all over her clothes,
as she continues, not caring that she is soaked.
but, just wanting to know if he was alright...

Mamimi see's the yellow vespa, and knows right off the bat.
it was haruko's..
she suddenly stops to pant, and notices the rickenbacker on her bike. The guitar neatly tucked under both the gibson ebo,
and the flying v..
two more bags fastened onto it as well...

Mamimi gives a look of shock.. she realizing what was going on.

Naota had made his choice, and was leaving earth..
for regions, unknown..

Mamimi begins to cry at the sight..
the discovery frightens her..
she begins to run to the old play feild..

there she notices haruko and naota embraced in flcl..
Mamimi - i knew it.. it was her, all along.. -
she watches as haruko lay on top of naota,
making love to him in the night..
Mamimi : I simply.. wasn't there for him, enough.. -
haruko's head flies back and waves in extascy, as she rides naota..

she watches as they do so..
tears now streaming down her face..
and start's to fall down crying while on her knees.
mamimi - my heart.. -
her emotions overflow, and then she fall's to the ground..
grabing her stomach in pain..
she then cries..
mamim - HELP ME !! -
Mamimi : "oh..naota.. I.. I, am so sorry.."
she then look's up into the sky where she sees a faint white light,
comming tword's earth..
Starring at it.. she finnaly realises that, it's not what he want's.. but, it's what he has to do.
kneeling, by the yellow vespa..
Mamimi - maybe.. it is for the best.. -
Mamimi's eyes start to dry, as she nolonger see's the blinding pain..
Mamimi -maybe i should leave them, alone.. -

she simply begins to walk away, lighting a cigarette while she walks..
the only light.. above the vespa, standing along the lit sidewalk..
Mamimi - I.. I'm not ment, for him. -
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-FL CL- 2nd comming
(Earth, Maybase : Tokyo )
OST- Yoko Kanno : 7 Minutes - Fasten seatbelts.

After naota stopped haruko by gripping her wrist,
naota gazes into the sky..
he notices the white light, comming for earth..
and continues starring at it..
it is medicial mechanica, on there way..
and this is where he now makes his stand.
Haruko his back to him from behind her,
she looking at the same white light in the sky..
she then says..

Haruko : " well..? ,here they come.. are you sure your ready.?"
a troubled look comes onto her face,
Naota look's back to her..
as his gaze set off from the light in the sky, to her face..
she show's only half to him, the half he see's is still white as snow..

Haruko's hair.. now stylish punky and retro pink,
get's up clothes somwhat undone..
she pulls her pants up, and zip's the zipper..
then begins to button her shirt back up..

standing there looking our hero in the face..

Haruko : " you know, I have your back...
and this time.. I won't run away, naota."
after buttoning her shirt, she holds a fist upward toword her heart..
she continues to speak while looking downward,
the light of the beam shining down upon her..
darkness surrounding her, except for the light shining off her..

Haruko : "I want these bastard's to pay for what they've done..
just as much as you, but.. I have to admit..
your more powerful then even I, could ever imagine."
Naota looking back into the sky says.

Naota : "i'm not sure, but for some reason..
he wants you to know..you're ok..
so you don't have to worry about me..
let me worry about you,for once."

Naota places his pant's back on, and without a shirt..
He then start's to flare up, and begins to fly..
toword's the white light, in the now lit sky..

It races tword's the planet's surface..
It's bright color now lighting up the night's sky..

Almost making everything visible to everyone..
people started to emerge from there home's to see the light,
wondering what it is..
medicial mechanica, had made it's self known to the world..
as our hero races on, to the point of impact...
his expression, of fear...
but courage, tame's his fearing heart...
If he makes his stand now..
medicial mechanica will know, A new threat has emmerged...
as the ball of light speed's, toword's the planet...
It suddenly breaks off, and a much smaller version..
begins speeding forth, into the atmosphere..

Haruko : "Naota!"
she scream's, not knowing if she's to far away..
for him to hear her.
she uses her hands,to echo her voice to him..
Haruko : "It's another pitcher !! ..you know what to do.!!!"

Naota then realizes that they we're testing him once more..
and he then stops in mid flight.
three pod's emerge from the rest of the wreakage,
and fall silently to the earth...
while the much larger one, hurdles it's self towords naota...
haruko watches, as each one fall's to the surface, simoltainiously..

Haruko then realizes, that naota needed to be where she was..
and she races twords him.
Naota the watches as the target reaches closer, to his position..
and his posture changes to that of his swinging stants...

He keep's his eye's on the target, and gently swings at it..
not forcingly trying to push, like he did the first time..
and it easly moves for him, he then pushes it back with little struggle.. The guitar, doing all the work for him..
this time.. the light fade's and blast's off, back into space.
the force of the shock pushes the clouds away, from around him..
haruko races, flying up to him..
she stop's right next to him, and speaks..
Haruko : " There's three more.. we gotta get'em now,
before It's too late.!"
Naota still looking up into the night's sky,
pauses as he is suprised to the fact..
that the gigantic ball, was easy to move..

Naota : "It was a decoy..wasn't it?"
He then looks back to the ground,
where he finds the signatures of three more machines..
he hold's the guitar in his hands, he seeing the resinance..
from the machine's metallic surface..

he then grunt's, as one is almost upon the facility..
and begins racing to meet with it..
haruko blink's a few times.. then shrug's, in his wake..
Haruko : " where the hell is he going, all the sudden.? "
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-FL CL- 2nd comming..
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Canti finds him self..
face to face, with a more blackish metallic clone..
and start's to struggle with it..
there hands clasping one another, as they fight..
pushing each other back.
canti then charges in..
he advances the evil version of himself,
releasing one hand and then pummeling a fist..
into the other version of himself..
It flies back into a tree..
The top half falling to the ground,
he rushes it with blinding speeds..
and jumps into the air,
attempting to crush the black version, but to canti's suprise...
he shine's his tv head screen, to see..
it is nowhere to be found.
He scratches his head, and continues to search around..
not noticing, it is behind him..
he is suprised to feel it's presence right behind him,
and slowly start's to turn back..
when the black version attacks,
it smashes him into the ground with a huge force..
smashing the ground around him..

Canti can barly move, as the battle becomes more vicious..
the black clone tower's over canti..
as canti struggles to regain himself..
the black clone get's ready to strike..
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( HaRuko )
Next episode : "Canti finds himself in trouble,
when three shadow version's of himself attack..
and naota and I race for time when the other two signatures,
are just outside of the old facility....

will we get there in time..

or will the planet, be smoothed over..?

find out..
on the next, fooly cooly.. 2nd comming
Session : A
ACT : 11
- When darkness cometh. -

( HaRuKo ) : " I just hope we can stop'em, in time.!"

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[Maskan]

moar please

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

Well gang its saturday so hope you enjoy,
kicking back and reading these revised sessions..

current works in progress, are the following.
(1) The Full Metal Alchemist - Legacy : the aftermath..
(2) F L C L - 2nd comming *Saga 4 : Galactic revelations.
check me out at fanfiction.net

completed stories
(1) Full Metal alchemist : Legacy
(2) FLCL 2nd comming - saga 2 session's a, b, and c.
Saga 3 the maybase menace.
Keep reading, and find me online at :
State_Alchemist.ATOMSK@yahoo.com

**Thanks to the readers, who stuck through the entire way.**

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FL CL - 2ND COMMING -
- I've revised this, for you're reading pleasure.. enjoy the ost.. -

*** Made in tribute, to the original creator.. : yazuka tusurumaki ***

*** Story by : Jason davis ***

- a fan fic basied on the original, f L c L series. -
( Opening Theme - Raion : by jinn. )
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FL CL - 2nd comming.
Saga #2 : The Mechanical Menace
Session : A
ACT : 11
- When darkness cometh -

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( Earth,Maybase :Tokyo )
OsT - Yoko Kanno : 7 Minutes - Fasten seatbelts.

As the battle for earth rages on..
Naota and Haruko race,
towards the old facility at the edge of town..
It's shadow,
now enveloping the rest of the town.
The two now split off in both directions as they look,
for the other two signatures.

The one naota was tracing, is right by the facility.
And the one haruko was chasing,
is on the outer edge of the city.
as naota chases the speeding signature,
he spot's a clearing up ahead..

and hope's it's enough to stop it.

Naota then set's down infront of the mechanical being.
it's large bulk could easily spotted, from the clearing..
it races tword him then stops, right in front of our hero.

the wind bellowing from behind it, the dust soon settles..
naota can now see, what he is facing..
It's sleak body and matallic shape,
makes it look exactly like canti..
but black as coal, and dark as night.

Naota : "heh.. taking the form of my robitic friend, are you ?
You'll have to do better, then that.!"
Naota soon see's the figure, pop out of the darkness..

And charges toword the being head-on,
quickly side stepping..
as the being reaches out for him.
he then dodge's the barrage of punches and kicks,
from the robot.
It's head, being the only valnerable spot.

Least from naota's view, naota continues dodging..
ducking and tumbling..
Looking for an open spot to attack, when suddenly..
the third robot attacks from behind,
blind siding and knocking him into a nearby grainmill.
The shock from the Impact, crushes the building into rubble..
A second later..
Naota leap's out from the rubble, guitar griped in hand..
he glare's at them now, in mid flight..
sitting there, panting.. looking onto his opponents..
then flies head on into the two's path, saying.
Naota : "Now you've made me ANGREY.!" "AAAHHH!!"

He then smashes the first one dead center in the screen..
the impact crushes the frame like it was nothing,
and knocks the head right off.
It fall's with spark's comming out from it's neck. (~fitzz!~)
The other one stands there in awe,
at it's commrad's now dismanteled body.

It then taking one step back,
watches in slight dismemberment..
as naota tryes to figure out, it's weak spot as well.

It shines it's screen Brightly,
like taking a picture for a moment..
blinding naota as it scans him, then start's to fly off..
Now in the opposiate direction from the facility.

Naota "What.. !" looks away- "..The Hell.. !?"

Naota yells, puzzled from the blinding light..
comming from the robots t.v. head..
it takes it's leave from the open oppertunity..
Naota clearly blinded and rubbing his eyes..

As soon as his vision come's back,
he finds that the robot is gone.
But not, it's signature..
Naota : "heh there a little slower then I predicted."
he then says, rubbing an eye leaping into the air..
and chasing the being, to it's next destination.
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- F L C L - 2nd comming..

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( Outside the Abandonded Facility : Maybase,Tokyo )

Haruko races toword the building, she see's canti..
already in admist a fight, with the last signature.
it's black metallic body,
could be easily seen from her point of view.
Canti, battling his own evil virsion..

Haruko hovering above him, realizes as she look's back..
to the other canti like being.. and punches.
knocking it into the feilds near by.
she then set's herself beside Canti, and looks at the machine..
Haruko :"got any more suprises..?"
wondering if he's got anything up his sleeve.
she then looks on as a bright light again glows, from his screen..

The redish/orange flare colored glow,
exposing the open channel.

Canti then grasps the light,
just as the black robot rushes him..

knocking it's self into canti,
and making the light dissepate from his t.v.

Canti's screen goes black, once more..
haruko looks in a shockish gaze..

she turn's back towords the black bot,
starring at it while gripping her warhammer..

Haruko : "damn!" She says rushing the black version of canti.
she swings wildly at it, backing it off of Canti..
he lay there struggling to get back up,
she turn's back toword him while deflecting another..
of the bots attacks, saying to him..

Haruko :"you need more, time. !! "
Haruko look's back to the bot, as canti look's to her..
trying to get back up..
Haruko fends it off speaking to canti whille fighting.

Haruko : " I'll distract it, while you pull your weapon out !"
She then rushes the being head on,
not caring about the innocent's watching from afar.
Haruko : "yeeahh!"

She screams gungho style,
as she weilds her weapon with ease..
and swings into the black canti.
it then leaps backward into the air, and with a flash..
dissapears from haruko's sight.
She looks around for the being, as it's quick movement's..
are hard for her to see.

Haruko : "Wha..? where did it go to, now?"
she says scratching her head..

just then the robot smashes into her back,
knocking her down to the ground.
Haruko bounces, and hit's the gound again hard..
Haruko : " OPFF..."
As canti tries despratly to pull the object from his head,
he then finally struggles it out and hold's yet another guitar.
one for his very own..
gripping it tightly, he flyes back into battle once again.
haruko hit's hard, scraping her body and flips..
from bouncing off the ground.

Haruko is forced uncontious, and become's helpless to attack.
The black canti now tower's over, her..
like a lion upon its prey, before eating.
and start's It's attack, kicking her in the stomach..
Canti comes from nowhere, and graces it's head..
the new weapon, fimly gripped in his hand.

The impact takes the robot out,
and the frailed body spit's and sizzles..
the electricity, spewing from it's body.

It suddenly capsizes off one leg, then falls to the ground...
Canti then set's down next to haruko,
her phant's from breathing heavily.. could clearly be herd.
canti give's a look of shock, and grabs her gently..
picking her up and rushing her back inside of the backery..
Walking away from the robotic menace,
as it is now mangled spits sparks,spewing fluids...

canti looking back stares, to see if it still stands..
the small explosion is a clear sign of it,
no longer working effectivly.
he turn's back slowly, heading inside the house..
Holding the now frail haruko, in his arms..
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- F L C L - 2nd comming..
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( Maybase : Tokyo. )

Naota races with the last signature as it gain's ground,
heading for the outskirts of the city.
his blue colored stream could be seen for miles.
Naota - I don't care who see's me, anymore.
this has got to stop..! -
he glides the wind, streaming along..
as he target's the bot's next location.

Naota : " It's impossible to hide, if your consistiantly batteling..?
Atomsk.. How did you do it ?

Every time you seemed to pull it off,
Never caring for you're own safty..

But alwyes thinking of others, first.."

He continues his pace, he sores through the downtown area.
looking for the resinance of the other two beings.

Naota : "somehow.. it's trying to get back word that I,
have his power.. I've got to stop it.!"

his resonance screaming through the skies,
as he continues flight, looking for the being..

Naota finally finds it,
and swings his guitar into the back of it's head..

Naota : "GOT'CHA.!!"
he says as he swings into it,
smashing the robots head from behind.
It falls flat on it's face and scrapes the ground,
leaving a nice long ditch in it's wake.

he hovers over head,
as the body now is destroyed from his guitar..
spatter's and spits from the shocks, and electric sparks..
flying out of it's body..

he then feels the need to be home, and flies back..
knowing somehow, All three beings were destroyed.

now flying as hard as he can..
trying despratly to make it back in time.
he then finds the clearing to his house and rushes forth,
Naota's body pacing with the speeds,
he was taking with each step..
then comes upon the front door and stops..
the wind a second later, catching up.

Naota open's the door, and slowly walk's in..
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OST - Mad world - michael andrews -

Naota calmly walks inside,
as canti open's the front door for him..
He enters to find haruko, layed out on the couch..
her body battered, brusied..
and her head, bleeding from a small gash..
her breathing, erratic..
His eyes tense as he discover's her this way,
and begins to quiver and shake.
Naota : "Haruko..?!" O.O
he begins to rush over to her.. Naota : "Haruko!!!"
He now, by her side grasp's a hand..
then closes his eyes..
seeing if there was some light, still left inside of her..
He then begins to pace his breath slowly,
trying to bring the life back to haruko.
He somehow realizing, this was the right thing to do..

He finds her inside of a dream,
finding himself inside of a mansion..
The huge wall's to the ballroom envelope him,
as he find's her dancing in the backround.
his mind's eye traces her as she dances.
Like a fallen angel, lighting the room up..

As she keep's going she dances in circles.
Her hair much much,
longer, more vibrant, and free flowing.

her body sleak, as it was perfectly fit..
the white dress she wore sparkle, and her crown..
white, increasted with jewels..
sparkling and matching her jewelery..

Just then.. Atomsk appears from nowhere,,
his hand gracing her's as they sidestep eachother..
and begin to dance.
as they both intwine themselves they waltz,
not stoping untill the music its self stops.

she then turn's to naota and gazes upon him,
while the vision of atomsk fades into the darkness..
She starts to walk over to him,
she then lean's her head on naota's shoulder.
wrapping her arm and holding him tightly,
while whispering into his ear.

Haruko : "you can have me, if you want to.. Naota."
she then looks ahead while huging him eyes filled with bliss..
they continue to dance, slowly waltzing as he says to her..
Naota : "But ..why.?..why now.?"
he continues to look ahead, puzzled..

she continues to lean her head into his shoulder..

She look's at him and quietly, says back to him..
Haruko : " Because silly,
..Your head is the only one that work's right.."
she then lay her head back onto his shoulder,
closing her eyes and dancing with him..

Haruko : " least it works, for me.."
Naota only smiles and dances with her, for the while..
the light now fading into the dark, as they both continue to dance..
- At the moment, naota truly felt ..desired...-
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OST - The Pillows : Last Dinosaur -

(haruko): "Naota finds out I was not only a rebel,
working for rouge intellegence as a space patrol officer...
But I also carry royal genes,
and was the princess of my homeworld..
before it was destroyed...."
' n.n '
(NAOTA): "What ?!, You,were a princess.?
Unfathemable..! ..Impossible.?!
..you don't even look, the type.??."
'O.O'

(Haruko):" Canti tries to make a new friend, And Mamimi..?
Well is she's truly,
the same hometown girl as she was back then..??
Will it be enough for naota,
as he struggles to bring me back from coma.?

Find out on the next, Fooly Cooly 2nd comming.
Session : A
ACT : 12
- Invasions, of the mind. -
( NAOTA ) : " Hey!!, You invaded first....Woman.!" -.-*
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[Maskan]

sweet looking forward to the next issue

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

well people it's wensday, and time again for another act.
and so far, it's getting alot better.
this week's act is entitled : Invasions of the mind.
will naota be able to bring haruko, back from n.o. coma.?
guess it's finally time to find out..



FL CL - 2ND COMMING -
- I've revised this, for you're reading pleasure..
enjoy the ost.. -

*** Made in tribute, to the original creator..
yazuka tusurumaki ***

*** Story by : Jason davis ***

- a fan fic basied on the original, f L c L series. -
( Opening Theme - Raion : by jinn. )
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FL CL - 2nd comming
Saga #2 : The Mechanical Menace
Session : A
ACT : 12
- Invasions, of the mind. -

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( HaRuKo 's dream : Naota's Mind Meld )
2nd COMMING OST - yoko kanno : open your eyes -

Still in haruko's dream,
naota nabunada finds himself with the young princess..
dancing in the ballroom of this huge mansion..
This of course was all but a dream..
And he finds himself once again in her arms.
she dancing with him in time, the music playing from her mind..
pacing with it as they dance..
To him she feels light as a feather, Swaying in his arms..
as they waltz, now feeling blissfully at peace with her..
Untill the darkness start's to rush into there minds,
and naota is soon swollowed up.
He now can see nothing but darkness,
her body liying on the ground, stiff and cold..
He then watches,
as a shadowish figure appears from behind her,
Raising it's hands into the sky.
and seeing behind it the machines,
activating the iron facilities all over the galaxy.

Naota snaps too and breaks the bond holding him, to haruko...
she awakes as well.
"AAAAHHH!! " They both scream in panic..
shaking, and quivering from waking up.
She is starteled to find naota next to her, kneeling twords her..
as she lays down and panics..
Naota is the forced back up aginst the wall,
and struggles to break his mind free of her hold of his arm..
Haruko's grip is strong.. and she breaks it.

(snap!)
Canti then hand chops her neck,
knocking her once again uncontious..
Canti grip's naota as he falls back, toword him
he is let down from canti's hold on him..
Naota looks to him, saying..
Naota - SHIT..! -
Naota : "..Thanks canti, least we know she's still alive."
Naota - thank you god.. -

Naota then Takes a breath, gripping his arm tightly..
Naota : "shit.. she, broke it.."
Naota grunts from the pain in his arm, now on fire..
he looks to canti and says..
Naota : "get the kit, bring it here.."
canti then nods knowing exactly where it was,
and rushes to grab it..
kamon and shinjikumi walk in, and notice haruko layed out..
and naota grabbing an arm..
shinjikumi shakes is head.. and kamon smacks his face..
both saying at the same time..
Both : "He's at it,again!."
They just sigh, and go back to bed..
thinking they knew he's was infact fooly coolying..
Naota blinking at both of them and sighing..
Naota : "why do they assume,The obvious.?"
and leans back towords the couch to try again,
This time sitting crossleged and breathing..
Naota - even with this broken arm,
i still gotta bring her out of coma. -
he breathe's in time with her own..
he places his broken arm into his lap craddling it a bit,
then trying his melding once more..
Naota - I.. Just Gotta, try.. -

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( haRuko's dream : Naota's Mindmeld )
2ND COMMING OST - The Pillows : Last Dinosaur -
His thoughts soon race,
as he tries to block them and re enter's her mind.
As the door slowly open's for him..

This time..
we find Haruko scooting along on the yellow vespa,
her hair much longer and more bradied..
Haruko : "is this great, or what naota?"
She say's as naota snaps too from the consentration.
She continues to say in her sarcastic tone of voice..
Haruko : "You know, riding like this?
..not having to care about anything anymore..?"

Naota grabs on tightly, as harko races along the beachside roads..
her speeds going alot faster then normal, she then says to him..
Haruko : "I was wondering when you were gonna snap too.."
she chuckles a bit..
Haruko : "..Had me worried that, you fell asleep again.."
she then continues to say..
Haruko : " Were gonna break the record,
for the fastest two person race ever!..
it'll be a world record, just a few more miles."
she keeps repeating, as they race along the road..
naota still gripping her jacket, as they ride.
Naota : "Slow down haruko, your going way to fast for me!"
He grip's thinking of an accedent waiting to happon,
haruko then says to him..
Haruko : "Relax will yah.?
I keep telling you nothing's going to happon.!
Besides, if we make it back home..?, We'll be.."
she says in a low tone of voice,
making it climb as she says so yelling it out at the end..
Haruko :" Champions, OF, THE, WORLD!!!."
She said it like this was home to her too,
and he never thought it possible to hear her so sincere..
she had no home..

not since medical mechanica destroyed her planet,
so many years ago.
Haruko then says to naota..
Haruko : "I just wanna do somthing great, for once..
insted of running all the time, just once.. naota."
He then grabs on for dear life,
as they race home to the backery..
Naota sighs then speaks..
Naota : "Alright, let's do it haruko !"

As he then dig's his head into her back,
she then steps on the gas...
the vespa's pace,
even faster then it was before..
Haruko : "You know naota.?"
She goes onto say.
Haruko : "I was a princess once.."
Naota : " really.. a princess you say..?"

Haruko : "mmhmm.. then you came along, and the king..
granted you his power, to destroy mechanic demons."
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FL CL - 2ND COMMING

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OST - The pillows : Bran -new love song -

She suddenly stops the bike, and stares at him..
Haruko : "I could of eaten him, gained his power for myself..
but i wanted you, so I don't have to be alone anymore."

He then look's at her, starring into her eyes for a moment..
saying to her.
Naota : "That's a, selfish reason.?"
then look's down a bit and continues to say..
Naota :"But, I understand.. your planet was destroyed.
and you have no home to call you're own... But haruko.?"
He asks with a question, as she stares back at him.
not saying a word..
Naota : "does it, ever end ?"
She then looks up into the sky,
as to look for some awnser then begins to laugh uncontrollably..
When she is done, she shakes her head..
Haruko : "I wish I knew,really.. I really do...
but for now..let's just go home.

Everything'll be alright, I have faith in you... naota."
At that moment, they both wake up..
canti watching from the backround, as his t.v. light..
is the only thing visable to the eye..
besides the two hero's in there positions,
Haruko awaken's no longer screaming..
Naota's hand enveloped into hers.
she then look's over to him.. as he still sit's on the floor.
and says him.

Haruko : "Thank's naota.. for the dance.."
naota blushes as haruko brushes a hand acrossed his cheek,
caringly rubbing a thumb on it for a moment.

they both stare at eachother,
as canti in the background scratches his screen head.
still looking on our two hero's..

- naota frees haruko from coma.?
..I thought noone could come back..
this kid.. even suprises me, in death. -




- F L C L - 2nd comming.


( Maybase : Tokyo nanbada's bakery )
OST - The pillows weekend -
The next day..
Naota awaken's to find haruko laying her head down, on his chest..
she tracing the creases of his ribs with her fingure.

both nude, and the sent of musk in the air..
along with her smiling..
naota could easily tell what had happoned..
as she continues to caress his chest,
she sighs happily as they lay there.

His mind's eye, now finally awakened by the memories..
streaming into his head.
the visions of the ballroom, and the ride...
he tries to remember the rest, as he struggles to awaken himself..
But haruko, still liying on him then says..
Haruko : "hmm..naota, i love you..so very much.."
As she daydreams, about naota and the night before.
he then grasps his arm,
finding a small pressure bandage around it in a sling..
his arm had been broken from haruko grabbing it,
while she panicked.
His arm burned like it was on fire, and the pulsated..
but the nummbness of the i.v. suddenly kicks in,
and morphine kick's the pain away quickly..

Naota : "ouch.. "
he said as he winced in pain, then tries to adjust himself again..
she then struggles to keep him settled..
then notices he is awake.
she mumbles to him as he tries to adjust himself.
Haruko :" Naota, please.. don't be mad.."
She doesn't even turn to look at him,
her hair the only thing he sees at that moment..
all the while still speaking to him..

Haruko : "you're arm, must feel like it's..on fire.."
He then feel's her begin to sob a bit, feeling sorry for her actions.
Naota then begins staring at the window of his room,
then ponders about her thought and if she feels he is angrey..
he then grab's her arm, and pulls her close..
looking into her tear soaked eyes..
he then kisses her slowly then unlocks there lips,
saying back to her..

Naota : "it's not you're fault..
I shouldn't of tried to peer, into you're mind..
- i'm just thankfull, she didn't give in.. to the coma.. -

He says looking back onto haruko, she still crying in his arms..
as he wonders what comes next.


- no matter what.. she'll alwyes be, by you're side. -
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- F L C L - 2nd comming

( Earth,Maybase : Tokyo )
OST - Bloodrayne : Man, God, Machine. -

That afternoon they plan out there next course of action..
To leave earth for there next destination.
Haruko : " Sources from Mr.eyebrow's say,
they found medical mechanica's latest base..
it is attacking a small planet on the outskirts of the milky way..
and is erecting a new type of facility,
but the whereabouts on the planet..."

Naota grabs one of the bags with his able hand,
and rechecks it..
making sure he has everything he need's,
to journey to the next planet.
Haruko : "Here"
she says holding out a pill in her hand.
This clearish gelcapsule, gives off a rainbow color.
Naota : "Whats this for.?"
He blinks in question, looking onto the strange horse pill..
Haruko : "It'll make you breathe in space,
I'm not totally sure on how it works.
but the chemical reaction it makes,
Won't make you freeze in space,
and will allow you to create oxygen..
from the particles of ice, in you're body's vicinity..."
She then smiles to him,and says.

Haruko : "Don't you trust me.?"
Looking at him, the right side of her face showing..
as she puts on her helmet, getting ready for a test run.
He then smiles back not thinking another thought,
And swollows the pill..
His stomach starts to quiver and shake,
making alot of groaning noises.
Haruko look's down at naota's stomach at the same time..
-groan-
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F L C L - 2ND COMMING

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OST - The Pillows : Come Down -

Haruko smiles as the pill begins to take it's effect..
naota begins to grab his stomach, and falls to the ground..
he begins to groan in pain.
Naota : "Ooooh.!!"
He says,looking to the ground sickly....
Haruko : "Huh?"
she looks down as he groans fropm the pain..
She then says to him..
Haruko : " OHH...yeah....
I should of warned you, about that...."

She says it to him, like she's really enjoying him in pain.
Then lean's back onto the ground, looking up at him..
as he rolls over.
Haruko : "That's because the pill's taking on your d.n.a. pattern,
to enhance your breathing abilities..
So the effects of the pill will never wear off."

She then uses her fingure's to count,
how many diffrent side effects there are to the pill..
Haruko : "Just may make you a little queezy, groggy,
mabe a little sick, dareiah a fever maybe the chicken pox."
she then smiles back to him and says,
in a much more happier tune.
Haruko : " but once it disolves into your blood stream,
then you should be able to breathe in space."

She then start's to fix the yellow vespa.
Haruko : " Besides it's not totally bad..
least you'll be out there fighting..and not on the planet.."
He then start's to stop screaming the pain,
it finally is slowing to a stop..
the rumbling inside of his stomach, trembles and growls at him..

Naota : " Ooohh..damn,...
you said it, was safe to swollow.!"
He looks at her wincing in pain, as he layes on the ground..
the pain slowly subsides.. and he get's back up in amasment.
Naota : "woah.. how come everything smells like, machinery.?"
his sence of smell, now only smelling that of a factory..
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F L C L 2ND COMMING


OST - hellsing ultimate : vatican cathedral - or, the time traveler.. -

she then turns her back to him and sadly looks down..
biting her bottom lip..
she then says to him..
Haruko : "It's the effects of medical mechanica..
There machines leave a distinct smell,
and there is nothing you can do to stop it.
most of the people are immune to it's smell,
and don't even notice it..."

Haruko then turn's back to him, Continuing to speak..
Haruko : " The imprisionment of the human soul,
as you would call it."
She then turn's back and begins again, fixing her vespa..
checking the knot's to the henges of the bike..
Haruko : "I guess you would say, brainwashed..
and people don't even know it.
or just the smell of polution,
spreading throughout the universe..
making it impossible to live freely."
She then points a wrench, at his forhead.
Haruko : "You are the only key, to ending the war..
between man, and machine..
you must become stronger, then the machines..
willingly..
then, and only then.. will atomsk's true power be revieled to you."

He then look's at her puzzling.And says..
Naota : " But I thought you said, he gave me his powers.?
how then cloud I be able to do, what i do.?"
..She then turn's and says..
Haruko : "Yes he did..
you just havnt realized your full potential.
but furthermore, he gave you somthing far more precious..
then a material object.."
He looks at her not realizing where she was goiong with it..
she simply awnsers his unasked question..
Haruko : "His..memories.."
She points the wrench back to her head, smiling while doing so..
she then climbs off the bike, and begins to crouch down..
she then says to him..
Haruko : "you need time to think on it, we're not going anywhere..
untill you've decided for sure, where you're mind sit's with this.."
she says as she continues to tinker with her vespa,
naota sighs looking down a bit..
then finally heads inside, leaving haruko to tend to her bike..
After a moment of silence, she then look's to her left..
out of the garage and onto the lot of there driveway..

she then see's kamon kissing and groping on his latest victum,
Miyu miyu,musashi.
childhood friend, to both kamon and cleria..
she is kamon's.. closest companion..

All the while both are enjoying there touching..
giggling, and laughing the entire time..
she watches as kamon kisses her gently,
and miyu miyu does the same..

haruko then begins to think on her relationship with naota.
Haruko - stupied men, why to they alwyes fuck,
with a women's mind like this?.
.As if we don't have it bad enough..
Now I have to watch others engaging -
she after a moment, simply shakes her head..
and goes back to fixing her bike..
Haruko : "-sigh- I'm glad though.."
The wrench makes noise as she tightens it..
Haruko : " Least naota, cares.."

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- FL CL - 2nd comming..


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( Earth, Maybase tokyo. )
OST - Full Metal Alchemist : Beaming sunlight -

Later, that night..
We find canti outside in the garage, looking up into the sky..
outside, waiting for another attack..
All the while working on a few parts,
of the broken black versions.. of himself...

His t.v. light shining as he work's along inside,
one of the beings chest modules..
it then light's up and a light bulb springs on canti's head,
along with a smiley face.
It then returns the smiley, and canti begins to work again.
gaining speed as it work's now.. knowing it's ok.

the light now sprining to life off the black version's head,
Canti then attaches a pice of metal to it's back,
and set's it upright.
it then show's another smiley symbol, and canti begins to work..
on it's arm's and legs,
pleased to have someone else to talk to..
it then starts to glow bright red,
lettering out from it's face screen..

and canti return's the same data.
it then start's to process the information, canti transmitted.
as it's screen goes blank, canti turn's back and continues to work..
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2ND COMMING OST - The Pillows : Sad,Sad kitty -

We turn to haruko, who is feeding her face in the kitchen..
her delight, curi spicy..
and for naota, the same..
he just doesn't know,it yet..

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***The sceene stops abruptly..
and shows naota in the front of the trailer,
mamimi on the left reading a book,
avalisk on the right tuning his guitar silently.. looking at naota.
and the rest in the background,
doing other things of no importiance..

( kamon, cherry, tasuku, and eri.. )
In the trailer behind the big screen, they view there progress..
naota look's back as he speaks to hauko..
Naota : "Wait a minute?.."
he says as he jumps up, to look back to haruko..

Naota : " you purposly gave me, spicy curi ?
I HATE,THAT SHIT ! ..Haruko..?!"
She then says to him..
Haruko : "what ? I didn't see a problem with it,
besides.. it wasn't going to kill you..
geez get a grip naota.."

mamimi then flips a page of her book,
and repeats harukos words.
Mamimi : "yeah naota, get a grip.." -flip's a page. -
naota then grunts,and screams at mamimi.
Mamimi :" YOUR NOT EVEN,WATCHING THIS..!!!"
Haruko shrugs her shoulders,
and the screen begins back into the plotline***
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Haruko : "I don't see why we shouldn't go now,
while we still have the chance..?" she continues to say..
Haruko : " noone knows if atomsk is even alive, anymore..
and I perfer to keep it that way, totally anomyous..
you know, naota.?"
She then takes a bite, and slurp's her meal down..
Naota then takes his into hand, and begins to eat..
not noticing the smell of hotsauce..
his mouth a moment later begins to tingle real badly,
and now reaches for the glass of milk.

he begins to chug it down,
and it instantly cool's down his mouth.
A steamy fog of heat leaves his breath as he exhales..
naota then glares to haruko.. with a slight grin..
Naota speaks with sarcasem
Naota : " you said.. this wasn't, hot...
It's spicy.. you know.. .I don't like.. spicy, foods.."

Haruko not noticing anything he said,
continues to eat the curi and slirping while she eats.
Haruko -"sqqquququ"
She then stop's and ponders on somthing,
other then naota's bickering.
Haruko : "You know if you don't eat,
you won't have another chance,
before we go check this planet out, and this time.."
she says as she points her,chopsticks toword him..

Haruko : " I don't wanna hear any complaining outta you.."
she then continues to slirp her food, naota look's down at his dish..
Naota knew this wouldn't be enough, not by a longshot..

Naota : "we're not leaving yet.."
He says to her as she eats, she stop's to look at him..
while he looks down a bit in silence..

she slam's her food down, and stand's up looking down to him.
Haruko : "and why, not ?"
she says in a controlling tone..
Haruko : "something else needing to be done first..?"

he then sigh's and begins to eat his meal,
Naota - no.. more like something's holding me back.. -
all the while grabbing for his glass..
Naota - hopefully.. you don't catch on to it, haruko.. -
then going to the fridge for more..
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FL CL - 2ND COMMING
OST - The pillows : Bran-new love song -

Haruko wonders what naota ment, by his comment..
and begins to ask him, but before she could stop eatting..
naota instiantly speaks..
Naota : "I know.. ..you're wondering what I mean, by that.."

Naota chuckles a bit, then closes the door to the fridge..
haruko looking puzzled by his sudden expression of laughter,
stares him in puzzlement..
she then says to him..
Haruko : "naota..you're scarring me.."
- gives a weird out stare. -

Naota then looks to her, starring in shock..for a split second..
then his expression changes..
Naota : "I felt his presence, here in this town..
he's here, Haruko.."
Naota - i can't believe it..!!
the channel.. it's beginning to open..! -
She then looks back in shock..
she stares to him,
as he paces slowly looking out of the kitchen window..
Naota : "Atomsk's potential..is in, this city."
He then look's back to her,and says.
Naota : " We have.. to find him.
but I won't know for sure.. untill, his channel is open.."
haruko then places her foot, on the stool next to the table..
and poses in a semi centerfold, posing behind him..
as naota think to himself..
Naota : "but how will I get him, to open it.. again ?"


- Epiphenies, are so easy to come by..
hence we as an all, continue to strive.. -
- Essance of sheer Will. -
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- F L C L -
2ND COMMING..
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OST - The Pillows : High risk - ( Amarao's ReTuRn )
( Above Earth,Mothership : S.S. Stumi )

Watching the records of naota's last few battles..
commander amarao,
and lutennant kitsumaburi watch from there station..
on the ship the s.s. stumi.

The commander is inticed by the movments of naota,
the way he gracfully faught and dodged,
the mechanical beings.. hammer strikes.
the lutennant.. sit's idly aside of him, they both watch on..
as the recorded battle aginst the machines rages.

Amarao : "lutennant.?"
he says to her in a calm voice..
amarao : "pull record '018322' up once more..?
there's a deffinate resembalence,
to the fighing styles of atomsk compared to that kid.."

his eyes glance in her direction once more..
she acknoweldges and pulls the record up.
it shows another young man like naota but much taller more sleak,
more force to his swing as well.

amarao : "this was atomsk, before he met with naota.
in his reports, he freelanced with haruhara as they both traveled..
and stayed on several planets."
his eyes moving with the person on screen,
like watching someone dance..

Atomsk's swing's are quicker then that of naota..
more presice as well.
amarao : "i'm still not sure..
as to why he wanted me to watch naota..
but one thing is clear, there's no mistaking that guitar..
it's the exact same one."

she turn's to look at it,
but then the recording suddenly cuts off..
and the report ends it's transmission.

Kitsurubami : " commander.."
she asked pulling back another of the staff's chairs,
and pulls it beside him.
Kitsurubami : " can we watch that again. ?"
she sitting down again asks him solomy.

Kitsurubami : "professionaly speaking, of course."
he makes a hand notion, and she begins the recording..
watching the movement's of atomsk.
Kitsurubami : "his power is uncanny.."
she says as she looks on..
Kitsurubami :
"i don't think we'll ever evolve,
into what he had become."

speaking about him in a past-tense way.

amarao : "the chain of evolution,
is a very complicated chain of Life."

says the commander,
still watching the recording on the huge screen.

Amarao : "it seems to me though,
the more n.o. a person has..
the more power he can controll,
but there is also the side effects of..
N.O. Transformations, or even Terraforming...
having a channel, or black hole inside of ones head..
would deffinetly amplifiy one's powers..
But, this is only my theroy.."

He then slouches as he continues to watch,
the eyebrow's twiching as he watches the screen..
she then turn's back..the only thought in her mind..
Kitsurubami - the commander's thought pattern,
has drastically changed..
and I'm beginning to wonder myself..
has he really been affected since that day ? -
she continues to watch the commander,
more so then the recorded film..

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- F L C L - 2nd comming.

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( Earth : Maybase,Japan )
OST - Orange range : Samurai mania -


Mammi works frantically looking for her next story,
and what better story then the universe's next hero..
naota nanbada.
she grab's for the camera from on top of her desk,
as she walks out of her office.

Her hair draped on both side's, swaying as she walks..
she then turns back..
not knowing if she'll ever see her own space,
again and clicks off the light..
as she closes the door behind her,
she then turns away from the office door..
and behind her, as she turn's around..

Is mr.hakushe.
the papers top leading reporter.
his eyes,agzing upon her blousewatching as she breathes.
Mr. hakushe : "going somewhere mrs. samejima? "
she looks back up to him and say's..

Mamimi : "yes sir."
she then strokes her hair on her left side revealing her ear.
Mamimi : "i'm going to help the nanbada's backery,
while the youngest leaves for america."
looking as professional as possible, to her manager.
Mamimi : "he's leaving.. to visit his brother."
she continues to go on to say something..
but is interupted by him.

Mr. hakushe : "just as long as you report here in the morning..
I need you to cover tomarrow's softball game."
he was refering to shingekuni's game,
glancing an eye on her skirt as she..
then tries to cover it, with her purse.
Mamimi : "sir.."
she said looking down at the floor.
Mamimi : "I have,to go.."
she says again before leaving the office, running tword the stairs.
he stares at her as she races to the exit,
scratching his head at the whole scene..

Mamimi then flies down the first flight, and enters the lower floor..
closing the door behind her.
she then leans up aginst it sighing,
as she now breathes a sigh of relief.
Mamimi : "thank god he didn't ask me out tonight,
now I can get to them before they leave."
she start's to walk toword the elevators slowly and calmly,
not to let anyone notice her as she walks passed.
her thoughts race as she then gets on the elevator,
not noticing commander amarao sitting in the lift with her.
amarao : "So... man trouble, huh.?"
He says as he startles her,
she gasps as his voice is still unfamilier with her.
folding his arms in and leaning aginst the wall of the lift,
he continues to say.
amarao : "going to tomarrow's game, are you.?
you should be pleased..
I hear haruko pitches a mean ball,
and naota is the only one who can hit it.."
He looks down at her,
as she then does the exact same thing.. cringes..
from his look..he then says to her..
amarao : "but you and i know, that's not entirly true..
isn't it, miss samejima.."
she then back off a bit in much the same manor,

when she spoke with her manager.
He then faces forward,
still leaning up aginst the back of the lift..
arm's folded inward.. he continues to speak.
amarao : "eh.. this doesn't work for me, sorry kid..
but you need a diffrent look."
Looking at what floor they were on,
he looks over to her as he exit's the lift and speaks..

amarao : "..I'll be in touch.."
he then exits the lift on another floor,
as she continues to ride the lift to the main floor.
she holds a hand to her chest and sighs again,
she then looks at what floor she is on..
and exits when her floor comes to view.
the door slowly opens and mr. hakushe
is there panting and weaning,he then asks while panting.

Mr hakushe : "will..you..?"
she puts a hand up in front of his face,and say's..

Mamimi : " can't you see, i'm clearly not interested.?!.."
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- F L C L - 2nd comming.

- sometimes, you have to pick and choose your battles. -

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( Earth,Maybase : Japan ) OST - The pillows : The moon is MINE !
Later that day...

We find canti still hard at work on the other version,
of himself. examining the structure,
and compositing for the missing pieces..
with the other two robots.
There bodies more damaged,
then the one he is currently working on.

It turns to him and then repeats,
more of the same encryption it did earlier that day..
canti then returns some more information,
to the impatcient robot.
it then shows another smiley face and shuts it's screen off..
leaving canti to once again continue his work..



Haruko and naota quietly talk outside the backery,
the nights sky illuminating where they sat.
Naota : "i just don't know about leaving earth haruko,
it just doesn't feel right.."
naota say's hiding his head into his folded arm's,
as he sit's up aginst the building..
thinking of staying home,
not noticing the tension building inside of him.
she head then start's to poke at the back, of his head..
he scratches it as he feels her poke..
and jumps into the air saying..
Naota : "it's happoning again..!"
screaming and raving around,
like a scared little kid holding a giant pimple.
Haruko : "relax..
it's probably somthing comming through the channel..
if it's another bot..?
we'll take care of it.. but this post-pones our little trip..
guess we'll have to stay here now, but.. just to make sure.."

she swings her guitar and graces his head with it,
sending him flying into the air and comming back down..
not too far from where they sat..
she blinks watching the feild where naota lay,
his feet twiching in the air and slowly floating back down.
Haruko : "well..?
we'll know when it comes out, now won't we tak -kun.."

she watches on as his feet continue twitching,
he lay there groaning from the blow to the head.
she realizes nothing is comming out,
and she throw's her hands into the air..
turning back to her bike and speaking.
Haruko : "eh..it could of gone much worse then that.."
and continues to work into the night..
naota still laying in the feild near the house..
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- F L C L - 2nd comming.

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OST - The pillows : Last Dino. -
( HaRuKo )
Next ACT :
" Amarao finds his bump grows bigger then the previous one,
and mamimi watches as haruko puts on the heat..
will she strike true..?
or will it result, in another attack.?

and the commander finds himself trapped,
in a lift with none other then kitsurubami.
will she go mad from being with him..
trapped inside of the lift..? alone..? don't go for it girl.!"

On the next fooly cooly, 2nd comming !
Revised session.* Act 13: - Confessions Of A Marksmen -

- sings -
(Haruko) : "amarao's gotta gun.
waa waa, waah, waahh.." - playes with the eb0 -
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[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

well people..
this is the last act of session : A
i'll be taking you back next week,
to the rest of the current story.
In the meantime, enjoy.


FL CL - 2ND COMMING -
- I've revised this, for you're reading pleasure..
and enjoy the ost.. -

Made in tribute, to the original creator..
*** yazuka tusurumaki ***

*** Story by : Jason davis ***

- A fan fic basied on the original, f L c L series. -
( Opening Theme - Raion : by jinn. )
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FL CL - 2nd comming.
Saga #2 : The Mechanical Meance
Session : A
ACT : 14
- Curse, of the pirate king. -

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( Above Earth : Mothership,S.S.Tusurumaki )
2ND COMMING OST - Hellsing : Soul rescuer -

Commander amarao explains to the young luttenant,
the exact theroy of Atomsk's origion..
Amarao : "I believe a few hundred years ago,
atomsk was origionally a timelord.
it is an alternative to the brotherhoods reports..
but, this is what I believe..

He was in all sence, a god of aspect..
He then searched acrossed the galaxy.
looking for Medical, Mechanica..
was the first problem, the space police brotherhood had..

Now atomsk himself, was freed....
the recient resualts of this is, haruhara and naota..
there n.o. properties where enough to bring,
atomsk back from the dimension,
medical mechanica captured him inside of..
naota's head was the channel,
needed to being him back into our universe.."

He continues as the lutennant stares in awe..
Kit : "Atomsk was the first? Let me guess?
...he was immediatly medical mechanica's first initial target.. "
amarao : " It seem's as though,
medical mechanica had no problems..
but then somthing went horribly wrong,
It's own negitive n.o. properties,
started to take over it's own cpu..
and thus corrupting itself,
making it think it's own logicial theroys..
were it's own aspect."

she then nods at the commander
Kit : "I see, this is how it all began.."
amarao continues there decussion..

Amarao :" So he set out on his own, to find potentials.
Another problem,
was medical mechanica started to recreate it's self..
in an image much like, our own..
but the metallic, twisted circutry, of artificial intellegence..
lacked the respect we show ourselves..
It is apperent that if one tries to think on its own,
it is automaticly deemed as obsoulite..
and is immediatly ither dismanteled, or incinerated..
for thinking illogicial thoughts..
they continue to think of a perfect knoweldge,
as a perfect society. Making there logic..absolute.."
She looks back at him with shock..
Kit : "that's..madness.."
He look's back at her, looking her in the eye..
amarao :" This is why we continuosly fight them,
to keep the treaty and to keep our freedom.."
The both continue walking down the long deckhall..
- Somtimes..it's the life force..somtimes, it's just survival.. -
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- F L C L - 2ND COMMING

OST - Full Metal Alchemist : Taboo -

( Earth, Maybase : Nanbada's bakery )

Three days pass..
Since the last battle with the medical mechanica..
There metalic bodies now pilled inside of naota's garage..

Canti hard at work,
tries to place the pieces together from the other two droids.
The one still upright, looking down as canti works..
He shining his screen on the piece in his hand,
the light showing it a bright green..

Canti knows exactly where the piece held in his hand goes,
It's the missing component to the arm he was working on..
He raises the fragment in the air, and both seem happy..
canti the attaches it to the black version of himself,
and..
it attacks him.
canti flings the droid off his arm, and it slam's aginst the wall.
it breaks..

the screen of the other version spitters and spirt's,
with sparks and fluids.
canti then looks down in a depressive manor...
Throwing the wrench he had in his hand, onto the work bench..
Canti slowly raises from the stool..
tossing the rest of the pieces into the box he had,
and slowly head lowered,depressingly walks inside...
the some of the pieces of the now dismanteled robot..
still lay on the ground..

Canti simply shuts the light off and goes inside,
slowly closing the door behind him..

The light flickers a few, second's before it dim's out..

- All you wanted, was a friend..
someone to be, just like you.. -

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F L C L 2ND COMMING

OST - The Pillows : subhuman -
( Earth, Maybase : Tokyo )

Naota and Haruko inside of the bedroom,
naota looking down playing his guitar silently..

A hinder of what he playes, is herd by haruko..

who, looking down on the otherside of the room..
just sit's there, not doing anything..

Haruko ..almost saddened, from the recient experience..

She goes to say something, but doesn't..

Naota stops playing, to almost hear what she has to say..
but after haruko stop's.. he simply continues to play on..
just as silently as before..

Naota then stops playing the guitar..
places it silently beside him, on the bed..
they both now, in total silence..

the only thing they can hear from eachother,
is of there own breathing..
both simoltainous of eachother..
there thought's race through both of there minds..
suddely the strey cat haruko found walk's inside,
looks around...
and feels the negitive vibe from the room..

then leaves from the tension..
both now staring at the now, irritated feline..
naota then continues to look down,
haruko then looks at him and finally break's the silence..
Haruko : "Well.. you gotta say somthin, sometime.. "
she looks at him with confusion,
As he just keeps silent the whole time.
thoughts continue to race in his mind,
as he continues to look down not wanting to say anything..
she turn's her head, and throws her hand's into the air.
Haruko : "Your.. not going to say, anything.. are you..?"
He stands up, and say's to her..
Naota : "We're going, you're taking me to caprica Haruko..
And the other collective of planets, and..
the rest of the milky way galaxy..
for now, we should do as you say.. keep a low profile.."
she looks back in shock..
Haruko : "..you knew ..the entire time, you knew..
didn't you.?"
Haruko gazes into naota's eyes in a spazzmatic posture.
her movements were all over the place..
He looks away and speaks to her..
Naota : "No..?
..It just came to me, nothing like that.."

Naota look's to the left of his room,
gazing into some white space as to remember what he saw..
Naota : " I know the whereabouts, to the sitar...
it's the key.. that bother's me."
Naota - ..This man..
I'm supposed, to met.. who is he..? what is he..? -

she look's back towords naota and say's..
Haruko : "ok, first off..? I'm the leader here..!
if anyone's gonna get it.. it's gonna be me..!"
She points to herself with confidence..
holding her arm out high making sure everyone knew it.

Naota looks towords her and speaks..
Naota : "you know, haruko..?
you wouldn't know what to do with it,
once you got you're hand's on it..
heh.. you'd probably cream you're panties, over it.. "

She looks back with a stuborn look,
trying to gaze back at him facing away..
Haruko : " yeah..
but it would be mine to play with, how I please.."
she shows a very cold shoulder to him, saddly it does not work..

and he continues to sit on his bed,
looking downward to his feet.

Naota : "Haruko..
you're bound and deturmined, just as much as i am..
these guys.. aren't just, run of the mill terrorists..
- clasp's her hands together -
..I promise you, We'll leave for caprica soon..
but first, i need to know something.."
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2ND COMMING OST -Full Metal ALchemist : Beaming sunlight -

Naota look's to her and with a gaze..
one that was so deep, it was like peering into haruko's soul..

Naota : "do.. you love me.?, I mean truly."
he continues to look with,doubt towords her..

Naota : " no more games, no more fooly cooly.. I.."

His gaze now set upon her's..
the trembling in his eyes, look back at her..
haruko's gold eyes look back, just as serious..

Naota : "..I need to know... even if we aren't ment to be..
are you so willing to throw you're life away,
that you'd risk you're loved one's too..?"

As he ask's her..
tears fill his face, as he looks right at her..
not taking his eyes off her for even a second.
leaning forward in the bed naota look's almost upward at her.
Haruko then lean's inward, kissing him slowly passionatly..
wrapping her arms around him. trying to make him feel safe.

Then.. she lays him down, haruko laying her head on his chest..
she looks to him..
Haruko : "I'm not leaving, tak -kun.. ..ever..
It's complicated, right now..
but you'll understand.. soon enough."

Haruko - Once again, tak -kun.. you got me, by suprise -
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- F L 2 C L -
( Above, Earth : Mothership S.S.tusurumaki )

2ND COMMING OST - Full Metal Alchemist : Pity -

Amarao now resting from his trip with the lutennant,
finds peace in a hot shower..

afterwards, he gets out and wrap's himself in a towel..
and prepares his uniform, once again. for the next day..
changing into his sleeping gear, he then tirlessly crawls into his bed..
laying there, looking at the ceiling..
thoughts begin to race, as amarao tries to roll on his side..
thought's continue to elude him, ..to his current position with haruko.
amarao :- grunts -"After all these years, she still doesn't trust me.."
He tries to forget about the past events,
and silently struggles to sleep...

Amarao's dream's, are like nightmares..

Atomsk now infront of the commander..
atomsk scream's a horrible call..
amarao then look's to what, is comming after the pirate king..
a giant hand..
and it slowly captures atomsk and throw's him down..
in to the void's, inside a large chamber..

It's top, seal's and pressureizes a giant iron cell..
pressure continues to build inside..

the terrible scream's comming from the powerful n.o. creature,
are cries of pain and saddness..

as It's light dimm's, fading out in the darkness...
the screams still herd, from the distiance..
untill.. nothingness..

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2ND COMMING OST - Stalker -

Amarao awakes to find himself coverd with sweat, and tears..
knowing now what his mind had blocked, for so many years..
he collapses and fall's crying, from the emotions pulling him..
into his own thought's..

Amarao : "It's true.. god, damn it ..all of it..
I was there, and.. I.. couldn't do, a Fuking thing.!!"

His eyes now bloodshot from the emotion and stress,
his head begins to shake erradically..
and.. soon..a new bump, begins to form....
Amarao : "owww, Not Again!!"
he screams from, It's size now doubling..
the bump now looking like a small horn, stop's and pulses.

Amarao settles down, from the pain subsiding..
and calmly get's up..
then goes to the mirror, to look at himself..
the large bump, stick's out like a sore thumb..
Amarao : "this is great.
..now what.?" he feel's the head of the bump.
it's feeling is like a hard frame, but a soft fleshy touch..

He feels the pressure holding it tightly,
looking into the mirror..then says..
amarao : "It's destiny that brings us things..
fate, lands them in our laps..
but this.. is rediculous.. it's a fuking, pimple.."

he slowly sigh's looking down, away from the mirror..
Amarao : "guess this is mine..now.."

He turn's back, and walks to his bed..
the pack of cigerettes still sitting on the stand of his bedside..
he reaches over for one, then sits back down..
looking at the small cigerette..
Amarao : "Change.. - sigh - maybe, it's a good thing.."
he speaks, tossing the cigarette back on the nightstand..
and proceed's to lay back down..
and finally.. turn's the light out.

- Even the insugnifigent people, count.. -
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FL CL 2ND COMMING
OST - Yoko Kanno : The Time Traveler -
(Earth,Maybase : Japan )

We return to the nanbada family backery..
where naota and haruko argue amoungst themself's,
about a more pressing matter..
Haruko screeming at him in shock
Haruko : "It's the curse I tell you.!"
she then makes faces at him
Haruko : "OOOOOHOHOHHOHHHH!!!!"
using ghostly voices and trying to make him scarred..
but naota doesnt budge or fall for it.. not one bit.
Naota : " Don't tell me what I know..
and I know, it's not a curse..!!!"

she stands there pointing at noata,
his arm's now a brownish gold color.
naota : " I don't even know, what your talking about.
so my arm's are gold, I'm still feeling normal.."

He calmly speaks back at her, His face filled with frustration
she then takes his hand, and holds it in her hand looking at him..
Haruko : "relax..ok it's not the end of the world,
just your avrage discoloration of the skin..
it's from stress, or so atomsk would of put it.."
Haruko look's down at his hands, and says..
Haruko : " You know on my planet,
We would shine a very beautiful bluish grey.
It's unknown to me, how or why.. so many had this effect."

She then looks out,
toword's the window of the kitchen. outside, to the sunlit sky..
Haruko : " years went by, as my society evolved.
we helped eachother,
advancing as much as our potential,
and technology, would let us.."

She look's away, ashamed..
A depressed look, now appears on her face..
as tears stream down.
she then begins to reviel to him her origion.
Haruko : "I.. loved, him..
His powers we're like none I've ever seen..
I've desired it, craved it.. like a sexual, desire..
So I could do, the same thing..

Destroy medical mechanica, before they destroyed our race.."
naota look's back to her..
Naota : "our, race.?"

Haruko looks back down, noticing he was starring the whole time..
not wanting him to look at her.
Haruko : "...we. ..we we're betrothed..
The exact same moment, medical mechancia attacked..
the day we we're attacked..
my father promised me away to him.. on my 16th birthday.. "

Naota, slightly puzzled look's to haruko.
then speaks with the same sort of tone.
Naota : " wait.. a, minute.. ?

your telling me.. you were, to marry atomsk..?
before medical mechanica, attacked you're planet.?"

haruko look's down a bit, in shame..
then looks back to him, in a more serious manor..
She, looking into his eye's..
saying things, in a more softer voice then before..
almost pleading, with the young man..
Haruko : "please, naota.. I want to make mother pay.."
he then cups a hands into her's,
naota looking quietly at her.
naota - this man, came into her life..
and at the very same moment, her life was taken away.. -

Naota continues listening to her, every word..
Haruko : "for the sake of the universe,
and others like us.. please, naota..."

she holds him in her arm's, naota still slightly puzzled..
at what she was explaining to him..

squeezing tightly, not wanting to ever let go of him..
she pleads with the young king.. and makes her request..

Haruko : "I'm..so tired, just ..tired.
- as haruko cries into naota, naota's face fill's with confussion.. -

" All this running, and for what..? atomsk, "
- all naota can do is listen to this phrase..

Haruko : "..how do you live..?
knowing, so many other's have died for you..? "

she collapses into naota's arm's, crying her heart out to him....
All he could do, at that moment.. was hold her.
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( ATOMSK )
" Naota,
from the beginning..

I forsaw you, destined for great things....

Even haruko, has her place..by your side..
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OST - The Pillows : Last Dinosaur -
( Next Episode. )
Haruko : "..you know the beginning,
and of how.. everything, happoned..
with everyone gathered, this is our end of revised session : A..

next week, we'll be taking you back to the main plotline..

naota has saved the earth, but at what price..?
find out on the next, fooly cooly - 2nd comming..
Act 56 : - just, another day.. -

Haruko : " This turn of events, is gonna lead to something big.! "
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-Till the next act. -

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

well people ?
the long awaited act is finally here, so enjoy..
things will get alot more interesting from here on out.
now begins the most exilerating battle of all time.

FLCL 2nd comming.
Saga 4 : Galactic revelations.

hope this bestill's you're warped, and deranged minds.
*N.O._Creator_ATOMSK*
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OST - none.
Eri : " Previously on - FL CL 2nd comming.. "

Suddenly naota look's up to the sky,
in a fit of rage and scream's..
His tone, high and loud enough for the entire city to hear..

Neota : -A long and blood curdling scream,
with the echo of the phoenix. -

Naota now feeling the torment, of killing someone off..
the emotional pain, finally get's to him..

As naota reverts, to his normal self..
And soon begins to cry..
..when all the sudden, the citizen's begin to cheer..


Citizen's of maybase : " band, 5... band, 5.... band, 5.... band, 5.... "

amarao speak's through the compad,
as Eri picks it out of naota's pocket..


Amarao waving from one of the only, standing buildings..

Eri presses the send button..- Beep -

Amarao : " best to take the next day off, kid..
we're not out of the woods, just yet.."
Eri simply leaves it on..

Haruko speaks out of thought.
Haruko : "eh, it was nothin.."

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Eri : " And now, the conclusion.. "
-Two days.. till arrival -
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OST : Bleach -on the pricepice of defeat. -

Eri :" ..if you can hear me.. I'm here, naota -kun.."

Atomsk : ..you must.. ..endure the pain..
..naota -sama.. ..you must..

Naota, for the past few hour's.. has been asleep..

..his dream's, a limitless void of flashes.. and events..
..past.. ..preasent.. ..and future..

Eri : " I'm not, letting go.."

Naota - ..so much, loss.. ..so much, pain..
Why does the world, cry to me so..?
it's like.. ..like a scarred child, alone in the universe..
..how can I, endure it all.? -

Atomsk : " you must.. ..try. "

Atomsk tries to calm him,
and aid him douring the endurance.. of the eon, flux..

naota " ..all this time, i've been trying..
fighting, for a better cause..

A way to end a war, that has lasted for eons..

how could I, possibly stop it.."

Eri : "I.. love you.. Naota -kun.."


Naota - ..no.. ..it's not hopeless..
..might be a long shot..
..but it's not.. ..Impossible..

Eri : " ..I can't live, without you.."


Naota - ..I've.. got to try..
..Eri.. ..Mamimi.. ..Father.. ..haruko..
..tasuku.. ..travis.. ..Avalisk..
..amarao.. ..Kit.. ..Canti..
..everyone's counting on me.. -

Eri sleeps aside of naota dreaming,
and trying to calm him phsicially..
The pain rushes through them both,
as the eon flux now passes through eri..

Eri - it hurt's him.. so much..
How could he endure this... ..without me..?

Atomsk - you're beginning, to understand again.. -

Eri : " ..who is that.?"

Mamimi an Image of a mecha,
pushes forth though a shadowless void..


Eri : " No.."

Walking forward, closer and closer..

..she slowly pulls her weapon out..

The cold stare never, leaving her face..

...the cigarette, slowly burning away..

Eri : " it.. ..it just, can't be.."

Looking cold, and dead toword's him.. speaking, only one phrase..
she slowly raises it, looking down to naota..
Mamimi : " tak -kun, must die.." -BANG-

- SNAP -
Naota : " AAHH ! "
- ERI, NO ! -
Eri : " AAHH.! "
- ERI, NO ! -
- but, there was nothing else.. only silence.. -
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
Fourth opening
( NIGHTMARE : THE WORLD. )
- Donation ! n.n thank you. -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite.. And
**Shrio Sagisu**

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 3 * The Maybase Menace..
ACT 56 : - Just another day -

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OST : *NEW Bleach - Blast !

As the three pods race ahead, towords a spiraling galaxy..

there speed's glide along, on there ploted course..

Steadfast and strong, they continue in hyperspace..

they now enter, our galaxy..
..heading to there final destination..

..EARTH..

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OST : *Original - The Pillows : Fool, on the planet..
( Earth : Nandaba's backery, Maybase Tokyo )

Naota - As part of the day off,
I kept thinking to myself about the vision Eri shared with me.
Mamimi wasn't an enemy.. nor was she to blame, for our image..
It simply was the effects of the flux, when eri touched me..
That derived our thoughts, towords one of our friends..

No..? maybe it was toki, and jaiden's combined emotions..
that drove us, to have such a realistic vision..? -

-conversation in the background. -
Haruko : " yeah right.. taro -kun, I would of taken them both.!"
Tasuku : " Just stop alright.? I'm not gonna argue with you..
Besides..
it was I and travis that allowed naota time, to diverse toki.."

Naota : " ..haruko.. quit fighting, with tasuku.."
Eri : " I'd still debate, over the tactic..
you two, really could of gotton hurt.... "
Tasuku : - drops jaw - " But, it, was amasingly insane..!?"

Cherry : " that's the idiotic thing about it, love..
you could of killed yourself.."
Haruko : " it takes an idiot, to do cool things..
that's why it's cool.!"
Naota : " - sigh - haruko.."

Haruko : " but.. that was still, cool.!"
Eri : "naota..?"
Naota : " it's, not about the timing..
it's, not about the tactic..
it's about thinking ahead, of your enemy..
The only reason why jaiden was caught off guard,
was simply because..
Jaiden took all of his thought, to concentrate on me and toki..
travis and tasuku mearly, caught him by suprise.."

Tasuku : " still it worked, right.?"
Canti : " terraformation has both a positive and a negative,
side effect.. but, undoubtedly sir.. with, the proper training. "

Naota : " we've got three days till those signa arrive..
-gives a look-
I can't simply expunge them, like i did.. jaiden, and toki..
It's just.. - sigh - out, of the question.."

Naota : " eri, avalisk, and mamimi,
are simply not up to par right now..
we'll have to each, train them individually..
so let's go for it, now.. while there's still time.."

Tasuku : " you sure that's wise, nao -san..?
I mean.. with the media and all.."

Naota raises a hand up cutting him off..

Naota : " at times like these,
we simply can't afford to loose.."
naota stands up giving everyone, a serious expression..

Naota : " you don't have to like it..
but it's the best option we got..
..I know, you all can see that.."

Haruko grips her hips, then speaks as she lean's over..

Haruko : "Think of the bright side of things nao -san..
you freed atomsk, gained his powers, obtained the eye,
met a timelord, destroyed several threats,
and obtained the earth's terminal core..!"

Naota - good thing, amarao has it conceled.
god knows what'll happon if the droids get ahold of it..
I'm suprised though.. canti, never sought after it.. not once.. -

Naota : " it's.. not, enough.."
Eri : " you have us too, nao -san.. for support.."

Haruko : " yeah, that's right.."

Haruko : " I mean, aside of the pupil..
the housemaid robot,
the annoying older brother,
-tasuku sigh's "..haruko.."
you're overly emo girlfriend over there,
the suisidal best friend,
the angrey jelious rival,
and the overly annaylistic alien sidekick..
I think you pritty much, came out ahead.."

Naota grunts then speaks..
Naota : " you know ? I'd really like to see you say that,
after holding you're own for an entire day.."

haruko, now trying to make some punch, in a pitcher of water..
speaks as she begins to open the package of instant..
Haruko : " ..try me..
- utter's under breath -
I didn't spend the last of my energy, erasing two beings.."
Tasuku : " haruko, will you stop it.?!"

Haruko : " SHUT up taro- kun..
if it wasn't for me to begin with,
naota wouldn't be standing here.."

Naota - she was right..
ever since haruko came into my life,
these strange events continue to unfold around me..
every battle i fought, she was helping me..
haruko had become just as essencial in my life,
as i was.. in her's..
Somewhere underneath that harsh extirior,
beat the heart.. of someone, caring.. -

Haruko " you wanna wear this, taro -kun.?
or, you gonna shut up.!?"

Tasuku : " don't ..you..dare.."

haruko gives a deviant smierk,
before throwing the pitcher towords tasuku..
-Splash -

Tasuku : " FUCK, HARA -SAN ! "

Cherry : " ewww, it got all over me.."

Naota - it's.. nice, to know.. someone out there, cares.. -

Eri nudges naota, as he looks towords them..
he begins to chuckle, as eri laughs..

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FL CL - 2nd comming - ( Two days, twelve hours..)
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OST : *Bleach - Citadel of the bountou
( Milky way galaxy : destination, Earth.. )

As the pod's continue to race on..
dravendell is seen in the middle the pod..

It lights up, with an aray of blinking buttons and lights..
we soon see the all too rememberable smierk,
as she opens her eyes..
the void of space, surrounded by an aray of streaks.

Dravendell : " we're off, by a day or two.."
- makes me kind of wonder if mother's technology,
is becomming a bit defective.. - "..WAKE UP.."

Zeros : "- yawns - ..report, D.."
Dravendell : " I' awoke out of stasis, a little early.. "

Zeremus does some form of recalabration, from his console..
Zeremus : " our course, is still set..
we should be comming about the solarsystem.. ..now."
as he snaps his fingure's.. the solar system, comes into view..

Dravendell : " once we're on the planet,
we're to find any remaints of the.."

She looks as they begin to pass by remaints, of the sufficator..
bit's and pieces of debrie, continue to pass by them..
as they stare in silent awe..

Dravendell : " ..terminal, core.."

-look of suprise-
Zeros : " wasn't that.? "
- deviant smierk -
Zeremus : " heh, so.. the kitty got spanked.."

Dravendell - he defeated the kazar, just that quick..
Mother's become slow for her age,
she doesn't realize this kid's potential..
Still, there's only three of them..

I wonder how our king will stand,
aginst a few thousand droids..?
With an armada like this, who could stand aginst us.? -

Zeros : " I'll try to create some form of tactic,
to fend off aginst these creatures..
- continues to calculate, on his console.. -
Meantime, why don't you two rest some more.. "

Dravendell : " I'm awake now..
it's not like, I can sleep anymore..
- sigh -might as well plan strategy.."
Zeros : " I concur, the last planet was nearly wiped out..
because of zeremus's, ..more primal instincts.."
Zeremus now recieves the data, zeros sends..
he decypher's the data with an angrey thought..
Zeremus - stupied kid.. where the hell does he get off, anyways.? -

Dravendell : " zeros..
bring the synopsis of the last two battles on earth, into view.."
Zero : " compliance.."

Dravendell : " they don't know.. we don't know..
we'll leave it at that.. for now.."
- there's gotta be some form of weakness, to there attacks.. -
as the pods continue, to there destination..
dravendell now becomes perplexed.. by the up comming, event.

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(Tokyo forests : Northern district..)
OST : NEW *Death note : L's theme.

Naota - training, it's all we ever do anymore..
Aside of taking odd shifts at the backery,
we're barly making ends meet.
Tasuku continues to smile about it..
but i know, when somethings bothering him..

underneath that tough extirior, i understand brother..
your worried, we're gonna go under..

Well, at this rate.. we just might..
With the city nearly demolished,
the only things left standing..
are the mitsumaki corp, and the iron facillity..

Eri's doing alot better she's even had tasuku,
running for his money..
Haruko still spazzes about it, from time to time..
she tell's eri to never loose her spirit..
I'm still worried, she may end up in my position..

Eri is slammed aginst the tree, as naota continues to watch..
she shakes the hit off, and wheilds the rickenbacker once more.
Tasuku looking on, with a smierk.
Eri then urges forth, tasuku gliding back as she lays into him..

she continues with her assault on tasuku,
as the rest of the crew watch on..

Mamimi, cleaning her guns turn's to watch..
as her back is pressed, aginst naotas.
They sitting, with back's aginst eachother..

Mamimi : - you're worried that the world's going to fall apart,
and you won't be there in time..
to keep it, from doing so..heh,
typical hero shit.. can't say I blame you, though.. -
Naota sighs, then continues with there thought conversation.

Naota : " why do i get the sudden feeling you're gonna say,
I told you so.?"
mamimi giggles a bit then stands up, after locking her case..
she simply smiles to him, and saunters off towords avalisk..
avalisk on the other side practices the chords,
naota has taught him thus far..

Naota - i had almost forgotton.. the notes.. the rift's..
I'm worried for everyone..
what if one of them got in the way,
while i was erasing an enemy..? -

Tasuku deflect's eri's attack again..
then out of stress speaks..
As eri lay into tasuku, with a barrage of attacks.
- SLAM -

Tasuku : " I'm..
not worried, about the backery.. naota.. -SLAM -
I'm worried.." -SLAM, BASH - "..ABOUT.. "
-SLAM, SLAM.. BASH, SLAM, BASH !!- " ..DAD! "

Tasuku is tripped by eri who tries to come down hard,
missing and upheaveling ground..
tasuku flashes out of sight before the strike,
eri hitting only hard ground..
then reappears behind haruko and pushes her out..

Tasuku : " tag, you're it.."

Haruko grunts then steps forward..
eri silently, wheilding her weapon..
Haruko roll's her eyes, and keeps her silence..
Eri still keeping her ground..
Haruko simply look's towords her, with cold eyes..
eri doesn't back off..

Haruko : " now that's, annoying girl.." -continues to stare-
Eri : " what, afraid of a little competition.?" -grins a bit.-
Haruko : " noooo... but you seem, hell bent today..
i'm not looking to get bashed around.. "

Naota : " haruko san.. train, with eri kun..
I'd like to see you two, just once.. " -smiles..-
Tasuku : " come on, hara san.. three days..
do you really wanna repeat, of what just happoned.? "
Haruko : " ..no.."
Tasuku : " then we gotta give it, our all.."

Eri : " he's right.. if we all don't do something..
This world's gonna go flat."
Haruko : " ok.. -sigh-
you got me, there.. let's do this.." -smierks-
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OST : *Bleach - comical world..
Haruko : " you gonna just stand there all day?
or are you gonna move, girl.?"
Eri : " ok.. here i come."
-clashing, as she forces haruko back -
Haruko : " huh.. you know I thought training,
was supposed to make you stronger.."
-forces eri back with a vengance -

Haruko : " heh, guess i was.. mistaken.."
Eri : - that little,' cocky bitch.. -
-flashes out of sight.. -
Haruko look's behind her, but doesn't move a muscle..
untill eri reappears, trying to strike downward..
Haruko : " hey, that's TAK -KUN'S MOVE.?!"

Avalisk : " that was pritty cool.."
Naota - eri knows, the flashstep ?! -
Tasuku - eri knows, flash step ?! -
Canti : " very impressive, miss -eri.."
Mamimi : - whines -" I wanna know, how to do that."

Eri flip's and slides to a hault.. still holding her guitar.
Eri : " pritty impressive, i know... but that isn't all.."
Tasuku : " NOT ALL.?!?"
Avalisk : " ..there's more..?"
Naota - don't over, do it.. love.. -

Eri - trust me, nao -kun.. -

Eri rushes towords haruko once more,
then abruptly flashes out of sight..

Only to reappear to strike haruko..
Eri fading back into sight just in time.

Haruko flips rolls, and slap's into a tree..
she soon begins to slide downward, slowly..
Haruko : " ooooughh.."
- slipping sounds,THUD. -

Tasuku simply stares in amazement..
Tasuku - holy shit.. i didn't even see it comming?! -

Naota - laughs -" very good, eri kun.." -clap clap clap-
Eri smiles and bows, as naota claps..
Haruko : " hey.. why are you laughing.?"
- cold stare -

Naota : " now, you, know.. how it, feels." -laugh's harder -

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OST : NEW *Bleach - Into the storm..
Haruko then becomes, strikingly angered..
Haruko : " fine takkun.. you wanna train, too.?
let's go.. you, an me.."
she points to him,
then points a thumb towords her chest.
she, cocking the gibson on her hip as she speaks...

Haruko : " come on takkun.. - gives a look -
..that is, unless your chicken -shit.."

Naota gives a stare,
as if he's never been insulted by haruko before..
eri backs away slowly, as does tasuku..

both staring to naota's, angered expression..
Naota : " I was told, to take today off..
but you just had to pick today, to give me holy hell.. ..didn't'cha..?"

Haruko yawn's and gives naota, the fingure..

Naota stand's up gripping his guitar, and un-shoulder's it.
Haruko : " well I gotta keep you on you're toes,
somehow ..don't I.?"

Naota : " well.. you did say..
you had a few tricks, up you're sleave..
let's see youre terraformation, hara -san.."

Haruko : " I'm not gonna reviel it so easily, tak -kun..
..you're really gonna haf'ta.. turn up the heat, on me.."

Naota : " well.. if it's heat you want.. " - deviant smierk. -
- gives a deviant stare -
Naota : " essance of excelcia.. ..sublime limelight.."
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OST : Bleach - burden of the past.

Haruko : " simply amazing, tak -kun.."

Neota : " I know.. "

Naota reviels himself,
speaking with the merged voice, of him and atomsk..

Soon nothing but silence, between the two..

As the crew look on in silent awe.

Tasuku Eri

Avalisk Mamimi

Canti Kitsurubami

Amarao Travis

As naota and haruko face eachother..
Naota charges up power, as haruko simply stand at the ready..
Haruko speaks..
Haruko : " this is becomming interesting.. "
Naota : "oh you really like it..? how's this..? raaahh! "

As the force grow.. his power impecable.. incomprehensable..

Tasuku - Unfathemable.. -

Travis - Incredible.. -

Both - his body can hold that much stress,
and still take a major beating.. -

Eri simply stares, in silent awe.
- slow silent gasp -

Haruko stands at the ready..
gripping her guitar and raising it, to point towords naota.

Haruko : " well ? come on, I ain't got all day.."

Neota : " I'm waiting, on you.. " -deviant grin -

Haruko : " well in that case..
guess I should show you my next form, after a little test.. "

Tasuku : " haruko has another form.!?"
Travis : " we each hold, a diffrent form..
each one of us,
who has broken the channel and freed our minds..
eri.. naota's potential.. even you, tasuku.."
Tasuku : " i had to train for ten years, to get that form..
Takes even longer, to controll it.."
Travis : " i understand the stress level,
is too hard on you're body.."
travis point's to naota, and then to haruko..

Travis : " but look at the differenties, of the two..
naota's power flow's, expanentially..
whille haruko's is controlled, at a steady rate..
haruko's had more time, with her form..
Naota, is just starting out.. You see how I figure it.. ?"

As travis explains this,
haruko begins to resonate exactly how he predicted.
Tasuku, catches on quickely..

Tasuku : " he's right.. naota's power is raising, off the chart..
but haruko's barly putting, anything out.
she hides her level.. but in naota's case,
he doesn't have to.. "
As they spar and clash there collision of levels,
overwhelms the other..
haruko is sent, flying back. she flips and lands, on a knee..
angerly looking towords naota.

Travis : " exactly.. with that kind of confidence,
a hero would normally take on anyone..
but something perplexes me.."
- Naota's elemental power, is spirit basied..
with holy power, at you're command..
why doesn't he simply, destroy them now.?
whille there on, there way here..? -

- a paging sound comes, from travis's breast pocket.. -

Travis : " oh, i've gotta go..
seem's the decyphering is complete..
..keep at it you two, i'll return within the hour..! "
Haruko : " where you go'in? we're just getting started..?!"
Travis : " if you want tactics,
i'll have them soon.. till then, have fun. "

Neota : " haruko.. nevermind travis..
he has things to attend to.. we, have our own matters.."
Haruko shakes her head and speaks..
Haruko : " sorry, i'm spacing.."

Neota : " you can't do that, douring battle..
Travis knows alot more about battle, then us..
so shouldn't we worry about bringing ourselves up to par..
with him.? "

Haruko : " you're right, tak -kun..
screwing off, isn't going to help anymore..
we need to exercise with caution, too.. "
Neota :" it's gonna be hard, - sigh - on all of us.."
Haruko : " damn right, it's gonna be hard..
but just remember.. you can't hurt, steel.." - grins -
Neota : - deviant grin -
" ..now that's a tune, anyone could love..
Now let's see it, hara -san.!!"

Haruko :" ESSANCE OF SANSABOS : CRYSTALUS, OF GAIA.."

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- To be continued -

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

well another weekend flies by us,
with no problems what so ever..
this weeks act is entitled :
- Gaia's Gift.? - the mechanical menace, returns.

I'll keep trying to post these weekly..
but so far, ..not so good..
Enjoy.


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( Earth : Forests of tokyo )

OST : *New bleach : Into the storm - shiro sagisu.

*Previously on FL CL - 2nd comming..

Naota : " with toki and jaiden defeated,
and the terminal core whole again..
we look forward, to only two days left..

We continue to harness our power, for the battle ahead..
..the treterous road, we all follow.. ...has only, just begun..."

Travis : " oh, i've gotta go.. seem's the decyphering is complete..
..keep at it you two, i'll return within the hour..! "

Haruko : " where you go'in? we're just getting started..?!"

Travis : " if you want tactics,
I'll have them soon.. till then, have fun. "

Neota : " haruko.. nevermind travis..
he has things to attend to.. we, have our own matters.."

Haruko shakes her head and speaks..
Haruko : " sorry, i'm spacing.."

Neota : " you can't do that, douring battle..
Travis know's alot more about battle, then us..
so shouldn't we worry about bringing ourselves up to par, with him.? "

Haruko : " you're right, tak -kun..
screwing off, isn't going to help anymore..
we need to exercise with caution, too.. "

Neota :" it's gonna be hard, - sigh - on all of us.."

Haruko : " damn right, it's gonna be hard..
but just remember.. you can't hurt, steel.." - grins -

Neota : - deviant grin -
" ..now that's a tune, anyone could love.. let's see it, hara -san.!!"

Haruko summon's as much resonance, as she can muster..
as she glares towords naota.. she scream's out..

Haruko :" ESSANCE OF SANSABOS : CRYSTALUS, OF GAIA.."
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Naota : "And now.. the conclusion.."

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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **

( NIGHTMARE : THE WORLD.)
- Donation ! n.n thank you. -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite.. And
**Shrio Sagisu**

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 3 * The Maybase Menace..

ACT 57 : - Gaia's gift. . . . ? -
( One day.. fourteen hours.. 13:59 :59.. 58.. 57.. 56..)
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OST : *Bleach - dodo dance

(Earth : Maybase/Forests of tokyo )

Mamimi : " woah.. that's incredible.."
Tasuku : " she's.. completly, changed..?!"

Avalisk : " ..nice out-fit.. " - drops jaw -

As the rolling wind's blow the impalement of smoke away,
haruko is revieled in a yellow outfit..

the black stalking's, yellow flack jacket, and pink knickers
Make haruko look, completly diffrent..
her hair is longer, and more full.
bushing out, then falling down streight around her sides..

The gibson.. has also changed..
More darker, almost.. blackish red...

Haruko : " terraformation.. -sigh - gotta, love the feel.."
as she streches, she poses.. in a seductive appeal..

Haruko : " gotta break these legs in, quick.. before, they arrive.."

Neota : " hey.. you gonna sit, and love youreself all day ?!
..or, we gonna train.?"

haruko : " I'm not as spunky, as you right now..
but I guess this is what atomsk referred to, by.. gaia's gift..
..Feel's so comfortable.. - gasp's - "

haruko continues to feel herself..
eri and mamimi both gocking, towords her
Eri drops her jaw, before speaking.
Eri : " women, have you no shame..?!"
Haruko gives a sinfull look towords her, and speaks..
Haruko : " heh, shame.. is only in the mind. ..i feel like stripping.."
Naota stares in suprise..
but catches on, to the reaction she was having.
Neota : " wait a minute, i get it now.. haruko, revert..!"
Haruko gives a kiss towords naota, then speaks..
Haruko : " no.."

Mamimi, catches on quick trying to calm haruko, down.
Mamimi : " if you don't revert, you're gonna overflow.."

Haruko :" and if i don't keep doing what i am,
i'm gonna anyways.."

Haruko is deffinetly intoxicated by the feel of the earth,
surrounding her.

Tasuku gives a bashfull look towords cherry,
who is clearly gawking in awe.
Tasuku : " cherry, i'm sorry she's acting this way.."

Cherry looks with suprise, back towords tasuku.
she, acting like it's more fun.. then a vicarious situation.
Cherry :" what's there to be sorry about..?
Woo hoo, take it off girl !! - whistles- "

Mamimi speaks, as if she wants to see more.
Mamimi : " you should save it, for later.. hara san.."


Haruko : " Alright.. -sigh- pitty though..
it's nice and warm, out here.."

Neota : " this is nice weather.. "- strip's jacket off -
Haruko : " now you're gettin it.."

Tasuku : - we've been wasting time. -

Avalisk : " ok miss stripper.. you gonna sparr with nao -sensai ?
..or am I gonna haf'ta take over..?"

Haruko : " - tisk -
well.. I do have this one move, i was gonna show you..
but, now.. that you mention it..
yeah let's pit you, aginst your mas'suer."

haruko - naota.. let's try bringing avalisk's potential out.. -

Naota - you sure, this is wise?
i mean.. eri only reciently gained, her powers..
mamimi, still is a mystery.. and avalisk, well..?
-sigh- I ..don't think, he's ready ..yet.. -

Haruko - the only way we're gonna find out, is if we try..
tasuku and I, have reciently gained our forms..
you have a choice here, naota..
I'm saying, let's go for it..
the more power, the better chance we have.. -

Naota - his mind will completly change like our have been reciently. -

Haruko - yeah i know.. but it's a risk, we just gotta take.

speaking of, which.. I.. wanna throw, a party.. ..you in.? -

Naota : " after all that's gone on, and with only two days left..
you, wanna.. throw a party.?!"
naota thinking the thought, blurts it out.. for the crew to hear.

Tasuku : " haruko !!"
Eri : " Haruko !!"
Mamimi : " Haruko !!"

Haruko : " what? i'm just saying..
..a tomarrow may never come, party.. is an awsome idea.. "
The entire crew think on the thought, for a moment..
haruko grin's and folds her arms inward..

thee of them soon speak, the same thought at once.
Eri : " ..she's right.."
tasuku - she's right -
Mamimi : " she's right.."

Neota : " well.. count me in.."
haruko smiles whille forcing herself to revert,
naota does the same, but a few seconds later..

Avalisk: " but.. what, about the training..?"
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FLCL - 2nd comming..

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OST : Bleach - head in the clouds
( Earth : forests of tokyo.. )

Naota : " here, we've been training this whole time..
don't you guy's see..?
- the battle with jaiden and toki.. and with the gratze..
has all this, really been apart of what's to come.? -

Haruko : " you should rest for now..
I mean comeon.. you said it you're self, nao -san..
you we're ordered, to take the day off.."

Eri : " these signa cant be any stronger, then jaiden or toki.."

naota : " yes.. but, you didn't fight them..
I did, tasuku did, travis did..
we can't just rely, on the three of us..?"

Mamimi : " you can act like the three of you, won't cut it..
but, ..you have me.."

Haruko : " and me.."

Eri : " and me, nao san."

Avalisk : " sensai.. you wanted today off right..?
deep down, you really wanted it.. right ?

me, eri, and mamimi.. will try our best, on our own..
..you just worry, bout today ok.?"

haruko : " hey, what are you saying.. ?
you don't wanna train with us.?"

avalisk : " no,no,no.. i'm saying, let sensai relax..
and the rest of us, do the usuall..
I'm sure with all the heads, he's busted up..
he needs, a little rest.."

Naota - he's reading me, like a book.. fuck. -

eri : " well.. let's head home, for now..
i'm sure travis -kun, will have intell by tonight.."

naota - not to mention, all of our awnsers.. -

Haruko : " ok then, let's head home..
Mamimi, avalisk.. you two staying, or comming..?"

Mamimi : " i'm staying.."
Avalisk : " i'm staying.."

Haruko -heh, figures the love birds.. would flock together.. -
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FLCL 2nd - comming

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OST : *Original - Stalker, in babylon - short version -
( Above the earth : the stumi )

Amarao : " you sure, the download's complete..?"

Travis : " this time, it's for real commander.. "
Amarao : " alright let's go.. i want to see this, for myself.."

Kit : " eri says there wanting to throw a party, and we're invited.."

amarao : " tell her when and where, and we'll be there..
after the meeting at 17 hundred hours..
and make sure, everyone's here.."

Kit : " yes, sir "

Travis : " you shouldn't be, so hard on her.. she's real sweet.."
amarao : " listen, you don't tell me how to do my job..
and i won't contradict you, on your relations with her.. ok..? "

Travis : " well someone's a little cranky.."

Amarao : " you brought that damn thing, onto my ship..
i have every right, to be pissed."

Travis : " my my..
but you must remember, if we didn't conseal the core.
it would of made someone react.. and quickely, I might add.."

amarao : " you sound.. as if you ment, for this to happon.."

Travis : " that i did.. for all intent's and purpose's,
I can not discuss with you right now..
i need the compad with the mural's information, to explain.."

amarao : " this better not be one of those hell bent idea's
half backed, in that timelord head of your's.."

Travis : " so, you've noticed.."

Amarao : " forign plants, in my cargo bay..
is deffenetly a questionable action, yes.."

Travis : " there gifts, for the pristess of sillios..!"

Amarao : " it's fucking, marajunia.!!"
-Temper's raise, between the two -

amarao : " i will not have drugs, in my cargo bay.."

Travis : " ..then.. ..i'll move them, to my quarters..!"

amarao : " fine, by me.."
amarao - what the hell is he thinking, anyways..?-

Travis : " 17 hundred hours.. be in the controll room. "

amarao : " i planed to.."

Travis stomps off angered by amarao..
Travis - of all the inconcevible.. -tisk.- what am I thinking..?!
..He's got some nerv.. -


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OST : *New Death note - L's theme
( Story is paused, for the moment.. )

Eri : " nao -san, what are you doing..?
- sigh - this is like the fifth time, we've paused this?"

Naota : "I wanna take some time, to bring everyone up to speed.
Ok people.. we're gonna pause this,
till everyone get's this story streight.. "

Haruko : " - sigh - here we go again.." -roll's eyes -

Naota : " ..haruko left ten years ago,
to persue the time lord king Atomsk..

Wheilding power's of what, we call.. Nurilogical Output..

The centerpoint between, the left and right sides of the brain..
open a channel to, what we know as.. the n.o. void..

Our power's..
give us the knoweldge, of the void's temperal discharge.
and our resonance, build's through it..
we, manipulate the channel..

however, we cannot controll it..

This channel probes, or absorbs.. anything through..
from one point of the universe, to the other..
in one, instantainous, moment..

The channel on earth, could only be reached..
by us.. the few who were there,
the very first time the channel was opened..

Our essance's and our vessal's were reincarnated..
again, and again..
for eon's.. this cycle of life, and chain reaction has happoned..
and, for eon's more.. this cycle of evolution.. will continue.

Atomsk, being the lord king of desoliea..
made a prophecy, and passed it down through..
what was known, as the brotherhood..
They, were the next in line to keep the peace..
throughout the universe.. but mother, had other plans..

Mother..
A bio-cinaptic lifeform,
merged from debrie, that crashed into an asteroid..
somewhere in the unknown territories..
of the uncharted, universe..

she evoloved, from the remain's of the debrie.. and flourished..
seeking to destroy, all life..
making bio cineptic's.. perfect and absolute..
she will stop at nothing, to acheive her goal..

We as the choosen ones.. cannot allow this to happon..
We simply, will not vanish.. into the night..

smoothing out innocent planets..
goes aginst, everything a person or being stands for..

That's why we're here..
and that's why we're not giving in, so easily..
mother, may have a plan for us..

but we'll make sure it backfires.."
Haruko : " you, done?? can we continue, now?!"

Naota : " I think that set everyone, streight.."

Haruko : " good, now cough up that remote ! "
- click -

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( Above the earth : The Stumi )
OST : Original - carnival..

And so the crew gather, abord the s s stumi..
debating on what there next course of action, should be.
Travis paces around the table,
waiting on everyone to arrive..

Naota and eri, are the last to show up.. they both sit down.
And thus the meeting commences.

Travis : " everyone here? ok let's kick this off.."
travis hold's his hand out to naota, indicting he has the floor.

Naota : " we're calling one last meeting,
to deturmine the best course of action for these signa.."

Tasuku : " we all know full well of there capabillities..
but what exactly is the best course of action travis -san.?"

Travis : " the compads read out's indicate,
they are readily equiped for war. "

naota : " that compad, read out there resonance level ?"

Travis : " heh, this might come as a shaock..
but i believe mother, controlls there power level..
I believe she only gives them, what they need ..nothing more."

Haruko : " the last several encounters we ingaged,
we're mearly thwarted due to canti,
avalisk, myself, and nao -san.. "

Tasuku : " the big red machine only came into play,
when eri purged the channel.
not to mention, the phaser bot.."

Mamimi : " not once, was there any kind of warning.."
Naota : " there didn't need to be..
they come, we slay.. doesn't get any clearer then that.."

Travis : " still, we better start off with a diversion..
i believe the best way to go about that,
would be to use.. eri, mamimi, and avalisk.
The three could act, as the face of our operation.."

Tasuku : " go on.."

Travis : " eri, avalisk, canti, and mamimi..
engage the signa, whille we hide in the shadow..
charging and waiting, for a full assault."

Haruko : " taro -kun, tak -kun, you, and I.. ..hmm..
we could pull it off..
but it's gonna take alot of effort, on their part.."


Eri : " mamimi -san you, want to do this.?"
Mamimi : " i dunno..
it sounds like alot of work, covering them..
whille they secretly, store power.. "
Avalisk : " it's a one in a hundred shot, ladies.."

Travis : " on the lighter side of things,
the terminal core, is our main concern.
with the core consealed,
this ship can produce a wave of energy,
much like you described kit, as an e.m.p.

with this emp, we could blast all the droids within a 5 miles radius..
but that's going to be difficult..
they sence the core in this ship, and we're finished.."

Naota : " then we'll have to manipulate the situation,
to make them think that the core is still on earth..
so we all know what that means.. "

Crew : " keep them, from activating the facillity.."

Naota : " with all of these mishaps, happoning around the city..
we should be ready.. just don't.. over do it. none of you.."

Haruko : " with our power.. we'll make them beg.."
Tasuku : " don't get overconfident, hara -san..
These robots maybe machines, but with what i've seen so far..
i'm not liking, any of it."
cherry : " this situation seems more complicated, then it seems.. "
- or it could be me -
Naota : " never the less..
we should get these three back, to training.
avalisk, will come with me..
eri, you go with tasuku and cherry..
mamimi, travis and amarao are going to train you as best they can..
haruko, you take care of the orders for tomarrow night.. "

haruko : " right.."
she dashes out of the room, but as she does so naota speaks..

Naota : " eri kun.. you gonna be.. ok, with this.?"

Eri : " oh sure.. fighting robots of superhuman proportions,
is alwyes a norm around here.."

Mamimi : " - giggles - good -one, girl.. "

Naota : " once they break thorugh,
the atmospheric pressure will propell them down..
ground zero, will be in the center of the city.."

Avalisk : " so.. we take our stand, soon as they land."

Naota : " they, won't land.. they never, just land.."

Travis : " at any rate.. why don't we get these three, ready..
We can contact eachother, through the compads.."

Naota : " kicking us out, so soon.?"

Travis : " no.. i'm mearly pushing you out the door,
to prepare these three.. the sooner, the better.. "

- naota gives a grim look -
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FL CL - 2nd comming -

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OST : *Bleach - creeping shadows..
( Milkyway Galaxy : The Capier belt. )

As dravendell, zeros, and zeremus..
slowly make there way towords earth..

dravendell continues to watch the monitor,
to the battles that were somehow reciently recorded..

As she watches the struggles of the crew,
Turn a deadly route.

Dravendell : - this boy.. who is he..?
he's nothing like Atomsk.
even jaiden had trouble, dealing with him.
how jaiden escaped, the kelido star to begin with..
makes no sence. -

as the battle continue to rage on..
dravendell's sight look from the monitor,
to the vastness of space..
they all slowly passing through, ..the capier belt.

Dravendell :
- he's much faster, and alot stronger, then last time..
kind of makes me think about mother's action's,
toword's this primitive planet..
but the core.. they've finally restored it..

And now with it..
we can extract this planet's resources, for our own means.. -
Dravendell :" but how do we obtain it, from those kids.. ? "

Zeros : " you say somthing, D.?"

Dravendell : " ..it was nothing.. mearly, thinking of our plans.."

Zeros : " I've been doing some research,
basied on the organic life form's of this planet..
and there genetic make up, is almost exactly that..
..of the desolieans..
I propose..
a full assault, once we've reached the planet's surface..
..from there, we deluge a full invasion of the city.."

Dravendell : " sounds like,
you've been working on this for a little whille. "
Zeros : " ..thanks, I do try.." - carcasem -

Zeremus : " the abundance, of these creatures..
is almost unfathemable..
there are in totall, about 9 billion people on the surface..
and don't realize, a threat of existiance is comming in two days.."

Dravendell : " i wouldn't put too much thought, into these..
..primitive monkies.. "
Zeremus : " heh,
sounds as if you have a grudge aginst 'em now.."

Dravendell : " ..no, just one.."
- deviant smile - " ..haruko reharu.."

As the pods speed off..
dravendell's miniacle laughter, is echoed..
through the void of space..
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*To be continued *

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

i really hope everyone on the site here,
is enjoying my story thus far.
the complications of finding an anime artist,
who can depict my portraytion of each character is still in the works.

hopefully by the end of the year,
i may be able to finally come out with a manga continuation..
to this Incredible plotline, to the FLCL saga.

anyhow..
I'm going to be taking a long awaited break soon,
complications with the ost music list, have been postponed.
so no telling what i'll break out with next,
for music toward this screenplay.
related matters include, Project : *Atomsk*
And : FLCL saga 4 galactic revelations
have been postponed untill further notice.
dont fret..
I'm currently working on the problem,
and hopefully it will be fixed by winter.
till then enjoy the next few acts.
comming soon : FLCL 2nd comming Session :B Acts 15-25
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OST : Bleach : Attack on the beat.
*Previously on flcl 2nd comming..

Canti : " Naota and the other's train,
untill the arrival of medical mechanica.
Meanwhille, the download of the mural is complete..
But amarao has discovered, Travis's other ajendas. "
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Amarao : " you sure, the download's complete..?"

Travis : " this time, it's for real commander.. "
Amarao : " alright let's go.. i want to see this, for myself.."


Kit : " Naota say's there wanting to throw a party,
and we're invited.. they are going to hold it, at sunset."
amarao : " We'll be there..
after the meeting at 17 hundred hours..
and make sure, everyone's here.."
Kit : " yes, sir "

Travis : " you shouldn't be, so hard on her.. she's real sweet.."
amarao : " listen, you don't tell me how to do my job..
and i won't contradict you, on your relations with her, ok..? "

Travis : " well someone's a little cranky.."

Amarao : " you brought that damn thing, onto my ship..
i have every right, to be pissed."

Travis : " my my..
but you must remember, if we didn't conseal the core.
it would of made someone react.. and quickely, I might add.."
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Meanwhille, the signa head towords earth..
Dravendell has her own ajenda, with haruhara..

Dravendell : - he's much faster..
and alot stronger, then last time..
kind of makes me think about mother's action's,
toword's this primitive planet..
but the core.. they've finally restored it..

And now with it..
we can extract this planet's resources, for our own means.. -
Dravendell :" but how do we obtain it, from those kids.. ? "

Zeros : " you say somthing, D.?"

Dravendell : " ..it was nothing.. mearly, thinking of our plans.."

Zeros : " I've been doing some research,
basied on the organic life form's of this planet..
and there genetic make up, is almost exactly that..
..of the desolieans..
I propose..
a full assault, once we've reached the planet's surface..
..from there, we deluge a full invasion of the city.."

Dravendell : " sounds like,
you've been working on this for a little whille. "
Zeros : " ..thanks, I do try.." - carcasem -

Zeremus : " the abundance, of these creatures..
is almost unfathemable..
there are in totall about 9 billion people on the surface..
and don't realize,
a threat of existiance is comming in two days.."

Dravendell : " i wouldn't put too much thought, into these..
..primitive monkies.. "

Zeremus : " heh, sounds as if you have a grudge aginst 'em now..?"

Dravendell stay's silent for a moment,
before responding to zeremus..
Dravendell : " ..no, just one.."
- deviant smile - " ..haruko reharu.."

As the pods speed off..
dravendell's miniacle laughter, is echoed..
through the void of space..

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Eri : " and now, the conclusion.."

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OST : Original - Stalker in babylon -short dub -
( The Stumi : above the earth.. )
sitting inside small quarters, abord the stumi..
travis continues to go through the recorded footage,
of there battles..
everyone that was recorded,
travis continues to watch..
astonished by Naota's strong will, and mind.

Travis : - his precission and accuracy are both astonishing..
though.. it's as if he's completly thinking,
on an entirely diffrent level.. -

Travis continues to look over battle footage,
the stumi kept record of..
Travis - this is completly, an enigmatic situation.. -

He watches with astonishment as the footage playes out,
the final moments..
Travis - both of you knew, we'd all run into problems.
but why send me here, to this time.? ...it's almost, as if.. -
As travis turn's the monitor off,
he then gets an instantainous thought.
- SNAP -

Travis - does this mean my very existiance, was.. a fluke.?
no.. me comming here, was no mear coincidence.. -
Travis continues to scroll down, the list of file names..
untill he comes upon, a slightly odd one.

Travis - Lyra.. what, in the world.? -

Travis is puzzled by the errie file name, he then look's to the clock..

Travis - It's only 8:30 pm.. I've still got time before the party..
I suppose a little peek, wouldn't hurt.. -

Travis then begins to access the file,
but when he does the compad begins to flicker..
the screen then, shut's down..

Travis : " FUCK, ..shouldn't of done that.."
travis tosses the compad, onto the desk.. and lower's his head..
running his hands through his hair, he begins to think to himself..

Travis - tisk - figures she'd have a failsafe encryption, on the file..-

Travis quietly think's grim thoughts to himself,
as he lowers his head..
the cargo dock stayes silent,
whille travis continues his frustrating thoughts.

Travis - damn it.. now what do I do.? -

but as travis thinks to himself, the compad begins to reboot.
the screen flickers then begins to redirect it's self..
Travis's face lights up a bit to the sight,
then begins to scroll through.

Travis - almost thought for a second, it died on me. -

Travis begins to close out the programs, he was currently using..
folding the compad back up, fitting it into his pocket..
he then look's to the clock, once more..

Travis - 8:35, ..well I still got time.. -
travis begins to walk out..
but as he does, douglas amarao walks around the corner..
Obviously with something on his mind.

Travis - oh shit, here we go again.. -

Amarao : " you have any luck yet, decyphering that thing.? "

Travis : " yeah.. i'm done.
but there's a few, problems..
once we downloaded the information,
we've seemed to come acrossed a number of files,
that have encryptions of there own.."

Amarao : " so what's the problem, hack them.. ?"

Travis : " easier said then done..
these files have spacific encryptions,
that allow the compad to reboot once you open the file..
i seriously don't think, there is a way in.."

Amarao : " so you giving up, or waiting.?"

Travis : " hard to tell at this point. I do however,
have the information of the signa and there attributes. "

amarao : " good that'll give us a little insight.."

Travis : - yeah.. the little I can access, isn't enough.. -

amarao : " keep working on it.. we're bound to reviel something.."

Travis - i'm going to smoke.. - sigh -
all this stress, is freaking me out. -
Amarao : " if you're gonna smoke,
I'd suggest the cargo bay area's.. smoking lounge.."
Amarao speak's whille giving travis, a very harsh look..

Travis : " -sigh - as usuall.. i'll abide.."
Travis tip's his hat to the commander,
as amarao watches travis head back to his quarters..
the timelord humming a slightly familier tune, whille he pace..

Amarao continues to watch the timelord leave the area..
Feeling relief, Douglas begins to think to himself..
Douglas : - ..I won't ever shake this errie feeling,
I keep getting from him..
But I'll continue to bide my time,
-sigh - the kid needs as many eyes around him.. as possible.. -

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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
Fourth, opening.
( NIGHTMARE : THE WORLD. )
- Donation ! n.n - thank you -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite.. And
**Shrio Sagisu**

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I made this in tribute, to you.. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 3 * The Maybase Menace..

ACT 58 : -Tomarrow, may never come. -
( 5hrs : 32mins : 33sec.. 32.. 31.. 30.. 29.. )
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OST : Original - The pillows : Fool, on the planet. -short dub -
( Maybase Tokyo : Nandaba's backery )

Naota - Life never get's any easier, does it.?
you get up, brush you're teeth, get dressed..
and.. if you're luckey enough,
you can ither catch ten minutes of the local news..
or eat something, before rushing out the door to work..

You chance everyday, taking a risk, and stepping forward..
you live you're life, in security..
safe from the danger's the universe, hides..

With less then a day left,
before the arrival of medical mechanica..
Everyone thought haruko's idea of throwing a party,
was the right choice..
kind of hard to believe,
concidering her spazzmatic intuitivness..

Gaku, sota, and taru are helping us..
but as to why they we're invited..
was totally, and completly, eri's idea..
with everyone, keeping tabs on eachother..
it's kind of easier to do things, and live our lives..
But..
the effects of the n.o. could change that, ..at any givin moment..

Haruko : " Nao -san.. hand me the tape..?"

Naota : " here.."

- strip, snip.. - haruko rubs the tape, onto the new banner..
hanging above the middle, of the front door.

Haruko look's on, with pride..
Haruko : " There what do yah think, takkun.?"

The banner read's.
- Tomarrow, may never come.. party in back. -

Naota : " good theme.."
Haruko : " eh.. usually you want to get away, from these things..
but this, is a statement.." - grins -
Naota : " yeah, but it's infront of my house.."

Haruko : " duh.."

Naota : " - sigh - we should really start, grilling..."

Haruko : " Tasuku's taking care of that.."

Naota : " ok, well, how about the liqour.?"

Haruko : " Eri, and mamimi -san.."
Naota ponders another thought.

naota : " cups, and plates.?"

Haruko : " avalisk, and canti -kun.."


Naota : " then, what are we gonna do.?"

Haruko : " well, what do yah' think we're gonna do..?
wait for them to show up, and plan a simple.. side strategy.."

Naota - what are you thinking? -

Haruko : " my sister, and two other beings.. of emmense n.o. ?
come on takkun, I thought you knew better.. "

Naota : " well..? spit it out already."

Haruko : " my sansabos and you're excelcia,
team up aginst those signa..
we turn the tables after we have them cornered. "

Naota : " interesting, but shouldn't we use this, as a last resort.? "

Haruko : " do you wanna save the earth, or not..? "

Naota : " well of course.."

Haruko : " then let me discribe it, in another method.."

Naota - wait, what am I thinking?!
..going along with hara -san's idea, is suiside!!! -
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..FL CL 2nd comming..

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OST : Original - The pillows : Carnival - LP version -
(The Party.. )
As we look into the crew,
now out in the back yard of the nandaba's backery..
haruko raises her glass, and begins to speak..
everyone attending, join's in on the toast.

Haruko : - Aheam -" ..Tomarrow, may never come."

Crew : " ...Tomarrow, may never come. "

Avalisk : my mother would trip balls, if she caught me drinking. "
Mamimi " you're mother, needs to trust you a little more.. "
Avalisk : " if only she'd seen, the things we've seen..
Then maybe she would understand.."
Naota : " you're not gonna get tanked, are you? "
Avalisk : " nah.. I'll pace myself..
I'm still anxious, for the comming battle."

Tasuku : " everyone is..
but hey, least we're making the best of things.."

Naota passes a lit joint, from mamimi to eri..
Naota " eri, it's youre hit.."
Eri : " I'll take that, thank you.."
Mamimi : " ..my shit not good enough for you, tak kun.?"
Naota : " I'm just, not in the mood right now. "

Eri - I can't relate right now, nao -san.. -

Canti : " would sir like, another drink.?"
Naota : " no thank you, canti.."
Gaku : " i still don't get why they keep comming..
it's like a consistiant nightmare, that never stops.. "
Sota : " and the city, has suffered enough..
maybe, too much.."

Taru : " least the terrorist is gone..
we don't have to worry about those guys anymore.. "

Amarao : " medical mechanica is a race of mechas..
even if that girl fell into coma,
she's still got alot of information leaking to the brotherhood."
Naota : - that's right.. i almost forgot about her..
heather's laying on the stumi, uncontious..
I killed her older brother, ..took his life, as if it ment nothing..
..it was too scary.. -

Kamon : "I still don't see what the big deal is about this,
..timeline..
I mean if it's possible, everyone has the use of it..
and can predict, from it.. then why not, learn to controll it..?"

Tasuku : " only atomsk had the power over time and space.. "

Amarao : " only atomsk can teach naota, his hidden potential..
travis nor I, posess enough knoweldge of the desolieans..
to give naota what he needs.."

Travis : " you're wrong commander..

Travis : " I have here, a manual.. left by, atomsk himself..
the information stored within the mural,
revieled a number of files that are still unaccessible..
and I no longer have the time now, to hack into the encryptions."

Amarao : " travis has been doing his part,
since you've come back here, naota.. I believe him..
and I think, we're gonna have to wing this next battle ourselves. "
- as much as he's an asshole, and is self centered..
I know this is the right choice.. -

Gaku : " sota, taru, and myself.. are the only ones,
who havn't been exposed to the n.o. channel..
why exactly, is that.?"

Haruko : " it's simple really, -sip's her drink -
you wern't around naota, whille atomsk was fused with him..
- sip's again -
you also wernt around, when eri was exposed..
then there was mamimi san's, exposure..
you pritty much missed out, on it all.."

Naota : " yeah but if they continue to hang around us,
The channel could change that at any givin moment.."
Tasuku : " that's not true, nii -san.."
Naota look's to tasuku, as he speaks..

Tasuku : " the channel is very depictive, on whom it chooses..
Each one of us who's been exposed, has there own destiny..
not just you..
i do too, so does eri..
we just havn't hardened our resolve,
and found out our purpose.."

Mamimi : " and thus.. the chain reaction, began.."

Gaku : " incredible.. that's a great story.."
Sota : " yeah.."
Taru : " ..." - silent awe -

Kamon : " my story is going great, too..
i've slightly altered the plot a bit too..
but it's basicly basied on you guys.."

Naota : " wow, dad.. I didn't know I inspired you like that.."
Eri grip's naota's hand, as they sit together.. naota speaks..

Kamon wraps his arm around, miyu.. miyu sit's closer to kamon.
Kamon : " miyu and i feel that this was, the best thing to doo.."

miyu blushes and waves her hand, before speaking.
Miyu miyu : " it was more you're father's idea..
-look's to kamon -
I only hope claria feel's right about us, kamon kun.."

Tasuku smiles and grip's cherry's hand, tightly.
Tasuku : " mom would be happy, for you two.."

Naota smiles, having the one good thought.
..out of a million bad ones...
Naota - ..mother.. -

As the night progress on, the crew continue on with there party.
as we see the flickering illumination,
of the heavens in the night time sky.
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Later, that night..
( Forests of tokyo : Maybase )

OST : Original*The pillows.. Hybrid rainbow.. - short dub -
Eri grip's onto naota,
as they ride through the vastness of the forests of tokyo..
they headding to a secluded spot, of eri's own choosing.

Eri : " this way.."
Naota sigh's before asking..
Naota : " ok.. but, where are we going..?"

Eri : " you'll see.."
Naota : " ok.."

Eri : " by the way, don't let anyone know where we're going..
it's my own personal little spot.. "

Naota : - eri's been so privet with her thoughts, lately..
aside of reading her, she's choosen to hide herself..
untill this night..
why now.. did she choose to reviel her heart to me..?
we went to her spot it was a vast valley..
trees lined the inside,
as the mountains covered the vally's hillside..
snow covered the tip's just right..
you couldn't tell where the water ended, and the sky began..
The moon, was almost full.. -

naota look's onto the vast sight,
amasied about the serene caption of there surroundings.

Naota : " this is amasing.."
Eri talks to naota as he looks out onto the valley
Eri : " there's somthing I want you to know, naota..
Naota turn's to look, as eri begins to undress herself.
Naota : " what's tha.."
Eri walks slowly up to him.. then begins to embrace him.
Eri : "no matter what.. I'm not leaving you.. ever.. "
They kiss..
Naota : - eri.. -

Naota - but..
here we were, she revieling everything of herself to me..
the experience was amazing..

she said i was a romantic, for doing this..
I just kept thinking, if I didn't have her..
how much diffrent would my life really be..?

for the time,
i felt almost relieved after making love to her..
she truly knew how I felt and, what I was thinking..

aside of haruko and mamimi,
she was real.. and.. she was mine.. -

Eri : " oh, - GASP - NAO SAN.! "

Naota : " eri -san.."
-And I.. am her's.. -

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( Forests of tokyo : Maybase )

OST : Dark-one's *Bleach
Naota naota open's his eyes, to view eri ontop of him..
he glances slightly to her left side,
to the three stars glowing brighter by the second..

Eri looks to him, as they continue to make love..
but then begins to notice the sudden errie expression,
on his face..
she begin's to get the feeling of fear,
as he look's high above..
he now begin's to move her out of the way..
As naota Speaks, the nervousness clear in his tone..
Naota : " there ..almost here ?!"
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FL CL 2nd comming - The Invasion..
OST : *Bleach -
thanks shrio, for the allowance of.. - INVASION.


From the gaze of space, the earth slowly rotates..
as the pods slowly collide with the atmosphere..
they white scrapings of the oxygen,
begin to disintigrate the cold rock..

and heat up the metal's underneath..

the pods rocket, towords the earth.
whille doing so the debrie of the pods brushes off,
and crumbles away revieling a metallic dark color..
all three break through, and begin to rush forward..
the gavitonic pull, racing there shuttles downward.

Naota begins to walk forward as haruko and travis soon join him..
soon everyone is positioned.. - ground zero.. -

Eri, avalisk, and mamimi covering the front lines..
along with nicole, and douglas..
the crew gather and prepare, there assault.
Travis looks onward as they begin to rush downward..
and propell towords maybase..
amarao : " Here they come.. !"
Eri - .. I think, I can.. I think, I can.. -
Mamimi - fooly.. cooly.. fooly.. cooly.. -

Avalisk - first, I'm'n'a squash the biggest one i see.. -
haruko -..nao san.. hope you're prepared.. -
Naota " ..don't any of you, die on me.."
Crew : "Right."

-Thrunderous collision with the earth.. -

soon..
nothing but silence follow.
as the pod's sit erect from the ground..
the silent wind's begin to howl,
as an errie resonance come from with in..
naota -fight.. cause your life depends on it. -
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OST : *BLEACH : Memories of nobody. Senna..

As the pressure continue to release..
a misty fog, bellow throughout the area..
inveloping it with smoke..
the wind's slowly blow the smoke away,
revieling the scene once more..
as the pod's begin, to slowly open..
every one look's on in suspence, as they open.. one, by one..
reveiling the three arriving signa.. to earth.

Dravendell - The traiter - Zeros -The hunter -

Zeremus - The destroyer -

The trio stand and begin to initiate a trigger in secquence.
using a button on each of their left, gauntlet.
they unleash a back hatch on each pod.
rushing out are an endless amount of canti like robots..
fully armed, and operational.
with an armada of, 3000 total.
Dravendell :
" I'm pleased to see, you still live. dear sister..
mother has a plan.. for, all of you.."

- grin's deviantly, then begins to laugh miniacly -
- Zeros and zeremus smile.. -

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-TO BE CONTINUED.. -

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

greetings fans...
hope you've been enjoying my little demented mind lately,
this story has been progressing slowly.
and since I've got all of this time to spare,
I've been fixing the problems previously discribed..
todays acts have been intitled as discribed.
ACT 59 : The Invasion. - Medical Mechanica's invasion begins. -
and ACT 60 : Zeremus - The Destroyer. -

hope you all enjoy this thrilling climax,
rather the finally.. of saga #3 : the maybase menace.
Till next week people, enjoy.

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Travis : " previously, on flcl 2nd comming.. "

OST : *BLEACH : Memories of nobody. Senna..

As the pressure continue to release..
a misty fog, bellow throughout the area..
inveloping it with smoke..


the wind's slowly blow the smoke away,
revieling the scene once more..
as the pod's begin, to slowly open..


every one look's on in suspence, as they open.. one, by one..
reveiling the three arriving signa.. to earth.

Dravendell - The traitor - Zeros -The hunter -
Zeremus - The destroyer -

the trio stand and begin to initiate a trigger in secquence.
using a button on each of their left, gauntlets.

they unleash a back hatch on each pod.
rushing out are an endless amount of canti like robots..

fully armed, and operational.
with an armada of : 5,000 total.
Dravendell :
" I'm pleased to see, you still live. dear sister..
mother has a plan.. for, all of you.."

- grin's deviantly, then begins to laugh miniacly -

- Zeros and zeremus smile.. -
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Haruko : " and now, the conclusion.."

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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fourth opening.
( NIGHTMARE : THE WORLD. )
- donation ! n.n - thank you -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite.. And
**Shrio Sagisu**

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Kazuya Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 3 * The Maybase Menace..

ACT 59 : -The Invasion..
-Theeerre.. heeerrre.. -
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OST : Bleach - *The Fate*

Eri, avalisk, mamimi, amarao, nicole.
hold down the fornt lines as..
Travis, haruko, naota, tasuku, cherry, canti,
bring up the rear..
Naota : " this was a bad idea, travis.."
Travis : " you think it's like sending sheep to a slaughter.?
no.. they have, the potential..
let's let them build from this, just like you did.."
Naota : " why do i get the errie feeling.. he's right about this..?"


Dravendell steps forward, bringing the rear of the armada..
she yells, in a taunting manor..

Draven dell : " which one of you will go first, hmm..?
with an armada such as this,
an invasion on this planet is a piece of cake.."

Eri : - I can, do this.. i'll prove to everyone i can.. -
Dravendell : " not one of you will step forward,
and throw you're life away..
at the hands of the greatest force, known to the universe.?
-laughs- come on, it's simple common sence.. "

Zeros : " initiate invasion secquence.."
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OST : The pillows *Advice*
Eri : " sorry.. but ..I can't let that happon "
- rev's up the rickenbacker.. -
Eri begins to lead the assault,
eri heading gung -ho into the robotic horde..
suprisingly, her training pay's off..
and everyone begins to join in..

the all out battle is enormous, with canti replica's everywhere..
eri bashes away, and flips to avoid contact..
with one of the droid's beam cannons..
she dodges just in time, to avoid the attack..
quickely bashing two more, infront of her..

As havok breaks out,
the lead team fight there way through the front lines..
as the rest, create a path for them..
The droids fall, one by one..

Soon, hundreds of robot bodies lay on the ground..
fizzling, sparking and shooting fluids all over the place..
the battle grows intense, as the crew continue there onslaught.
the armada begins to advance,
as the front lines are continuously knocked down..

one by one, they continue to fall.. but put up a resilliant, fight.
Naota : " this is intense.. "
Travis : " don't get cocky,
the signa havn't even moved a muscle. "
Eri : " these guys are alot easier then you made it sound, haruko.."

Haruko : " told yah, ..piece of cake.."
Avalisk : " raahhh.! - BOOM -
Naota : " don't waste youre energy, avi -san.."

Travis : " fuck that, ..use any means possible, to falter the enemy..!!!"
Mamimi : " roger.."
Mamimi fire's away, knocking droids down..
one, by one with each shot..
amarao and kitsurubami, doing the same..
there armor splinter's and puncture's,
before each droid falls with a loud thud..
more and more, begin to pass the fallen robots.

Now regrouping, the droids try for another advancement..
but as they begin to line up, there tactic makes for easier targets..
Naota : " there regrouping, get 'em whille there open.!!"
the crew begins to concentrate all firepower,
on the middle of the plotallion..

As they do so, the front line begins to guard the remaining bots..
as they begin to line up once more trying to advance..
this time more bodies, are laying on the ground..

Travis : " told you nothing would happon to them.."
travis speaks looking to naota..
naota looking for eri gazes out into the battlefeild..
looking on, as eri finishes up her attack..
with a few, of the remaining droids..

naota watches in awe, as she clears the path infront of her..
looking at her intense fighting style..


but as she lands, she turn's to find zeros directly behind her..
as eri turn's to look, zeros grip's her by the neck..
Zeros smiles as he begins to raise her by the neck, chocking her..
she struggles to break free, but alas.. she cannot.

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OST : *Bleach - nothing anymore.. - S.D. -
Zeros : " -miniacle laugh -
look at the power level, on this one d.d.?,
she ain't even above veteren's class.."

Dravendell : " I care not for the levels of these, creatures..
I only want to carry out mother's will, and be off.. back home.. "
Travis gives a suprising look, stunned by the retort of zeros's speed."

Naota - Now what do I do.. I let her get caught.. -
Naota thinks quickely, trying to figure out a solution..

Naota - I've got no choice, they want it.. i'll have to give it to them.. -
Naota lowers his head as zeros continues to strangle eri..
she gasps for air her eyes grow wider..

Eri - he.. really is trying to kill me.. ..naota.. please.. -

but as zeros watches the final gasps of breath pass on, through his
victum.. he is butted in the stomach, and gripped by the hand..

Zeros turn's to see naota terraformed, stairing right directly at him.
A cold and deadly stare, come from the young king.

Zeros begin's to look, with suprise and fear..

Neota : " get your fucking hands... off, my women.."

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F L C L - 2nd comming -
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Location : ( MAYBASE )
OST : Bleach *remix - Really, showing off.. -


Zeros - look of shock -

Neota : "Get your fucking hands off, my women ..NOW.!!! "

naota pinches the hand of zeros and immediatly,
zeros releases her.. she choughing.. and heavily breathing..

Haruko and tasuku, begin to terraform as well..

Haruko : " Essance of sansabos : crystalius of gaia!"
Tasuku Essance of ludicris : Extreeme speed!"
Travis leads an assault by the three,
aginst the few remaining Droids..

Avalisk leaping behind naota screams to him

Avalisk : "sensai..! "

naota : " back off.. this one's mine now.."
Avalisk then flashes out of sight rejoining the crew in battle..

Eri : " naosan.. ..be carefull.."

Naota - now, i will have to try.. -
- SNAP -
Naota spaces out for only a second..
then shakes his head..
the color of his resonance changes, from white to red..

Neota : " ..I don't need my terraformation..
hehehahaha! I'mn'a stick you.. in a little box.."

Zeros : " ha ! ..as if i'm afraid..
I can not feel, ..do you not recall.? "

Eri - what's happoning to him..?! -

Neota : " Raaaahhh ! ..ILLUMINATION..!!! "
- SNAP -
naota struggles to finish his sentance..
the resonance building, changes color..
from red back, to white..
Eri - he's changing back.. -
Zeros gives an oddish look,
cocking his head to one side with a suprised look..
- what the hell was that, just now..? -

Eri - it's almost as if, he was becomming posessed..? -

Naota regains himself.. then proceeds to use his power..

Neota : " ...ESSANCE OF EXCELCIA : SUBLIME LIMELIGHT ! "

Zeros look's in shock..
- Excelcia, of limelight..? ! ..the god's are working together.. -
Zeros steps back as some of the robot horde,
block the on comming force of naota's resonance..
the sheer force pushes all of them back, only zeros stand in his wake..
zeros holding an arm out, to block his eyes from the flying debrie..
..and finally notices naota, wasn't the same person..
Neota : " ..you just had to push the one button..
I hate, having pushed.. the most.. "

Zeros : " Ahh now this is what i like.. come on.. lets go.. "
Zeros turns and stips an order towards dravendell.

Zeros : " d.d, zeremus..
take the remaining plotallion and head for the facillity.."

Neota : " if you move.. you will, die.."
giving zeros the same deadly look as before,
only showing through the tritangle glasses..
the purple reflection of the lenses are clear enough,
to see the swirling galaxies within naota's pupils..

Zeros : " you can not erase us like you did with jaiden..
besides.. even if you do, we'll simply end up back on tambion 4.."

Haruko : - a birthing planet..-
Travis - finally.. a lead.. -
Naota - finally.. a lead.. -

Neota : " that's all i needed to know.."

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OST : Bleach - Terror's masqurade.. - S.D. of shadow's masqurade -

Zeremus : " how's this..?
i'll stay and play, whille you two go and retreive the core.."

Travis : " ha.! you're too late with that one..
things have already been taken care of.."

Dravendell : " who said anyting, about the core..
.. you guys, are holding..?
- miniacle laugh -
You are so dumb founded and befuddled..
you didn't even realize the active core,
deep with in the underground complex.. ha,ha,ha,ha! "

Naota - that's it.!
when toki was erased,
this is the consequence for the choice I made.. -

Neota : " I will not allow you, to active that facillity.."

Dravendell : " I assure you, the facillity is not what we're after..
that damage was done, years ago..

...we simply want, our power source back.."

Haruko : " over my, dead, body..
you'll just use it to destroy another planet.."

Dravendell : " and yet here you stand admist some 500 mechas,
and thre signa who are clearly out of you're league.."

Haruko : " all the same.. i'll try.. - smierk - ..and i'll win.."

Dravendell : " you had trouble the last time, sister..
what makes you think this time, will make a diffrence..?"

Zeros : " enough zeremus you have youre wish.. d.d. let's go.."

Travis : - We screwed with the timeline, nao san.. -

Naota - i know.. -

Tasuku : - then let's.. restore it..-

Naota - though call..-

Travis - there's similarities, in there genetic makeup..
but there bioscan's are off the charts.. -

Naota - they've been upgraded.. let's not underestimate them.. -

Zeros and dravendell begin to move,
as the droid horde begin to move with them..
Zeremus block's the crew's path,
the crew standing at the ready..
everyone pisitioned according to travis's tactic.

Zeremus : " you kids, musta had fun.. before, we got here..
most of you're residents left for a safer area.."

Haruko : " -grunts -
We ain't got time for you, pinhead.. outta our way..!"

Zeremus : " my, my.. what a temper..-grins -
..but believe me, when i say.. i've gotta worse one.."

Tasuku : " this is bad, guys.."
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g

Travis : " our time, is now.
ither, it is us.. or them..
nothing more, can be said."

For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fourth, opening.
( NIGHTMARE : THE WORLD.)
Yet, another donation. n.n - thank you -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite.. And
**Shrio Sagisu**

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Kazuya Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 3 * The Maybase Menace..

ACT 60 : Zeremus - The Destroyer..
- again, with destroying the earth ? -
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OST : *Death Note - Action..

Neota : " I will not allow you, to active that facillity.."

Dravendell : " I assure you, the facillity is not what we're after..
that damage was done, years ago..

...we simply want, our power source back.."

Haruko : " over my, dead, body..
you'll just use it to destroy another planet.."

Dravendell : " and yet here you stand admist some 500 mechas,
and three.. signa who are clearly, out of you're league.."

Haruko : " all the same.. i'll try.. - smierk - ..and i'll win.."

Dravendell : " you had trouble the last time, sister..
what makes you think this time, will make a diffrence..?"

Zeros : " enough, zeremus you have youre wish.. d.d.? let's go.."

Travis : - We screwed with the timeline, nao san.. -

Naota - i know.. -

Tasuku : - then let's.. restore it..-

Naota - though call..-

Travis - similarities in there genetic makeup..
but there bioscans are off the charts.. -
Naota - they've been upgraded.. let's not underestimate them.. -
Tasuku - what about the big guy..? -

Zeros and dravendell begin to move,
as the droid horde begin to move with them..

Zeremus block's the crew's path,
the crew standing at the ready..
everyone positioned according to travis's tactic.

Zeremus : " you kids, musta had fun.. before, we got here..
most of you're residents left for a safer area.."

Haruko : " -grunts -
We ain't got time for you, pinhead.. outta our way..!"

Zeremus : " my, my.. what a temper..-grins -
..but believe me, when i say.. i've gotta worse one.."

Tasuku : " this is bad, guys.."
Zeremus : " ho, ho, ho, here we go.." - Slam -

Zeremus grip's eri's guitar as she lands a strike,
into the palm of his hand..
he simply tosses her away, as if she was nothing..
travis begins to pummel him with his synthisizers,
zeremus slams his fist into travis's face...

Travis gives off a cold stare, as zeremus back's up..
suprised by travis's resonance..

Zeremus : " oh, we gotta challanger in our midst.."
- grin's deviantly. -
Travis says nothing..
he simply begins to fight once more backing the huge signa away..
the crew stare in awe as eri regains herself,
but falls to one knee..
out of breath, she huffs trying to calm herself..

Haruko concentrates more on dravendell and the horde,
wanting to go for it..
but knowing if she does leave, that would spell disaster..

Haruko - what, do I do..? -
Travis continues to dodge the attacks of the gigantic signa..
he slides left then right according to the punches of his opponent..
staying one step ahead..
Travis - i have no choice in this form, i must..
go for it now.. whille i still, gotta chance.. -
Naota - travis, what are you doing.? -
Tasuku - ..something, quite unexpected.. -

Zeremus comes down hard, using both his fists combined..
Travis dodges, and slam's into the rib of zeremus..
Travis, phrasing as he stick's the mecha..

Travis : " ..essance of Kaiados : Bolt, of judgement.."
Suddenly, lightning strike travis.
but not to harm him, more like sheild him from zeremus..
the surrounding lightning dances around travis..
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FLCL 2nd comming -

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OST : Bleach - heat of the battle..

Travis : " ..essance of Kaiados : Bolt of judgement.."

Suddenly, lightning strike travis.
but not to harm him, more like sheild him from zeremus..
the surrounding lightning dances around travis..


zeremus quickely back's away, and holding his side..
watching on as travis terraform..
Travis : " AAAAHHH!!! - speak's loudly -
You have not felt pain, misery, even happieness..
you are but a machine..
AAAAAHHHHH!!!"
Zeremus - Incredible.. for a human..
this person can generate a great amount of resonance..
he would make a perfect test subject for the other, zephyer..
- tisk - too bad he isn't here.. -
zeremus begins to concentrate, at the task at hand..

Travis : " this is where we stand, signa.. ..you, are obsolete..
..Kaiados, distortion wave.."
- what will happon, now.? -
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OST : Breakthrough even

Haruko : " ..i cant sit by, whille they get away..
plus, that bitch think she's better then me..
- SNAP - ..wait a minute..? that tone..-
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**vision of**
Dravendell : " and yet here you stand admist some 500 mechas,
and three.. signa who are clearly, *out of you're league..*"
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Haruko - that's it..! she was liying.!!
could she still be in there, ..somewhere?! -

Mamimi : " what's it.? travis -kun, is gonna get hurt..? "

Tasuku - I caught that, let's go.. -

Naota - understood.. I'm staying here, for backup..
eri, feel like following them..?"

Eri - my.. throat hurts, nao -san.. I'm sorry.. -

Naota - ..just hang in there, eri -kun..
cherry, can you go.? -

Cherry - on route, now.. -
Tasuku : " let's go, hara -san.."
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Travis repeatedly slashes, and collides with a knuckle of zeremus.
Zeremus :
" the quantem knuckles can absorb youre attacks.. human.."

Travis : " that's where.. - grins -you're wrong.."
Travis then begins to hack and slice toworods zeremus,
the giant signa dodges the attacks..
and proceeds to assault travis, after a time'd strike.

Zeremus : " come on..
what are you scarred this planet's gonna blow up.?
You fight, like a three year old.."
Zeremus forces travis back..
travis flipping, and sliding to a hault grip's both weapons..
looking with fury, towords the skinjob.

Travis -grins- " no.. I was just biding my time.."
- Travis vanishes out of sight.. -

Zeremus begins to look around, but doesn't see his enemy.
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OST : *Original The pillows - Sleepy head..

suddenly, from high up in the sky..
the crew suddenly backs away,
as travis reviel himself to the signa..
a great distiance above him..

Zeremus - he cloned himself.?! - - eyetwitch -

travis hurles a ball of lightning, towords the signa..
zeremus stares back, in complete perplexity..

Travis : " KAIADOS, ULTIMA !!!! "

Travis swing's his wishbone,
now glowing a bright white and blue..
Travis - heh.. never even seen it commin, did yah.? -

Zeremus's eyes begin to grow wider, as his lid's open fully..

Zeremus -I've.. gotta, stop it.. -

The light of the ball, glowing in zeremus's pupils..

Zeremus - but i.. can't, move..?! -
The ball of light grows brighter, and brighter..

He is paralyzed from the sight, comming at him.. with fury..

Zeremus - ..move, damnit.. ..MOVE!!! -

He struggles to move..
but uses all of his strength, to push his arm's outward..
the ball of light impact on his hand's,
and he forces himself to move....
Travis stares back, in shock..

The crew a safe distiance away, stare on with awe..
Zeremus : "nughh.." - zeremus pushes the ball, further away.. -

Travis - I knew it.. A symbiont.. -

Zeremus :" ..fucking, symbiont.. " - ..further still.. -

Eri - A ..parasite..?? -

Zeremus : " ..fucking, PARASITE..!!" - and forces it, away... -

Naota - just what the fuck are these, ..signa.? -

He forces the ball away.. huffing, from the output of energy..
Zeremus : " least there good, for something.." - huff.. huff.. -

Travis : " uh-ho, not good.."

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- To Be Continued -

till next thursday people, enjoy. - smiley - n.n
N.o._Creator_ATOMSK
State_alchemist.ATOMSK@yahoo.com

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

well FLCL freaks..?
time once again for a few thrilling interludes,
to this amasing fan fiction..
hope the drama and suspense has been keeping you going, thus far.
think its time i stepped up my game,
just to keep ahead off all you fans.
on a related note..
there is a 3rd bleach movie comming out, titled..
BLEACH: fade to black.
which is kobu tite's newest addition,
to the few bleach movies out thus far..
so keep a seprate shelf handy, those dvd freaks out there.

this weeks acts are titled :
ACT 61 The Hunter - Zeros zephyer -
& ACT 62 The traitor. - Dravendell Reharu. -
hope these acts will keep youre mind busy,
as this is nearing the end of the maybase menace.

don't fret..
I've got plenty of story to follow,
as to the revised session : B side of the mechanical menace.

this will relate to later acts, so pay attention class.
- slap's the ruler down hard !-

*And now, the conclusion..*
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Previously, on flcl 2nd comming..
OST :*Bleach - on the verge, of insanity..

Suddenly, from high up in the sky..
the crew suddenly backs away,
as travis reviel himself to the signa..
a great distiance above him..

- Naota and the crew,
face the galactic tyrant's of medical mechanica..
known as the signa.. -


Zeremus - he cloned himself.?! - - eyetwitch -

travis hurles a ball of lightning, towords the signa..
zeremus stares back, in complete perplexity..

Travis : " KAIADOS, ULTIMA !!!! "
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- But with little, to no advantage,
the crew finds there tactics a little off..

Dravendell reviels there is another core,
hidden deep within the old facillity..

and they plan to remove it, causing a terminal meltdown..
destroying the city, in a matter of minutes.. -

Travis swing's his wishbone,
now glowing a bright white and blue..

Travis - heh.. never even seen it commin, did yah.? -


- With little time, to prepare.. -


Zeremus's eyes begin to grow wider, as his lid's open fully..

Zeremus -I've.. gotta, stop it.. -

The light of the ball, glowing in zeremus's pupils..

Zeremus - but i.. can't, move..?! -
The ball of light grows brighter, and brighter..

He is paralyzed from the sight, comming at him.. with fury..

Zeremus - ..move, damnit.. ..MOVE!!! -

He struggles to move..
but uses all of his strength, to push his arm's outward..

the ball of light impact on his hand's,

and he forces himself to move....


- The crew finds, this battle.. -

Travis stares back, in shock..

The crew a safe distiance away, stare on with awe..
Zeremus struggles to move the ball of energy..
the intensity of the resistiance is overwhelming..
Zeremus : "nughh.." - zeremus pushes the ball, further away.. -

Travis gives a quick thought,
as to zeremus's sudden increase of strength..
Travis - I knew it.. A symbiont.. -

Zeremus :" ..fucking, symbiont.. " - ..further still.. -

Eri ponders herself as they hear the thoughts,
of the signa's mind..
Eri - A ..parasite..?? -

Zeremus struggling to break free of the blast..
Zeremus : " ..fucking, PARASITE..!!" - and forces it, away... -
Naota gives thought as well, he continuing to look on in silent awe.
Naota - just what the fuck are these, ..signa.? -

Zeremus finally forces the ball away..
huffing, from the output of energy..
Zeremus : " least there good, for something.." - huff.. huff.. -
The ball of energy is forced upward, and into the sky..
only resonance, light the path it took heading into space.
Travis stares towords the giant signa, as zeremus looks upward..
now with a wide grin about, himself..
he drooling a little, towords the timelord.

Travis speak's out of shock..

Travis : " uh-ho, not good.."
- A little hard, to swallow.. -
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fourth, opening.
( NIGHTMARE : THE WORLD. )
Yet, another donation. n.n - thank you -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite.. And
**Shrio Sagisu**

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 3 * The Maybase Menace..

ACT 61 : The Hunter..
- The Relentless Signa, revieled. -
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( Downtown Maybase Tokyo )
OST : *Bleach - frenzied battle, on the beat.. - mixed dub -

As we come into view,
the battle still ignites..
as both people, stand in the middle of the downtown area.

Naota, mamimi, haruko, and cherry stay to watch..
as the others leave to persure, dravendell and zeros..


Travis : " ..how the hell is this possible..? "
travis speaks..
giving off a frightening look of shock, towords the gigantic signa..

Zeremus : - damn.. used up alot of energy, deflecting that blast...
..For a human, he's pritty good.. -
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Zeremus looks to travis, as the timelord comes downward hard..
wheilding his guitar, as it glow's and merges back to it's original state..

Travis crashes into the ground, but misses his target..
zeremus, dodging the strike and flipping to a hault..
Now standing sideways, in mid air..

Zeremus flashes out of sight again,
as soon as travis comes at him..

..This time,
zeremus flashes behind his opponent..
and bashes him in the back..
sending his body, plummeting into the surface..

A thunderous sound could be herd, from a distiance..
Bits of debrie and rubble, begin to collapse above travis..
as we hear him scream for only a moment,
before becomming muffled by the falling concrete..

Zeremus grins having his foe trapped in such a precidament..

Zeremus : "RAAAHH!!"

Zeremus screams, he charging up for another attack..
the ball of light grow's emmensly,
as he looks downward with a frightning face..

Travis : - no.. I can't.. let, this happon.. -

Zeremus, grinning deviantly and expressing such vile behavior..
felt it best to ignite a special move,
he perfected douring his latest missions..

Travis breaks free of the debrie,
lifting a large piece of broken concrete off of himself..
just in time, to look upward..
his opponent hover high above him, ready to strike..

Travis - I MUST.. -

Zeremus smiles towords travis, before unleashing his attack.
zeremus, speaking with a bit of carcasem in his tone.

Zeremus : -grins -" Zaxon Cannon,
..see if you can ither dodge this, or deflect it.."

Travis : - ..STOP IT ! -
as the ball of light speed forth towords the young brunette..
travis look's upward towords zeros ..
a grin appears as he speaks a phrase,
before the lighted ball impact's his body..
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OST :Bleach turn the tables

Just before the blast, impact's on our hero..
something truly inspirational happons..
at that, instantainous moment...

Travis : " Essance of kaiados.. : Bolt, of judgement.."

Zeremus Glares with befuddlement.
Zeremus : " WHAT?! "
- Overwhelming explosion.. -
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The smoke bellows surrounding the two fighters..
soon it begins to dissipate..

Travis : " you really think you had me there.. didn't you....?
What with the minority of calulations, you proceeded to capture me..
in essance,
thwarting my plans of releasing a distortion wave,
to interfeer with you're downloads to mother.. "

Zeros : " what, a clever man..
but still.. the download proceeded, without a shadow of a doubt..
you're resonance level's have all been monitored..
and mother captured our scan's.. heh, hee.. for futrure refferances.."

And thus our hero is revieled.. this time with a white suit..
the top hat matching the atire..
his jacket look's more of a servants coat..
with long frail's that hang down in the back.

his guitar changed as well..
looking more sleak, with a fire red emblem on the back end..
the logo, ..that of ..the pirate king.

Zeremus look's on with shock.
-..how the hell did he survive..?! -

Travis : " i herd that.. and remember, my race created your's..
..it's only fair, i should hear you're thoughts."

Zeremus - that arrogant, son, of, a bitch.. -

Travis : " as i said.. i herd that..
and, don't take that tone with me.."
Travis making himself stern towords the signa.
Travis - if i can keep myself, just one step ahead of him..
i should be fine.
Travis look's downward, towords the half crew.
- sigh i hope youre watching, gang.. you need to learn from this.. -


Zeremus : " RRRRAAAAAGGHH..!!!
I KNEW..!! IT WAS TOO GOOD, TO BE TRUE !!"

Zeremus races towords travis, with blinding speeds..
but travis evades every attack zeremus throws out..
travis flip's to a safe distiance,
as zeremus huffs and struggles to catch his breath..

Travis : " you're a machine.. you don't need to breathe.."

Zeremus : " show's.. what.. you.. know.." -huff huff -

Travis : " i just bet.. you have a symbiont, in you..
-grins - better not let it get hurt, or it'll cost 'yah.."

Zeremus : " taunting me..? - grunt's slowly -
You'll pay, for that.."

Zeremus and travis continue to battle it out..
the decaying ruins of the city of maybase,
continues to crumble to dust..
as the shocking resonance, deflects from the two fighters.
to the surrounding area.
Travis - noone is left but us in the city now..
i just hope the citizens aren't afraid of this, anymore..
He's charging for another attack, should be enough to absorb.. -


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FLCL 2nd comming..

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( Final strech, Medical mechanica facillity : Maybase )
OST : *Bleach -On the pricepiece, of defeat.

Eri - have to, stop them.. before, they reach, the facillity.. -

Amarao : "i want, all available.. units, surrounding the city..

-gives a gloomy look as he paces with the crew -
" ..yes again.."

- gives a moopy look -
" yes, there's another attack.. "
gives off an angrey look - eye twitch -
" no, i don't know the origin.."


yes, it's emminit.. !
Yes, the city may explode..!!
no, i don't know how big the blast will be,
Just shut up and gather you're men..!!!"
- beep -
Tasuku : " those guys, are idiots.."

Avalisk : " we're almost to the facillity.."

Eri : " and the brigade is off, to our left.."

Tasuku : " you..
never did explain how you advanced so quickely, eri -san.."

Eri : " no time to, now.. besides, naota helped out..
somehow.. when he was suffering through the flux,
i absorbed some of his essance..
and thus, this is the result.. so, don't worry.."

- besides.. I wanna pay that asshole back, for choaking me.. -

Tasuku - you should really..
keep you're thoughts to you're self sometimes.. -

Canti : " observation of this scenario demands,
we make a united effort to expunge the threat as quickely as possible.. "

Avalisk : "easy for you to say.. the droids we're tough enough.."

Amarao : " the robot is right about one thing..
we have to stop them, as quickely as possible..
so with the five of us, we may not have enough fire power.."
As they reach the final strech to the facillity,
they make it there just ahead of the mechanical brigade..
they advancing slowly towords the giant iron..

Avalisk, eri, tasuku, canti, and amarao..
turn back to face the threat, slowly heading towords them..

Tasuku : " well if anyone's got any bright ideas,
..now would be the time to share.."

they give serious expressions,
as they wait the approch of there enemy.
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OST : The fate

Dravendell, and zeros stand ahead of the crew..
as the robot brigade take there final steps..

Dravendell, puzzled as to there early arrival speaks out of contrast..

Dravendell : " so, you can move quickely.."
Zeros : " i should of snapped youre neck, when i had the chance..
you're head.. would make a nice, ..trophy.."

Eri - ..arrogant son of a.. -

Tasuku : " you needn't worry, eri.. i've got these guys, in the bag..
avalisk, take point.. i'm going in.. "

Amarao : " you're crazy, as alwyes.. tasuku nandaba.."

Tasuku : " i've only just begun..
Dravendell is it.? heh.. you thought reharu, was bothersome..?
- grins - ..well, you havn't delt with me yet.. "

Dravendell chuckles then speaks.
Dravendell : " ha ! and you, a mear human..
think you have the power, to overwhelm me.?"

Zeros : " let me take, the women's life..?"

Dravendell : " no, that isn't part of the mission..
our only concern is retreiving the core.."

Zeros - shit.. shit.. shit ! fuck, damn.. fucking , cunt.!! -
Zeros scream's from frustration..
Zeros : " I.. WANT, THAT, BITCHES, HEAD !!"

Eri - he's totally serious, about killing me..? -

Avalisk - ..this guys gotta death wish, with nao -sensai..
I, better.. protect eri -san.. -

Tasuku : " the only way, you're getting to her..
is by going through me.!"

Tasuku look's to eri..
- don't worry.. just stop the droids as soon, as they begin attacking. -

Half of the Crew : " right.."
the half crew, stand ready.. waiting the signa's advancement.
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- FLCL 2nd comming.. -

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OST :*Hellsing - Vadican cathedral - FLCL 2nd comming Donation.. -

Meanwhille..
Zeremus and travis continue to battle it out,
there minds both matching eachother's movements and wits.


Travis : " Youre done..!!" - Emmit's a blast -
the force of which propells zeremus, into the ground..
zeremus quickely flips back up, with little damage..

He begins to ignite damaging blasts from his knukles, repeatedly..
travis trying hard to deflect, each shot comming towords him..
Travis - damn, he's keeping up with me. -

Zeremus smiles on as he delivers each shot, simoltainously..
the grin becomming wider, as he thinks to himself..
Zeremus - just a little longer, and you're done. fucker.. -

Travis is pelted with small blasts, comming out from zeremus's hands..
Zeremus turning to fire upon his relentless enemy.

Travis whips the guitar around, deflecting the last of the pelting blasts..
and forcefully charges inward..
they collide again, travis ducking to miss a punch..
and jabs zeremus repeatedly, to force him back..

Just as travis does so..
information begins downloading into zeremus's mind.
And his request is granted.

- download complete.. message from M.M. -
( Mother ) : - permission granted..
activating resonance matching, sequence..
the quadra flux is full.. use it now, whille you have a chance.. -

- negitive n.o. output : quadra flux -

The battle rages on,
as travis delivers a final blow for his multi assault.
Zeremus being forced back,
but still managing to hold a vial expression.

Travis becomes frustrated by the expression, carried by zeremus..
and the fury inside him, continues to build..

Zeremus continues to smile, and back's off from travis a bit..
he building a furious rage inside of him,
begins to laugh as his tone builds louder..

- miniacle laughter -
Zeremus : " YOU.. PATHEDIC LITTLE, SHIT.!
YOU JUST DON'T REALIZE WHAT JUST HAPPONED?!!.."
Travis look to zeremus with fright,
he now realizing what just happoned..

Travis - the downloads complete..!! oh shit.. -

Zeremus begins to collide his knuckles together, speaking a phrase..
whille looking with glee to travis..
Zeremus : " ..mother's will.." - grins - "..Tambion, regression. "

Travis look's back with shock
Travis - he's.. gonna, terraform..?!
but, how.. I thought they wern't supposed to..!!!" -

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OST : *Original - come down

Tasuku : " Previously, on FLCL - 2nd comming.."

Dravendell, puzzled as to the half crew's early arrival,
and speaks out of contrast..

Dravendell : " so, you can move quickely.."

zeros giving off a glare towords eri,
speaks solomly with a deep tone.
Zeros : " i should of snapped youre neck, when i had the chance..
you're head.. would make a nice, ..trophy.."

Eri gives off an angrey look.
Eri - ..arrogant son of a.. -

Tasuku : " you needn't worry, eri..
i've got these guys, in the bag.. avalisk, take point.. i'm going in.. "

Amarao : " you're crazy, as alwyes.. tasuku nandaba.."

Tasuku : " i've only just begun..
Dravendell, is it.? heh.. you thought reharu, was bothersome..?
- grins - ..well, you havn't delt with me yet.. "

Dravendell chuckles then speaks.
Dravendell : " ha ! and you, a mear human..
think you have the power, to overwhelm me.?"

Zeros : " let me take, the women's life..?"
Dravendell : " no, that isn't part of the mission..
our only concern is retreiving the core.."

Zeros - shit.. shit.. shit ! fuck, damn.. fucking , cunt.!! -
Zeros scream's from frustration..

Zeros I.. WANT, THAT, BITCHES, HEAD !!"

Eri - he's totally serious, about killing me..? -
Avalisk - ..this guys gotta death wish, with nao -sensai..
I, better.. protect eri -san.. -

Tasuku : " the only way youre getting to her, is by going through me.!"
- dont worry.. just stop the droids as soon, as they begin attacking. -

Half of the Crew : " right.."
the half crew, stand ready.. waiting the signa's advancement.
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fourth, opening.
( NIGHTMARE : THE WORLD.)
Yet, another donation. n.n - thank you -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite.. And
**Shrio Sagisu**

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 3 * The Maybase Menace..

ACT 62 : The Traitor..
- Travis's Questionable Theroy. -
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OST :* New Bleach - Requiem, for the lost ones..

Meanwhille..

Zeremus and travis continue to battle it out,
there minds both matching eachother's movements and wits.
The rest of the splitted crew members, watch on from a safe distiance..
towords the overwhelming shocks and force..
Naota : " why.. am i just, standing here.. doing, nothing.?!"
Haruko : " well.?"
Mamimi : " get in there, and stop them.."

Naota : " that's incredibly easy for you guys, to say..
you're basically pushing me, to do it." <.<

Haruko : " but if you don't, then travi kun will get hurt..
you want that on you're concious.? "
cherry : " he's evading the attacks, with all the resonance he can muster..
naota, there right.. you need to take some action.."

Naota - travis, hold on just for a little longer..
evade his attacks, for as long as you can..
I'm going to try to use, the solar charge.-
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Travis - damn, he's keeping up with me.
what.?! solar charge.?! you nuts.?! -

Zeremus - heh, heh, hee..
just a little longer, and you're done. fucker.. -

Travis is pelted with small blasts, comming out from zeremus's hands..
Zeremus turning to fire upon his relentless enemy.

Just as he does so..
information begins downloading into his mind.
And his request is granted.
( Mother ) : - permission granted..
activating resonance matching, sequence..
the quadra flux is full.. use it now, whille you have a chance.. -

Travis - something doesn't fit..
- SNAP -
- he's not using all of his strength,
..he's completly holding back..
- SNAP -
- The download.. its complete..!! oh shit.!! -

Zeremus begins to smile, and back's off from travis a bit..
he building a furious rage inside of him,
begins to laugh as his tone builds louder..

- miniacle laughter -
Zeremus : " YOU.. PATHEDIC LITTLE, SHIT.!
YOU JUST DON'T REALIZE.."

Zeremus : " ..MOTHER'S WILL.." - grins -
"..Tambion, Regression. "

Travis looks back with shock
Travis - he's. gonna terraform..
but, how.. I thought they wern't supposed to..?!" -

Zeremus begins to terraform the body begins to reform it's self,
the errie sounds of the metamorphisis..
gives chills, to the young brunette..
Travis - what the fuck is he changing into.?! -

Travis unable to move, can only watch on..
as the signa changes shape, and begins to grow enormously..
the body changes to that, off a large rhino..
his eyes glowing like a serpants.

Zeremus : " ..the tambion's we're kind enough,
heh, hee.. to ally themselves with us, the signa..
you humans,
have no potential to become a vast supirior race in this universe..
thus we sought you out, as a means for power.."


Travis : " Incompatance..
- grunts -you don't know who I am at all, do you.?!"


Zeremus : " oh i know who you are.. travis, ..lokal.."
Travis gives off a look of shock..



Zeremus : " mother, knows all..
..and with that, I bid you.. good day..
heh, heh, ..FIRE!! " - dark & vial expression -
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FL CL - 2nd comming..

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( Downtown Maybase )
OST :* New bleach - Encirclement battle

Travis can only look on, and take the hit..
the power, speed, and pressure.. simply overwhelming..

Zeremus growls as he looks downward,
onto the massave plume of smoke below..
the rumblings of the impact, echoed for a distiance..

Zeremus stares on with glee..
as the destruction caused, was a dlightfull sight.

Travis coughs and struggles to move,
his eye half closed and gashes all over him.. he uses his guitar as a crutch,
but as zeremus comes in for a suprising blow..

Travis can only watch as the moment, seemed slow for him..
As zeremus's hand, raises instantainously for the blow..

Naota's guitar comes in from the left side..
blocking the signa's assault.
- CLASH ca'chink ! -

Naota : " i don't care how strong you are..
feeling helpless, and resorting to drastic mesures..
maybe you're thing, travis.. but not mine.!"

Naota forces zeremus back, without his terraformation..
naota begins to pulse, and resonate..
the bluish glow about him,
gives his power illusion as he begins to charge up..
Naota - I don't care if i get hit, i don't care if i loose..
but damn it, im'na fuck you up, so bad..
your mother's gonna feel it.!"

Zeremus finds new found dread within our hero's tone..

Naota only glares now, towords the perplexed machine.
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- FL CL 2ND COMMING.. -

Eri : " you're not going to take that core.."
Tasuku : " i'll stop you, with all i've got.."
Amarao : " oh sure, tell them you're gonna win..
so when they submit deciently..
we make a mockery of ourselves.."
Avalisk : " I dunno about you, douglas..
but damnit, grow some balls.!"
Canti : " let me take a chance mistress..
um.. i mean, miss eri.."
Eri looks to the droid.. " canti san.. i .. i cant let you.."
Canti : " i have yet to prove myself to my master..
let alone the one, who helped free me..
there's too much i've seen of this world,
to not do something to prevent the enevadible doom..
they, pleague this planet with.."
eri : " canti kun.. you, ..can't..
nao san.. wouldn't forgive me for it.."


Zeros appears before eri, she looking onto the signa with fright..
but tasuku quickely steps in the way,
forcing zeros back with a push of his hand..

Tasuku : " ..I don't think so.."
Avalisk : " you threaten her ? you threaten, all five of us.. "
tasuku throws a hand back, towords avalisk..
Tasuku : " no, avalisk -san.. I'll handle this one myself.."

Zeros : " what makes you, so sure of you're self..?"
Tasuku : " because.. unlike them,
I've got something they don't have.."

Tasuku begins to resonate, with overwhelming power..
Zeros : " eh, and what's that?
some form of ability..
I dont know about, called a terraformation.? ha ! don't make me laugh.."

Tasuku doesn't stop, he simply lower's his head and speaks..
Tasuku : " I wouldn't knock it, till I tried it.."

This notion, begins to peek zeros's intrest..
Zeros : " Eh.? really now.. d.d.?
why did you not tell us about there, formation mergance..? "

Dravendell : " too much memory loss, I guess.. heh, deal with it.."

Zeros grunt's, to dravendell's.. sudden change, in heart..
Zeros : " damn you, women.. why won't you let me in.?! "
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OST :Bleach - short dub. Terror's masqurade -


Dravendell : " i would watch out, if I were you.."

Tasuku charges zeros with a forcefull push, then bats at him but misses..
zeros flipping back, slides then chares towords the rampaging tasuku..
tasuku still at a running pace, begins to ready himself for another strike..
the raiper, and guitar collide.. with a shocking result.

Eri, amarao, and avalisk sheild themselves from the blast..

canti simply stands by the zone, as smoke cover him then blow away..

The two slide to opposiate sides of the small zone,
the smoke dissipating as they ready themselves once more..


Tasuku faces zeros, as zeros glares towords him..


The brigade of droid's.. begin's to move inward..
This time, the front linemen begin to sprint..
whille the other's continue to march forward..

Zeros flip's back sliding to a hault,
tasuku rushing towords him reralizes the sudden change in tactic..

Zeros smiles towords tasuku, and begins to dance his rapier around..
the lighted ray, becomes a whip, forcing tasuku back..
he, trying to deflect each strike..
- thwack! .. thwack !, thwack !, thwack ! -


Replica Leader : " team.. advance, persue the rebels.."
Replica Two, Three & Four : " compliance.."
Eri : " oh shit, we got company.."
Avalisk : Raaahh!! "

Canti : " miss eri step out of the way, please..
I cannot get a clear enough shot.."
Avalisk :" target something else, she can deal with the replicas..!"
Canti : " compliance.."

Canti's arms begin to terraform into cannons, and the charging begins..
just as the three bots come in for the strike,
one of them is shot and incinerated..
avalisk takes one, and eri takes the leader..
As one begins to approch amarao,
douglas begins to fire multiple times onto the droid..

The mecha finally falls after five or six shots..
but as amarao reloads, another begins to approch..
and another, and yet another..

he begins to back off, reloading whille firing upon the mecha droids..
they fall one, by one..
as more, and more pop up from the approching brigade..
..now on the facillities, front door..

Dravendell : " advance, and capture the rebels.."
Droid brigade : " ..compliance.."
and thus.. the remaining hundreds, of droids..
begin there assault on the half crew.
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Elsewhere..
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OST : *Bleach - Showdown..

The fight between naota and zeremus, begins.
Naota : " evade me.?! fuck you.!"
Zeremus : " no thanks, you're not my species.."

The guitar and knuckle collide with the same result, every time..
the shocking resonance deflect's,
and forcing waves of energy push outward..
The force of which, destroies the part's of the city around them..


Zeremus : " phase cannon !!"
Naota : " beam cannon.!!"
The attacks collide, and dissipate in an explosion..
the evenly matched ignition, results in an overwhelming blast..


Cherry, haruko, and mamimi look on in shock..
travis grunts as he tries to regain himself,
the pain from the fight now setting in..

Travis - what will you do now, naota..? this giant..
isn't like any mecha, or droid we've faced before..
he's half biological, which means he has the resonance potential..
but he cannot unlock, the channel.. Wait a minute ? -

-SNAP - That women, ..dravendell..
she's been sending submliminal messages, as she spoke..
but what was she referring to, as a second power source..? -

Mamimi : " naosan.. what are you thinking..?
don't toy, with him.. bring him down..!"
Haruko : " Sock it too him, takkun.!!"

Amarao : " SOMEONE WANNA HELP ME ???
Amarao continues to fire and reload,
backing up as close as he can to the facillity..

Amarao : " ..I'M RUNNING OUT OF BULLETS, ..ANYONE..!?"
Haruko : " oh, ..right.." - gives an unapealed look -

Mamimi : " oh forget it, girl..!"
Mamimi begins to fire upon the brigade..
slowly shrinking down, to a enormous horde.
the few hundred left begins to assault each crew member,
as they begin to help amarao..


tasuku handles fighting zeros with amasing agillity, and accuracy..
the strikes delivered force zeros back, and down..
zeros is now on one knee..

dravendell grunts and looks towords zeros..
Dravendell :
- i just hope that time lord found out, about my messages..

mother is monitoring, our preasence here..
but she doesnt know ive severed my mind..
this is going to be cutting things close..
and we can't afford to waste time..
i have to manipulate zeros a little longer..
I can't let him, request a quadra flux... -

Dravendell : " don't back down..
fight, zeros.. destroy him..! "

Tasuku : " don't listen to her.. you've already lost this one.. "

Eri : " avalisk, keep at it we're knocking the numbers down.."

Avalisk : " A, Little more..time.. please..? "

Eri - what do we do..
we're completly surrounded..?! -

Tasuku : " HAAAA... ! "

Zeros : HHAaaiii.. !"
there collision again, is simply shocking.

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- To be continued -

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

hope you all enjoy you're holiday weekend..
here's the series finally of my story.
even though this is only a screen play,
I hope you find this easy to read.
I'll be posting acts for session B after this folks so have fun,
and hope you'll be able to intrupret the story fully.
- see you all, douring session B -
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OST : Bleach - Catch 22..
*Previously, on FLCL 2nd comming..

Tasuku handles fighting zeros with amasing agillity, and accuracy..
the strikes delivered force zeros back, and down..
zeros is now on one knee..

dravendell grunts and looks towords zeros..
Dravendell : -
I just hope that time lord found out, about my messages..
mother is monitoring, our preasence here..
but she doesn't know, i've severed my mind to the hive..
this is going to be cutting things close..
and we can't afford to waste time..
i have to manipulate zeros a little longer..
I can't let him, request a quadra flux... -

Dravendell : " don't back down..
fight, zeros.. destroy him..! "
Tasuku begins to flip, and dodge zeros's attacks..
Tasuku : " don't listen to her.. you've already lost this one.. "
Eri grips both hands, to her guitar..
Eri : " avalisk, keep at it we're knocking the numbers down.."
Avalisk leaps to the side of her, and both begin to rush inward.
Avalisk : " A, Little more..time.. please..? "

Eri - what do we do..
we're completly surrounded..?! -

Tasuku and zeros begin charging up for another attack..
their power and flux,
mach sequence but then grown even more enormous,
They begin to charge towords eachother..

Tasuku : " HAAAA... ! "

Zeros : HHAaaiii.. !"
And there collision, again..
..is simply shocking.
- Can you feel it, comming.? -
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fourth, opening.
( NIGHTMARE : THE WORLD. )
Donation ! n.n - thank you -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite.. And
**Shrio Sagisu**

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 3 * The Maybase Menace..

ACT 63 : -The Saviour..? ..Naota's resolve.. -

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OST : *Deathnote - Action..

Naota and zeremus havn't let down yet..
they continue battling now high above,
the lights show how fast there repeated strikes are..
the multiple display's show the speed,
and sonic burst's tell how fast they really are going..

Dravendell - this man.. he's not ordinary..-
tasuku : " Ludicris. extreeme speed ! "

Zeros : " that won't stop me.!!"

They collide one last time, before phasing back into normal space..
the shocking portal from there speed,
sends zeros flying down wardand plumetting into the cities debrie..

The impact sends large pieces of buildings and fragments,
of pillars into the air..
As naota instantainously comes down for a finishing blow..
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Naota : "Travis do it now..!!"
Travis huffing appears out of nowhere high above zeremus..
he looks upward as the timelord appear out of thin air..

Travis - this takes alot of concentration you know.. -

Naota : " ither youre gonna do it, or i am..
now which is it gonna be.?! "
Travis : " fine.. i'll release this, solar charge of your's.."

Travis forces his guitar downward.. it glowing a bright gold and blue..
repeating the words naota fills his mind with,
travis deliver's a finishing blow..

Travis : " illumination, of the phoenix..
dunno why, you want me to say that.."
but then..
the overwhelming force shots out,
travis barly able to hold on grip's for all he's worth..
Travis : " ..holy shit..!!"


the force puches him backward,
as the wild beam explode out from the head of the strings..
the prism of light's and ray's
shoot downward surrounding zeremus..

Zeremus : "what's this.. lights ..?"
the lights suddenly collapse within themselves..
into a small ray of lgiht and slowly crushes zeremus..

Zeremus : " HOW.? HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE.. EEEUUURRRRAAAAAGGGGHHHHH!!!"

the lighted aray of diffren colors,
vanish and compress into one small beam..
then it dissapears, leaving a trail of sparkling resonance..

Travis : - huff huff- " ..how, did you know.? "
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OST :Bleach - recollection 3

Naota looks towords the falling debrie, that once was zeremus..

Naota : " he built his resonance,
by charging the knuckles that wraped around his fists..
whatever material that was made up of,
absorbed the energy we put out..
so the only logical choice,
was to simply reflect it using the solarcharge..
It produces a wave of energy capable of absorbing and crushing,
whatever the target maybe.."

Travis :" he may have lost his body,
but his mind has been downloaded back to mother.."

Naota : " least he's off the planet..
now we have to get to the others,
before haruko's sister open's that door."

Travis : "- humph - she's as repulsive, as ever..
but dravendell sent messages through the way, she's been talking..
..I think she maybe, ..trying to tell us something..?"

Haruko : " I'm right here, you know.."

Naota : -sigh - " if dravendell is trying to tell us something..
then this means haruko was wrong, about the ghost theroy.. "
-SNAP -

- fuk, I forgot about the others..
Tasuku.. don't harm dravendell, only target zeros..
I've delt with zeremus.. -

Tasuku : " finally.. one less signa, to deal with..
ok, i'll try.. but get here quick,
i dunno how much longer i can hold this fucker off..
What are you proposing, naota -kun.? -

Travis : " i'll begin secquence, for ignition pulse of the core..
you get to the others.. cherry, i could use you're help.."

Cherry : " sure, I can do that.."
naota ponders for a moment, before travis and cherry leave.

Naota - if travis emmits the pulse, before the signa reach the core...
no.. we can stop them without using the pulse..
its the question of who is more cunning at this point.-

Naota : " travis, cherry, wait.."

Travis : " hmm? you have.. something else, in mind..?"
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The raging battle lingures onward, as tasuku fends off the vile zeros..
A vibrant display of assaults and tactics,
by both opponents create shocking retorts.
illuminating the daytime sky..
Eri, amarao, avalisk and canti continue to strike down the number's..
the half crew, despratly back them off..
the droid's fall one, by one at an encredible rate.
soon they dwindle down the a large horde..
but the crew is backed aginst the facillities, wall..

Eri : "something beter happon quick,
we can't hold them off forever.. we're not machines..!!"
Naota suddenly phases into sight,
travis follows, as does cherry, and haruko..
the crew finally whole again stand at the ready,
avalsik and eri joining naota on the front..

Eri : " naota kun.. what happoned..
i felt that signas power dissipate..?"

Naota : " he's gone, eri..
so will these two, when i'm done with them..
Haruko : " gooo takkun, hit 'em where it hurts..
i alwyes love these more, climatic events.. don't you, eri kun.?"

Eri - nao san, don't faulter for one second..
tasuku has been full frontal with him..
and hasn't laid a scratch on him..-

Tasuku - yeah but i got him down on one knee.. -

Naota - good enough.. i'm here, now..
-grins - leave the rest to me.. "
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OST : *Deathnote - L's Theme..

Crew :" Right.."

The crew begins to disperse taking care of the last of the droids..
the relentless assault of mechas, drain's the morale of the crew..
but they find strength with in naota's comanding words,
and they struggle onward..
naota looking towords zeros, with a angered expression..

Naota : " i've got a little bone, to pick with you.."
Zeros : " yes.. it would seem so.. "

Dravendell : - ..now we can finish him off, and be done with this..
I only hope that zeros doesn't ignite the flux..
this kid somehow has controll, over the timeline..
his tactics with using it, are clearly visible..

zeros on the other hand, is not as resilliant..
There just be away to go about this unnoticed..

Now that the young king is here..
mother's plan is going, according to schedule.. -

Zeros : " i am zeros zephyer.. lead hunter of this group..
but you probably knew that already.. and if so..
then you know of my strength.. do not underestimate my ability.."

Naota : " who.. me? no way i'd do that..
but, ill tell you this much..
you are not activating that core,
I won't let you within a foot of that door.."

Zeros : " heh rhyming words together.. so trivial..
but i will assure you that you stopping me..
won't afflict with our plans.. we're taking that core..
even if this pitifull planet, has to go in the process..
all the better, for mother.."

Naota : "FUCK YOU, go tell mother i said.. suck my dick..
i aint letting you near that door.!"

Zeros :" then.. heh, we have a bit of a problem don't we..?"

Dravendell smiles as she watches onward..
the sight, intreigue's ger intrest..
Dravendell : - yes.. use it, now..
and meet you're demise.. zeros.. -


Zeros recieves information from mother.
- request, granted.. quadra flux, initiated..
use it well, my son. -
Zeros - just in time too -
Naota begins to power up..
his resonance matches then progresses past zeros's..
but as this instantainous moment happons,
zeros's resonance begins to surpass that of naota's..

Zeros : " initiate, mother's will.. Kelido storm.. "
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- FL CL 2nd comming.. -

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Naota - To think of all that's happoned at that moment,
flashed before my eyes..
everything that i had gone through..
haruko comming when I was twelve,
then the first inncodent spawning canti..
and then the first onslaught, of the mechanical menace.. -the hand -

suddenly.. it was like my whole life, flashed before my eyes..
that is untill i saw the effect, this route was taking..
by the time that i realized this mass chain reaction..
..I was almost, ..too late..
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OST : *ORIGINAL -THE PILLOWS _ I THINK, I CAN _ 2:13

Naota hault's zeros's attack in mid strike..
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naota - Notice I said, ..almost.. -
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Naota grins as he catches zeros off guard, glaring at him suddenly..
zeros soon, begins to back away..

Zeros : - no ?, my storm..?! he stoped it.?! -
How did you stop it..!!? -
- SLAM - a sudden fist from naota, into the stomach of zeros..
- UGghHH..- stop's zeros from backing off, any further.

A shocking burst of energy from naota, now fully terraformed..
Collides with zeros's stomach.. the force, pushing him back..
but the shattering strikes pass through the mechas body,
rippling zeros's insides..

Naota : " it's called.. excelcia..
learn it ..deal with it.. RAAAGGHH!!!"

With a second assault, of quick jab's..
the rippling effect, takes hold of zeros's body once more..
forcing the mecha to double over, from the shock..
he struggles to move, as naota uppercuts using the solarcaster..
and sends the mecha, into orbit..
Naota begins to fly towords the rocketing mecha..

Thinking a singuler thought, and focusing his energy..
Naota - i'll do him in.. like i did, the other.. -

Zeros : " Can't, move.. MOVE DAMN IT !!, ..RAAAGGHH !! "
Zeros rockets towords space..
the emmense pressure from the strike immobilizes him..


as naota comes rushing upward, zeros tries to flip around..
but the tramendace force builds again, as naota comes racing forward..

Amarao : " what's happoning.?! "

Naota - that facillity.. has to go.. no question.. -

Eri : " nao -san's..lifting the facillity.!!! "

Naota - this is the only way..!!!"

Tasuku : - go, naota.. go..! -
Travis : - n.o. what a wonderous power.. - - smiles -
As he says this,
everyone watches as the facillity begins to life into the sky..
dravendell screaming at the sight..

Dravendell : " oh no, mother's baby..!"
she watches in awe as naota begin's pulling forth the gigantic iron..
he struggles at first,
but then wheild's the large structure with great ease.
as the will of his mind, begins to use it's full ..potential...

Naota : " Wrath of the pirate king, RaAaGGhh!"

Zeros looks on with great awe and fright showing through his eyes,
as the impact tear's ..his body, apart..

Zeros : " NOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!! "
as the facillity closes into zeros's body,
the impact send's it into space..
as the facillity flies out of range, of the planet..
we see a massive explosion, that rocks the very pull of the earth..
it is felt from all over..
thankfully, nothing is disturbed..
much..
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FLCL 2nd comming - Maybase facillity : Japan / DESTROYED. -

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Naota watches as he observes the explosion,
from the inner atmosphere of the earth..
he catching his breath, from the attack..

Dravendell watches as the core is destroyed,
in front of her very eyes..

she drops to her knees, as the shockwave hits the earth..
the rummbling, could be herd for thousands of miles.


Dravendell : "is my mind, corrupted..
no..he's.deffinetly.. the missiah.."

Dravendell goes into slight shock..
now realizing naota's true power..

Dravendell - He.. is, the one..
who will restore balance, to the universe..
and destroy mother of medical mechanica.
..noone else, could have lifted that facillity..-
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( Above the Earth / Maybase Tokyo )

OST : * Vadican cathedral - Hellsing..

Naota watches as the last bits of debrie fly by him,
and rocket towords earth..

the fragments burn up in the atmosphere,
as the small fire ball's heat up and disintigrate..

Naota continues to wait to see if any signs of zeros, remain..
untill.. there is nothing, left..
He finally sighs relief..
as the darkness fill's the void, of light's and sparks..

Naota slowly begins to dessend, back towords the surface..

Haruko gripping a guitar towords dravendell
Holding her at bay, ..tasuku tries to hold her off..

Haruko : "no taro -kun.. I wanna beat that slut, sencless.."

Tasuku grips haruko's wrist before she takes,
even one step closer toward dravendell..
she turn's to look at his serious expression,
as tasuku begin's to speak again.
Tasuku : " wait and see what naota, says..
she's the only signa left,
and the droid's are gone..
not to mention the facillity, now..!! "

Haruko : " that fucking piece of metallic goop, .over there..
ain't a human being.. we gotta destroy her, now.!!"

- Clap Clap -
Naota : " ..haruko.."
Naota speaks, as he lands..

Haruko : " - gasp - nao.. tak -kun.."
Eri run's to naota's side, and begins to hug and kiss him..
Eri : " I'm so glad you're safe, naota."

Naota : " haruko.. you wern't planning on destroying her,
without my knoweldge right.?"

Haruko : " so what if i was, takkun ?
shes a threat.. and how do we deal, with threats. hmm...?"
Naota pay's no mind to haruko's babbling,
he simply walk toward dravendell..

who is now on her knees, feeling remorse and fear..
she being alone now..surrounded by the enemy.
Naota : " at first you wanted revenge..
now all the sudden you had a complete change in thinking..
..did you not.?"

Dravendell gives off no expression, other then that of depression..
and solomy speaks, as if they were the only two there..
Dravendell : " yes.."

Naota : " so, it wasn't my friends imagination..
you really were trying to rid you're self, of those two..
why.. what purpose do you have, for destroying you're own kind..?"

Dravendell : " remember what i said, when we first met young king..?
I wanted to get to know you better,
so if it's the satisfaction of slaying this body..
that'll put haruhara's mind, at ease... then please..
I.. can never go back, ..to mother..
this, was my final task for her.. and again, I failed.."

Haruko : " don't listen to her, she's the enemy.!!"

Tasuku : " haruko.. enough.."

Haruko : NO, NOT ENOUGH !!
taro -kun, butt out of my bisnuess !!
the only reason i want tak -kun involved,
is because He know's my past with this.. thing..!!"

Naota : "HARUKO, SHUT THE HELL UP! "

Haruko - gasp - tak -kun.. I.. -

Naota : I SAID, SHUT IT ! "
Naota turn's to dravendell and speaks
Naota : " tell me the truth.. what is you're purpose..?"
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OST : *Bleach - Torn Apart..

Dravendell : " I.. have my own ajendas.."

Naota : " - sigh - ..me and reharu, no doubt..
well.. i really hate to dissapoint you, drvendell..
but, well.. now you're our captive..
so don't think we're giving you, five star treatment..
oh.. you're gonna tell us,
everything we need to know too.. eventually.."

Travis : " holding this one captive,
may result in attracting the other's here, again.."
Naota : " douglas, put her in the stumi's brig..
the facillity is gone now,
so noone's gonna need to worry about mother comming here..
so long as the becan is destroyed, mother can't track the earth.. "

Eri : "which means, we're free from there hold on us..?"

Haruko : "correct - u - mundo, eri san."

Dravendell : " Do you really think you have won so easily..?
mother knows where earth is..
even with the becan gone, she'll find this planet again.."

Naota : " I.. kind of hope she does..
it'll make my job, a hell of alot easier.."
Naota -fuck, she act's like this is typical.. good cop, bad cop shit.. -

Dravendell :" that kind of arrogence, will be you're downfall ..
..young king.."

Naota : " ..she's not gonna reviel anything to us, unless she wants too..
so we're stuck right back, at square one.."

Travis : " well.. we could alwyes try for sillios,
i mean the preistess is willing to met with us..
and she has gathered all intell, on the current situation's
there galaxy is facing.. "

Naota and travis continue to discuss matters,
as dravendell thinks a thought of her own..

Dravendell - sillios..? that's where miles, richtor, and orion
are stationed..
ha ! and they thought zeros and zeremus were tough..
oh boy, i can't wait to see this kid in pain.. -

Haruko : "something doesn't smell right, that zeros fellow..
..where did he learn, that technique..?"
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OST : Original.. *The Pillows - Little busters.

Travis : "beats me..
but that move naota pulled off, did the trick..
we can rest for a few days, then head off to sillios..
look's like you'll be going home for a few days, haruko.."


Haruko : "yeah, i had almost forgotton..
sillios is the home of the sorority..
and the high pristess, is the guardian of the planet..
we should really pay our respects to her,
before searching for the sitar..
she may have something enlightening to say, tak -kun.."

Naota : "everyone take five for the day.. we'll meet on the stumi..
I.. just need to think about some things.. "

amarao : " come on, you scrapheap.. let's move it.."
douglas pushes dravendell towords his vehicle,
he holding her head as he urges her inside..
closing the compartment door, he looks to naota..
Naota.. who simply stands,
looking towords the sight where the facillity last was..

An errie feeling crawls up,
naota's back he then sighs and continues to look on in silence..
eri standing next to him, looks with befuddlement..
pondering thoughts of her own..

Eri - nao san.. you saved the day, and restored the timeline..
why, are you so worried..? -

Naota : " because eri.. you know as well as i do..
this is far, from over.."

Naota : - Mother.. you've terrorized this universe.. for long, enough..
you're demise, will soon be met. -
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-Till the next ACT.. -