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FLCL 2nd co M.M. ing - Session : B act 15

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Sat Sep 06, 2008 7:48 pm

well gang it's saturday and hopefully you've been keeping up,
with the plotline thus far.
till i can get the fact's streight, im postponing saga 4 till this winter.
gives me the edge i need, to keep you all interested.
till next saturday all, enjoy.

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Gaku : " The crew has saved the earth, from annilation..
and they prepare for departure.

But, before we can go further..
there is still, much.. to be explained..

We return you to the next session of..
the mechanical menace.. "

( Opening song : Raion : by jinn )
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FL CL - 2ND COMMING.
Saga #2 : The mechanical menace.
Session : B
ACT : 15
- Revelation, of the pirate king -
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OST - The Pillows : Kim deal -
(Above Earth, Mothership : S.S. Stumi. )

We now look at the bridge of the S.S. Stumi..
commander amarao sit's at his post,
looking at the table..
where the contents of what he is searching for,
is on his right side..
the bump on his forhead is clearly visible as personel,
walk past and chatter about it..
his tension builds as people stare.
and converse amongst eachother..

he finally get's up and says. clearly..
so everyone can hear..
amarao : "the next comment about this bump on my forhead,
will have to deal with me..understood.?"
there was no comment,
he just sat back down in the silence of it all..

trying to find, what he is so despratly searching for..
amarao: "hmm.."
an intreaging tone come from his voice,
he point's a fingure onto the map infront of him..
and says ..
amarao:"there you are.."
he then calls over to the lutennant clearly,
almost sleeping at her desk..

amarao : "lutennant.!"

he shout's as he does not even move..
not taking his eyes off the map.
he then snaps his fingures at her clearly..
needing a pen or something to mark with..
she grabs one of her marker's on the desk,
and slides it over to the commander..

He grab's it and circles the vicinity of where he was looking..
amarao :"this is it.. this is where, he's at.."
for days he has been looking at old map's, of the city of maybase..
looking, for a potential..

Using a sick sence,
he mark's the position of where he might find the person..
then calmly sits back, and closes his eyes..
extending a fingure to note..
amarao : "clearly,
you've been wondering what i've been up to..
well you see, it's like this.."

amarao open's his eyes,
and places a hand underneath his chin..
leaning on one side, he begins to explain..

Amarao : "my last memories before experiencing,
what i like to call an n.o. flux..

It happoned when.. haruko, naota, and I..
raced.. chasing to the top, of the old facility..
Atomsk Inbedded a memory into my head, this memory..
was actually a vision, of his Incarnation.."

Amarao : " he is trying, even as we speak..
to Re-open the channel..
atomsk is in a purgatory, somewhere within the void..
but his reincarnation's mind,
is now even stronger then ever..

still.. he's no where near, the power of naota's..
naota's is the ultimate mind, fused by two kings..
not just one..
this is what haruko, is ultimatly afraid of.."

Kitsurubami look's in shock, the fear stricken to herface.
she can barly move, and out from her lips..
she speaks, only one name.."Atomsk.."

- When you're right... ..you're right.. -
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The next day..

( Earth,Maybase : Japan )
OST - Hellsing Ultimate : Shell Guitar -

( Avalisk ) : age 17
Looking down on a young purple haired male,
walking calmly into town..
holding a glove and bat slung over his shoulder..
a familier face appears off the stranger, of a young man..

He wears a black baseball uniform,
the sleak musculer build shows his fit condition.

walking slowly, looking at the other players at the feild..
He lean's a hand aginst the fence,
gazing into the ball park..

Avalisk watches as they continue, to play on.
he shows a galliant posture, as the sweat from the heat..
pour's down his face and neck.
he takes a towel that is slung over his left shoulder,
then proceed's to wipe his brow..

suddely..
there was a scream from the distiance..
shinjikumi was calling the new recruit, over to the bench..
the young male slowly walk's over,
and slides through the entryway..

Shinjikumi : "aaahh.. there you are my, boy..good..
glad you could make it ."

The old man,
hunched over from the years not being kind to him..
shows a kind look..

shinjikumi : " I need you on center feild,
feel up to it my boy.?"
The young man set's his bat down, and says to him..

avalisk : "uhh.. Shure boss.."
taking the glove that was hanging on the end of the bat,
and places it on his hand..

then starts to run out to center feild.
umpire : "play..ball.!"
says the umpire now standing behind home plate..
watching the game continue..

avalisk stands in a horse stant's and stay's still..
the batter takes his stance, and as the pitcher,
now taking his stance..
to read what the catcher is comuning to him..
the pitcher reads the catcher's hand signal..
he, signalling for a heater..
the pitcher, takes his positon..

he slowly raises his arm and leg,
at his side..
then, with a tremendous amount of force..
he throws the ball to the catcher..
but, the ball is struck by the bat..
and it flies into the air..

the young man with unbelevable skill,
leap's into the air and easily catches the ball..
everyone in the park is stunned by this event.
looking and starring in complete awe..

- comic stlyle O.o; -

player : " The young purple-haired kid,caught that ball?!,"
says one of the players,

shinjikumi : "but It..It, was a homer.!?"
The team stares in shock,
as shingekumi waltzes out onto the feild..
shinjikumi walks up to avalisk,
who was jogging back tword's his coach..
shinjikumi speaks out of frustration..

Shinjikumi : "What are you trying to pull ?
..This ain't no freak show?!.."

The look on his eye is complete frustration,
his eyes twitch and spazz out, as he looks at him.
Shinjikumi : "You're up to bat after this inning,
no questions..!"

shinjikumi agressivly stomps back to the dougout..
flipping his hat, back onto his head..
hoping the youngman can hit, as good as he can catch..

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F L C L 2nd comming
OST - Full Metal Alchemist : Heavenly spirit -

Avalisk let's out a sigh, and walks into the dougout..
the game continues on with another inning...
The catcher Crouching behind avalisk,
hold's out his glove..
The ball, repeatedly.. hit's the glove, of the catcher...
-shoop.. shoop.... shoop...-
The umpire after the third time says,

Umpire : "you're out.!"
Avalisk lower's his head, and sighs out of embarassment.
And slowly walks off the feild..

some of the players from the other team,
begin to mock him.
Player : "your too slow, asshat..!!"
Player : "yeah why don't you practice first,
before playing ball with the big boys.!!"
- team begin's to laugh. -

The young male, walks into the dougout..
his eye's flaring from not being able to hit the ball..
shingekumi looks up at him and says,

Shinjikumi : "Your pathedic..
I've never seen someone..ever!,
miss 3 times in a row!
Even my own grandson can hit the ball..."

The evil look shows he's clearly angry with the young man,
avalisk - sighs - once more..
then sit's flops on the bench, hunching forward..
hanging his head..

The young blonde kid sitting next to him,
speaks as avalisk tries to relax..

Blonde : "hey man, don't look so glum.."
-he smiles to avalisk then says..
"If you want, I can help improve your swing.."

His eyes shift from left to right,
as if hiding somthing important..
not looking at the other teammates..
Avalisk simply says,
"Not interested.."

The blonde kid is stricken back by the awnser,
by the young purplehaired male..

Shocked at such a remark, comming from the new face..
the blonde then lean's back, slouching and relaxing a bit.
He then says, "Fine.-sigh-..have it your way.."
then turns back, and watches the rest of the ballgame..

It continues on and again, the kid is up for bat..
avalisk goes to his stance, and prepares to strike..
Again the pitcher tries to throw a heater..

and now is when avalisk, swung..
Hitting the ball out of the park and into space..
He then run's all of the bases, and land's home..
shinjikumi : "He did it..."

Shinjikumi now drop's his jaw,
as the rest of the teammates follow..
the young man, calmly step's on home plate..

as avalisk walk's back, shimjikuni stares in awe..

avalisk calmly sit's down, looking at the blonde kid..
avalisk : "Surprised.? ..you shouldn't be.."

He then leans back aginst the wall of the dougout,
smiling with his eyes closed..
The blonde looses it..
steam bellowing from his ears as his face gets red as well.
All he can say is..
blonde : "oooohhhh!!!!"..
- whistle from a tea kettle -


- Sometimes,
you have to prove your worth..
for others, to recognize you..-

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- FLCL - 2nd comming.

( Earth,Maybase : Japan )
OST - The Pillows : Super Trampoline,School Kid ! -

Naota and Haruko argue about transportation need's,
and she hands him a phone and says..

Haruko : "If you're that worried then,
here's the phone call'em you're self.!"
She look's away, handing naota the phone..
and inflamed from arguing..
Naota : " well ? I don't know the number.?
besides, it's not a normal number..I can't, dial out..! "
She then looks back at him with a pouty face and says,

Haruko : " please tak -kun.."
her face as pouty as can be, the glowing eyes of her face..
enveloping it, making them the only thing he sees..

he sighs, and calls on the only man..
who had an available craft at the time..
commander amarao..

she look's back away, and say's..

Haruko : " I don't like Mr. eyebrow's..
he stinks, and his tone is rude.."
Haruko fan's a hand infront of her face,
remembering what he had smelled like..
walking away, naota waits for the commander to pick up..

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- meanwhile the commander at his office desk,
picks up the phone..
amarao : "yes..?"
amarao sit's there, listening to the phone for a moment..
in complete silence..
amarao: " I thought you two,
were on your way to the other planet..
it seem's ..I was misinformed.."
he sit's there for yet another minute,
and then replies to naota on the other end..

Amarao: "yes, I can..
but in exchange, I want to ask about a person..
who just moved there..
a mr ..Avalisk, Renmark.. ..know of him.?"

amarao pauses to let naota speak..
but was cut short..
Amarao :"I see.."
he replies holding an apple from his desk in his hand..
amarao: "well then, you're in a jam..
and need one of my personal vehicles?
..It's seems we're at a standstill..
put haruhara, on the phone.."
he waits for a reply from her..
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Naota now calling to haruko from the kitchen, then says..
Naota : "he want's to speak, to you. "
holding the reciver so not to, yell in amarao's ear..

Haruko replies, from in the other room..
Haruko: " tell him.. I'm, umm.. well sort of..
busy, yeah.. and, to call back!.."

The scensarity of her voice, stick's his heart..
naota then says to amarao whille rolling his eyes.
Naota: "umm..she'll have to call you back.."
Naota turn's again,
knowing she's doing something devious, in the other room..
he screams..
Naota: " Haruko.. Put,That,Down.!!"
The commander then tells naota over the phone..

amarao:" Be on the look out, for a purple haired kid..
much like your age.. but, a bit younger..
he's the real deal kid.. atomsk's potential.."
Naota then pauses on the phone and replies..

Naota : "how the hell did you know about that.?!"
The commander then replies..

Amarao : " You'll see, soon enough..Just...
do not ingage him,
we don't know what he's capable of yet.."

The commander hanges the phone up,
and naota stand's there.. looking at the reciver..
Canti walk's by and behind naota..
it walking through the hallway, and into the bakery.
naota hangs the phone up.. and sigh's from frustration..

Naota : "If. I go along with his plan,
he'll know the exact location of The Sitar..
and haruko said noone, needs to know..
not even the brotherhood..
but i can't let this potential get away..
it's a one, in a million shot.. "
He looks down starring, at the phone.
then slowly walks away from it.

- It's not easy, but when the time comes..he'll understand.. -

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OST - The Pillows :last dino -

Next act :
Haruko : "When the bot's attack, we find another recruit..
His power doesn't match that of our tak -kun's,
but hey, we have a nice battle on our hands.

while trainning is in session,
amarao figure's out My next move..
and begin's with a simple jesture of advisment.

Will it be enough to stop the machines, from attacking?
Find out on the next, fooly cooly 2nd comming..
Session : B
ACT : 16
- The new potential. -
(HARUKO):
"Is he really the incarnation, of atomsk.?" 'O.O'-*poke,poke*

( Avalisk ) : "..How Should I, Know ?
..And This Is Me, We're Talking About..! " -.-;

- Till the next act. -
*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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importiant message.

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:41 am

no episode this week,
but for sure this saturday...
sorry for the delay.
*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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FLCL 2nd - Co M.M. ing ACT 16 - The New Potential.

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Mon Sep 22, 2008 3:18 am

Once again, another week has passed and thus..
the beginning of a new week has arrived.
Sorry for the delay of this act, people
these acts have been giving me time to accumulate my plot..
going further and deeper, then ever before.
but as with all good stories, this will simply have to wait.
and i appreciate the hardcore fans,
who have taken time out of their busy lives.
to read this awsome and ongoing story..

so till next week all .. enjoy.
hope this excites you..
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FL CL - 2ND COMMING.
Saga #2 : The mechanical menace.
Session : B
ACT : 16
- The New Potential.. -
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(Location : Earth, Maybase Tokyo .)
OST - the moon is MINE! - the pillows

Naota walk's down the long road, from his family backery..
Canti busy working sweeping, the steps..
waves goodbye to him, as naota begin's his walk..
He takes off,
holding his case and pacing down the dirt road into town..

naota's steps..
much shorter then usual,
as he looks up at the tree's and the sky..
Noticing the clouds passing by in the distiance,
naota look's ahead and continues on wondering,
down to the old hangout..


He had not seen mamimi for days..
This bothered him..
naota : "this.. isn't like her at all..
I wonder if she's at home..?"
naota continuosly walk's down the path,
of there old hangout..
His eyes then turn to a young purple-haired kid,
standing in the distiance..
panting and weezing from running..
hunched over, he continues to try to catch his breath..

Naota then realises..

naota - it's.. him.. -

commander amarao was looking for a person,
fitting the discription of the young male..

naota calmly walks over to the young male..
and speaks..

Naota : "You know, if you had water..
this wouldn't be a problem.."
He tries to lend him a hand, but it get's it slapped away in return..

Avalisk :"I.. didn't.. ask.. for.. ..you're. ..Help.."
Avalisk continues to pant,
not noticing who he was talking to..
Naota shrugs and continues to walk away, saying..
Naota: "fine..-sigh-..have it your way.."
Naota slowly walk's away,
from the young purple haired kid..

finally, catching his breath..
Avalisk calls back to noata..
avalisk:"Hey.. Do,I know you.?"

He asks puzzled and slightly confused..
Avalisk : "It seems like I do..
don't know how..I, just.. get this feeling.."

Naota turns around and heads back towords avalisk..
then begins to rest his posture,
and glances towords avalisk.

Naota : " No, you don't..
just wondering.. who you were, actually.."

He starts to go, turning around to leave but is stoped..
by the sound of the young man's voice..
Avalisk : "My name..is Avalisk.."

Avalisk stares at naota, still with the same puzzled look..
Avalisk : "Avalisk, Renmark.
I, just moved here from the states..."

Looking away from naota, not trying to look back..
but for some reason, can't help it..

naota doesn't reply, just continues to walk away..
avalisk replies to naota.

Avalisk : " Hey.. I was talking to you..? "
he continues to speak, as naota continues to walk off..

Avalisk : "Don't you know, that's rude.?!"
Naota doesn't listen, he just continues to walk away..
The now inflamed avalisk, is steaming..
from the unresponsive naota..

Avalisk's eyes flare up..
all he can do, is watch naota walk away..

- You must first unlearn, what you have learned..
To learn again. -
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Canti outside the shop,
sweep's the steps continuing it's daily chores..
as shingekumi brings boxes from out of the garage,
he turn's as says to canti..
Shinjikumi : "You just had to try, didn't cha..?"

Now looking at the robotic being.
as he then continues to walk the box..
out to the garbage..

canti continues to sweep slowly,
making slow movements with the brush..
looking down, a sign of saddness pops up on the screen..
He simply places the broom, to the side of the door..
and walks into the shop.
canti walks slowly through the backery..
just as naota and haruko, walk out..
there conversation.. could clearly be herd..
Haruko : "Takkun..?!
You can't just go gallavanting around the universe?!
It's not that simple!!"
Naota turn's to haruko and says, as they walk outside..
Naota : "Then why is it,
that you can anytime you feel like..?"

He then grunt's and looks forward, saying to her..
Naota :"Like I have a vespa,of my own.."
Canti continues to mope into the kitchen area..
as haruko and naota begin ,
to walk through the backery on there way outside..

Haruko : "Takkun, I don't understand..
isn't it Like jeliousey, I hear?.."
naota look's to haruko and says..

Naota : "Well ? it's not like I have a ride..
besides, two people on your vespa is too much weight..
I've grown up.."
he then turn's back to her, naota climbing on the seat.
Naota : " Yeah, I'm deffinetly not going then..
especially if you're not gonna teach me,
how to ride that thing.."
Naota - mind fuck me, will you.. ? -

He then points to haruko's yellow vespa..
the shine to it, gleeming off the sun..
he then says..
Naota:"Well..? you going to teach me.?..
or am I going to have to learn myself.?"

The eye on his left side, now twitches a bit..
then settles..
his eyes showing deturmination..
she liked that..
Haruko : "Ok.."
she sighs, throwing her hands in the air..
closing her eyes while doing so.
haruko : "Have it you're way.."
She continues on..
Haruko : "It's you're life.."
She sit's down on the stool inside of the garage..
and looks at him, wondering if he's actually going to or not..
She doubts he can, but doesn't know for sure..
naota crawls to the front of the vespa, and begins to start it..
it roaring up, rev's to a stedy hum..

The rumbling's of a new engine,
just needing the extra push..

Naota : "Now.. all I gotta do, is get it off the ground.."
Looking back at haruko, with a smile from confidence...
She burst's out laughing, the spamatic way..
she alwyes does..
haruko :"You really think, you can?"
she continues to laugh a bit, then settles down..
lookng at him again, she then says..
Haruko :" I'd like to see you pull that one off.!"

She then tries to keep a strieght face,
tears stream from laughing so hard..
Haruko : "You're not even capable,
of weilding you're own weapon fully !
How are you supposed to get, my ride off the ground..?"

She begin's to watch,
as naota use's his power's to lift himself off the ground..

Naota replies with carcasem
Naota : "How's that again, haruko.?"
he stares back to her, she starring back in amazement..

haruko, lets out a sigh..
then begins to speak, throwing her hands into the air..
again, shaking her head at the same time..
Haruko : "That deturmend huh.?
heh.. guess, I've really got no choice..!"

She gets up and leaps onto the bike,
wrapping her arm's around naota by the weighst..
Haruko : "Ok tak -kun..
if you're that damned deturmend,
maybe we should go for a test run..?"
She then says..
Haruko : "hit it !, Whatcha waiting for..?."
she starts to kick, as if the bike was going to start going..
Haruko : " come on, tak - kun.. any second now.... "

she then stops abruptly, as naota now sighs..
and puts his head down..
the n.o. releases the bike, it then slam's down.. hard..

both have a look of shock, from the crash..
haruko then says..
Haruko :" maybe we should try you're landing, first.."

- If at first you don't succed...try, try,again..-
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FL CL - 2nd Co M.M.ing...
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OST - Witch hunter - robin : open, your eyes..
(Milkyway galaxy : Earth, Maybase tokyo )


Mammi takes a bath in her apartment penthouse..
The job she has had for the last few years,
has now reciently paid off..
she looks acrossed the bathtub, and gazes out the window..
the curtins barly open..

she looks onto the small city of, maybase tokyo..
Her gaze setting just off and too the right,
where her and naota used to play..
she then thinks, about her memory.
leaning her chin on her arm,
now resting along the rim of the tub.

She had not seen them for days...
she thinks about the times they shared,
and about all of there adventures..
she never felt more at ease, but still not fully home..

She look's up and leans back into the tub,
letting out a sigh.
staring at the ceiling of her bathroom,
her mind begins to wander..
thinking of the day atomsk was freed..

She was tossed into the air, and landed in the lake..
naota had both guitars in his hand,
standing on top of canti.
She didn't worry about him then..
sometimes it seemd so hard for her..
but.. as years went by,
she then left to persue her dream..

Her leg now streached out over the rim of the tub,
dripping on the towel she had laid down,
before hopping in..
she then sinks her upper half, down into the water..

soaking into it, letting her head sink under the water..

There, she sat for a moment...
closing her eyes, and thinking about the things..
that have happoned afterwards..


Haruko and Naota fighting in the sky..
and then him kissing her...
she then thought that sight, was truly destiny..
her thoughts stray from naota,
and back to the image of atomsk..
comming from naota's head..
and how atomsk sucked in,
the mechanical being from above..

then turning into a ball of light,
and speading off into space..
She sat up from not being able to breathe,
gasping for breath and coughing a bit..

she looks down in the shame of it all,
and slowly gets up and out of the tub..
wrapping a towel around herself,
and dripping on the tile of the area..
she start's to dry herself off..

still, not letting go of the memories they shared..
she start's to take her mind off things for the moment,
and grabs her clothes and starts to dress herself..
tossing her towel upon the top if the bed post..

it's been 4 long years..
since mamimi had returned to maybase..
she still looks at it, like so..
but to her the memories, they seem a bit more..
lost from thought, and cold from her bath..
she retires to her bed.. still thinking, of the days end..

- the problem's seem clear..
but will you deal with them.?
or let them become, your other half..?-
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OST - Skeleton liar - the pillows
(Outside Maybase : Nandaba's bakery )

Canti..
now working outside once again doing his daily chors,
peers around the corner on naota and haruko..
haruko on the back of the vespa,
holding naota by the weighst..
when they came crashing down from naota loosing controll..

Canti shakes his head, looking down a bit..
then slowly.. return's to work outside..

there he finds a young purplehaired kid..
His journey's take him, and place him in tokyo..
noone knows who he truly is..
totally oblivious to his own part..
his own destiny is shwouded before him..
..he is the reincarnation.. of atomsk, the pirate king.


Canti look's up and watches the young man,
walk around the small white fence..
and over by the garage..
a look of curiosity, gleams from his face..
as he walks around the corner,
to find both haruko and naota on the vespa..

his eyes look at what they are doing,
and seem's to be intreigued by there hovering..
then, comming down..

Avalisk flinches as they crash,
Haruko then saying to naota..
haruko : "Hmm.. better work on you're landing, first."
avalisk then says..

Avalisk : " hey, youre that same guy i met earlier.. right?"
..He looks around the garage,
his eyes just as hyper as haruko's..
looking at the vespa, wanting to ride it..
and looking at it's structure..
naota turns, looks..and says.
Naota: " what are you doing here..?"

avalisk then turns to naota, eyes slightly slumped saying..
Avalisk: "There's a sign for hire, I'm kind of looking into it.."

Turning his body, making his back face them..
avaisk look's down, and says ..
Avalisk:" it is still available, right.? "
haruko then stares at the young boy,
her eyes gaze onto his posture..theres no mistake..

it was eactly the same way atomsk himself stood..
she then turn's back to naota, and speaks..

Haruko : "It. It's.. It's, a.. It's, a.. It's, a.."

She drops to her knees, and begins to cry a bit..
shaking her head in frustration..

she then screams at him..saying..
Haruko : "It's.. a lie.. ..A LIE.!"

Not being able to take the pressure,
she then collapses on the floor.
Naota rushing to her side.. avalisk then says..

avalisk : "whats wrong with her.?"
naota glares back at him saying.

Naota : "shut up ok..? she's sick, now leave.!"
avalisk doesn't pay any attention to naota,
and simply sighs and waits there..
not giving a care if he came or went..

but didnt want to upset him,
so he then looks down and decides to leave..
but.. as he turn's the corner..
naota then speaks..

Naota : "wait.."
avalisk looks back, not turning his head..
but looking with his eyes, back at noata..

Naota then turns to avalisk and speaks..
Naota : "I'm sorry i didn't mean that..
did you want somthing, to drink.?"

the young man smiled, and gladly agreed to it..
they both went inside..
haruko still collapsed on the garage floor,
naota turn's to her and says..
Naota :"are you comming.?"
Haruko get's right up and speaks..

Haruko : "saw right through it, huh.?"
she then lets out a sigh, and starts to walk inside..
She faking it, the entire time..
avalisk gives a slight look of puzzlement.
thinking she really was collapsed on the ground.
he then shrugs his shoulders, as he walks inside..

all three now sitting at the kitchen table,
dicuss about the inncodent that happoned 3 weeks ago..
it was a long story..
but they explained everything they could, in great detail..
as they spoke, a new world opened for avalisk..
there expressions clrealy showed,
they were not joking..
they both knew, who this boy really was..
and in therefore telling this story to him,
would open his mind to atomsk's past.
he was impressed by there story, then speaks..

Avalisk : " wow.. simply,amasing.. but, for what purpose?
why do they keep attacking? "
Naota then explain's to him, about the six facilities..
on earth. and the way they travel..
it was only a matter of time.. till they struck again..

Avalisk : "but.. what can i do..?"
said avalisk, in complete intrest..
haruko and naota, both look at eachother..
and then laughed a bit..
both, now in histerics..

haruko then says..
Haruko : "you had better come with me..
there's somthing i need from you. first.."
she then leads him to the other room,
naota looking down while she was doing so.
Naota - the sorority.. is not going to like, this one.. -

naota thinks to himself, as he looks down..
remembering a time not to long ago..
avalisk then runs back, and forth of the doorway..
haruko, right behind him with her guitar in hand..

Avalisk : "help ! ..she's gonna kill me.!"
haruko in the backround says.
Haruko : "come here, you!.
it'll only hurt, for a minute.!! "
..all naota could do..was smile..
Haruko : "I, SAID.. COME, HERE !! "

Avalisk :" WHY DID I EVEN COME HERE !!!?!"

enough pressure will allow the channel to be opened,
but it takes a special kind of head.
you can't pick just anyone out of the blue. -

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OST : the pillows - Last Dino. ( Revised)
Next ACT :
naota and I teach avalisk, how to use the powers of the n.o.

When ready, we give him the rickenbacker to use.
while we prepare for our scout journey,
to the capricus galaxy..

Commander amarao still keeps a watchfull eye,
while mammi.. comtemplate's death ?
..Is there any hope, for the lost ?
or is mamimi's depressional visions..
a revelation in disguise.?

find out on the next, fooly cooly 2nd comming !
Session : B
ACT : 17
- Memories, of the forgotton.. -
(HARUKO) : "this one's worth seeing.!" o.o
(Avalisk) : "I ..was a king.?.. hell, naw.! " ^.^
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*To be continued.. as usual. *
*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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FLCL 2nd comming ACT 17 : Memories of the forgotten.

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Mon Sep 29, 2008 4:08 pm

Well monday's come and gone again, and fall is finally here.

time for another act, hope this doesn't bore you ..too much..

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FL CL - 2ND COMMING.
Saga #2 : The mechanical menace.
SESSION : B
ACT : 17
- memories of the forgotton -

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( Milkyway Galaxy : Earth, Maybase Tokyo )

OST -Hellsing -

For the next, three days..
Avalisk trained hard..with both Naota, and Haruko..
Haruko his training instructor,
and naota his teacher of the arts..
Both strained the young man into it,
his eyes gleam with the ability..
to see the things he was at first, blind to..

But the more his mind opened up,
more thought's started to rush inside.
Forcing him to take a break,
he wondered the town for hours...
Noticing things he saw never before...
untill he reached, The old M.M. facility...

he looks at it's grimm structure, and it's rusted layers.
and gazes upon it's gigantic mass..
Now standing before it, he dicedes to look inside.


There..Avalisk wondered, for what seemed an eternity..

looking at the old structure..
feeling it's memories, The pulse of it's own will..
he sences another, but doesn't know where or who it is..
using caution, while walking through the abandonded corridors.
Tirelessly searching,
for what his mind is telling him to find..
the sites and sounds, are familier to him..

he continues walking up the staircase,
to the top of the building..
knowing not, why to go there..

but his mind, is telling him to do so..
The thoughts now guiding him, like a light..
through a dark tunnel..
he finnaly reaches the top floor,
but before he open's it to the rooftop..
he gazes at the door...
.the old, medical mechanica symbol..
is marked clearly on the door front..
it's casted metallic surface, is cold to his touch..
but he does it none the less.

Feeling it's creases, and gazing upon the symbol..
he then flashes back, to a time where his carnation..
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Atomsk.. was fighting M.M. ..on the planet, Desoliea..

the first inhabited planet, in the universe..

they we're once called, the Time lords..
beings.. who's names, are burned.. into the stars..

There powers allowed them, to supercieed time and space..
they we're the caretakers of the universe.
There species, was the most powerful of beings..
a peaceful society, and there technology, uncanny..
Then they created an A.I. capable of,
trans -exportation to other galaxies..

A medical transport ship,
it's destination..a more slightly difficult mission..
it was damaged by an asteroid,
knocking it into the planet tambion 4.
now, there is no life on this planet..
the complete combustion of the planets surface,
and volcanic activity still run there.

noone know's what happoned, after that..
medical mechanica started to form it's self,
creating new machines..
and deepining its crave for absolution...

creating a society of it's own, spreading it's self..
upon the planet's surface.

atomsk was then dubbed the pirate king,
The general of the desolien armies of the federation...
The coloney of planets, agreed to the terms..
and gave him there help..
With the knoweldge he gained from training,
with and old teacher.
he defeated the knight of terra, jaiden..

the second incarnation of m.o.t.h.e.r.

( Mecha.Optical.Teacher. of Hyper.Equasional.Rythemics. )

Atomsk continued for years,
fighting there terrifiying powers.
Destroying anything, that came within his path..
At this time,
he was the most powerful man.. in the known, universe..

Now, naota carries the torch, with haruko at his side..
And avalisk.. the incarnation of atomsk,
now guards the facility of maybase tokyo..

His goal,
To insure that medical mechanica..
does not, activate the facility..
Haruko told him spacifily..
Haruko: "If they activate that facility..
Kiss, YOUR, ASS ..GOOD, BYE !.."
He look's down at the city, gazing into the downtown area..
few people lingure on, as the days end approches..
his gazes drifts from below to above,
believing that they are right..
..His first real trial will be here soon.
Haruko and Naota now on there way to caprica,
after training the new potential..

They race twords there first destination..
And the trial.. that await them on the planet..

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- FL CL 2nd comming.. -
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( Hyperspace : On route to caprica 4 )

OST - Han franks - shine

Haruko : " Come on, tak -kun..
you have to keep up with the speed,
other wise.. we won't be able to get there in time.!!"
She gives him directions, like he knew how to drive it..
Now outside of the milky way galaxy..
there first destination..
a small planet, assumed under attack by m.m.

there deturmination seemed confident,
as naota drives it there..
Naota : "I still need a vehicle of my own,
you know that right..?"
She sighs and says
Haruko:"Yeah, I know..
but we can deal, for now..
besides.. it's just you, and me now.. tak -kun.."
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Meanwhile..
commander amarao watches from the observation deck,
of the s.s.stumi..
his glare of defiance continues to trouble, and baffle him,..
Amarao : "Humph..look at them..acting like it's nothing.."
the lutennant saying as she looks at him..
Kit : "You know..there in love..
you can't controll free will..
besides we're free too, you know..?
after, what the general said.."
He grunts and says..
Amarao : "yeah, well..
it's all that crap that bother's me,
if they fight, we're in trouble..
if they keep this up?, we'll have a war on our hands..
and even though i'm still defiying orders..
I don't believe, we're gonna to make it out of this one.."

He continues to watch them, as they speed off,
toword caprica 4..

homeworld to the caprican's..
a society of humans, much like us..
but more advanced with technology,
rich from the minerals they produce..
Naturally..they harvest a material like onyx,
much stronger to our own..
and the bright blue glow of the planet,
catches naota's eye..
he then looks back to haruko and says..
Naota:"Hey.. this, look's like earth..
you didn't tell me that..?"
She nod's and speaks..
Haruko : " Mmhmm!, It's exactly the same way..
there just a few centuries ahead of you're planet.."
She then points to the lower half of the planet..
Haruko: "There's we're we land, over there."
She points to the huge landmass,
a small metallic ring can be seen from there position.
Haruko : "And then, we'll get you a good ride, tak -kun..
it'll be better then the one mr.eyebrow's has got,
ready for ya.."

she chuckles a bit, then continues her conversation..
Haruko : "I don't know why ? ..But I just don't trust him..
It's nothing personal..just don't like his tone..
and..well there's alot more to it..
he's been chasing me all over the galaxies..

trying to find out.. why i was, how i was..
it wasn't much diffrent, but..
..well, we should get going,
i don't wanna bore you with my past right now.."

she blinks as they speed off into the atmosphere,
of the planet..

Naota agrees,
as they speed off into the planet's lower half..
and slowly desend upon it's surface...
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- FL CL - 2nd comming..
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( Capricus Galaxy, Caprica 4 : Mining planet of, Caprica.)
(OST - One life - the pillows)

A short whille later..
Naota walks through the gate into the giant city,
a banner waving in the wind..
saying : welcome to Caprica..
mining homeworld of the....
the rest, is torn away..
the desolate town that once bustled with life,
now stands still..

as they both enter the center halls of the city,
naota look's around, as haruko now stands by a fountain..
looking down and over the edge of a stone banister...
not wanting to see the distruction of the planet's decay..
but no matter where haruko looked,
the destruction was everywhere..

she knew, what was going on..
but never brought it to naota's attention..
she hasn't yet realized what has happoned, ither..

but has a good idea..

Haruko: "Come on.."
She says looking at naota while wondering around a bit.

haruko : " we're getting to that shop, and getting you a bike.
there's a transoprt vessal, there.. let's hop, inside.."
Naota looks at her and says.

Naota : "i wouldnt go around doing things like that, haruko..
you know, if there is people around here..
I'm sure they'll get quite pissed,
that we're messing with there technology..
I mean, we're not sure it's even safe to ride.."

She then rolls her eyes at him,
and raises a middle fingure in jesture..

Haruko : " Of course it is..
I've been comming here to this planet since I was a kid.
..it's a, piece of cake.." - grins -
Her overconfidence, really insures naota..
he, rolling his eyes back in turn.
they both soon climb inside,
the vehicle locks them into place,
and the screen pad on the middle of the dashbord..
lights up..
and begins asking for a destination..
haruko says..
Haruko : "Theres a shop at the edge of the city,
take us there.."
she waits for it to move, but it does not..
the battery light then comes on, notifiying the user..
that it's tank was empty..
haruko : "Damn.!."
She grunts as she kicks the dashbord,
the screenthen flicker's out..

she then grabs it shaking it sideways, saying..
Haruko : "no,no,no,no,no.!!!!!"
..She then whines a little and bangs her head,
on the dashboard...
Haruko : " nooo,ho, hoo..
this can't be happoning.. oh god.."

naota looks around outside the window,
knowing if they are going to get there..
it's going by bike.
He slowly start's to get up, exiting the vehicle..
haruko still bashes her head on the dash..
she soon stop's.. looking at naota as he climbs out.

Naota the goes to the vespa,
climbing into it's seat and kickstarting it..

the roar of the engine seemed pritty good..
and started to go.

so.. they continue there quest..

naota find's haruko is still kicking the side of the vehicle..
she look's at him, after the last kick..
her eyes, gasing upon him..
she then slowly climbs on, and they start to fly off..
now hovering over the city..

she see's the devestation of the city's structures..
the buildings.. all but crumbled, before them..
naota then look's back at her as they ride..
and says..
Naota : " Where are we going now ?
the city is destroyed..
there doesn't seem to be any signs of life, and..
This can't be the only one city, on the planet..
somthing is not right..
we need to.."
She then stops him abruptly..
Haruko : " Now..
don't go thinking about investigating, this disaster..
I'm shure they.. have there reasons.."
She closes her eyes, and grips him tightly, saying..
Haruko : "Let's go find you a ride, tak -kun.."

He slowly nods to her,
as they both ride off into the horizion..
Naota -yeah, maybe later..
i can investiage without her, badgering me.. -

- Sometimes, you have to pick and choose you're battles. -
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FLCL 2nd comming..
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( Milkyway Galaxy : Earth, Maybase Tokyo )
- No OST -
Mamimi now in her clothes, sprawl's out on her bed..
She picks up the t.v. remote, and turns it on..
to see what is new, with the world.
she changes the channels, to find that..
one of the other anchors she had been compeating with,
now own's her old spot...

She gasps in shock, when she finds this out..
she then drops the remote..
then places a hand to her mouth, and gasps..
as she watches the more attractive women, on the t.v...
take over her position.
mamimi begins taking the blame out on herself,
She run's to the bathroom..
and quickely lock's the door.

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Yoko kanno - open your eyes

She then leans aginst the door, slowly sliding down..
her whole world, just came crashing down on her..
at that moment, her thoughts turn to naota and haruko..

They alwyes kept her going..
but now, with the recient events..
Mamimi now finds herself alone,
at the most heainous of times..
She ponders about the fact that,
maybe they never really cared in the first place..
She continues dwelling thoughts about her life..
and the times of sadness.
She tries to forget that it was the past..
no longer will naota come to see her,
haruko never really was there to begin with..
her thoughts take her back outside to the balcony,
of her apartment window..
As she steps out..
the cold wind's rappidly gust from the hight,
but don't effect the nearly thin gown she wore..

hair flowing in the wind, she looks up into the night's sky..
thinking of noone else, but Naota..
Her heart then sank, as she takes her final steps..
to the edge, of the balcony..

her expression, nothingness..
tourment from depression...
All of her emotions now drained..
she finally feel's ready.. to take, the last step...

- Atomsk : no, no.. naw girl..
don't do it. don't do it.!... heh, heh, hee..
aww shit.. there goes, the neighborhood.. -
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(FLCL 2nd comming)
( Milkyway Galaxy : Earth, Maybase Tokyo )
- OST - The pillows : instant music -


Avalisk on the other side of town,
sences something terrible..
he then says to himself...
Avalisk : "Why am I feeling like something terrible,
is about to happon.?"
He then shrugs his shoulders,
and continues to stare into the city..
gazing upon is magnificence..
Avalisk "It's no wonder why my mother wanted to move here.
the scenery.. is so.. beautiful.."

he says lighting a smoke, and inhaling it slowly..
he look's back again,
he then spots a beautiful girl looking out of her balcony..
Her expresson is of saddness..
and tears stream down her white cheeks.
he watches as she approches the balcony..
careless of her step, she has no regrets..
just aimously watching the sky..
just as she takes her last step,

avalisk watches as she dives off the balcony..
he then throws down his smoke..
and races toword mamimi.
his speeds keep him at a stedy pace,
as he approches the apartment skyscraper..
the girl still falling slow enough so he can catch up,
and catches her.. before he hits the pavement..

-thud-, avalisk is slammed aginst the concrete..
a crack is left in his wake..
the size of it would be of a normal human being..
but noone around the two, really notice the comotion..
the citizens don't even notice, she fell..
he then gets up and speaks..
Avalisk : "boy -sigh - that was sure close..
are you alright miss.?"

Mamimi not saying a word, gets up..
and begins brushing herself off..
then, looking back to avalisk..
she notices the guitar he held..
slung on his shoulder...

mamimi -
..even when youre gone..
youre still watching over me, naota.. -

Mamimi spoke in a quiet voice..
looking down as she passes him by, saying..

mamimi : " Thank you..but I would of rather,
left this world in peace..
but it seems that someone, wants me around, after all.."
She calmly goes back into the apartment complex,
and quietly dissapears..
avalisk is now confused, he sighs and says..

Avalisk :"just my luck shes beautiful pettie and silent..
but shes also a bit on the suisidal side..
but still.. noone should be alone..least of all, her.."

Avalisk begin's to walk away..
then realizing what he just said..
throwing his hands in the air, he then says.

Avalisk : "I don't even know why I bother ?! Sometimes..!!"
Walking down the road he then kicks a trashcan,
it smashes into a nearby window..
causeing an alarm to go off..

he looks around to see if anyone saw him doing so,
luckely.. noone was around..
he begins to race off, in a blinding dash..

- It's really what people want..
but sometimes, it's fate.. that brings us back together..-
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OST - the pillows : last dino -
(HARUKO)
Next ACT:
Kammon and shingekuni work on the backery roof,
while naota and I,
Look for any signs of life on the planet Caprica..

The commander is now persuing his own intentions,
as avalisk now battles, his first trial, to protect the facility..
is it only a matter of time,
till medical mechanica prevails..?

(NAOTA) On the next,fooly cooly 2nd comming..
Session : B
ACT : 18
- Holy grounds, of the Ancient city. -
(AvALisK) :" Cool !, But You Ain't Seen My Best..Yet.!!" XD
(HAruKo):"Naota..!!
This bucket of bolts, won't run it's self.?!" -.-*

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* To Be Continued. *
*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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FLCL 2nd comming ACT 18 - holy grounds of the ancient city.

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Wed Oct 08, 2008 6:14 pm

sorry gang, for the lateness of the following act.
in the meantime, enjoy the revised version.
in other news..
there's been some strange reports about kazuya tusurumaki,
and the rebuild of evangelion continuations..

Don't think this project will last very long..
according to briscou news,
they said that he might end up ending the saga before it begins..
so not to get anyones hopes up,
but don't look forward to any kind of plot after the war..
sorry gang if i ruined it for you, but please enjoy this next act.
more to follow as this story developes.

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FL CL - 2ND COMMING.
Saga #2 : The mechanical menace.
Session : B
ACT : 18
- Holy grounds of the ancient city.. -

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OST - The pillows : Instant music. -

Canti quest's..
to find all of his own broken pieces,
after he tried to repair one of the other medical mechanica droids.

It attacked him..
he having no choice but to destroy it..
looking into the city he find's the young purple haried kid,
walking the bridgeway..
crossing a busy section to downtown,
Canti then gets up and starts to walk toword him,
looking out into the riverbank..
Canti's reflection is casted along the rivers edge,
as he continued walking along the path..
Avalisk waves to him as he walks passed,
the robot only waves back..
avalisk continues to walk,
thinking of the events of the night before..
Avalisk : "I still can't get her out of my mind,
what's her problem anyways..?"
knowing his thoughts wreak havoc on his concentration,
he continues to look about the city..

trying to find out about himself..
he soon comes to a spot where the trail ends..
and a giant wall appears infront of him..
he looks at it and speaks..
Avalisk : "why here.? what was here.. before this.?"

His sights take him around the corner and onto a small area,
the riverbank could be seen right next to the walking path.
he pondering for only a moment, avalisk starts to walk into the feild..

There,
avalisk sat on top of a small hill over looking the bankside..
It's beautiful blue waters fill his eyes.
he has never seen anything like it,
amazginly beautiful scenery captivates his heart.
he sighs for a moment, taking in the peace..
but his thoughts trail off into the wild blue light,
of the sky now turning yellow..
and eventually red, as the sun sets in the horizion..

Canti soon peers from around the wall,
silently evesdropping on the young male..
canti look's on, watching avalisk hover over the bayside..

Avalisk's eyes fill with glee and amasment he then look's up and says..

Avalisk : "Is This, truly heaven.?
noone truly knows that even on earth..
you are free.. truly, free."
tears begin streaming down his face,
he looking up into the sky..
arms streached out as he glides colser to the clouds..
Avalisk : "sun, of the mother..
take me, as i climb..
no more, will i feel pain..
only in your arms will I truly, find peace..
give me your warmth, touch and bless me with your essence.."

With the light of the noontime sun beaming down upon him,
mamimi back at her apartment, look's out from her balcony..
notices avalisk as he glides higher,
and higher into the sky..
Mamimi's eyes light up..
and she sees Avalisk climb high into the sky..
it remind's her of canti the bot..

avalisk's arm's now streached out, soar's like an angel..
Soaring higher and higher.. into the daytime sky..
mamimi looking onto avalisk then says..
Mamimi : "He's.. the real thing..! nothing like lord canti, but better.
like watermelon.. in the summer time,
or like cot 'n' candy, in a sunshower...
not like the smell, of a blackbord eraser at all."

Mamimi continues looking on toword avalisk,
mesmerised as he flies around and begins to pray towords the sun...

Mamimi : "He.. is truly.. a god.."
Mamimi watches as avalisk dissapear's into the sky,
the clouds form back in as he pushes through, expelling the light..
as the storm slowly begins moving into the city..
canti look's around to see if anyone is watching,
and then shoots up as well through the clouds..
making a small hole within the layer..
it dissapears, in an instant..
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- FL CL - 2nd co M. M. ing..
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( Capricus Galaxy : mining capital, of caprica. )

Meanwhile on caprica..
The two heros are pondering there next move..

naota sit by the campfire,
calmly preparing a meal for the both of them..
he soon set's a bowl infront of haruko,
and quietly sit's down to eat.. himself..
Haruko : "what's this ?"
haruko says as naota places the bowl infront of her..
a moment later..
she sniffs the bowl, and peers at it's white texture.
then takes a spoon and looks at it,
as the soup slop's back down into the bowl...

Naota then look's back at her and says..
Naota : "it's potato soup, it's all we have left.."
he solomly goes back to the fire, and haruko takes a sip..
she soon start's to scarf it down..

naota gazing into the campfire begins to speak to haruko..
Naota : "We, have to find somthing to eat.. or we'll starve.."
she gulps down her portion..saying
Haruko : "yeah..". -.-;

knowing there rations are slim to none..
Naota looks back at her and says..
Naota : "what does the indicator read..?"
She blinks at him gulping her bite down,
then pull's the locator out from her pocket..

she start's to tinker with it, trying to make it work..
Haruko : "uh.. it's not picking up any signals.."
she whines a bit..
Haruko : "..man.... what's wrong with this thing..?
..maybe over here.."
she says as she start's to walk over by the tent..
naota start's to peer out on the lake, they've camped beside of..

his thought's..
trailing to the no signs of life at all within the city..
she then kicks a rock.. but trips trying to kick it.
Haruko : "oops..."
naota looks back and watches her try to get up,
using the guitar as a crutch..
Naota : "you.. ok.?"
he say's looking over at her..

Haruko get's back up,
dusting herself off and looking back to him saying.
Haruko : "Fine, fine..."
she grips her guitar and pull's herself back up..
picking the locator back up and reading it..
Haruko : "hey.."
she says looking back at him..
Haruko : "this thing still works.."
waving it at him,
she then smiles and goes back to reading the device..

naota continues watching her, and tells her..
Naota : "hey if you want, you can have the tent tonight..
- Sigh -
I'd rather take a look around this place.
there maybe some sign of life left.."
she looks back and says..
Haruko :"Oh, ok...Thanks..."
- ..leave me, why dont'cha.. -
she continues on to say..
Haruko : "hmm...
your pritty shaken up about all of this, aren't you tak -kun.?"
A pondering look appears from her expression,
as she continues to read the locator..
Naota then grabs his solarcaster, and begins to lift into the sky..
looking back down to her, he then says.

Naota : " Stay here, while I research the grounds we over looked..
I'll post back anything i find..
you.. should really be doing the same, haruko."
he sighs for a moment,
haruko looking back in her usual droopy eyed way..
he then goes onto say.
Naota : "This just, doesn't feel right.."
using his guitar as a transportation device, he soon takes off..

haruko blinks in his wake,
she then shrugs her shoulders and heads inside of the tent..
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Session : B
FLCL 2nd comming
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OST - Ravenwings : world without logo's -
Naota glides along the eastern costline for a few miles,
looking for any signs of life..
Naota : "There's..noone here..-sigh-"
He continues to glide scanning the area for signs of life..
The cities distruction can clearly be seen,
It's structures a reduced to rubble..
there are no signs of life, hesoon looks down and again, sighs..
saying to himself..
Naota : "This, look's like a battle happoned..
but where ? ..there are no facillities here..?"
He find's a place to land, and skips off his guitar..
grabing the strap as he lands..
slinging his guitar on his shoulder as he land's, on the ground..
Naota immediatly begins walking afterwards..


He soon walks up a side road,
pondering about the strangeness of the tall..
but heavily damaged building..
it, being the only one still standing.

Naota : "this ..is the only building standing, why..?"

The metallic surface continues to elude him..
and he finds debree all over the place..
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Meanwhile back at camp..
haruko sit's and tunes her guitar..
she silently thinks to her self, as she waits for naota to return.

Haruko : "...Hmm...I wonder if i should get a banjo..?"
then shakes her head and says again to herself..
Haruko : "what am i thinking.."
she looks around the desolated area,
the lake and trees the only thing she sees..
Haruko : "This..this is bad..
noone's here, and the city look's destroyed..
I wonder where everyone fled to.?"
she begins to tune her guitar again, starring into the nighttime sky..

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Back in the abandonded city..
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Naota peers at some rubble in the distiance..
his sights take him closer, and he walk's towords the debree..
he pushes a bolder aside, and looks at the large door..
branding within the city streets..
he look's at it's structure, and notices it's a door..
Naota : "heh ..thought so.."
- they must of fled underground whille the attack's were occuring. -

naota takes off, in the same direction as he came..
going back to camp, finally..
after a while..
Naota get's back to the camp, and grab's his guitar as he lands..
he walk's over the the tent..
Naota : "haruko....i've found somthing."
she look's back and sspeaks whille setting up blankets.
Haruko : "really now.. what is it..?"
she tilt's her head, and thinks of what hes saying..
then slowly gets up and emerges outside the tent..
naota then says..
Naota : "it's and underground tunnel..
..might lead to somthing..?"
Haruko : "if theres trouble..we can handle it.."
she then nods and follows him carrying her guitar as well,
soon both are flying along the coastline..
he looks back as she struggles to keep up..
he saying to her..
Naota : "come on, keep up.."
Haruko nods and replies..
Haruko : "hmm...right."

there course..
take them around the east bank of the central city,
they land and he shows her the hidden door.
Naota : ..what do make of it..?"
Haruko : "Hmm..."
she says and looks around a bit..
haruko : " Not bad, but.. how do you open it.?"
she smirks.. looking sarcasticly.
Naota : "I'm not sure.."
Naota turn's and peer's back at the door,
with the mysterious markings on it..
haruko begins to investigate,
the strange marking on and along the wall..
noticing a resembelance, to what naota was looking too.

Haruko : "What is it? "
as naota continues to compare markings..
haruko : "it's like nothing i've ever seen..
i'm not sure how to open it.."
he then checks a pocket, and slowly pulls out a note pad..
Naota - these glyphs resemble the same method the roman's used.. -
haruko continues to look around..
and says to herself..
Haruko : "You think there'd be some sort of key, or passage...?"
..she ponders looking at one of the patterns, and follow's it down..
naota then speaks whille continuing to write down leters and text..

Naota : " yeah..there should be a switch or somthing.."
looks around the corridors, the halls are emminse..
for the two heros..
naota places the pen and pad back into his pocket..
and tries to move some more of the rubble, in front of him..
Naota : "there's too much to move.. not, all at once.."
Naota looks to haruko,
speaking to her as she crouches down next to him....
"There's no way in getting it open..?,
we can't even push it open...unless..."
she grips a side of the door,trying to pry it open..
but it's no use, and she looks back to him..
Haruko : "Now what...?" says haruko, looking puzzled..
naota.. looking at the ground,
an indentation can clearly be seen..
leading from the door, around the corner..
he then speaks again.
Naota : "let's see where this leads us.."
pointing at the marking's leading around the corner,
she sighs and then says..
Haruko : "We can do that, too..."
she blinks and follows him as they begin to follow the markings..
the strange glyphs lead them around the corner,
and into a large building..

there are markings all over the place..
Haruko looks up and tugs on naota shoulder..
he soon looks up as well..
they stare in awe for only a moment at the spiraling structure..
Naota : - this isnt normal..
it's like the citizens and the population..
..have totally, dissapeared. -
Haruko : "it's the language of this planet..
but the building's destroyed.. ..there.. everywhere.."

Naota : "..it's going to take me some time,
to decifer this encoding..
..i think i can pull it off,
but piecing together all of this rubble's.. gonna take, some time.."

Naota : - not to mention..
there's still alot we don't know about this place.-

naota thinks to himself, whille looking back at her..
she then sighs and groans..
Haruko : " ..more like, forever...."
she then slides down the side of the wall, and begins to pout..
wanting the door to be opened right away..
Naota sigh's and goes to his work,
as haruko begin's tuning the ebo..
Naota concentrates on the glyphs,
pulling rubble and slowly piecing it together....

- If at first you don't succed...try,try,..again..-
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OST - The pillows : stalker -
Meanwhile back on the s.s.stumi..
amarao is hard at work,
trying figure out what our hero's were up to..
there, entering the corridor to the silo..
he looking to the monitor, on the two as they head inside..

amarao : "impressive..
he knew the language, without even knowing it's power...."
he look's back at the lutennant..
still watching along side of him, amd begins to conversate...

Amarao : "Trask, may have set a trap for the both of them..
if,they make it out alive.."
he cuts himself off as kitsurubami nods back to him..
amarao not needing to say another word.
they continue to watch on.. as naota and haruko walk inside..
the lutennant then say's

Kit : "Any need to back these two, up.?"
she ponders at the sight of the commanders head,
now doubled in size..
his head looking like a humanoid crown.
Noone of the other worker's complained about it,
but.. still notice it..
Amarao, sit's and drink's from his coffie mug..
pondering about the other two,
wondering if there trial here..
will meet the qualifications they need..
Amarao : "trask wanted to test him.. hes gonna get his results..
the brotherhood planned this from the beginning, with atomsk..
but now that things have changed..
it's up to the kid now.."
Kitsurubami look's back at amarao..
and speaks..
Kitsurubami : "So.. this is a sort of trial..?
nao san, wont like the sound of it..
if we told him he was being used, like this.."
Amarao nods and watches them, walk down a long corridor..
Amarao : "There going to encounter a little trouble,
that the brotherhood set up for them..
One of the facalties of the brotherhood,
dismantled and reprogrammed one of those mechas..
Trask is using that, as his test on the kid.."

Amarao then kicks back, and continues to watch..
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After a while..
haruko taps her foot, and grows impacient..
she begins to speak to him after an hour or so..
Haruko : "so.... so.. any, luck....?"
she looks down at the pattern he began to write in chalk..
he found in one of the many corner's of the building,
he continues to write as she looks around..
he ponders a moment..
and then speaks..
Naota : "I think there's some sort of generator,
underneath the city.."
he continues to say
"if we can activate it.."
shes intregued by his notion.. and leans against the wall
Haruko : "ok...how do we get there?"
he look's back to her, and speaks..
Naota : "It's all right here."
he point's all around the large building,
showing her all of the strange writings..
he then turns back to his work,
and points our the puzzled rubble.
Naota : it seem's to me..
the people of this planet had a genetic reaction,
to anything they touched..
so long as they drew a pattern infront of an entrance...
its like a safty lock, only the mechanisem.. is the genetic makeup.."
haruko : "oh i get it, it's like we can become keys.."
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OST -The pillows : Carnival -
Naota : " it's almost like a dead language,
we have back on my homeworld.."
he looks back at her and continues to speak.

Naota : "hey, you know what.. ?
try the side pannel in the main hall, I bet it's a com of sorts..
you're good a hacking thing's.."
She nods and goes to work, while he is baffeled by the encodings..
of the planet's language..
he scratches his head looking back at the upper half,
of the markings then to the rubble he has reconstructed..

Naota : - this pattern is familier..
i need a translator, to configue exactly what it says..
from my knoweldge..
if we can alter our makeup, we could open the door..
but, in order to do so I need a power source,
and to do that.. I need the translator.."
-uggh- He is now frustrated at this notion..

but naota continues to concentrate,
stairing at the glyphs and inspecting them.
Haruko comes back after a moment,
and looks down at him saying..
Haruko : " I can't activate the console... ..so, like.. now what..?"
he continues to write and read saying..
Naota : "we sit..and wait..till i can decifer this damn language..
i'm not giving up..not just yet.."
as naota continued to decypher for hours..
he writing on the notepad kept in his right pocket..

Haruko groan's again, and sink's to the floor..
she lean's along the wall..
not being able to bear, bordem any longer..
naota then looks at her and says..
Naota : "damn, this sucks..
i can figure this one out.."
points to one of the writings and looks back at haruko..
Naota : "but i can't decifer this one..
it has to be a, puncuation.."
saying so,
as he points to another one..
he then flicks his smoke away, and exhailing the smoke out.
the ciggerette but flies off into a dark corner..
the lit end still burns a redish glow, slowly.
she looks impatient staring at him and saying..
Haruko : "Well, what does it say...?"

Naota sighs and places his hands upon the ground,
not knowing the effect it took upon the rubble..
placing his hand's onto what he was writing..

the symbols start to glow..

Naota looks to the writing in shock,
trying to shuffle back while looking at the pattern..

Naota : "what.. is this..? ..the writing's there, glowing.." o.o

she looks and says..
Haruko : "you said if you could decypher the language,
it would react.. maybe this is some sort of sign, tak -kun.?" n.n*
he nods and says.
Naota : "yeah.. "
- I'm close, but not close enough.. -

he continues to stare into the light, trying to decifer the markings...
he ponders the writings and thinks.
Naota : "maybe, there is a way. to just, touch the door."
after a while of trying the com again..
Haruko comes walking back into the building
Once again speaking to naota with a bored tone..
Haruko : "Still no luck on the console, tak -kun.. you have any luck..?" she scratches her head , it itching from hour's of frustration..
Naota : "i have a theroy.. but i'll need you're help..
we have to move some of these fragments.. over by the door.."

Naota looks down on the stone writings,
trailing back into the desolated building..

haruko stands and watches naota trail back to the door,
pad in hand, naota approches it..
Naota - yeah, this just might work.. -

soon the fragemnts had been moved infront of the door,
to the underground..
naota kneels before the door, and begins to write..
drawing the pattern around the words..
the language, slowly to begin's to glow..
Naota kneel's back, as the pattern is now complete..
Haruko : "now what.?"
haruko asks..
Naota : " just watch.. "
she looks back at him, her eye's showing discouragment..
saying..
Haruko : "What...?"
a sweatdrop form's above her head..she then says..
Haruko : "Is that it...?"
naota -sigh.. impacient, as ever.. -
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OST - Stalker goes to bablyon. -

Naota soon lean's forward and touches the door..
In doing so, he places his hands upon the pattern once more..

the light start's to glow, and he backs off immediatly..

the patern now shines a bright glowing green light, and then fades..

the doorway slowly opens..
Naota look's back at haruko..speaking with befuddlement..
Naota : "huh..guess the decifering, worked..?"

she then nods saying..
Haruko : "mmHmm."
haruko follows naota ,as they proceed inside the doorway..
as soon as they do so, it closes behind them..
now in total darkness, except for a small dim light shining from the distiance..
they continue walking..
Haruko : "well..we're in the dark,
and there's a light at the end of this tunnel.."

..she blinks and nods..
Haruko : " yep.. totally obilvious here, tak -kun.."
naota grabs his solarcaster silently..
glaring to haruko as if she knew what to do..
holding it in the air, naota emmit's a low green and red light..
it shines bright as he holds it up above his head..
haruko : "there.. we'll just shine some light on this subject.."
and naota let's out a sigh while as haruko speaks..

naota gives the solercaster a bit more n.o...
which intrun.. glow's bit brighter..
naota : "Much better..."
haruko gives a tumb up, and they continue on..
they walk down the long pathway..
the only light aside of naota's guitar..
was the opeining ,on the other side..
Naota : "There are markings along this path as well,
they are much the same as we saw outside.."
he says as he walks along side of her..
Naota : "i'm not shure we're this is leading us..
but if it's to the reactor..then it's a safe bet."
they continue to walk till the end of the corridor..
the light now getting brighter,
as they progress through the darkness..
they enter a huge silo but no missle inhabits its entryway..
naota look's up into the entryway says calmly..
Naota : "its a missle silo.."
he turn's back looking to haruko..

Haruko : "there must of been base within the underground, here..
- SNAP -
we just hit paydirt, tak -kun.."
he ganders at the silo saying..
Naota : "Oh....looks that way.."
Haruko continues to look around..
Naota glances toword a doorway above them,
and points it out to her.

Haruko : "and.. yet, more walking.."
Naota : "it seems so much like our technology,
but like you said.. a few centuries, over our's.."

Haruko notices a console on the wall,
she turn's back to him while walking, pointing at the com..
Haruko : "hey.. this is a security, file bank..
if i can activate it.. it can tell us, what exactly happoned here.."

Naota : "haruko.. ..reactor, first."
he says looking at the door, not to far from them..
and points to the other end of the silo.
they soon come upon the doorway,
and naota notices another marking on the side wall,
he then simply touches it,
placing his hand upon it's surface..
and the door opens.

the large blast door's now open widly,
and they walk down and into a main area,
where there are several lifts and escolator's..
leading down to the lower halls of the facility.

Naota look's back to haruko and speak's while walking..
Naota : "you seem quiet haruko.. anything the matter.?"

he looks at her,continuing walking down the long path..
she then says..
Haruko : "I'm observing the area..
can't be too cautious, tak -kun."
she blink's and continues following naota..
walking down the stair's..
and entering into the reactors main deck..
looking at the strange technology,
naota look's back to her and speaks..

Naota : "we're here, there's the reactor.."
naota point's as he look's back to haruko..
not knowing the giant medical mechanical being,
standing behind him.
he look's to haruko, she showing a face of sheer fear..
looking above naota's head.
he never noticing, the shadowous mecha.. lurking behind him..

Naota : - this is all, too weird..-
Naota : "haruko ..what's wrong..?"
She continues to stare in fear,
as the being now reached it's full height..
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Suddenly, a large fist came crashing down behind him..
launching the two into the air.
The other fist plunges Naota, into a nreaby wall..
crushing him into it..
the presure is emmense and naota, strugggles to break free...
haruko begins to pick her ear while standing back up,
her guitar rested over her shoulder now noticing naota was in danger..

Naota : "uughhkk!"
Naota : - Damn it.. should of seen that, comming.. -
he spits blood from being knocked in the stomach,
the pressure exceeding his limitations..
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- FLCL -
Atomsk : " soon naota, your power's will increase.. expenentially "
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Naota falls into a nearby pile of parts..
it's glance now takes it's turn on haruko,
she then notices what was happoning and says..
Haruko : "hmm..? -flicks away ear wax.. -
oh, right ! Let's, Get It On !!!"

Haruko in anger, grips the EB -O..
and revs up the motor..
the mecha sarcastically turn's and walks away from naota,
and it then starts to walk towords haruko..
it's sights set on her, her eyes seeing the same fate as naota..
she then grips her guitar, gulping her pride saying..

Haruko : "OK,My turn.. Come get some, you heap of scarp metal ! "
she launches an attack, running along side of the silo's walls..
and gaining speed..
as she does so, haruko dodges the punches from the machine.
stoping only for a second.. to leap at the bot..
only to be knocked back aginst a wall herself..

Naota then launches from the pille he was under..
now in mid air he huff's from being out of breath..
Naota : "Think.. you can, get rid of me.. that, easy.?!,HUH.?"
Naota: - insulting fuck, I'll show you.. -
His eyes inflamed by the insult, and the rage begin's to spread..
now having total controll, over his emotions..

Naota grunts at the disrespect,
and spits the salty blood from his mouth..

The machine has showin naota a ton of flaws of it's structure..
hovering there in mid air, naota then begins to speak..
in two voices at once.

..one of atomsk, and one of his original self..
both of a deep tone, naota speaks as the reddish glow intensifies..

Neota : "you..
I'll show you the meaning of the term, HOLY..MESSENGER !!!"

Naota suddenly launches his own attack, but the bot reflects him.
and knocks him back, in the process..
Naota's body slam's aginst the hard metallic surface, of the silo..
Leaving an inprint from the hard impact..

haruko look's back as she watches naota,
get slammed aginst the wall..saying..
Haruko :"Oh that's gotta hurt."

naota slides down once more, landing on his knees..
the pain begins to set in for him,
and naota becomes short of breath..

she looks back onto the bot and says.
Haruko : "...O..k!"
and leaps into the air up at the Machine, and swings the ebo...
only to simply get wacked away to the wall.

another imprint is left from haruko's body this time...
she slam's aginst it hard.. and slides down saying..
Haruko : "Ohhh...that's gonna hurt tomorrow.."
she twitches,
as she slides down the metallic surface of the missle silo..
Naota regains himself.. and start's to grip his guitar..

the pulse imminating from it..
the powers of the n.o. trapped inside..

calling him..
he looks down showing only his hair,
and starting to feel the rage overcome him..

he says, once more with both voices..
Neota : "I'll, show you.."

He glares at the machine, now walking back toword him..
it's movement's are absent, as it's walk's..
almost like it is controlled, by somthing..
Naota scream's in a fit of rage, feeling the n.o. take over..
once again, the reddish glow emminates from his being..
the scar of atomsk, glowing from his forhead..
Naota launches himself streight through the machine's body,
like a knife through butter.

the flare colored light, dissipates from his stream..
from the ground, through the machine's body..
now above it, naota stares back and watches the explosion..

just then haruko kicks off from the wall, and land's..
watching naota, make his mark..
she says
Haruko : " oh...what power.."
gripping the handle of the ebo..
and continues to watch in silent awe..
naota soon look's around, after the debrie and smoke dissipate..
he then lets out a sigh and speaks..
Naota : "huh.. that was easy.."

his attention then turn's to haruko,
and he looks down at her..
Naota : "you ok down there..?"
he then reverts back from a flare colored stream of light,
and glides down to meet with her..
she gets up and speak.
Haruko : "Uh...y-y-yeah....Oh I'm fine..Just peachie kean.."
she says with a nervous smile, looking at naota..
and pondering about his power..

He looks away and starts to walk along the corridor..
speaking with his back turned to her...
Naota: "let's go.. we gotta reach the reactor's main computer.."

she looks back with a blink at the destroyed robot..
and speaks as she turns..
Haruko : "Right then.. let's go.."
she giving him a small smirk,
as they walk into the central command's mainframe.
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OST The pillows : - Last dinosaur -

Naota sit's down at the front console,
and starts to type word's into the computer..
it runs a simple diognostic of what happoned,
and then it start's to reboot it's self..

He then looks back at haruko and speaks as the rebooting proceeds.
Naota : "this is it, we're gonna finally find out what happoned here.."

she blinks at him then start's to hear strange noises,
from the outisde of the underground base..

she watches as naota then continues to type on the keybord,
placed infront of him..

everything, one at a time.. start's to run..
Haruko : "now what?"
she says as she looks at him,
the computer begins to show the diognostic is now complete,
on the screen..
Naota : "we're done here..
time to get back to that console we found..
she nods and speaks..
Haruko : "Right! "

they soon proceed to walk down the once, narrow dark hallway..
that lead to the surface, of the capital...
his mind back on the machine,
and the notion that m.m. still lurked on the surface..
now brightly lit, they continue up the corridor..
Naota ponder's about the whereabouts of the other droids,
around the vicinity..
then around the colony planets..
Naota : "there still somthing that's not right."

he says looking down on the portable translator he found,
while inside the base..
Naota : "it's saying there was a battle aginst each other..
but this is the thing, there are no records of any kind of conflict..

douring the past few months before they we're attacked..?"

This really troubled naota, and his thoughts go back on
the conflicts with earth..

Naota : "we should head back home, after we're done here.."
Naota : - there's still alot the brotherhood,
and amarao have to awnser for.. -

haruko nod's her head in compliance to naota.
and they both soon race into the night's sky..
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Next Act :
Haruko : naota and I,
are on the verge of uncovering a dasterdly plot with caprica's demise.
while avalisk takes on his first trial..

is it enough to keep the earth safe..?
or will the potential, screw up..?
and I'm not talking about fooly coolying, with mamimi..

find out on the next, fooly cooly - 2nd comming !
Session : B
Act : 19
- destruction, meet's it's peacemaker. -

Amarao : "let's just hope this Avalisk kid.. has, what it takes.."
- eyetwitch -
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*To Be Continued.*
*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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FLCL 2nd comming ACT 18 - holy grounds of the ancient city.

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Wed Oct 08, 2008 6:17 pm

sorry gang, for the lateness of the following act.
in the meantime, enjoy the revised version.
in other news..
there's been some strange reports about kazuya tusurumaki,
and the rebuild of evangelion continuations..

Don't think this project will last very long..
according to briscou news,
they said that he might end up ending the saga before it begins..
so not to get anyones hopes up,
but don't look forward to any kind of plot after the war..
sorry gang if i ruined it for you, but please enjoy this next act.
more to follow as this story developes.

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FL CL - 2ND COMMING.
Saga #2 : The mechanical menace.
Session : B
ACT : 18
- Holy grounds of the ancient city.. -

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OST - The pillows : Instant music. -

Canti quest's..
to find all of his own broken pieces,
after he tried to repair one of the other medical mechanica droids.

It attacked him..
he having no choice but to destroy it..
looking into the city he find's the young purple haried kid,
walking the bridgeway..
crossing a busy section to downtown,
Canti then gets up and starts to walk toword him,
looking out into the riverbank..
Canti's reflection is casted along the rivers edge,
as he continued walking along the path..
Avalisk waves to him as he walks passed,
the robot only waves back..
avalisk continues to walk,
thinking of the events of the night before..
Avalisk : "I still can't get her out of my mind,
what's her problem anyways..?"
knowing his thoughts wreak havoc on his concentration,
he continues to look about the city..

trying to find out about himself..
he soon comes to a spot where the trail ends..
and a giant wall appears infront of him..
he looks at it and speaks..
Avalisk : "why here.? what was here.. before this.?"

His sights take him around the corner and onto a small area,
the riverbank could be seen right next to the walking path.
he pondering for only a moment, avalisk starts to walk into the feild..

There,
avalisk sat on top of a small hill over looking the bankside..
It's beautiful blue waters fill his eyes.
he has never seen anything like it,
amazginly beautiful scenery captivates his heart.
he sighs for a moment, taking in the peace..
but his thoughts trail off into the wild blue light,
of the sky now turning yellow..
and eventually red, as the sun sets in the horizion..

Canti soon peers from around the wall,
silently evesdropping on the young male..
canti look's on, watching avalisk hover over the bayside..

Avalisk's eyes fill with glee and amasment he then look's up and says..

Avalisk : "Is This, truly heaven.?
noone truly knows that even on earth..
you are free.. truly, free."
tears begin streaming down his face,
he looking up into the sky..
arms streached out as he glides colser to the clouds..
Avalisk : "sun, of the mother..
take me, as i climb..
no more, will i feel pain..
only in your arms will I truly, find peace..
give me your warmth, touch and bless me with your essence.."

With the light of the noontime sun beaming down upon him,
mamimi back at her apartment, look's out from her balcony..
notices avalisk as he glides higher,
and higher into the sky..
Mamimi's eyes light up..
and she sees Avalisk climb high into the sky..
it remind's her of canti the bot..

avalisk's arm's now streached out, soar's like an angel..
Soaring higher and higher.. into the daytime sky..
mamimi looking onto avalisk then says..
Mamimi : "He's.. the real thing..! nothing like lord canti, but better.
like watermelon.. in the summer time,
or like cot 'n' candy, in a sunshower...
not like the smell, of a blackbord eraser at all."

Mamimi continues looking on toword avalisk,
mesmerised as he flies around and begins to pray towords the sun...

Mamimi : "He.. is truly.. a god.."
Mamimi watches as avalisk dissapear's into the sky,
the clouds form back in as he pushes through, expelling the light..
as the storm slowly begins moving into the city..
canti look's around to see if anyone is watching,
and then shoots up as well through the clouds..
making a small hole within the layer..
it dissapears, in an instant..
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- FL CL - 2nd co M. M. ing..
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( Capricus Galaxy : mining capital, of caprica. )

Meanwhile on caprica..
The two heros are pondering there next move..

naota sit by the campfire,
calmly preparing a meal for the both of them..
he soon set's a bowl infront of haruko,
and quietly sit's down to eat.. himself..
Haruko : "what's this ?"
haruko says as naota places the bowl infront of her..
a moment later..
she sniffs the bowl, and peers at it's white texture.
then takes a spoon and looks at it,
as the soup slop's back down into the bowl...

Naota then look's back at her and says..
Naota : "it's potato soup, it's all we have left.."
he solomly goes back to the fire, and haruko takes a sip..
she soon start's to scarf it down..

naota gazing into the campfire begins to speak to haruko..
Naota : "We, have to find somthing to eat.. or we'll starve.."
she gulps down her portion..saying
Haruko : "yeah..". -.-;

knowing there rations are slim to none..
Naota looks back at her and says..
Naota : "what does the indicator read..?"
She blinks at him gulping her bite down,
then pull's the locator out from her pocket..

she start's to tinker with it, trying to make it work..
Haruko : "uh.. it's not picking up any signals.."
she whines a bit..
Haruko : "..man.... what's wrong with this thing..?
..maybe over here.."
she says as she start's to walk over by the tent..
naota start's to peer out on the lake, they've camped beside of..

his thought's..
trailing to the no signs of life at all within the city..
she then kicks a rock.. but trips trying to kick it.
Haruko : "oops..."
naota looks back and watches her try to get up,
using the guitar as a crutch..
Naota : "you.. ok.?"
he say's looking over at her..

Haruko get's back up,
dusting herself off and looking back to him saying.
Haruko : "Fine, fine..."
she grips her guitar and pull's herself back up..
picking the locator back up and reading it..
Haruko : "hey.."
she says looking back at him..
Haruko : "this thing still works.."
waving it at him,
she then smiles and goes back to reading the device..

naota continues watching her, and tells her..
Naota : "hey if you want, you can have the tent tonight..
- Sigh -
I'd rather take a look around this place.
there maybe some sign of life left.."
she looks back and says..
Haruko :"Oh, ok...Thanks..."
- ..leave me, why dont'cha.. -
she continues on to say..
Haruko : "hmm...
your pritty shaken up about all of this, aren't you tak -kun.?"
A pondering look appears from her expression,
as she continues to read the locator..
Naota then grabs his solarcaster, and begins to lift into the sky..
looking back down to her, he then says.

Naota : " Stay here, while I research the grounds we over looked..
I'll post back anything i find..
you.. should really be doing the same, haruko."
he sighs for a moment,
haruko looking back in her usual droopy eyed way..
he then goes onto say.
Naota : "This just, doesn't feel right.."
using his guitar as a transportation device, he soon takes off..

haruko blinks in his wake,
she then shrugs her shoulders and heads inside of the tent..
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Session : B
FLCL 2nd comming
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OST - Ravenwings : world without logo's -
Naota glides along the eastern costline for a few miles,
looking for any signs of life..
Naota : "There's..noone here..-sigh-"
He continues to glide scanning the area for signs of life..
The cities distruction can clearly be seen,
It's structures a reduced to rubble..
there are no signs of life, hesoon looks down and again, sighs..
saying to himself..
Naota : "This, look's like a battle happoned..
but where ? ..there are no facillities here..?"
He find's a place to land, and skips off his guitar..
grabing the strap as he lands..
slinging his guitar on his shoulder as he land's, on the ground..
Naota immediatly begins walking afterwards..


He soon walks up a side road,
pondering about the strangeness of the tall..
but heavily damaged building..
it, being the only one still standing.

Naota : "this ..is the only building standing, why..?"

The metallic surface continues to elude him..
and he finds debree all over the place..
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Meanwhile back at camp..
haruko sit's and tunes her guitar..
she silently thinks to her self, as she waits for naota to return.

Haruko : "...Hmm...I wonder if i should get a banjo..?"
then shakes her head and says again to herself..
Haruko : "what am i thinking.."
she looks around the desolated area,
the lake and trees the only thing she sees..
Haruko : "This..this is bad..
noone's here, and the city look's destroyed..
I wonder where everyone fled to.?"
she begins to tune her guitar again, starring into the nighttime sky..

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Back in the abandonded city..
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Naota peers at some rubble in the distiance..
his sights take him closer, and he walk's towords the debree..
he pushes a bolder aside, and looks at the large door..
branding within the city streets..
he look's at it's structure, and notices it's a door..
Naota : "heh ..thought so.."
- they must of fled underground whille the attack's were occuring. -

naota takes off, in the same direction as he came..
going back to camp, finally..
after a while..
Naota get's back to the camp, and grab's his guitar as he lands..
he walk's over the the tent..
Naota : "haruko....i've found somthing."
she look's back and sspeaks whille setting up blankets.
Haruko : "really now.. what is it..?"
she tilt's her head, and thinks of what hes saying..
then slowly gets up and emerges outside the tent..
naota then says..
Naota : "it's and underground tunnel..
..might lead to somthing..?"
Haruko : "if theres trouble..we can handle it.."
she then nods and follows him carrying her guitar as well,
soon both are flying along the coastline..
he looks back as she struggles to keep up..
he saying to her..
Naota : "come on, keep up.."
Haruko nods and replies..
Haruko : "hmm...right."

there course..
take them around the east bank of the central city,
they land and he shows her the hidden door.
Naota : ..what do make of it..?"
Haruko : "Hmm..."
she says and looks around a bit..
haruko : " Not bad, but.. how do you open it.?"
she smirks.. looking sarcasticly.
Naota : "I'm not sure.."
Naota turn's and peer's back at the door,
with the mysterious markings on it..
haruko begins to investigate,
the strange marking on and along the wall..
noticing a resembelance, to what naota was looking too.

Haruko : "What is it? "
as naota continues to compare markings..
haruko : "it's like nothing i've ever seen..
i'm not sure how to open it.."
he then checks a pocket, and slowly pulls out a note pad..
Naota - these glyphs resemble the same method the roman's used.. -
haruko continues to look around..
and says to herself..
Haruko : "You think there'd be some sort of key, or passage...?"
..she ponders looking at one of the patterns, and follow's it down..
naota then speaks whille continuing to write down leters and text..

Naota : " yeah..there should be a switch or somthing.."
looks around the corridors, the halls are emminse..
for the two heros..
naota places the pen and pad back into his pocket..
and tries to move some more of the rubble, in front of him..
Naota : "there's too much to move.. not, all at once.."
Naota looks to haruko,
speaking to her as she crouches down next to him....
"There's no way in getting it open..?,
we can't even push it open...unless..."
she grips a side of the door,trying to pry it open..
but it's no use, and she looks back to him..
Haruko : "Now what...?" says haruko, looking puzzled..
naota.. looking at the ground,
an indentation can clearly be seen..
leading from the door, around the corner..
he then speaks again.
Naota : "let's see where this leads us.."
pointing at the marking's leading around the corner,
she sighs and then says..
Haruko : "We can do that, too..."
she blinks and follows him as they begin to follow the markings..
the strange glyphs lead them around the corner,
and into a large building..

there are markings all over the place..
Haruko looks up and tugs on naota shoulder..
he soon looks up as well..
they stare in awe for only a moment at the spiraling structure..
Naota : - this isnt normal..
it's like the citizens and the population..
..have totally, dissapeared. -
Haruko : "it's the language of this planet..
but the building's destroyed.. ..there.. everywhere.."

Naota : "..it's going to take me some time,
to decifer this encoding..
..i think i can pull it off,
but piecing together all of this rubble's.. gonna take, some time.."

Naota : - not to mention..
there's still alot we don't know about this place.-

naota thinks to himself, whille looking back at her..
she then sighs and groans..
Haruko : " ..more like, forever...."
she then slides down the side of the wall, and begins to pout..
wanting the door to be opened right away..
Naota sigh's and goes to his work,
as haruko begin's tuning the ebo..
Naota concentrates on the glyphs,
pulling rubble and slowly piecing it together....

- If at first you don't succed...try,try,..again..-
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OST - The pillows : stalker -
Meanwhile back on the s.s.stumi..
amarao is hard at work,
trying figure out what our hero's were up to..
there, entering the corridor to the silo..
he looking to the monitor, on the two as they head inside..

amarao : "impressive..
he knew the language, without even knowing it's power...."
he look's back at the lutennant..
still watching along side of him, amd begins to conversate...

Amarao : "Trask, may have set a trap for the both of them..
if,they make it out alive.."
he cuts himself off as kitsurubami nods back to him..
amarao not needing to say another word.
they continue to watch on.. as naota and haruko walk inside..
the lutennant then say's

Kit : "Any need to back these two, up.?"
she ponders at the sight of the commanders head,
now doubled in size..
his head looking like a humanoid crown.
Noone of the other worker's complained about it,
but.. still notice it..
Amarao, sit's and drink's from his coffie mug..
pondering about the other two,
wondering if there trial here..
will meet the qualifications they need..
Amarao : "trask wanted to test him.. hes gonna get his results..
the brotherhood planned this from the beginning, with atomsk..
but now that things have changed..
it's up to the kid now.."
Kitsurubami look's back at amarao..
and speaks..
Kitsurubami : "So.. this is a sort of trial..?
nao san, wont like the sound of it..
if we told him he was being used, like this.."
Amarao nods and watches them, walk down a long corridor..
Amarao : "There going to encounter a little trouble,
that the brotherhood set up for them..
One of the facalties of the brotherhood,
dismantled and reprogrammed one of those mechas..
Trask is using that, as his test on the kid.."

Amarao then kicks back, and continues to watch..
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After a while..
haruko taps her foot, and grows impacient..
she begins to speak to him after an hour or so..
Haruko : "so.... so.. any, luck....?"
she looks down at the pattern he began to write in chalk..
he found in one of the many corner's of the building,
he continues to write as she looks around..
he ponders a moment..
and then speaks..
Naota : "I think there's some sort of generator,
underneath the city.."
he continues to say
"if we can activate it.."
shes intregued by his notion.. and leans against the wall
Haruko : "ok...how do we get there?"
he look's back to her, and speaks..
Naota : "It's all right here."
he point's all around the large building,
showing her all of the strange writings..
he then turns back to his work,
and points our the puzzled rubble.
Naota : it seem's to me..
the people of this planet had a genetic reaction,
to anything they touched..
so long as they drew a pattern infront of an entrance...
its like a safty lock, only the mechanisem.. is the genetic makeup.."
haruko : "oh i get it, it's like we can become keys.."
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OST -The pillows : Carnival -
Naota : " it's almost like a dead language,
we have back on my homeworld.."
he looks back at her and continues to speak.

Naota : "hey, you know what.. ?
try the side pannel in the main hall, I bet it's a com of sorts..
you're good a hacking thing's.."
She nods and goes to work, while he is baffeled by the encodings..
of the planet's language..
he scratches his head looking back at the upper half,
of the markings then to the rubble he has reconstructed..

Naota : - this pattern is familier..
i need a translator, to configue exactly what it says..
from my knoweldge..
if we can alter our makeup, we could open the door..
but, in order to do so I need a power source,
and to do that.. I need the translator.."
-uggh- He is now frustrated at this notion..

but naota continues to concentrate,
stairing at the glyphs and inspecting them.
Haruko comes back after a moment,
and looks down at him saying..
Haruko : " I can't activate the console... ..so, like.. now what..?"
he continues to write and read saying..
Naota : "we sit..and wait..till i can decifer this damn language..
i'm not giving up..not just yet.."
as naota continued to decypher for hours..
he writing on the notepad kept in his right pocket..

Haruko groan's again, and sink's to the floor..
she lean's along the wall..
not being able to bear, bordem any longer..
naota then looks at her and says..
Naota : "damn, this sucks..
i can figure this one out.."
points to one of the writings and looks back at haruko..
Naota : "but i can't decifer this one..
it has to be a, puncuation.."
saying so,
as he points to another one..
he then flicks his smoke away, and exhailing the smoke out.
the ciggerette but flies off into a dark corner..
the lit end still burns a redish glow, slowly.
she looks impatient staring at him and saying..
Haruko : "Well, what does it say...?"

Naota sighs and places his hands upon the ground,
not knowing the effect it took upon the rubble..
placing his hand's onto what he was writing..

the symbols start to glow..

Naota looks to the writing in shock,
trying to shuffle back while looking at the pattern..

Naota : "what.. is this..? ..the writing's there, glowing.." o.o

she looks and says..
Haruko : "you said if you could decypher the language,
it would react.. maybe this is some sort of sign, tak -kun.?" n.n*
he nods and says.
Naota : "yeah.. "
- I'm close, but not close enough.. -

he continues to stare into the light, trying to decifer the markings...
he ponders the writings and thinks.
Naota : "maybe, there is a way. to just, touch the door."
after a while of trying the com again..
Haruko comes walking back into the building
Once again speaking to naota with a bored tone..
Haruko : "Still no luck on the console, tak -kun.. you have any luck..?" she scratches her head , it itching from hour's of frustration..
Naota : "i have a theroy.. but i'll need you're help..
we have to move some of these fragments.. over by the door.."

Naota looks down on the stone writings,
trailing back into the desolated building..

haruko stands and watches naota trail back to the door,
pad in hand, naota approches it..
Naota - yeah, this just might work.. -

soon the fragemnts had been moved infront of the door,
to the underground..
naota kneels before the door, and begins to write..
drawing the pattern around the words..
the language, slowly to begin's to glow..
Naota kneel's back, as the pattern is now complete..
Haruko : "now what.?"
haruko asks..
Naota : " just watch.. "
she looks back at him, her eye's showing discouragment..
saying..
Haruko : "What...?"
a sweatdrop form's above her head..she then says..
Haruko : "Is that it...?"
naota -sigh.. impacient, as ever.. -
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OST - Stalker goes to bablyon. -

Naota soon lean's forward and touches the door..
In doing so, he places his hands upon the pattern once more..

the light start's to glow, and he backs off immediatly..

the patern now shines a bright glowing green light, and then fades..

the doorway slowly opens..
Naota look's back at haruko..speaking with befuddlement..
Naota : "huh..guess the decifering, worked..?"

she then nods saying..
Haruko : "mmHmm."
haruko follows naota ,as they proceed inside the doorway..
as soon as they do so, it closes behind them..
now in total darkness, except for a small dim light shining from the distiance..
they continue walking..
Haruko : "well..we're in the dark,
and there's a light at the end of this tunnel.."

..she blinks and nods..
Haruko : " yep.. totally obilvious here, tak -kun.."
naota grabs his solarcaster silently..
glaring to haruko as if she knew what to do..
holding it in the air, naota emmit's a low green and red light..
it shines bright as he holds it up above his head..
haruko : "there.. we'll just shine some light on this subject.."
and naota let's out a sigh while as haruko speaks..

naota gives the solercaster a bit more n.o...
which intrun.. glow's bit brighter..
naota : "Much better..."
haruko gives a tumb up, and they continue on..
they walk down the long pathway..
the only light aside of naota's guitar..
was the opeining ,on the other side..
Naota : "There are markings along this path as well,
they are much the same as we saw outside.."
he says as he walks along side of her..
Naota : "i'm not shure we're this is leading us..
but if it's to the reactor..then it's a safe bet."
they continue to walk till the end of the corridor..
the light now getting brighter,
as they progress through the darkness..
they enter a huge silo but no missle inhabits its entryway..
naota look's up into the entryway says calmly..
Naota : "its a missle silo.."
he turn's back looking to haruko..

Haruko : "there must of been base within the underground, here..
- SNAP -
we just hit paydirt, tak -kun.."
he ganders at the silo saying..
Naota : "Oh....looks that way.."
Haruko continues to look around..
Naota glances toword a doorway above them,
and points it out to her.

Haruko : "and.. yet, more walking.."
Naota : "it seems so much like our technology,
but like you said.. a few centuries, over our's.."

Haruko notices a console on the wall,
she turn's back to him while walking, pointing at the com..
Haruko : "hey.. this is a security, file bank..
if i can activate it.. it can tell us, what exactly happoned here.."

Naota : "haruko.. ..reactor, first."
he says looking at the door, not to far from them..
and points to the other end of the silo.
they soon come upon the doorway,
and naota notices another marking on the side wall,
he then simply touches it,
placing his hand upon it's surface..
and the door opens.

the large blast door's now open widly,
and they walk down and into a main area,
where there are several lifts and escolator's..
leading down to the lower halls of the facility.

Naota look's back to haruko and speak's while walking..
Naota : "you seem quiet haruko.. anything the matter.?"

he looks at her,continuing walking down the long path..
she then says..
Haruko : "I'm observing the area..
can't be too cautious, tak -kun."
she blink's and continues following naota..
walking down the stair's..
and entering into the reactors main deck..
looking at the strange technology,
naota look's back to her and speaks..

Naota : "we're here, there's the reactor.."
naota point's as he look's back to haruko..
not knowing the giant medical mechanical being,
standing behind him.
he look's to haruko, she showing a face of sheer fear..
looking above naota's head.
he never noticing, the shadowous mecha.. lurking behind him..

Naota : - this is all, too weird..-
Naota : "haruko ..what's wrong..?"
She continues to stare in fear,
as the being now reached it's full height..
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Suddenly, a large fist came crashing down behind him..
launching the two into the air.
The other fist plunges Naota, into a nreaby wall..
crushing him into it..
the presure is emmense and naota, strugggles to break free...
haruko begins to pick her ear while standing back up,
her guitar rested over her shoulder now noticing naota was in danger..

Naota : "uughhkk!"
Naota : - Damn it.. should of seen that, comming.. -
he spits blood from being knocked in the stomach,
the pressure exceeding his limitations..
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- FLCL -
Atomsk : " soon naota, your power's will increase.. expenentially "
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Naota falls into a nearby pile of parts..
it's glance now takes it's turn on haruko,
she then notices what was happoning and says..
Haruko : "hmm..? -flicks away ear wax.. -
oh, right ! Let's, Get It On !!!"

Haruko in anger, grips the EB -O..
and revs up the motor..
the mecha sarcastically turn's and walks away from naota,
and it then starts to walk towords haruko..
it's sights set on her, her eyes seeing the same fate as naota..
she then grips her guitar, gulping her pride saying..

Haruko : "OK,My turn.. Come get some, you heap of scarp metal ! "
she launches an attack, running along side of the silo's walls..
and gaining speed..
as she does so, haruko dodges the punches from the machine.
stoping only for a second.. to leap at the bot..
only to be knocked back aginst a wall herself..

Naota then launches from the pille he was under..
now in mid air he huff's from being out of breath..
Naota : "Think.. you can, get rid of me.. that, easy.?!,HUH.?"
Naota: - insulting fuck, I'll show you.. -
His eyes inflamed by the insult, and the rage begin's to spread..
now having total controll, over his emotions..

Naota grunts at the disrespect,
and spits the salty blood from his mouth..

The machine has showin naota a ton of flaws of it's structure..
hovering there in mid air, naota then begins to speak..
in two voices at once.

..one of atomsk, and one of his original self..
both of a deep tone, naota speaks as the reddish glow intensifies..

Neota : "you..
I'll show you the meaning of the term, HOLY..MESSENGER !!!"

Naota suddenly launches his own attack, but the bot reflects him.
and knocks him back, in the process..
Naota's body slam's aginst the hard metallic surface, of the silo..
Leaving an inprint from the hard impact..

haruko look's back as she watches naota,
get slammed aginst the wall..saying..
Haruko :"Oh that's gotta hurt."

naota slides down once more, landing on his knees..
the pain begins to set in for him,
and naota becomes short of breath..

she looks back onto the bot and says.
Haruko : "...O..k!"
and leaps into the air up at the Machine, and swings the ebo...
only to simply get wacked away to the wall.

another imprint is left from haruko's body this time...
she slam's aginst it hard.. and slides down saying..
Haruko : "Ohhh...that's gonna hurt tomorrow.."
she twitches,
as she slides down the metallic surface of the missle silo..
Naota regains himself.. and start's to grip his guitar..

the pulse imminating from it..
the powers of the n.o. trapped inside..

calling him..
he looks down showing only his hair,
and starting to feel the rage overcome him..

he says, once more with both voices..
Neota : "I'll, show you.."

He glares at the machine, now walking back toword him..
it's movement's are absent, as it's walk's..
almost like it is controlled, by somthing..
Naota scream's in a fit of rage, feeling the n.o. take over..
once again, the reddish glow emminates from his being..
the scar of atomsk, glowing from his forhead..
Naota launches himself streight through the machine's body,
like a knife through butter.

the flare colored light, dissipates from his stream..
from the ground, through the machine's body..
now above it, naota stares back and watches the explosion..

just then haruko kicks off from the wall, and land's..
watching naota, make his mark..
she says
Haruko : " oh...what power.."
gripping the handle of the ebo..
and continues to watch in silent awe..
naota soon look's around, after the debrie and smoke dissipate..
he then lets out a sigh and speaks..
Naota : "huh.. that was easy.."

his attention then turn's to haruko,
and he looks down at her..
Naota : "you ok down there..?"
he then reverts back from a flare colored stream of light,
and glides down to meet with her..
she gets up and speak.
Haruko : "Uh...y-y-yeah....Oh I'm fine..Just peachie kean.."
she says with a nervous smile, looking at naota..
and pondering about his power..

He looks away and starts to walk along the corridor..
speaking with his back turned to her...
Naota: "let's go.. we gotta reach the reactor's main computer.."

she looks back with a blink at the destroyed robot..
and speaks as she turns..
Haruko : "Right then.. let's go.."
she giving him a small smirk,
as they walk into the central command's mainframe.
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OST The pillows : - Last dinosaur -

Naota sit's down at the front console,
and starts to type word's into the computer..
it runs a simple diognostic of what happoned,
and then it start's to reboot it's self..

He then looks back at haruko and speaks as the rebooting proceeds.
Naota : "this is it, we're gonna finally find out what happoned here.."

she blinks at him then start's to hear strange noises,
from the outisde of the underground base..

she watches as naota then continues to type on the keybord,
placed infront of him..

everything, one at a time.. start's to run..
Haruko : "now what?"
she says as she looks at him,
the computer begins to show the diognostic is now complete,
on the screen..
Naota : "we're done here..
time to get back to that console we found..
she nods and speaks..
Haruko : "Right! "

they soon proceed to walk down the once, narrow dark hallway..
that lead to the surface, of the capital...
his mind back on the machine,
and the notion that m.m. still lurked on the surface..
now brightly lit, they continue up the corridor..
Naota ponder's about the whereabouts of the other droids,
around the vicinity..
then around the colony planets..
Naota : "there still somthing that's not right."

he says looking down on the portable translator he found,
while inside the base..
Naota : "it's saying there was a battle aginst each other..
but this is the thing, there are no records of any kind of conflict..

douring the past few months before they we're attacked..?"

This really troubled naota, and his thoughts go back on
the conflicts with earth..

Naota : "we should head back home, after we're done here.."
Naota : - there's still alot the brotherhood,
and amarao have to awnser for.. -

haruko nod's her head in compliance to naota.
and they both soon race into the night's sky..
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Next Act :
Haruko : naota and I,
are on the verge of uncovering a dasterdly plot with caprica's demise.
while avalisk takes on his first trial..

is it enough to keep the earth safe..?
or will the potential, screw up..?
and I'm not talking about fooly coolying, with mamimi..

find out on the next, fooly cooly - 2nd comming !
Session : B
Act : 19
- destruction, meet's it's peacemaker. -

Amarao : "let's just hope this Avalisk kid.. has, what it takes.."
- eyetwitch -
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*To Be Continued.*
*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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FLCL 2nd comming ACT 18 - holy grounds of the ancient city.

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Wed Oct 08, 2008 6:18 pm

sorry gang, for the lateness of the following act.
in the meantime, enjoy the revised version.
in other news..
there's been some strange reports about kazuya tusurumaki,
and the rebuild of evangelion continuations..

Don't think this project will last very long..
according to my sources,
they said that he might end up ending the saga before it begins..
so not to get anyones hopes up,
but don't look forward to any kind of plot after the war..
sorry gang if i ruined it for you, but please enjoy this next act.
more to follow as this story developes.

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FL CL - 2ND COMMING.
Saga #2 : The mechanical menace.
Session : B
ACT : 18
- Holy grounds of the ancient city.. -

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OST - The pillows : Instant music. -

Canti quest's..
to find all of his own broken pieces,
after he tried to repair one of the other medical mechanica droids.

It attacked him..
he having no choice but to destroy it..
looking into the city he find's the young purple haried kid,
walking the bridgeway..
crossing a busy section to downtown,
Canti then gets up and starts to walk toword him,
looking out into the riverbank..
Canti's reflection is casted along the rivers edge,
as he continued walking along the path..
Avalisk waves to him as he walks passed,
the robot only waves back..
avalisk continues to walk,
thinking of the events of the night before..
Avalisk : "I still can't get her out of my mind,
what's her problem anyways..?"
knowing his thoughts wreak havoc on his concentration,
he continues to look about the city..

trying to find out about himself..
he soon comes to a spot where the trail ends..
and a giant wall appears infront of him..
he looks at it and speaks..
Avalisk : "why here.? what was here.. before this.?"

His sights take him around the corner and onto a small area,
the riverbank could be seen right next to the walking path.
he pondering for only a moment, avalisk starts to walk into the feild..

There,
avalisk sat on top of a small hill over looking the bankside..
It's beautiful blue waters fill his eyes.
he has never seen anything like it,
amazginly beautiful scenery captivates his heart.
he sighs for a moment, taking in the peace..
but his thoughts trail off into the wild blue light,
of the sky now turning yellow..
and eventually red, as the sun sets in the horizion..

Canti soon peers from around the wall,
silently evesdropping on the young male..
canti look's on, watching avalisk hover over the bayside..

Avalisk's eyes fill with glee and amasment he then look's up and says..

Avalisk : "Is This, truly heaven.?
noone truly knows that even on earth..
you are free.. truly, free."
tears begin streaming down his face,
he looking up into the sky..
arms streached out as he glides colser to the clouds..
Avalisk : "sun, of the mother..
take me, as i climb..
no more, will i feel pain..
only in your arms will I truly, find peace..
give me your warmth, touch and bless me with your essence.."

With the light of the noontime sun beaming down upon him,
mamimi back at her apartment, look's out from her balcony..
notices avalisk as he glides higher,
and higher into the sky..
Mamimi's eyes light up..
and she sees Avalisk climb high into the sky..
it remind's her of canti the bot..

avalisk's arm's now streached out, soar's like an angel..
Soaring higher and higher.. into the daytime sky..
mamimi looking onto avalisk then says..
Mamimi : "He's.. the real thing..! nothing like lord canti, but better.
like watermelon.. in the summer time,
or like cot 'n' candy, in a sunshower...
not like the smell, of a blackbord eraser at all."

Mamimi continues looking on toword avalisk,
mesmerised as he flies around and begins to pray towords the sun...

Mamimi : "He.. is truly.. a god.."
Mamimi watches as avalisk dissapear's into the sky,
the clouds form back in as he pushes through, expelling the light..
as the storm slowly begins moving into the city..
canti look's around to see if anyone is watching,
and then shoots up as well through the clouds..
making a small hole within the layer..
it dissapears, in an instant..
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- FL CL - 2nd co M. M. ing..
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( Capricus Galaxy : mining capital, of caprica. )

Meanwhile on caprica..
The two heros are pondering there next move..

naota sit by the campfire,
calmly preparing a meal for the both of them..
he soon set's a bowl infront of haruko,
and quietly sit's down to eat.. himself..
Haruko : "what's this ?"
haruko says as naota places the bowl infront of her..
a moment later..
she sniffs the bowl, and peers at it's white texture.
then takes a spoon and looks at it,
as the soup slop's back down into the bowl...

Naota then look's back at her and says..
Naota : "it's potato soup, it's all we have left.."
he solomly goes back to the fire, and haruko takes a sip..
she soon start's to scarf it down..

naota gazing into the campfire begins to speak to haruko..
Naota : "We, have to find somthing to eat.. or we'll starve.."
she gulps down her portion..saying
Haruko : "yeah..". -.-;

knowing there rations are slim to none..
Naota looks back at her and says..
Naota : "what does the indicator read..?"
She blinks at him gulping her bite down,
then pull's the locator out from her pocket..

she start's to tinker with it, trying to make it work..
Haruko : "uh.. it's not picking up any signals.."
she whines a bit..
Haruko : "..man.... what's wrong with this thing..?
..maybe over here.."
she says as she start's to walk over by the tent..
naota start's to peer out on the lake, they've camped beside of..

his thought's..
trailing to the no signs of life at all within the city..
she then kicks a rock.. but trips trying to kick it.
Haruko : "oops..."
naota looks back and watches her try to get up,
using the guitar as a crutch..
Naota : "you.. ok.?"
he say's looking over at her..

Haruko get's back up,
dusting herself off and looking back to him saying.
Haruko : "Fine, fine..."
she grips her guitar and pull's herself back up..
picking the locator back up and reading it..
Haruko : "hey.."
she says looking back at him..
Haruko : "this thing still works.."
waving it at him,
she then smiles and goes back to reading the device..

naota continues watching her, and tells her..
Naota : "hey if you want, you can have the tent tonight..
- Sigh -
I'd rather take a look around this place.
there maybe some sign of life left.."
she looks back and says..
Haruko :"Oh, ok...Thanks..."
- ..leave me, why dont'cha.. -
she continues on to say..
Haruko : "hmm...
your pritty shaken up about all of this, aren't you tak -kun.?"
A pondering look appears from her expression,
as she continues to read the locator..
Naota then grabs his solarcaster, and begins to lift into the sky..
looking back down to her, he then says.

Naota : " Stay here, while I research the grounds we over looked..
I'll post back anything i find..
you.. should really be doing the same, haruko."
he sighs for a moment,
haruko looking back in her usual droopy eyed way..
he then goes onto say.
Naota : "This just, doesn't feel right.."
using his guitar as a transportation device, he soon takes off..

haruko blinks in his wake,
she then shrugs her shoulders and heads inside of the tent..
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Session : B
FLCL 2nd comming
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OST - Ravenwings : world without logo's -
Naota glides along the eastern costline for a few miles,
looking for any signs of life..
Naota : "There's..noone here..-sigh-"
He continues to glide scanning the area for signs of life..
The cities distruction can clearly be seen,
It's structures a reduced to rubble..
there are no signs of life, hesoon looks down and again, sighs..
saying to himself..
Naota : "This, look's like a battle happoned..
but where ? ..there are no facillities here..?"
He find's a place to land, and skips off his guitar..
grabing the strap as he lands..
slinging his guitar on his shoulder as he land's, on the ground..
Naota immediatly begins walking afterwards..


He soon walks up a side road,
pondering about the strangeness of the tall..
but heavily damaged building..
it, being the only one still standing.

Naota : "this ..is the only building standing, why..?"

The metallic surface continues to elude him..
and he finds debree all over the place..
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Meanwhile back at camp..
haruko sit's and tunes her guitar..
she silently thinks to her self, as she waits for naota to return.

Haruko : "...Hmm...I wonder if i should get a banjo..?"
then shakes her head and says again to herself..
Haruko : "what am i thinking.."
she looks around the desolated area,
the lake and trees the only thing she sees..
Haruko : "This..this is bad..
noone's here, and the city look's destroyed..
I wonder where everyone fled to.?"
she begins to tune her guitar again, starring into the nighttime sky..

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Back in the abandonded city..
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Naota peers at some rubble in the distiance..
his sights take him closer, and he walk's towords the debree..
he pushes a bolder aside, and looks at the large door..
branding within the city streets..
he look's at it's structure, and notices it's a door..
Naota : "heh ..thought so.."
- they must of fled underground whille the attack's were occuring. -

naota takes off, in the same direction as he came..
going back to camp, finally..
after a while..
Naota get's back to the camp, and grab's his guitar as he lands..
he walk's over the the tent..
Naota : "haruko....i've found somthing."
she look's back and sspeaks whille setting up blankets.
Haruko : "really now.. what is it..?"
she tilt's her head, and thinks of what hes saying..
then slowly gets up and emerges outside the tent..
naota then says..
Naota : "it's and underground tunnel..
..might lead to somthing..?"
Haruko : "if theres trouble..we can handle it.."
she then nods and follows him carrying her guitar as well,
soon both are flying along the coastline..
he looks back as she struggles to keep up..
he saying to her..
Naota : "come on, keep up.."
Haruko nods and replies..
Haruko : "hmm...right."

there course..
take them around the east bank of the central city,
they land and he shows her the hidden door.
Naota : ..what do make of it..?"
Haruko : "Hmm..."
she says and looks around a bit..
haruko : " Not bad, but.. how do you open it.?"
she smirks.. looking sarcasticly.
Naota : "I'm not sure.."
Naota turn's and peer's back at the door,
with the mysterious markings on it..
haruko begins to investigate,
the strange marking on and along the wall..
noticing a resembelance, to what naota was looking too.

Haruko : "What is it? "
as naota continues to compare markings..
haruko : "it's like nothing i've ever seen..
i'm not sure how to open it.."
he then checks a pocket, and slowly pulls out a note pad..
Naota - these glyphs resemble the same method the roman's used.. -
haruko continues to look around..
and says to herself..
Haruko : "You think there'd be some sort of key, or passage...?"
..she ponders looking at one of the patterns, and follow's it down..
naota then speaks whille continuing to write down leters and text..

Naota : " yeah..there should be a switch or somthing.."
looks around the corridors, the halls are emminse..
for the two heros..
naota places the pen and pad back into his pocket..
and tries to move some more of the rubble, in front of him..
Naota : "there's too much to move.. not, all at once.."
Naota looks to haruko,
speaking to her as she crouches down next to him....
"There's no way in getting it open..?,
we can't even push it open...unless..."
she grips a side of the door,trying to pry it open..
but it's no use, and she looks back to him..
Haruko : "Now what...?" says haruko, looking puzzled..
naota.. looking at the ground,
an indentation can clearly be seen..
leading from the door, around the corner..
he then speaks again.
Naota : "let's see where this leads us.."
pointing at the marking's leading around the corner,
she sighs and then says..
Haruko : "We can do that, too..."
she blinks and follows him as they begin to follow the markings..
the strange glyphs lead them around the corner,
and into a large building..

there are markings all over the place..
Haruko looks up and tugs on naota shoulder..
he soon looks up as well..
they stare in awe for only a moment at the spiraling structure..
Naota : - this isnt normal..
it's like the citizens and the population..
..have totally, dissapeared. -
Haruko : "it's the language of this planet..
but the building's destroyed.. ..there.. everywhere.."

Naota : "..it's going to take me some time,
to decifer this encoding..
..i think i can pull it off,
but piecing together all of this rubble's.. gonna take, some time.."

Naota : - not to mention..
there's still alot we don't know about this place.-

naota thinks to himself, whille looking back at her..
she then sighs and groans..
Haruko : " ..more like, forever...."
she then slides down the side of the wall, and begins to pout..
wanting the door to be opened right away..
Naota sigh's and goes to his work,
as haruko begin's tuning the ebo..
Naota concentrates on the glyphs,
pulling rubble and slowly piecing it together....

- If at first you don't succed...try,try,..again..-
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OST - The pillows : stalker -
Meanwhile back on the s.s.stumi..
amarao is hard at work,
trying figure out what our hero's were up to..
there, entering the corridor to the silo..
he looking to the monitor, on the two as they head inside..

amarao : "impressive..
he knew the language, without even knowing it's power...."
he look's back at the lutennant..
still watching along side of him, amd begins to conversate...

Amarao : "Trask, may have set a trap for the both of them..
if,they make it out alive.."
he cuts himself off as kitsurubami nods back to him..
amarao not needing to say another word.
they continue to watch on.. as naota and haruko walk inside..
the lutennant then say's

Kit : "Any need to back these two, up.?"
she ponders at the sight of the commanders head,
now doubled in size..
his head looking like a humanoid crown.
Noone of the other worker's complained about it,
but.. still notice it..
Amarao, sit's and drink's from his coffie mug..
pondering about the other two,
wondering if there trial here..
will meet the qualifications they need..
Amarao : "trask wanted to test him.. hes gonna get his results..
the brotherhood planned this from the beginning, with atomsk..
but now that things have changed..
it's up to the kid now.."
Kitsurubami look's back at amarao..
and speaks..
Kitsurubami : "So.. this is a sort of trial..?
nao san, wont like the sound of it..
if we told him he was being used, like this.."
Amarao nods and watches them, walk down a long corridor..
Amarao : "There going to encounter a little trouble,
that the brotherhood set up for them..
One of the facalties of the brotherhood,
dismantled and reprogrammed one of those mechas..
Trask is using that, as his test on the kid.."

Amarao then kicks back, and continues to watch..
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After a while..
haruko taps her foot, and grows impacient..
she begins to speak to him after an hour or so..
Haruko : "so.... so.. any, luck....?"
she looks down at the pattern he began to write in chalk..
he found in one of the many corner's of the building,
he continues to write as she looks around..
he ponders a moment..
and then speaks..
Naota : "I think there's some sort of generator,
underneath the city.."
he continues to say
"if we can activate it.."
shes intregued by his notion.. and leans against the wall
Haruko : "ok...how do we get there?"
he look's back to her, and speaks..
Naota : "It's all right here."
he point's all around the large building,
showing her all of the strange writings..
he then turns back to his work,
and points our the puzzled rubble.
Naota : it seem's to me..
the people of this planet had a genetic reaction,
to anything they touched..
so long as they drew a pattern infront of an entrance...
its like a safty lock, only the mechanisem.. is the genetic makeup.."
haruko : "oh i get it, it's like we can become keys.."
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OST -The pillows : Carnival -
Naota : " it's almost like a dead language,
we have back on my homeworld.."
he looks back at her and continues to speak.

Naota : "hey, you know what.. ?
try the side pannel in the main hall, I bet it's a com of sorts..
you're good a hacking thing's.."
She nods and goes to work, while he is baffeled by the encodings..
of the planet's language..
he scratches his head looking back at the upper half,
of the markings then to the rubble he has reconstructed..

Naota : - this pattern is familier..
i need a translator, to configue exactly what it says..
from my knoweldge..
if we can alter our makeup, we could open the door..
but, in order to do so I need a power source,
and to do that.. I need the translator.."
-uggh- He is now frustrated at this notion..

but naota continues to concentrate,
stairing at the glyphs and inspecting them.
Haruko comes back after a moment,
and looks down at him saying..
Haruko : " I can't activate the console... ..so, like.. now what..?"
he continues to write and read saying..
Naota : "we sit..and wait..till i can decifer this damn language..
i'm not giving up..not just yet.."
as naota continued to decypher for hours..
he writing on the notepad kept in his right pocket..

Haruko groan's again, and sink's to the floor..
she lean's along the wall..
not being able to bear, bordem any longer..
naota then looks at her and says..
Naota : "damn, this sucks..
i can figure this one out.."
points to one of the writings and looks back at haruko..
Naota : "but i can't decifer this one..
it has to be a, puncuation.."
saying so,
as he points to another one..
he then flicks his smoke away, and exhailing the smoke out.
the ciggerette but flies off into a dark corner..
the lit end still burns a redish glow, slowly.
she looks impatient staring at him and saying..
Haruko : "Well, what does it say...?"

Naota sighs and places his hands upon the ground,
not knowing the effect it took upon the rubble..
placing his hand's onto what he was writing..

the symbols start to glow..

Naota looks to the writing in shock,
trying to shuffle back while looking at the pattern..

Naota : "what.. is this..?
..the writing's there, glowing.." o.o

she looks and says..
Haruko : "you said if you could decypher the language,
it would react..
maybe this is some sort of sign, tak -kun.?" n.n*
he nods and says.
Naota : "yeah.. "
- I'm close, but not close enough.. -

he continues to stare into the light, trying to decifer the markings...
he ponders the writings and thinks.
Naota : "maybe, there is a way. to just, touch the door."
after a while of trying the com again..
Haruko comes walking back into the building
Once again speaking to naota with a bored tone..
Haruko : "Still no luck on the console, tak -kun.. you have any luck..?"

she scratches her head , it itching from hour's of frustration..
Naota : "i have a theroy.. but i'll need you're help..
we have to move some of these fragments.. over by the door.."

Naota looks down on the stone writings,
trailing back into the desolated building..

haruko stands and watches naota trail back to the door,
pad in hand, naota approches it..
Naota - yeah, this just might work.. -

soon the fragemnts had been moved infront of the door,
to the underground..
naota kneels before the door, and begins to write..
drawing the pattern around the words..
the language, slowly to begin's to glow..
Naota kneel's back, as the pattern is now complete..
Haruko : "now what.?"
haruko asks..
Naota : " just watch.. "
she looks back at him, her eye's showing discouragment..
saying..
Haruko : "What...?"
a sweatdrop form's above her head..she then says..
Haruko : "Is that it...?"
naota -sigh.. impacient, as ever.. -
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OST - Stalker goes to bablyon. -

Naota soon lean's forward and touches the door..
In doing so, he places his hands upon the pattern once more..

the light start's to glow, and he backs off immediatly..

the patern now shines a bright glowing green light, and then fades..

the doorway slowly opens..
Naota look's back at haruko..speaking with befuddlement..
Naota : "huh..guess the decifering, worked..?"

she then nods saying..
Haruko : "mmHmm."
haruko follows naota ,as they proceed inside the doorway..
as soon as they do so, it closes behind them..
now in total darkness, except for a small dim light shining from the distiance..
they continue walking..
Haruko : "well..we're in the dark,
and there's a light at the end of this tunnel.."

..she blinks and nods..
Haruko : " yep.. totally obilvious here, tak -kun.."
naota grabs his solarcaster silently..
glaring to haruko as if she knew what to do..
holding it in the air, naota emmit's a low green and red light..
it shines bright as he holds it up above his head..
haruko : "there.. we'll just shine some light on this subject.."
and naota let's out a sigh while as haruko speaks..

naota gives the solercaster a bit more n.o...
which intrun.. glow's bit brighter..
naota : "Much better..."
haruko gives a tumb up, and they continue on..
they walk down the long pathway..
the only light aside of naota's guitar..
was the opeining ,on the other side..
Naota : "There are markings along this path as well,
they are much the same as we saw outside.."
he says as he walks along side of her..
Naota : "i'm not shure we're this is leading us..
but if it's to the reactor..then it's a safe bet."
they continue to walk till the end of the corridor..
the light now getting brighter,
as they progress through the darkness..
they enter a huge silo but no missle inhabits its entryway..
naota look's up into the entryway says calmly..
Naota : "its a missle silo.."
he turn's back looking to haruko..

Haruko : "there must of been base within the underground, here..
- SNAP -
we just hit paydirt, tak -kun.."
he ganders at the silo saying..
Naota : "Oh....looks that way.."
Haruko continues to look around..
Naota glances toword a doorway above them,
and points it out to her.

Haruko : "and.. yet, more walking.."
Naota : "it seems so much like our technology,
but like you said.. a few centuries, over our's.."

Haruko notices a console on the wall,
she turn's back to him while walking, pointing at the com..
Haruko : "hey.. this is a security, file bank..
if i can activate it.. it can tell us, what exactly happoned here.."

Naota : "haruko.. ..reactor, first."
he says looking at the door, not to far from them..
and points to the other end of the silo.
they soon come upon the doorway,
and naota notices another marking on the side wall,
he then simply touches it,
placing his hand upon it's surface..
and the door opens.

the large blast door's now open widly,
and they walk down and into a main area,
where there are several lifts and escolator's..
leading down to the lower halls of the facility.

Naota look's back to haruko and speak's while walking..
Naota : "you seem quiet haruko.. anything the matter.?"

he looks at her,continuing walking down the long path..
she then says..
Haruko : "I'm observing the area..
can't be too cautious, tak -kun."
she blink's and continues following naota..
walking down the stair's..
and entering into the reactors main deck..
looking at the strange technology,
naota look's back to her and speaks..

Naota : "we're here, there's the reactor.."
naota point's as he look's back to haruko..
not knowing the giant medical mechanical being,
standing behind him.
he look's to haruko, she showing a face of sheer fear..
looking above naota's head.
he never noticing, the shadowous mecha.. lurking behind him..

Naota : - this is all, too weird..-
Naota : "haruko ..what's wrong..?"
She continues to stare in fear,
as the being now reached it's full height..
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Suddenly, a large fist came crashing down behind him..
launching the two into the air.
The other fist plunges Naota, into a nreaby wall..
crushing him into it..
the presure is emmense and naota, strugggles to break free...
haruko begins to pick her ear while standing back up,
her guitar rested over her shoulder now noticing naota was in danger..

Naota : "uughhkk!"
Naota : - Damn it.. should of seen that, comming.. -
he spits blood from being knocked in the stomach,
the pressure exceeding his limitations..
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- FLCL -
Atomsk : " soon naota, your power's will increase.. expenentially "
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Naota falls into a nearby pile of parts..
it's glance now takes it's turn on haruko,
she then notices what was happoning and says..
Haruko : "hmm..? -flicks away ear wax.. -
oh, right ! Let's, Get It On !!!"

Haruko in anger, grips the EB -O..
and revs up the motor..
the mecha sarcastically turn's and walks away from naota,
and it then starts to walk towords haruko..
it's sights set on her, her eyes seeing the same fate as naota..
she then grips her guitar, gulping her pride saying..

Haruko : "OK,My turn.. Come get some, you heap of scarp metal ! "
she launches an attack, running along side of the silo's walls..
and gaining speed..
as she does so, haruko dodges the punches from the machine.
stoping only for a second.. to leap at the bot..
only to be knocked back aginst a wall herself..

Naota then launches from the pille he was under..
now in mid air he huff's from being out of breath..
Naota : "Think.. you can, get rid of me.. that, easy.?!,HUH.?"
Naota: - insulting fuck, I'll show you.. -
His eyes inflamed by the insult, and the rage begin's to spread..
now having total controll, over his emotions..

Naota grunts at the disrespect,
and spits the salty blood from his mouth..

The machine has showin naota a ton of flaws of it's structure..
hovering there in mid air, naota then begins to speak..
in two voices at once.

..one of atomsk, and one of his original self..
both of a deep tone, naota speaks as the reddish glow intensifies..

Neota : "you..
I'll show you the meaning of the term, HOLY..MESSENGER !!!"

Naota suddenly launches his own attack, but the bot reflects him.
and knocks him back, in the process..
Naota's body slam's aginst the hard metallic surface, of the silo..
Leaving an inprint from the hard impact..

haruko look's back as she watches naota,
get slammed aginst the wall..saying..
Haruko :"Oh that's gotta hurt."

naota slides down once more, landing on his knees..
the pain begins to set in for him,
and naota becomes short of breath..

she looks back onto the bot and says.
Haruko : "...O..k!"
and leaps into the air up at the Machine, and swings the ebo...
only to simply get wacked away to the wall.

another imprint is left from haruko's body this time...
she slam's aginst it hard.. and slides down saying..
Haruko : "Ohhh...that's gonna hurt tomorrow.."
she twitches,
as she slides down the metallic surface of the missle silo..
Naota regains himself.. and start's to grip his guitar..

the pulse imminating from it..
the powers of the n.o. trapped inside..

calling him..
he looks down showing only his hair,
and starting to feel the rage overcome him..

he says, once more with both voices..
Neota : "I'll, show you.."

He glares at the machine, now walking back toword him..
it's movement's are absent, as it's walk's..
almost like it is controlled, by somthing..
Naota scream's in a fit of rage, feeling the n.o. take over..
once again, the reddish glow emminates from his being..
the scar of atomsk, glowing from his forhead..
Naota launches himself streight through the machine's body,
like a knife through butter.

the flare colored light, dissipates from his stream..
from the ground, through the machine's body..
now above it, naota stares back and watches the explosion..

just then haruko kicks off from the wall, and land's..
watching naota, make his mark..
she says
Haruko : " oh...what power.."
gripping the handle of the ebo..
and continues to watch in silent awe..
naota soon look's around, after the debrie and smoke dissipate..
he then lets out a sigh and speaks..
Naota : "huh.. that was easy.."

his attention then turn's to haruko,
and he looks down at her..
Naota : "you ok down there..?"
he then reverts back from a flare colored stream of light,
and glides down to meet with her..
she gets up and speak.
Haruko : "Uh...y-y-yeah....Oh I'm fine..Just peachie kean.."
she says with a nervous smile, looking at naota..
and pondering about his power..

He looks away and starts to walk along the corridor..
speaking with his back turned to her...
Naota: "let's go.. we gotta reach the reactor's main computer.."

she looks back with a blink at the destroyed robot..
and speaks as she turns..
Haruko : "Right then.. let's go.."
she giving him a small smirk,
as they walk into the central command's mainframe.
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OST The pillows : - Last dinosaur -

Naota sit's down at the front console,
and starts to type word's into the computer..
it runs a simple diognostic of what happoned,
and then it start's to reboot it's self..

He then looks back at haruko and speaks as the rebooting proceeds.
Naota : "this is it, we're gonna finally find out what happoned here.."

she blinks at him then start's to hear strange noises,
from the outisde of the underground base..

she watches as naota then continues to type on the keybord,
placed infront of him..

everything, one at a time.. start's to run..
Haruko : "now what?"
she says as she looks at him,
the computer begins to show the diognostic is now complete,
on the screen..
Naota : "we're done here..
time to get back to that console we found..
she nods and speaks..
Haruko : "Right! "

they soon proceed to walk down the once, narrow dark hallway..
that lead to the surface, of the capital...
his mind back on the machine,
and the notion that m.m. still lurked on the surface..
now brightly lit, they continue up the corridor..
Naota ponder's about the whereabouts of the other droids,
around the vicinity..
then around the colony planets..
Naota : "there still somthing that's not right."

he says looking down on the portable translator he found,
while inside the base..
Naota : "it's saying there was a battle aginst each other..
but this is the thing, there are no records of any kind of conflict..

douring the past few months before they we're attacked..?"

This really troubled naota, and his thoughts go back on
the conflicts with earth..

Naota : "we should head back home, after we're done here.."
Naota : - there's still alot the brotherhood,
and amarao have to awnser for.. -

haruko nod's her head in compliance to naota.
and they both soon race into the night's sky..
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Next Act :
Haruko : naota and I,
are on the verge of uncovering a dasterdly plot with caprica's demise.
while avalisk takes on his first trial..

is it enough to keep the earth safe..?
or will the potential, screw up..?
and I'm not talking about fooly coolying, with mamimi..

find out on the next, fooly cooly - 2nd comming !
Session : B
Act : 19
- destruction, meet's it's peacemaker. -

Amarao : "let's just hope this Avalisk kid.. has, what it takes.."
- eyetwitch -
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*To Be Continued.*
*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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FLCL 2nd comming ACT 18 - holy grounds of the ancient city.

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Wed Oct 08, 2008 6:18 pm

sorry gang, for the lateness of the following act.
in the meantime, enjoy the revised version.
in other news..
there's been some strange reports about kazuya tusurumaki,
and the rebuild of evangelion continuations..

Don't think this project will last very long..
according to briscou news,
they said that he might end up ending the saga before it begins..
so not to get anyones hopes up,
but don't look forward to any kind of plot after the war..
sorry gang if i ruined it for you, but please enjoy this next act.
more to follow as this story developes.

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FL CL - 2ND COMMING.
Saga #2 : The mechanical menace.
Session : B
ACT : 18
- Holy grounds of the ancient city.. -

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OST - The pillows : Instant music. -

Canti quest's..
to find all of his own broken pieces,
after he tried to repair one of the other medical mechanica droids.

It attacked him..
he having no choice but to destroy it..
looking into the city he find's the young purple haried kid,
walking the bridgeway..
crossing a busy section to downtown,
Canti then gets up and starts to walk toword him,
looking out into the riverbank..
Canti's reflection is casted along the rivers edge,
as he continued walking along the path..
Avalisk waves to him as he walks passed,
the robot only waves back..
avalisk continues to walk,
thinking of the events of the night before..
Avalisk : "I still can't get her out of my mind,
what's her problem anyways..?"
knowing his thoughts wreak havoc on his concentration,
he continues to look about the city..

trying to find out about himself..
he soon comes to a spot where the trail ends..
and a giant wall appears infront of him..
he looks at it and speaks..
Avalisk : "why here.? what was here.. before this.?"

His sights take him around the corner and onto a small area,
the riverbank could be seen right next to the walking path.
he pondering for only a moment, avalisk starts to walk into the feild..

There,
avalisk sat on top of a small hill over looking the bankside..
It's beautiful blue waters fill his eyes.
he has never seen anything like it,
amazginly beautiful scenery captivates his heart.
he sighs for a moment, taking in the peace..
but his thoughts trail off into the wild blue light,
of the sky now turning yellow..
and eventually red, as the sun sets in the horizion..

Canti soon peers from around the wall,
silently evesdropping on the young male..
canti look's on, watching avalisk hover over the bayside..

Avalisk's eyes fill with glee and amasment he then look's up and says..

Avalisk : "Is This, truly heaven.?
noone truly knows that even on earth..
you are free.. truly, free."
tears begin streaming down his face,
he looking up into the sky..
arms streached out as he glides colser to the clouds..
Avalisk : "sun, of the mother..
take me, as i climb..
no more, will i feel pain..
only in your arms will I truly, find peace..
give me your warmth, touch and bless me with your essence.."

With the light of the noontime sun beaming down upon him,
mamimi back at her apartment, look's out from her balcony..
notices avalisk as he glides higher,
and higher into the sky..
Mamimi's eyes light up..
and she sees Avalisk climb high into the sky..
it remind's her of canti the bot..

avalisk's arm's now streached out, soar's like an angel..
Soaring higher and higher.. into the daytime sky..
mamimi looking onto avalisk then says..
Mamimi : "He's.. the real thing..! nothing like lord canti, but better.
like watermelon.. in the summer time,
or like cot 'n' candy, in a sunshower...
not like the smell, of a blackbord eraser at all."

Mamimi continues looking on toword avalisk,
mesmerised as he flies around and begins to pray towords the sun...

Mamimi : "He.. is truly.. a god.."
Mamimi watches as avalisk dissapear's into the sky,
the clouds form back in as he pushes through, expelling the light..
as the storm slowly begins moving into the city..
canti look's around to see if anyone is watching,
and then shoots up as well through the clouds..
making a small hole within the layer..
it dissapears, in an instant..
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- FL CL - 2nd co M. M. ing..
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( Capricus Galaxy : mining capital, of caprica. )

Meanwhile on caprica..
The two heros are pondering there next move..

naota sit by the campfire,
calmly preparing a meal for the both of them..
he soon set's a bowl infront of haruko,
and quietly sit's down to eat.. himself..
Haruko : "what's this ?"
haruko says as naota places the bowl infront of her..
a moment later..
she sniffs the bowl, and peers at it's white texture.
then takes a spoon and looks at it,
as the soup slop's back down into the bowl...

Naota then look's back at her and says..
Naota : "it's potato soup, it's all we have left.."
he solomly goes back to the fire, and haruko takes a sip..
she soon start's to scarf it down..

naota gazing into the campfire begins to speak to haruko..
Naota : "We, have to find somthing to eat.. or we'll starve.."
she gulps down her portion..saying
Haruko : "yeah..". -.-;

knowing there rations are slim to none..
Naota looks back at her and says..
Naota : "what does the indicator read..?"
She blinks at him gulping her bite down,
then pull's the locator out from her pocket..

she start's to tinker with it, trying to make it work..
Haruko : "uh.. it's not picking up any signals.."
she whines a bit..
Haruko : "..man.... what's wrong with this thing..?
..maybe over here.."
she says as she start's to walk over by the tent..
naota start's to peer out on the lake, they've camped beside of..

his thought's..
trailing to the no signs of life at all within the city..
she then kicks a rock.. but trips trying to kick it.
Haruko : "oops..."
naota looks back and watches her try to get up,
using the guitar as a crutch..
Naota : "you.. ok.?"
he say's looking over at her..

Haruko get's back up,
dusting herself off and looking back to him saying.
Haruko : "Fine, fine..."
she grips her guitar and pull's herself back up..
picking the locator back up and reading it..
Haruko : "hey.."
she says looking back at him..
Haruko : "this thing still works.."
waving it at him,
she then smiles and goes back to reading the device..

naota continues watching her, and tells her..
Naota : "hey if you want, you can have the tent tonight..
- Sigh -
I'd rather take a look around this place.
there maybe some sign of life left.."
she looks back and says..
Haruko :"Oh, ok...Thanks..."
- ..leave me, why dont'cha.. -
she continues on to say..
Haruko : "hmm...
your pritty shaken up about all of this, aren't you tak -kun.?"
A pondering look appears from her expression,
as she continues to read the locator..
Naota then grabs his solarcaster, and begins to lift into the sky..
looking back down to her, he then says.

Naota : " Stay here, while I research the grounds we over looked..
I'll post back anything i find..
you.. should really be doing the same, haruko."
he sighs for a moment,
haruko looking back in her usual droopy eyed way..
he then goes onto say.
Naota : "This just, doesn't feel right.."
using his guitar as a transportation device, he soon takes off..

haruko blinks in his wake,
she then shrugs her shoulders and heads inside of the tent..
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Session : B
FLCL 2nd comming
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OST - Ravenwings : world without logo's -
Naota glides along the eastern costline for a few miles,
looking for any signs of life..
Naota : "There's..noone here..-sigh-"
He continues to glide scanning the area for signs of life..
The cities distruction can clearly be seen,
It's structures a reduced to rubble..
there are no signs of life, hesoon looks down and again, sighs..
saying to himself..
Naota : "This, look's like a battle happoned..
but where ? ..there are no facillities here..?"
He find's a place to land, and skips off his guitar..
grabing the strap as he lands..
slinging his guitar on his shoulder as he land's, on the ground..
Naota immediatly begins walking afterwards..


He soon walks up a side road,
pondering about the strangeness of the tall..
but heavily damaged building..
it, being the only one still standing.

Naota : "this ..is the only building standing, why..?"

The metallic surface continues to elude him..
and he finds debree all over the place..
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Meanwhile back at camp..
haruko sit's and tunes her guitar..
she silently thinks to her self, as she waits for naota to return.

Haruko : "...Hmm...I wonder if i should get a banjo..?"
then shakes her head and says again to herself..
Haruko : "what am i thinking.."
she looks around the desolated area,
the lake and trees the only thing she sees..
Haruko : "This..this is bad..
noone's here, and the city look's destroyed..
I wonder where everyone fled to.?"
she begins to tune her guitar again, starring into the nighttime sky..

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Back in the abandonded city..
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Naota peers at some rubble in the distiance..
his sights take him closer, and he walk's towords the debree..
he pushes a bolder aside, and looks at the large door..
branding within the city streets..
he look's at it's structure, and notices it's a door..
Naota : "heh ..thought so.."
- they must of fled underground whille the attack's were occuring. -

naota takes off, in the same direction as he came..
going back to camp, finally..
after a while..
Naota get's back to the camp, and grab's his guitar as he lands..
he walk's over the the tent..
Naota : "haruko....i've found somthing."
she look's back and sspeaks whille setting up blankets.
Haruko : "really now.. what is it..?"
she tilt's her head, and thinks of what hes saying..
then slowly gets up and emerges outside the tent..
naota then says..
Naota : "it's and underground tunnel..
..might lead to somthing..?"
Haruko : "if theres trouble..we can handle it.."
she then nods and follows him carrying her guitar as well,
soon both are flying along the coastline..
he looks back as she struggles to keep up..
he saying to her..
Naota : "come on, keep up.."
Haruko nods and replies..
Haruko : "hmm...right."

there course..
take them around the east bank of the central city,
they land and he shows her the hidden door.
Naota : ..what do make of it..?"
Haruko : "Hmm..."
she says and looks around a bit..
haruko : " Not bad, but.. how do you open it.?"
she smirks.. looking sarcasticly.
Naota : "I'm not sure.."
Naota turn's and peer's back at the door,
with the mysterious markings on it..
haruko begins to investigate,
the strange marking on and along the wall..
noticing a resembelance, to what naota was looking too.

Haruko : "What is it? "
as naota continues to compare markings..
haruko : "it's like nothing i've ever seen..
i'm not sure how to open it.."
he then checks a pocket, and slowly pulls out a note pad..
Naota - these glyphs resemble the same method the roman's used.. -
haruko continues to look around..
and says to herself..
Haruko : "You think there'd be some sort of key, or passage...?"
..she ponders looking at one of the patterns, and follow's it down..
naota then speaks whille continuing to write down leters and text..

Naota : " yeah..there should be a switch or somthing.."
looks around the corridors, the halls are emminse..
for the two heros..
naota places the pen and pad back into his pocket..
and tries to move some more of the rubble, in front of him..
Naota : "there's too much to move.. not, all at once.."
Naota looks to haruko,
speaking to her as she crouches down next to him....
"There's no way in getting it open..?,
we can't even push it open...unless..."
she grips a side of the door,trying to pry it open..
but it's no use, and she looks back to him..
Haruko : "Now what...?" says haruko, looking puzzled..
naota.. looking at the ground,
an indentation can clearly be seen..
leading from the door, around the corner..
he then speaks again.
Naota : "let's see where this leads us.."
pointing at the marking's leading around the corner,
she sighs and then says..
Haruko : "We can do that, too..."
she blinks and follows him as they begin to follow the markings..
the strange glyphs lead them around the corner,
and into a large building..

there are markings all over the place..
Haruko looks up and tugs on naota shoulder..
he soon looks up as well..
they stare in awe for only a moment at the spiraling structure..
Naota : - this isnt normal..
it's like the citizens and the population..
..have totally, dissapeared. -
Haruko : "it's the language of this planet..
but the building's destroyed.. ..there.. everywhere.."

Naota : "..it's going to take me some time,
to decifer this encoding..
..i think i can pull it off,
but piecing together all of this rubble's.. gonna take, some time.."

Naota : - not to mention..
there's still alot we don't know about this place.-

naota thinks to himself, whille looking back at her..
she then sighs and groans..
Haruko : " ..more like, forever...."
she then slides down the side of the wall, and begins to pout..
wanting the door to be opened right away..
Naota sigh's and goes to his work,
as haruko begin's tuning the ebo..
Naota concentrates on the glyphs,
pulling rubble and slowly piecing it together....

- If at first you don't succed...try,try,..again..-
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OST - The pillows : stalker -
Meanwhile back on the s.s.stumi..
amarao is hard at work,
trying figure out what our hero's were up to..
there, entering the corridor to the silo..
he looking to the monitor, on the two as they head inside..

amarao : "impressive..
he knew the language, without even knowing it's power...."
he look's back at the lutennant..
still watching along side of him, amd begins to conversate...

Amarao : "Trask, may have set a trap for the both of them..
if,they make it out alive.."
he cuts himself off as kitsurubami nods back to him..
amarao not needing to say another word.
they continue to watch on.. as naota and haruko walk inside..
the lutennant then say's

Kit : "Any need to back these two, up.?"
she ponders at the sight of the commanders head,
now doubled in size..
his head looking like a humanoid crown.
Noone of the other worker's complained about it,
but.. still notice it..
Amarao, sit's and drink's from his coffie mug..
pondering about the other two,
wondering if there trial here..
will meet the qualifications they need..
Amarao : "trask wanted to test him.. hes gonna get his results..
the brotherhood planned this from the beginning, with atomsk..
but now that things have changed..
it's up to the kid now.."
Kitsurubami look's back at amarao..
and speaks..
Kitsurubami : "So.. this is a sort of trial..?
nao san, wont like the sound of it..
if we told him he was being used, like this.."
Amarao nods and watches them, walk down a long corridor..
Amarao : "There going to encounter a little trouble,
that the brotherhood set up for them..
One of the facalties of the brotherhood,
dismantled and reprogrammed one of those mechas..
Trask is using that, as his test on the kid.."

Amarao then kicks back, and continues to watch..
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After a while..
haruko taps her foot, and grows impacient..
she begins to speak to him after an hour or so..
Haruko : "so.... so.. any, luck....?"
she looks down at the pattern he began to write in chalk..
he found in one of the many corner's of the building,
he continues to write as she looks around..
he ponders a moment..
and then speaks..
Naota : "I think there's some sort of generator,
underneath the city.."
he continues to say
"if we can activate it.."
shes intregued by his notion.. and leans against the wall
Haruko : "ok...how do we get there?"
he look's back to her, and speaks..
Naota : "It's all right here."
he point's all around the large building,
showing her all of the strange writings..
he then turns back to his work,
and points our the puzzled rubble.
Naota : it seem's to me..
the people of this planet had a genetic reaction,
to anything they touched..
so long as they drew a pattern infront of an entrance...
its like a safty lock, only the mechanisem.. is the genetic makeup.."
haruko : "oh i get it, it's like we can become keys.."
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OST -The pillows : Carnival -
Naota : " it's almost like a dead language,
we have back on my homeworld.."
he looks back at her and continues to speak.

Naota : "hey, you know what.. ?
try the side pannel in the main hall, I bet it's a com of sorts..
you're good a hacking thing's.."
She nods and goes to work, while he is baffeled by the encodings..
of the planet's language..
he scratches his head looking back at the upper half,
of the markings then to the rubble he has reconstructed..

Naota : - this pattern is familier..
i need a translator, to configue exactly what it says..
from my knoweldge..
if we can alter our makeup, we could open the door..
but, in order to do so I need a power source,
and to do that.. I need the translator.."
-uggh- He is now frustrated at this notion..

but naota continues to concentrate,
stairing at the glyphs and inspecting them.
Haruko comes back after a moment,
and looks down at him saying..
Haruko : " I can't activate the console... ..so, like.. now what..?"
he continues to write and read saying..
Naota : "we sit..and wait..till i can decifer this damn language..
i'm not giving up..not just yet.."
as naota continued to decypher for hours..
he writing on the notepad kept in his right pocket..

Haruko groan's again, and sink's to the floor..
she lean's along the wall..
not being able to bear, bordem any longer..
naota then looks at her and says..
Naota : "damn, this sucks..
i can figure this one out.."
points to one of the writings and looks back at haruko..
Naota : "but i can't decifer this one..
it has to be a, puncuation.."
saying so,
as he points to another one..
he then flicks his smoke away, and exhailing the smoke out.
the ciggerette but flies off into a dark corner..
the lit end still burns a redish glow, slowly.
she looks impatient staring at him and saying..
Haruko : "Well, what does it say...?"

Naota sighs and places his hands upon the ground,
not knowing the effect it took upon the rubble..
placing his hand's onto what he was writing..

the symbols start to glow..

Naota looks to the writing in shock,
trying to shuffle back while looking at the pattern..

Naota : "what.. is this..? ..the writing's there, glowing.." o.o

she looks and says..
Haruko : "you said if you could decypher the language,
it would react.. maybe this is some sort of sign, tak -kun.?" n.n*
he nods and says.
Naota : "yeah.. "
- I'm close, but not close enough.. -

he continues to stare into the light, trying to decifer the markings...
he ponders the writings and thinks.
Naota : "maybe, there is a way. to just, touch the door."
after a while of trying the com again..
Haruko comes walking back into the building
Once again speaking to naota with a bored tone..
Haruko : "Still no luck on the console, tak -kun.. you have any luck..?" she scratches her head , it itching from hour's of frustration..
Naota : "i have a theroy.. but i'll need you're help..
we have to move some of these fragments.. over by the door.."

Naota looks down on the stone writings,
trailing back into the desolated building..

haruko stands and watches naota trail back to the door,
pad in hand, naota approches it..
Naota - yeah, this just might work.. -

soon the fragemnts had been moved infront of the door,
to the underground..
naota kneels before the door, and begins to write..
drawing the pattern around the words..
the language, slowly to begin's to glow..
Naota kneel's back, as the pattern is now complete..
Haruko : "now what.?"
haruko asks..
Naota : " just watch.. "
she looks back at him, her eye's showing discouragment..
saying..
Haruko : "What...?"
a sweatdrop form's above her head..she then says..
Haruko : "Is that it...?"
naota -sigh.. impacient, as ever.. -
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OST - Stalker goes to bablyon. -

Naota soon lean's forward and touches the door..
In doing so, he places his hands upon the pattern once more..

the light start's to glow, and he backs off immediatly..

the patern now shines a bright glowing green light, and then fades..

the doorway slowly opens..
Naota look's back at haruko..speaking with befuddlement..
Naota : "huh..guess the decifering, worked..?"

she then nods saying..
Haruko : "mmHmm."
haruko follows naota ,as they proceed inside the doorway..
as soon as they do so, it closes behind them..
now in total darkness, except for a small dim light shining from the distiance..
they continue walking..
Haruko : "well..we're in the dark,
and there's a light at the end of this tunnel.."

..she blinks and nods..
Haruko : " yep.. totally obilvious here, tak -kun.."
naota grabs his solarcaster silently..
glaring to haruko as if she knew what to do..
holding it in the air, naota emmit's a low green and red light..
it shines bright as he holds it up above his head..
haruko : "there.. we'll just shine some light on this subject.."
and naota let's out a sigh while as haruko speaks..

naota gives the solercaster a bit more n.o...
which intrun.. glow's bit brighter..
naota : "Much better..."
haruko gives a tumb up, and they continue on..
they walk down the long pathway..
the only light aside of naota's guitar..
was the opeining ,on the other side..
Naota : "There are markings along this path as well,
they are much the same as we saw outside.."
he says as he walks along side of her..
Naota : "i'm not shure we're this is leading us..
but if it's to the reactor..then it's a safe bet."
they continue to walk till the end of the corridor..
the light now getting brighter,
as they progress through the darkness..
they enter a huge silo but no missle inhabits its entryway..
naota look's up into the entryway says calmly..
Naota : "its a missle silo.."
he turn's back looking to haruko..

Haruko : "there must of been base within the underground, here..
- SNAP -
we just hit paydirt, tak -kun.."
he ganders at the silo saying..
Naota : "Oh....looks that way.."
Haruko continues to look around..
Naota glances toword a doorway above them,
and points it out to her.

Haruko : "and.. yet, more walking.."
Naota : "it seems so much like our technology,
but like you said.. a few centuries, over our's.."

Haruko notices a console on the wall,
she turn's back to him while walking, pointing at the com..
Haruko : "hey.. this is a security, file bank..
if i can activate it.. it can tell us, what exactly happoned here.."

Naota : "haruko.. ..reactor, first."
he says looking at the door, not to far from them..
and points to the other end of the silo.
they soon come upon the doorway,
and naota notices another marking on the side wall,
he then simply touches it,
placing his hand upon it's surface..
and the door opens.

the large blast door's now open widly,
and they walk down and into a main area,
where there are several lifts and escolator's..
leading down to the lower halls of the facility.

Naota look's back to haruko and speak's while walking..
Naota : "you seem quiet haruko.. anything the matter.?"

he looks at her,continuing walking down the long path..
she then says..
Haruko : "I'm observing the area..
can't be too cautious, tak -kun."
she blink's and continues following naota..
walking down the stair's..
and entering into the reactors main deck..
looking at the strange technology,
naota look's back to her and speaks..

Naota : "we're here, there's the reactor.."
naota point's as he look's back to haruko..
not knowing the giant medical mechanical being,
standing behind him.
he look's to haruko, she showing a face of sheer fear..
looking above naota's head.
he never noticing, the shadowous mecha.. lurking behind him..

Naota : - this is all, too weird..-
Naota : "haruko ..what's wrong..?"
She continues to stare in fear,
as the being now reached it's full height..
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Suddenly, a large fist came crashing down behind him..
launching the two into the air.
The other fist plunges Naota, into a nreaby wall..
crushing him into it..
the presure is emmense and naota, strugggles to break free...
haruko begins to pick her ear while standing back up,
her guitar rested over her shoulder now noticing naota was in danger..

Naota : "uughhkk!"
Naota : - Damn it.. should of seen that, comming.. -
he spits blood from being knocked in the stomach,
the pressure exceeding his limitations..
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- FLCL -
Atomsk : " soon naota, your power's will increase.. expenentially "
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Naota falls into a nearby pile of parts..
it's glance now takes it's turn on haruko,
she then notices what was happoning and says..
Haruko : "hmm..? -flicks away ear wax.. -
oh, right ! Let's, Get It On !!!"

Haruko in anger, grips the EB -O..
and revs up the motor..
the mecha sarcastically turn's and walks away from naota,
and it then starts to walk towords haruko..
it's sights set on her, her eyes seeing the same fate as naota..
she then grips her guitar, gulping her pride saying..

Haruko : "OK,My turn.. Come get some, you heap of scarp metal ! "
she launches an attack, running along side of the silo's walls..
and gaining speed..
as she does so, haruko dodges the punches from the machine.
stoping only for a second.. to leap at the bot..
only to be knocked back aginst a wall herself..

Naota then launches from the pille he was under..
now in mid air he huff's from being out of breath..
Naota : "Think.. you can, get rid of me.. that, easy.?!,HUH.?"
Naota: - insulting fuck, I'll show you.. -
His eyes inflamed by the insult, and the rage begin's to spread..
now having total controll, over his emotions..

Naota grunts at the disrespect,
and spits the salty blood from his mouth..

The machine has showin naota a ton of flaws of it's structure..
hovering there in mid air, naota then begins to speak..
in two voices at once.

..one of atomsk, and one of his original self..
both of a deep tone, naota speaks as the reddish glow intensifies..

Neota : "you..
I'll show you the meaning of the term, HOLY..MESSENGER !!!"

Naota suddenly launches his own attack, but the bot reflects him.
and knocks him back, in the process..
Naota's body slam's aginst the hard metallic surface, of the silo..
Leaving an inprint from the hard impact..

haruko look's back as she watches naota,
get slammed aginst the wall..saying..
Haruko :"Oh that's gotta hurt."

naota slides down once more, landing on his knees..
the pain begins to set in for him,
and naota becomes short of breath..

she looks back onto the bot and says.
Haruko : "...O..k!"
and leaps into the air up at the Machine, and swings the ebo...
only to simply get wacked away to the wall.

another imprint is left from haruko's body this time...
she slam's aginst it hard.. and slides down saying..
Haruko : "Ohhh...that's gonna hurt tomorrow.."
she twitches,
as she slides down the metallic surface of the missle silo..
Naota regains himself.. and start's to grip his guitar..

the pulse imminating from it..
the powers of the n.o. trapped inside..

calling him..
he looks down showing only his hair,
and starting to feel the rage overcome him..

he says, once more with both voices..
Neota : "I'll, show you.."

He glares at the machine, now walking back toword him..
it's movement's are absent, as it's walk's..
almost like it is controlled, by somthing..
Naota scream's in a fit of rage, feeling the n.o. take over..
once again, the reddish glow emminates from his being..
the scar of atomsk, glowing from his forhead..
Naota launches himself streight through the machine's body,
like a knife through butter.

the flare colored light, dissipates from his stream..
from the ground, through the machine's body..
now above it, naota stares back and watches the explosion..

just then haruko kicks off from the wall, and land's..
watching naota, make his mark..
she says
Haruko : " oh...what power.."
gripping the handle of the ebo..
and continues to watch in silent awe..
naota soon look's around, after the debrie and smoke dissipate..
he then lets out a sigh and speaks..
Naota : "huh.. that was easy.."

his attention then turn's to haruko,
and he looks down at her..
Naota : "you ok down there..?"
he then reverts back from a flare colored stream of light,
and glides down to meet with her..
she gets up and speak.
Haruko : "Uh...y-y-yeah....Oh I'm fine..Just peachie kean.."
she says with a nervous smile, looking at naota..
and pondering about his power..

He looks away and starts to walk along the corridor..
speaking with his back turned to her...
Naota: "let's go.. we gotta reach the reactor's main computer.."

she looks back with a blink at the destroyed robot..
and speaks as she turns..
Haruko : "Right then.. let's go.."
she giving him a small smirk,
as they walk into the central command's mainframe.
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OST The pillows : - Last dinosaur -

Naota sit's down at the front console,
and starts to type word's into the computer..
it runs a simple diognostic of what happoned,
and then it start's to reboot it's self..

He then looks back at haruko and speaks as the rebooting proceeds.
Naota : "this is it, we're gonna finally find out what happoned here.."

she blinks at him then start's to hear strange noises,
from the outisde of the underground base..

she watches as naota then continues to type on the keybord,
placed infront of him..

everything, one at a time.. start's to run..
Haruko : "now what?"
she says as she looks at him,
the computer begins to show the diognostic is now complete,
on the screen..
Naota : "we're done here..
time to get back to that console we found..
she nods and speaks..
Haruko : "Right! "

they soon proceed to walk down the once, narrow dark hallway..
that lead to the surface, of the capital...
his mind back on the machine,
and the notion that m.m. still lurked on the surface..
now brightly lit, they continue up the corridor..
Naota ponder's about the whereabouts of the other droids,
around the vicinity..
then around the colony planets..
Naota : "there still somthing that's not right."

he says looking down on the portable translator he found,
while inside the base..
Naota : "it's saying there was a battle aginst each other..
but this is the thing, there are no records of any kind of conflict..

douring the past few months before they we're attacked..?"

This really troubled naota, and his thoughts go back on
the conflicts with earth..

Naota : "we should head back home, after we're done here.."
Naota : - there's still alot the brotherhood,
and amarao have to awnser for.. -

haruko nod's her head in compliance to naota.
and they both soon race into the night's sky..
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Next Act :
Haruko : naota and I,
are on the verge of uncovering a dasterdly plot with caprica's demise.
while avalisk takes on his first trial..

is it enough to keep the earth safe..?
or will the potential, screw up..?
and I'm not talking about fooly coolying, with mamimi..

find out on the next, fooly cooly - 2nd comming !
Session : B
Act : 19
- destruction, meet's it's peacemaker. -

Amarao : "let's just hope this Avalisk kid.. has, what it takes.."
- eyetwitch -
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*To Be Continued.*
*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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FLCL 2nd comming ACT 19

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:45 pm

Well fans..
yet another week has passed us, and good news too..
celebrating the 190TH episode of bleach !
is aqua timez, with a new op song for those keeping up.
you can find the tv sized version..
here At :
-- http://dc87.4shared.com/download/66971546/5212f6af/
BMK_Bleach_OP9_Velonica_Tv-size.mp3?tsid=
20081016-131647-462e06f8 --

**Copy, paste, you know the usual.**

For those with mp3 format more to come, as this develops..
for those looking for the full version,
in the meantime enjoy the next act...

- still looking for an artist, if anyone's interested. -
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FL CL - 2ND COMMING.
Saga #2 : The mechanical menace.
( Opening song - Raion : by jinn.)
Session : B
ACT : 19
- destruction, meet's it's peacemaker. -
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FLCL - OST -The pillows : one life
( Milky Way Galaxy, Earth : Maybase Tokyo )

Three weeks have passed on earth..
as avalisk now walks down the trail,
leading to where he was the previous weeks...
still sitting and waiting at the hillside,
looking over the downtown area..
canti look's to the giant facility at the edge of town..
he ponders as to what this day will bring,
as avalisk tune's the rickenbacker that naota and haruko gave him..

he playes a few songs that was taught to him by his mentors,
and he continues to think of both of them..
as he looks into the sky.
.the light, shining dim acrossed his face..
as he shades himself under a tree..
the birds churp and fly out of the tree,
as he continues to play.. the wind's softly blow, aginst him..

he playes and is diversed into a trance..
continuing to play, without a care in the world..
avalisk's music, pours out from him..
not noticing what string's he is playing,
but it is diffrent from what haruko and naota taught him..
he continues to play as the day progresses,
he gets tired of waiting..
and decides to head home..

suddenly, mamimi walks along the bank of the river..
trying not to bring any attention to herself.

soon.. there eyes meet.. she looking slightly, and to her right.
avalisk quietly watches her..

mamimi calmly walks over and sit's down..
then watches the river's current..
her reflection shines upon the water's of, the river's edge..
she looking down and saddened..
noone else she knew, was around..

avalisk then says..
Avalisk : " you seem down.."
she gazes back to him still squatting on the ground..
she looks back, and speaks.
Mamimi : " yeah..."
he say's as he lean's back..
"you're the young reporter for the news, right ?
..mamimi....samejima correct.?"
she looks back at him not trying to notice him,
and continues to look back down..
Mamimi : "yeah, right.. i used to be, an anchor..
..but now.."
Mamimi stand's up, and throw's a stick she had in her hand..
into the river, then slowly sits back down

Mamimi : "i lost my job over 3 weeks ago,
and now.. well, i'm looking for work.."
she then sit's next to him, on the ground..
her skirt looked a bit too short, but he payed no mind to it..
and began tuning his guitar....

she looks at him, noticing he played the same note as naota..
and she then said to him..
Mamimi : "you know, tak -kun right... I mean, naota nandaba...?"

she look's back down to him, leaning into his face as she asked..
he could smell her sent, the perfume..
and he was not repulsed by it..
she still staring at him, continues to speak..

Mamimi : "well.. you obviously do,
since your carring tak -kun's guitar around with you.."
her tone now a bit stronger then before..

he nod's and goes back to playing his guitar...
she sighs and says..
Mamimi : "i dont suppose you know, where they are.. do you.?"
she points a fingure up, and shakes it at him..
and winking at the same time..
he continues to play as if nothing was said,
she stomp's a foot down to shock him..
and speaks out of frustration..
Mamimi : "fine..
if you won't tell me, then..
i'll just have to go to his house, and ask his old man where he is.."
her short stomp's make it hard for him to concentrate,
he then stop's and speaks looking to her with no expression.
Avalisk : " There not there, they left...
and if you still don't believe me?
..bring back some bread.."
she sighs and looks back down..
Mamimi : "I have no intension, there both gone.
and i don't have, anyone else to talk to.."
she pouts, trying to get his attention..

Avalisk just sit's there lighting a smoke up,
and inhaling it as she pouts..
mamimi trying to be annoying as possible,
to make him spill the whereabouts of naota and haruko..

she looks back at him smoking..
her eye's light up, she crawls fast over to him and asks for one..
Mamimi : " please..? "
Avalisk calmly grabs one out of his vest flap..
the jeanvest looked perfect on him, the arm's torn just right..
looking re -sewed, to look more natural..
Avalisk enhails the smoke again, letting it bellow out as he exhail's..

thinking thought's to himself,
he thinks of naota and haruko..
then about the friends he had made, before comming to tokyo..
the year's have not been kind..
running from one home to another,
never really staying in one place..
and now of all things, why here..why maybase..
Avalisk : "why me.."
He utter's under his breath..
mamimi look's to him, and speaks..
Mamimi : "because, they choose you..
you're head, is the only one that work's right.. right.?"

- she's right you know..
your head is one of the only few left, that work's right....-

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(FMA's OST - Beaming sunlight.)
( Capricus galaxy : Caprica )

As naota and haruko look around on the hillside of one of the other capitals,
he wonders about the tracking device haruko has in her hand..
can they really reliey on something,
that doesn't work half the time..
or is it maybe, she's playing with his head again..

he tries to peer into her mind.. but fails..
she continues to concentrate on the work before her,
translating the text, and making a new one out of paper..
she writes the message sent to them, from the commander..

Haruko : " heh, he's got quite a sence of humor, that guy.."
naota look's over and ask's..
Naota : "what's it say.?"
she decypher's the wording and says..
Haruko : "he sends his congradulations..
over comming the guardian of the reactor,
the brotherhood told of this to him and set you up..
as to, test you.."
naota looks away..

Naota : " A set up, huh..?
..They could of killed me, and they call it a set up.?"
haruko nod's and continues to say..
Haruko : "it seem's there are more of them comming here,
in the next few days...
we had better find that bike shop goyku, and tell him right away.."

Naota look's acrossed the clearing to a small island,
he didn't see before..
there it's towering mountain is the only thing he sees..
he point's and look's back to haruko..
Naota : "what about there.?"
she turn's her gaze towords the island..
the horizon somewhat blocks her view..
but haurko see's the same small island..
and then speaks..
Haruko : "yeah, but..
you know, what if there is noone there..?
how are we gonna get back home tak -kun.?"
she look's back at him with a sarcastic look on her face,
not beliving in naota's idea..
and so.. they have no choice...
Almost out of gas, and on there last limbs,
they head for the island hopeing of some good luck..
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- FL CL 2nd comming.. -
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FLCL OST -The pillows : swingers night club
( Milkyway galaxy : Earth, Maybase Tokyo )

Kamon and shinjikumi go about there daily life,
as if nothing happoned to naota..
In the kitchen, they sit..
kamon reading the newspaper..
whille shinjekumi hard at work, tinkering with his clock..
The expressions of frustration come over kamon,
as he continues to read a certin artical..

about machines taking over the downtownarea..
Kamon : "hey.. there's an article about naota, in here.. ..let's see.."

he adjusts his glasses to read, and continues to read aloud..

Kamon : "a young boy at the age of 12, no less then ten years ago..
destroyed a giant machine in the downtown area..
and unleashed a frightful being..
the being sucked the machine inside of it's self,
before taking off...
recient events take us back to the old facility,
that was abandonded no less then the same time..
witnisses say that a giant phenoix appeared again,
a few weeks ago..
then suddenly dissapeared..
there has been no sighting of it since..
but other reports show,
that there is once again activity leading to aliens from space..

a boy was seen flying through the air, carrying a guitar..
and destroying every bot that has come to earth, since..
noone know's as to why the bots keep comming,
but there's reports.. of a savior..
helping the weak in there time, of need..
the artical was writtin by.. mamimi..?"

he then places the paper down, and ponders about the young girl.
Kamon : "I wonder how she is right now..?"
his sights now on his father, who was tossing the clock back..
and forth, like a ragdoll..
tearing it to shread's.. and bashing it aginst the table..
shinjikumi : "damn this blasted, thing..
why won't it work..? !"
shinjekumi is steemed by the notion that his work,
will never be finished..
kamon then says..
Kamon : "hey why not take a break.?"
shinjekumi then looks back and says
shinjikumi : "hey I'm the one with the job, you know..
why don't you go, write another book..?!"

shinjikumi's eyes and expression, is of pure anger..
no toloration for anything, but his work..

kammon ponders about his question and speaks..
Kamon : "yeah a book.. a book about, naota..
and his adventures..
yeah ..i'll write about that, when he get's home.."

taking his eyes off his father once again..
Kamon : "of couse a storyline about the weirdness,
of what's been going on... "

kamon then set's the paper down, folding it closed..
he gets up..
and slowly start's to walk out of the room..
like he was put into a trance,
leaving shinjekumi to his works..
the old man begins again, to bake his homemade bread..
the oven glarring back at him, as he stares..

Shinjikumi : " I need a new menu, wish i had some help around here.. -
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-FL CL 2nd comming-

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FLCL OST - Another morning.
( Capricus Galaxy : Caprica, biker's island )

Haruko and naota now on the small island, visit with an old man..
there in the 'takku' looking garage,
naota notices the structure made of wood,
is capped with huge leaves from the trees surrounding the island..
we watch as he tweeks with haruko's vespa,
goyku wipes his brow before letting into haruko..

Goyku : "you know you should take care of this more often, haruko..
it's not often i see people come out here..
what has happoned around the galaxy, anyway..?"
he then takes his wrench and continues to twist socket's..
and screw drives, back into the vespa..
Haruko : "there was an accident within you're capital's main brigade..
it seem's everyone has ither fled,
or have been destroyed.
i'm sure that you've known this..
but what are you going to do.?"
she continues to twirl around in a revolving stool,
spinning around and around,
while talking to him..
naota just stares outside looking at the skies,
watching the diffrent pattern's,
this planets cloud form's make..
the cloud's slowly raise up from the sea..
it then casts a foggish look around the island slowly moving in..

Goyku : "storm's comming in.."
the old man says, as he then points to the fogish looking clouds..
goyku : "you two can bunk up there, for the night."
he then point's the wrench to the top of the ladder,
leading into another loft area.
goyku : "I'll continue to work on this one, tomarrow.."
the points to naota..
goyku : " you there, my boy.. pick anyone you want..
I'll fill you in later, ok.?"
the old man say's nothing more,
and walks back into the small hut..
next to the garage..

haruko look's as goyku leaves the large takku,
and heads inside of his small shack..
Haruko : "huh, ...that's strange.
i've never seen him run, off like that..?!"
she blinks a few more times, while still looking out the doorway.
naota continues to gaze at the long line of small vespa,
similer to that of haruko's..
he then sigh's and says..
Haruko : "this is totally, my fault.."
she then changes from confused, to devious..
and starts to leaning into naota..saying
Haruko : "takkun, i'm bored.. this is taking forever..
i'm starving,
and the only thing we've had to eat today.. was some, potatos.."

she then nuzzles unders his arm,
and start's to wrap it around herself..

he is taller now, much taller..
she looks up to him,
as he continues looking onto the small and much larger bikes..

Haruko : "come on, takkun..
you said so you're self, we gotta survive this trip.. besides.."
she stands up looking to him, leaning into his body..
he could feel her right ontop of him..
his thoughts raccing as she keeps talking to him..

haruko : "we, havn't been.. together, in a while.."
she then uses her index fingure, to trail down his chest..
he feels it's pressure aginst his ribcage,
as she continues to trail....
once she tries to go lower then his weighst,
he then grabs her hand..
and gently pushes it away..saying..

Naota : "not now.. i need time to think of things..
after you left, i had to overcome the fact..
that you basically, ran my life..
I need to sit and think on things, for a while.."
Naota - she's deffinetly hiding something. -
she looks back at him, with a sad posture..

he then sits on one of the bikes,
and starts to seriously talk to her..

Naota : "..i've been concentrating, focusing this power..
and for what purpose? ..to be controlled again.?
..no, it's not me you want. not this time..
somthing's in it for you..
and I don't know what that is, yet.."

he fold's one of his legs tword's himself, setting it on the other leg..
then he continues to talk..saying.

Naota : "it's been ten years, no word..
not even a letter you.
you left, and said.. save it, for next time.."

he then stares at her..

Naota : " where, do we go from here..huh..?
..what's the whole purpose of this mission, haruko..?"
naota becomes quiet, stairing at her with quiet questional thought.

haruko stare's back, pritty much keeping to herself..
They both lock eyes, both trembling in turn..
there stare ignite's passion from both sides..
she then sighs to say somthing, but stop's abruptly.
naota continues quietly stairing back at haruko..

she now standing, continues to stare..
not saying a word..
he then just stands up and walk's outside,
into the now slowly falling rain..
haruko silently stand's still..
not a word draw's from her lips.

..now a saddened state, haruko holds herself..
the only thing she can do, is look down and away..

- sometimes..it's best to not say, Anything..at all..-
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FLCL - the pillows hybrid rainbow.

( Milkyway Galaxy, Earth : Maybase tokyo )

Avalisk and mamimi are getting to know eachother quite well..

they walk down the long road into town.
the facility could clearly be seen from the distiance.
his gaze then set's it's self on it..
the huge reactor was slightly tilted, on it's own axais..
the rust and decay of the bulding, could now clearly be seen.
his thoughts trail,
as mamimi leans up aginst a nearby pole..
her gaze the same place...

she then speaks solomy....
Mamimi : "when naota first visited that facility,
haruko was already there..
it's like she knew, everything about him..
before he told her, anything..

i'm not sure what those two share, but it's unique.
they share somthing i could never. not, with him. "
she then start's to look down.
Mamimi : " too many painful memories, of this place..
I shouldn't of come back, but i did..
something drew me back..
it's like fate.
A fate that knows no bounds..
..like this facility is the only thing, that remains the same. "
He then turns back to her, and speaks..

Avalisk : "what are you talking about..?"
he ask's confused..
Avalisk : "but everyone is at that age,
it's not uncommon to feel that way. "
she says knowing what he was thinking.
she then lights a smoke, and inhales it slowly.
exhaling it.. and watching the smoke disapate, into the air..
of the late day's sky..
she stares at the facility, silently..
he looks back at her..
his eyes gaze upon her,
he thinks of how she knew what he was thinking.
but he forget's she's older, and much more mature then he..
he just continues to stare back at the old facility, and then he asks.
Avalisk : " how did it come to this..?
the town, how did medical mechanica arrive..?"
she tosses her smoke over the railing of the bridge,
and it slowly float's down..
..the wind's underneath picking it away..
she shrugs her shoulders then looks to him..
Mamimi : " it was here, before i was born..
but i remember people gathering around it..
when it first opened,

the people were happy it came..
this ment people were nolonger sick,
and they did a good job at the time...
i'm not sure what happoned though..

when tasaku left for america, I hung around naota for the most part.
I felt if i had him around, the world could be a little more bareable..
but.. i was young, and nieve..it.."
he stops her from continuing..and speak's..
Avalisk : " you felt the controll, and wanted it.. craved it.."
she blushed, then look's down from embarassment..
Mamimi : "yes, but.. it was only with tasuku..
..noone else.."
his gaze then turn's upward, as he gazes off into the moonlit night.
the stars shining down, upon the small city of maybase..
he then asks her..
Avalisk : "how long have they been comming.."
her gaze then turns to him and she awnser's..
Mamimi : "roughly about ten years,
as long as naota and I, have been friends..."
she looks down and says..
Mamimi : "when he made his decision then....
I was actually happy, for him.

now, it seem's his destiny has gottin him into a galactic war..
and it's only a matter of time,
before they come looking for the one's responsable.."

her lips puff out, as she then lights another smoke..
he coughs at her blowing smoke by him,
and he backs off a few steps..
he then looks and say's..
avalisk : "you know, smoking's bad for you..
it doesn't solve anything.."

she then flicks the ash and continues to smoke,
not caring what he had said at that moment..

the reality of her life has hit her once again,
and she falls deeper into her mind..
thinking thoughts that should never be thought of..
between her, and avalisk..
her gaze now turn's suductively towords him,
she slowly starts to grab his chest from behind..
groping it and kissing his neck...
he then backs off a bit..and says.
Avalisk : ".mamimi.. you're not you're self, please.."
he can't help it, when she's biting his neck..
and forcing herself upon him..

his gaze now looking upward, he thinks..
Avalisk - maybe this isn't so bad.. -
she leans into him and say's.
Mamimi : "I havn't been with anyone, It's nothing personal.
but I love to tease, it's somthing i find. comforting..
feeling the controll over a man, and having him take advantage..
is somthing i'd like to experience, once more..."

her gaze now set on his eyes,
the wide pupil's now gazing back to her.. he then says..
Avalisk : "why me..?, why am i so special all of the sudden..?"

she then kisses him gently on the lips and say's..
Mamimi : " Cause..
you, are my saviour..
and this.. is the only way I feel, i can repay you..
for being there for me.."

Avalisk blinks back at her, he then knew.. she realized.
Mamimi : " you did, you came to my rescue.. when noone else, would..
..even now, you're here for.. me.."

Her gaze set's back into those wide pupils,
the blue remenince of his color could clearly be seen..
he then speak's.

Avalisk : " it was nothing..really.."
still trying to back away from her,
as she continues litterally throwing herself upon him.
leaning further in as he backs away..
Avalisk : " come on, you're telling me..
cause i saved you're life, you're..in love with me..?"
she stops..her gaze now looking downward..saying..

Mamimi : "you don't.. believe me, do you.."
only silence follows..

mamimi sighs and just calmly, take's another cigarette out..
fumbling thorugh her jacket pocket, and find a lighter...
as she exhales she cocks her head, while smoking..

Mamimi : " is that really, so hard to believe..?"

her expression is of anger at him for simple mistrust.
the fog now setting in on where they stand,
makes them look like there standing on clouds..
it rolls down the trail leading back to where they came..
her gaze now looking away,
..he then tries to smooth the conversation over..
Avalisk : "look, i'm flattered..but..
is it right..? this..all of this.
i mean, your so much more older then I.."
she then exhales once more, and continues to stare into nothingness..
Mamimi : "believe what you want..I know, what I feel.."

her gaze now looking upward, seeing a small dim light..
growing bigger as it approches the atmosphere..
Mamimi : " oh look.. there comming again.."
she points, with no expression..
to a dim light in the sky, growing bigger by the minute..

avalisk's gaze slowly turn's upward..
Avalisk : "oh, this is great.."

the watch on, as the ball of light.. now solently grow's bigger..

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FLCL 2nd comming..
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OST - the pillows : stalker in babylon


suddenly, from nowhere..
Commander Amarao hovers over the two,
his grey vespa shining in the light of the street post..
his gaze, set upon avalisk..
Amarao :"look..i don't care what you two got going on..
all i know is there on there way here now,
and it's you're turn save the earth."
his fingure now points to the young man,
holding the guitar in his hand.
Avalisk : "how come i get the feeling,
that this is just another scare tatic..?"
Amarao lowers his face, only showing a grin..
avalisk grunt's back at the site, and his eyebrow twitches..
Amarao : "look, kid.. do what you must,
to stop them from activating the facility.."
Avalisk : " it's not the only thing right now,
that i'm worried about.."
his gaze now set upon the falling time bomb,
in the midst of space racing tword the planet..

he then looks back at avalisk saying..
Amarao : "good luck kid..
you're gonna need it.."
the commander takes off, flying back towords the mothership..

avalisk blink's in amarao's wake..
his eyes soon turn back, to the glowing ball..

mamimi turn's to him, kisses his cheek, and wishes him good luck..
and walks away back home..
avalisk now stands alone.. looking up, at his first trial..

- see you're destiny, and grab it by the hand. -
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- Next Act -
Haruko : " Valor and courage triumph,
over the known causes of depression..
as mamimi continues her struggles..
trying to feel, once more.. and bail out, of her depression..

Avalisk has a trial of his own to overcome..
whille I and naota still work on our next move..
we try to overcome difficulties of being in a relationship..
is this.. the end of me,and naota as a couple.?

find out on the next, fooly cooly 2nd comming !
Session : B
Act : 20
- life's concubine.. -
Haruko : " we got problems, in paradise.."
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**Untill The next act..**
*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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FLCL 2nd comming ACT 20 - Life's Concubine. -

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Mon Oct 27, 2008 2:13 pm

well hardcore fans ?
sorry to previously dissapoint you, on no post last week.
hopefully this week makes up for the loss.

on another note bleach ost 3
officially releases on : november 5th 2008

good news for deathnote fans,
new chapters in the manga will begin again in mid january..
I'm guessing the story is taking a rather remarkable turn of events.
keeping you updated on the latest in bleach and deathnote news.
this is atomsk.
and now, here is this weeks act.
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FL CL - 2ND COMMING.
Saga #2 : The mechanical menace.
Session : B
ACT : 20
- life's concubine -
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( Milky way galaxy : Earth, Maybase tokyo )

OST : The pillows - stalker -

As the night moved onward, in the small city of maybase tokyo..
the townsfolk once again, witness another huge ball of light.
glowing in the nighttime sky.
the gleaming ball looked like another sun,
shining down upon the small city..

avalisk and mamimi gaze up as it keep's it's speed,
hurdling towords the planet's surface..

avalisk then start's to race,
still looking at the ball as he paces..
noticing it growing bigger, and brighter by the moment.
Avalisk's sights set on one thing now..
to defeat whatever was comming to earth, No matter cost..
The glaring ball of light, now growing bigger..
and the size doubling, every second counted for..

mamimi continues to stare off into the horizion,
worried about avalisk's well being..
avalisk's thoughts and heart races,
as the ball now plunges into the atmosphere of the planet.
Large chuncks of ice and rock begin to break off,
as it speeds downward..
hurdling toword's the city..

avalisk stops.. gripping his guitar.
now at the point of impact..
looking high up into the sky,
as the ball come.. propelling towords him.
mamimi then pulls out her camera and looks at the sky,
quickly snapping pictures..
she then watches it crash outside of town saying..
Mamimi : "There here.. ..Lord canti, and Avalisk..
they, must fight them.."
She then places a fingure on her top lip,
and thinks to herself..then speaks..
Mamimi : "The battle of the god's..
the titan's of old, are trying to controll what they cannot..
and the new, are wanting change..
It's..
..It's like war of the world's or, somthing.."
the large ball now broken, shatters before hitting the ground..
sparks fly as the base of the machines pod,
smashes into the canyon's deep crevice...

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meanwhile..
Kamon and shinjekumi,
both look out of the door's into the distiance,
where the crash was herd..
noticing it.. they both look back at eachother,
then slam the door's shut.. immedatly..
knowing something was bound to happon..
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Avalisk watches for only a moment,
then rushes down sliding down the cliffside..
gripping his guitar, and holding it the whole way...
He jumps off, just at the last second..
and land's on the ground..
there he sits.. waiting..
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FL CL 2nd comming..
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(Capricus galaxy : Caprica, biker's island. )

FLCL -OST - the pillows : Happy bivouac

Haruko lean's back aginst one of the bikes,
watching naota pick a bike out for himself.

Haruko : "Tak -kun, seriously.. I'm bored..
please, pick a bike already..?! "

speaks haruko already polishing her's and waiting for naota.
he stares at all sorts of diffrent models..
vintage, viaggio's, gts's, sidecars, stocks, and ts500's..
Nothing, seemed to catch his eye...

Naota : " yeah... give me another minute..
I can't decide..
..I don't know which one, would be best..?"

the old man watching naota pick out his bike says..
goyku : " might I make a suggestion..?"
naota then blinks and,looks back goyku scratches his head..
with his hand, as he holds his cap..
he continues to say..
goyku : "it is best when traveling like she is,
to use the granduler models..

but I myself, perfer somthing more suitable..
the needs you both seem to have, are pritty big after all...."
The old man turn's and start's to walk out, saying..
goyku : "follow me.."
naota blinks and look's at the old man,
then immediatly follows him outside..

Haruko then saying nothing, blinks a few times..
then closes her eyes while looking down thinking to herself..

Haruko : - heh.. this I gotta see.. -

She then hops off her bike, and waltzes outside..
placing her hands behind her back..
The old man leads naota to another area, of his garage...
the old man walks up to a large misterious object..
the tarp covering whatever was inside..
he slowly walks up and grabs hold of part of it,
getting ready to unvail what was underneath.

he turns his head and then says..
goyku : "This has been one of my favoriate model's.. up untill now..
I've never givin It, to anyone..
you, my boy.. somehow seem worthy of it.."

his expression is of satisfaction..
looking down while still holding the tarp..
he the takes and throws the tarp off, it showing an origional...
GTS visago 4000'

Haruko blinks a bit then speaks.
Haruko : " Nice !
good work, old man this is a real treat."

she then wraps her arm around naota's neck,
and hold's a fingure forward..
while crossing her legs,
using him as leverage saying.
Haruko : "my boy tak -kun here'll make sure, this baby..
won't go, to waste.."
naota then looks at its shiny decor..
its black metallic surface, was smooth to the touch..
and had all the specifications,
that haruko was explaining to him earlier..
all he could do was stare, at this awsome machine..

haruko and the old man start to walk off,
and leave naota starring in awe.

His thoughes trail.
..naota still, has things givin to him..

his expression changes from calm to angrey,
stading there looking onto the bike silently..
and not letting anyone else catch whim of his feeling..
naota - i knew the old man was just letting me borrow this, bike.. -
Naota : " of all things, though.. ..why this..?"

he is puzzled at the old man's jesture, but knows what he is thinking..
as the old man and haruko walk off, a fair distiance and talk..
he then turns back to the bike, while haruko and the old man talk..
goyku, whispers to haruko..
using a hand to hold up, so haruko only could read his lips..

goyku : "now you remember the stipulations..
if he fails, then i get my bike back.."

A devious smile comes from his lips, as he looks at her..
haruko jumps back a bit in shock, and is confussed..saying..

Haruko : "geez old man, kind of frontal arn't cha.."

she says as she grits her teeth, and continuosly useing her eyes..
to direct the old man's attention to naota..

naota looks back and say's..
Naota : "Relax..
I already know, ..I read his thoughts.."

looking back calmly, and not caring about the agreement..
naota continues to stare at the ride..

haruko glares back in shock, she then speaks.
Haruko : "ok.. so you read, his thoughts..
..did you, read mine.. as well.?! HUH, tak -kun!?"

she grits her teeth and glares at him,
not caring what he said at that point..
she then lower's her head, her bangs hiding her eyes..

Haruko : "takkun.. ..did you..?"
naota say's nothing,
he continues to stare off, as if she had said nothing..

Haruko : "WELL.?"
her expression and judge of tone could clearly tell,
she was furious with him..

Naota : "yes..i did.."

her expression turns from anger, to sorrow..
haruko, was hurt by this..

she lower's her head even more, and starts to walk away..
slouching as she walked.
naota watched, and read her mind as she walked away..
he then knew, what she did..
Naota : - I, pried.. even now.. I'm prying.. -

his expression changed, giving off a look of misery..
Naota : "shit.!"
he said..
as he turned around, and started to walk in another direction..
oppisate of haruko..

goyku caught in the middle..
simply shrugs his shoulders,
and walks into the garage, humming a tune while doing so..

goyku : " there young.. they'll get over it.. "

goyku - If only... she, would realize.. she's not ment, to be with him.. -
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FLCL 2nd comming...
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( milky way galaxy : Space, s.s. stumi )
OST - yoko kanno : 7 minutes..
( fasten seatbelts / cowboy bebop. )

Meanwhile, back on earth..

From the mothership, commander amarao watches from afar..
on the comming battle, now shaping on earth..
as he fold's his arm's, he speaks..
amarao : "Avalisk has his hands full with the first horde`of bots,
don't let them take over the vicinity..
The ball, has crashed outside the city..
and now the advancing force is moving in.."
he says while sitting, slouched in his chair..
amarao : "I only hope they have done good, with trainning the boy..
he's our only chance now.."

Lutennant kitsurubami watches as the fight continues.
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On the battle front..
Avalisk fight's his first battle..
he within a horde` of black canti droids.

his posture is balanced out, totally waiting for the first strike..
Avalisk : "come on, I can take ya....
..i'll take you all, on.!"
he grin's hiding his eyes with the large purple bangs,
hanging from his face down towords his chin..
teeth now showing, as he grits them,
bIding till the right time.. to ignite himself.

the frontal force now raises there gun arm's,
and begin to fire upon him..
bullets rippling passed his body.. but not one hit's him..
every single shot they took, left no wound to be seen..
he then lift's his face up showing his eyes,
wide pupils glowing a dark black, with a bright blue.
outlines showing an off color, he then says..
Avalisk : "You ready..?! ..Cause here I come.! "

some of the horde` start to launch off toword him,
as he power's up in a bluish light..
and takes off, racing head-on tword the mechanical onslaught.
..more of the horde raise there gunarms, and begin there assult.

he easily dodges the small bullets flying and rolling in midair,
dodging them as they ripple the air passing him.

he then smashes the rickenbacker, into one of the machines head.
Again the bullets are too slow to catch his form,
they slip mear centimeters from there target.

his speeds increase continuosly, using his techniques.. again.
using sonic speeds, avalisk forces back TEN of the Bots.

they jump back surrounding him in a circle.

he continues with his extreeme speeds,
making them keep there distiance.

He tries to go faster then he already is, but no effect.
One of the bot's quickly knock's him back with force,
he grunts from being hit but uses this time..
to flip the switch, on the rickenbacker..

getting hit and forced back,
the rickenbacker then turn's into the semiautomatic..
and sprey's the bots, surrounding him..
as he spin's on his back.

they spit, and fizzle.. with electric sparks.
some of them fall, some just stop functioning all together.

Avalisk land's to find yet more of the robotic, horde` awaiting him.
they move toword him slowly, knowing he is a threat..
suddenly six more gather to confront him, as he power's up again.

everything to Avalisk, looking in a slowmotion state.
The bluish glow emminating from his aura,
the N.o. now surrounding him like flame.

avalisk continues his battle with the look-a-like cantis,
fighting off everything he could possibly handle..
He dodges there fist's and kick's with blinding speeds,
Taking no chance on fighting them all together.

he quickly jumps and leaps back for some distiance,
but to no avail..

They simply mimic his moves, and leap as well..
now six more join..

and all 33 close in on him.

his eyes shifting from left, to right..
not knowing which one will attack first..

12 now surrounding him. the outer 21 standing back
..all shining the medical mechanica symbols..


Avalisk makes his dicision to battle again,
he then flies at the robots with incredible speeds..
crushing the side of one's head, with tramendice force..

while fighting off 3 more comming at him,
the canti heads explode, and he is forced to fight, 7 more..

3 more slaminto the surface.. spitting sparks and spilling fluids..
the 4th capsizes then falls,
his attempts at bashing the other 3 are harder then it looks..

one grabs his arm,
while another comes from behind and grabs him,
while the third comes in and grabs his legs..


Avalisk struggles as more robots, grab onto him.
gripping so he cannot move..
using his powers, He finnaly breaks free.
and begins to attack again, forcing the bots back..
Avalisk - i have to bide, more time.. -

He flares up again, the same way as before..
and continues his methods, keeping everything he had learned..
to himself...

noticing now, what to do next..
Avalisk - i have to take this hit.. -
one bot comes up from behind.
Avalisk - if I'm wrong, then it's over.. -

and the bot sock's avalisk, downward from behind..
Avalisk is forced back for a fair distiance..

splitting nearby trees,
he land's just on the otherside of forest.

Skimming along the ground, he continues falling backward..
he grunts as he tried to regan his balance..
but flip's and continues, sliding back..
Avalisk : "Damn, metallic freaks..
don't you ever give up.?"

his eyes now in a savage look, as if nothing else mattered..

..they, had to go..

Avalisk releases all of his rage in one attempt,
to destroy the robotic horde`...

Using his abilities, he open's his hand infront of him.
facing the palm out flattining his hand and saying
Avalisk : "i hope, this works.."

he then channels his N.O. and opens a vortex in his hand,
It's force sucks some of the bot's into the pull of the vortex..

Avalisk - i have to keep this open, for as long as i can..
..holy shit, everything really is being sucked in.!? -

The robotic horde` try to grab onto anything they can..

but to no avail the pull of the vortex, is too strong..

most of the horde`are sucked inside,
by the powerful force of the pull.
he then closes it in his hand.
other cars and objects around him are pulled in..
as he closes his hand the vortex dissipates..
he look at his hand in awe..
as he begins to have a revelation of sorts for a breif moment..

Avalisk look's back up while repositioning himself,
to balance out as he looks on..

he sees only 3 of the look-a-likes left..
Avalisk : - there all, practically on top of me..
Shit, this is not good.. -

Avalisk hurl's himself at the robots with incredible speeds,
crushing the side of one's head with tramendace force..
{TWANGG }

And avalisk quickely begins fighting off the other two..
he quickely deflects an arm from one..
and destroyes the other, by bashing it in the back of the head..
while blocking third's second attack.

It's head explodes, as he blocks the attack of the 3rd..
the sound of the hit, could be herd loudly.

Avalisk swings.. knocking the bot back..
he then realizes the machine's symbol, on the screenface..
the colorful blue gears in the icon, were actually moving..
he then knew.. that was there mark..

and swings his guitar, fighting the bot yet again..

it dodges avalisk's swing's with some ease..
but is slightly off balanced, by walking..
while avalisk was swinging..

he then says..
Avalisk : "Come on, dammit.. - grunts - ..stay, still..?!"

Avalisk continues to swing, missing it as he does so..

the bot dodging his every move, while jumping back..
avalisk slides to a hault..
standing directly acrossed the black canti like bot,
It's screen continues to show the m.m. symbol.

Avalisk gits pissed off looking at it..
Avalisk : "can't you show somthing else,
other then that stupied symbol.?!"

Then rushes the bot with tremendous speeds,
he spin's to the side avoiding the bots fist,
And swing at the bot..
crushing the head exploding the back end..
electrical sparks fly out, as avalisk now in slow-mode..
leaps back upright.
watching it, capsize and fall.

Avalisk then smiles, saying while breathing heavily..
Avalisk : " heh.. heh..
Thought, you could, get one, over on me, heh,
heh.. HA.!"-laughter -

yelling at the malfunctioning bot,
as it's head no longer attached fall's and fizzle's with electircal sparks..

he then spits on the screen, and continues to breathe..

Avalisk has deffinetly passed the test..
destroying nearly 500 or so, droids..
..The crisis.. has been, resolved..
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FLCL 2nd comming..

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( Milky way galaxy : Earth, Maybase tokyo )
OST - hellsing - Vadican cathedral

Angered and brisied, avalisk lands on the ground..
griping his guitar..
looking around as he begins to regain himself a bit,
at the destruction caused by the bots and by his battleing them.

his expression changes from angrey, to even more agressed..
saying to himself..
Avalisk : "why does this happon ?
I don't understand it, isn't the good guy..
supposed to have a victory party or somthing.?"

he look's around to find noone is there..
and stands there for a bit looking puzzled..

Now feeling embarrased by the entire thing,
he just shuts his mouth and walks away..

Some of the parts from the bots, still flzzle and spark..
leaving trails of fluids, and oils..

He begins to walk away..
As the screen showing, from the spaceship..
monitor's the situation.
they, both looking on with a smile..
Kit : " the boy, did good.. "

amarao nodding in silence, return's kitsurubami's comment..
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Walking off we find avalisk again,
heading tword the old facility at the edge of town..
thoughts evade him, as his guitar weighed heavy on his arm..

he holding the strap out, as he walked..
to hold some of the weight..
Avalisk look's at it's rusting posture.
the giant iron is tilted, just slightly to the left..

He begins to space out for a breif moment, looking at it.
Gazing upon it, feeling like somthing was calling him there..
he then decided to take a closer look..

He begins to wonder inside of the abandoned halls,
from the entrance haruko had made sometime ago..

the opening being the only entrance, to it's massive structure..
avalisk continues to wonder around..
gazing from left to right, looking around at the old pictures..
of the town and city, before it expanded..

he then finds the exit staircase..
and decides to climb them..
a short whille later, he reaches the top..

Avalisk - i'm here.. -

and walk's through the door to the rooftop..
.and questions why, this feeling he's getting is like dejavu..

his thought's again begin to wonder off, and trail..

Avalisk - what is this.? -
there was a trailing flash of light, and he then falls..
Avalisk - it's absorbing me.. -

There avalisk lay, on the top floor of the old facility..
..uncontious..
gazing at the light, just before passing out..

The light getting brighter as he fades,
Uncontiously into a coma of sorts..

he lay there helpless to the light's power,
It overwhelms him..
Atomsk - remember who you are.. -

speaking into his mind...
He tries to reject, but the overwhelming feeling..
of somthing that had been missing, all this time..
..overcomes him.

Avalisk - I.. will not resist.. -
like finnaly, finding his home..
Avalisk finally excepts the light,
absorbing it's energies..
and seeing vision's, he had never seen before..

Images of desoliea..
homeworld to the timelords,
medical mechanica, and the galactic wars..
his mind now fully awake once more,
to the effects of the N.o.
It's energies envolpe him,
and he soon regain's contiousness..
Avalisk - I remember..-

he sit's up in shock,
all of the memories rushing back into his head..

Avalisk : " I remember.. It's, impossible.?
..how.. or, why..?"

He look's up to the skies, looking..
trying to remember, how..

he thinks to himself..
Avalisk : " if i was atomsk, from another time..
then things are screwed up..
Nao -sensai.. must know about this,
first thing when he gets back.. "

Avalisk tries to power up like he did once before..
but his powers we're incredible,
the feeling of the n.o. flowing through him..
but, They we're no where near the equivilent..
as it was before..
Avalisk : "damn.."
He grunt's in a tone of confusion.
Avalisk: " my mind is opened ,
but i can no longer access the channel.."
avalisk- there must be some kind of terraformation, trigger.. -
confused and frustrated from the shock,
of the memories returning to him...
Avalisk tries to think about naota and haruko..
and, where they we're headed.
He calmly gets to his feet, and brushes him self off..
he smiles looking down, the lock of hair covering one eye..

the tempting look on his face..
he then tests his abilities out rushing down the stairs,
trying to leave the building.
he notices he is pacing much faster then normal,
feeling the effects of the n.o.
Avalisk : "I'll need to keep this, under wraps.. "
- I'll have to start over, and reaccess the channel..
or learn some form of formation, on my own..

..naota is no longer, able to help me..
..I have to do this one, alone.. "

As he races he leaves tracks in the dirt,
making the dust flying as he speeds away..

the wind slowly catching the remains of his dust tracks..
he suddenly stops..
and begins to see things, not yet forseen.
- avalisk invisions naota,
being constrained by mother of medical mechanica..
the whips striking his backside..
as he takes each hit, in turn with the other.. -

Avalisk then comes to his knees,
and screams.. " NO ! ..
I wont let it happon, again..!!"

- Fate..as it seems, has honored our agreement..-
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- Next ACT -

Haruko : The commander's bump on his forhead,
proves to be more then just an ordinary zit..
It's crown like structure, now has tripled in size..

While I take tak -kun on a little detour, to the gambling planet..
of Xerious 4..
Will He prove to be much more, then a card shark..?
On the next, fooly cooly, 2nd comming..
Session : B
ACT : 21
- Gambler's paradise -

Haruko : "You have to read it, to believe it.."

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*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Sat Nov 01, 2008 8:39 am

well people just a quick poll to decide who is this year's
favoriate new character.
please participate and i'll be checking results.
hope this peek's your intrest.

*ATOMSK*
P.S. : no post this week for acts.
will be back on wensdays once more
hope you had a wonderful holloween,
and have a great thanksgiving.

woot woot. lol n.n
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Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Sun Nov 09, 2008 7:26 am

Sorry gang no act this week,
lost alot of progress and i'll be back on schedule come thanksgiving.
sorry for any inconvience.
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Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Sun Nov 23, 2008 8:42 pm

Heres a treat for all you bleach fans out there,
who have found the 3rd ost.
If you don't have the mp3s. try : http:/www.bleachexile.com
there's a thread inside the forums, but you'll need to register.
don't worry, it's completly free.

Inside the forums main section..
-Hint -
try the thread that is titled : new releases Or Urahara's tea shop.
My main man Xemnus assures you :
both P2p and .Rar versions are completly operational.

but without further to do,
for those who already have and own it..
Currently, on FLCL 2nd comming...
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OST : FLCL Original -The pillows : One Life

Naota - Today is a new day..
the recient events of my life, have been an obsceene rollercoaster..
with one complicated twist and turn, right after the other..
sometimes half-piking upside down for a time.

The threat of medical mechanica for the earth, has come and gone..
We've thwarted mother's plan for annilation..
still.. I can't shake the errie feeling off of my back..
Of what may just lay around the corner, for us..

With only a day passing,
the reporter's glimpses of the battle, captured all of our faces..

Again..
we we're marked for helping the citizens,
rather then pitting them in harm's way..
I guess people have finally realized, we're not the enemy..

Tasuku explained to me..
the timeline has finally been restored,
after the screwup haruko made..
douring our encounter with the phaser bot,
the chain reaction caused the event of toki and jaiden..

Somehow though, I don't see tasuku's theroy, being sound..

Someone had to of brought, jaiden here..
and if they did, who's to say they won't try it again..?

Everyone's mind has become jumbled, by the events untold by the mural..
travis continues relentlessly,
to decypher and decode the mural's ancient language..
but for a person who's home planet, existed eons ago..
the encoding proved to be a bit more complicated,
then he had originally thought.

The only thing I can think of about travis 's position,
is the fact when atomsk sent him into the void..
some of his memory had been erased, or buried..

And with that, some thing he's been despratly trying to remember..
I decided to gather everyone, before heading off to our next destination..

I even invited gaku, sota, and taru..
simply because they knew too much..
and I had no choice, but to keep them close..

shin on the other hand,
rarly knew about the mechas and there effect on earth..
He is safe enough by not realizing what exactly, we are dealing with..

And so I have everyone I ever knew in my life gathered in one small room..
the only exceptions were my father, and miyu miyu..

I want to tell everyone here my thoughts thus far..
and my plans for heading to Sillios..

I just hope that this decission I bring to the table,
doesn't effect my relations with anyone..

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Avalisk : " and now, the conclusion.. "
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fifth opening
( Scryed - Magma Remix. )
- thank you for the donation. -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE. **
to Kobu tite.. And
**Shrio Sagisu.**
Introducing..
the new music composer for bleach : **Shoji Meguro.**

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Kazuya Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -
FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 4 * Galactic Revelations. - 1 -

ACT 64 : Day's long past, act one..
- The crew's preperation. -

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( Above the Earth : S.S.stumi..)

OST : *Bleach #3 - Soundscape To Ardor.

The sceene is set on the s.s. stumi,
orbiting high above the earth..
We begin taking a look into the confrence room..
where the crew and a few others have seated themselves,
awaiting naota to emmerge from the back room..

Naota peek's out a little then sighs..
he closes the door a bit then thinks to himself..

Naota : - ..If I leave alone, everyone will come after me..
this will probably leave earth, undefended..
No.. I've destroyed the facillity in japan,
there are only three others..
the one in america, the one in europe, and the one in australlia..

I could leave avalisk, tasuku, and mamimi, here..
to deal with the other facillities..
but then I'd be taking a big risk, with those terminal cores..
even with the becon out of comission..
..mother's lost the signal, so the earth's safe.. for now.

Still.. there's alot at stake here..
and with the earth now realizing, the mechanical menace..
It would attract even more potentials,
but the consequence..
would be a massive chain reaction, with the timeline..
this, is exactly what atomsk..
was trying to warn me about..

I have no choice but to bring everyone with me, least then..
there will be no threat, to the earth..
and mother won't find it, again..
- Sigh -
It's the only real, choice..
if I leave people behind, it'll just make things alot harder..
guess I'll have to rethink things.. and ask for there help.. -

Naota look's out before entering the room,
everyone calms down and becomes quiet..
as naota slowly approch the chair,
seated at the very end of the table..
he sit's down looking around the large table,
upon all of his friends..

Naota : " guys.. I'm kind of in a bind..
mother know's of what's happoned,
I'm sure of it as well as you.. but furthermore.."
Naota grows silent as they all look to him puzzled..
Naota : "I don't want everyone, involved..
I'm going to leave this choice, up to you.."

Naota sighs heavily..

Naota : " I'm giving you a big decission,
you ither take the risk with me, and help me find the sitar..?
or.. stay here..
and cause a chain reaction that would possibly effect, millions.."

Naota's words, pierce the silence..
the crew looking onto him, as naota speaks his thoughts..
naota's ideal, give chills up the spines of everyone seated..
The crew grow strangly silent,
all staring in awe toward there friend.
Tasuku looks to naota, with a fearfull, but courageous glare..
Tasuku : " Naota - kun.. you have to believe,
that we will follow you.. till the end, of time..
back if we must..
you needn't feel like we're a burden, on you're shoulders.."

Amarao awmser's solomy with a lowered head,
trying to make sence of things whille their conversation continues.
Amarao : " this is the third time you've called us here,
and asked that same question..
you of all people should know our awnser, naota..
we go, where you go.. and that, is that.."

Haruko : " wow commander,
I didn't really think you saw our poisition that way.."

Amarao lift's his head with deturmination in his face,
then speaks as such in the same manor.
amarao : " this battle was exactly what I needed,
to find and harden my resolve..
and I think, I owe it to the kid,
after basicly trying to get in his way in the first place.. "

Amarao : - It was destiny,
naota should gain the powers of the pirate king..
..it was destiny, that naota faced this threat head on..
he lives.. ..and it's destiny, he should find the sitar.
and destroy this menace, once and for all.. -

he look's to all the members of the newly formed crew,
sitting around the galliant table giving him their undevided attention.
amarao : " now.. are you guys on the same page with me, or not.?"

Travis coughs before explaining to them, about their own training.
Travis : " now, you know..
even with the limited abillities we each share,
there is possible room for growth.."

Haruko spats off towards him, then calms down.
Haruko : " i know how to terraform.."

Travis waves a fingure towards her then speaks just as calmly.
Travis : " but that isn't enough..
nao -san knows, what i'm talking about.."

The crew sit silent now.. wondering what to do next..
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FL CL - 2nd comming...
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OST : *The Pillows - Carnival.

Naota sighs with heavy thought..
Naota : - he was right,
terraforming wasn't the only thing we could all do.. -

Naota : " -sigh..-
there are cirten aspects of the abillities we each have..
Haruko, you are earth..
travis is air, tasuku is light..
Eri, you are fire.. avalisk, is water.. and mamimi, is dark..

We each share an aspect of the universe.. and controll an element..
the trouble is becomming familier, with our familier aspect..
we need to learn how to harness these powers, and use them for good.."

Mamimi : " dark huh..?
no wonder why i have been having, these strange dreams.."
Haruko : " what'cha mean, mamimi san.?"

Mamimi : " i have been having nightmares of everyone diying..
each night it was one of us, diying off..
in an unseemingly, manor.. "

Naota : " the effects of the channel,
must be telling you of future events..
in ways, unexplainable.. "

Travis computes a file,
then pulls up info as to what mamimi was discribing..

Travis : " lyra's suggestion, is to inturpret you're dreams..
then figure out why they re-occurr,
and to try to sort them in a more proper deception..
of the negitivity..
here.. I'll download this into a compad, and give you a copy.
this is all the other information, about the dark aspect.."

Mamimi : " travis..
I wouldn't know what I would do, with out that.. thank you.."

Travis : " I shall complete each of you a compad,
by the end of this confrence..
now, on to other bisnuess..

The Emperess of sillios, has suggested..
we should hyper jump to the quardenents,
that are designated at this point.. "
-A 3D map, displays in a hologram around the large table. -

Travis : " The galaxy of sillios,
is known as a fraction of the satarus galaxy..
According to these charts from you're planet,
they call it the *Capricus galaxy."
Naota : " we went to caprica,
douring a trip to patrol the galaxy.."
Haruko : " there was nothing left of the place.."

Travis : " that maybe because caprica, is made up of several trade planets..
which one did you goto.."
Haruko : " well the old man i know on caprica 4, is goyoku..
he's an old bike shop owner, on the outside of the city of caprica.."

Travis : " ok.. caprica 4, has already been hit..
those people were alwyes stuborn.."

Avalisk : " so, what did you find whille on caprica nao -sensai..?"

Naota : " well to put it plainly,
we tried to gather info about what had happoned..
We stumbed upon an abandonded missle silo..
the rocket was used obviously, to defend the planet before M.M. struck..
but when we tried to activate the memory bank,
A giant mecha decided to interfeer."

amarao : " general trask had been monitoring there progress,
as a test to the brotherhood..
they wanted to see the kid, in action.. "

Naota : " once we defeated the mecha..
we reconfigured the silos main generator,
and got the hell out of there.."

Haruko : the station cars wern't working..
so i thought it was a good idea to test him.. "

Naota : " YOU TWO PLANED THAT, THE WHOLE TIME.?!"

Haruko : " don't get so up tight, of course we did..
we had to to make sure you knew what you were getting into,
amarao knew as well as i did..
but we had to make it, so you wouldn't have a clue.."

Naota : " you, deliberatly..
made it look like you, were in serious trouble.."

haruko : " of course.. how else would you have come to my rescue.."
-bats eyes-

Eri gives haruko a sarcastic look.
Eri : " or real mature, hara -san.."

Haruko : " anyways.. we got outta there,
and headed for the gambling planet of xerious 4..
I figured naota needed to see some of the dark side, to the universe.."

amarao: " was that before, or after you decided to rob the bank..
and steal half a million seroids.."
Haruko poses, in a spazzmatic position.
haruko : " before of course.. and to that i say..
I saw it, it was there, and it was mine.."

Naota : " that was right about the time i met you, travis."

Travis : " you made the right choice,
by going for the eye of atomsk, first..
we managed to recover one half of the key..

it was only when haruko triggered the phaser bot, within mamimi..
did the chain reaction begin to overwhelm us..."

Mamimi : " but.. now my mind is open, to the channel..
how does this restore, the timeline..?"

Travis : " because naota thwarted jaiden's plan to destroy the world,
and the universe..
before jaiden could come into contact, and absorb the core..
you simply were unefected, douring the restoration."

Mamimi : " so.. it wasn't fate, that brought me here.."

Travis : " oh I'm sure somewhere atomsk had a plan,
otherwise those gun's you now carry.
wouldn't have come into your posession.."

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OST : Bleach * Dodo Dance.

Eri : " makes sence of all, that's been going on,
but i didn't know you left earth, naota..
..what was it like.?"
Naota : " can't explain it, everything was happoning so fast.."

travis : " it's because, time proceeds in space..
alot faster, then being on a planet..
at least, six time faster..
So a day could be, just a few hours in space..
sometimes less, depends on.. where you are.."

Travis : " here.. I can explain it alot better,
if i pull this map of the earth's milky way galaxy up.."

Travis begins punching in commands, into the console in front of him.
he pull's up a starchart of the milkyway,
and then proceeds to light up circles around earth..
then spreads those circles, outward..

Travis : " the circles out - Lining the earth, are normal space time..
but as we spread further out.."

he presses a button to activate the scenario,
generating the starchart to collapse into the lone galaxy..

Travis : " we see that time run's much slower..
so time outside the galaxy, could be faster.
there is still,
alot we don't know about the quantem phisics of time,
space, and the continuem..

But, the estimates have been used for eons..
jumping from one place, to another calculates..
so when in hyperspace,
we phase through suns and gas planets,
or anything within our path.."

amarao : " and with this ship.
it'll take us roughly about eight hours, to travel to sillios..
and from there..
the calulations have to be inputted into the central, jumping hub..
before we can initiate the jump, it's self.. "

Gaku : " this is all relitive to you're version, of quantem phisics..
but, what of the idea of having a warp drive engine..
this would be something of our races imagination,
but you're able to run at X times the speed of light,
to the second power.."

amarao : "-humph- I don't know what you've been smoking kid,
but that's impossible..
you'd be crushed, before you could take one step.."

Travis : " a quantem empulse drive,
maybe able to help generate a sheild..
but as far as a source for cold fusion..
dilithiem would be unobtainable, since it's a fictional material.."

amarao : " don't worry the quantem phisics of the central hub,
work's just fine..
like i said, eight hours tops and we're there.. "

Naota : " Gaku.. sota.. Taru..
you guy's have seen alot, of what's been going on..
and my crew members have also told you,
some of what we're up aginst..

I want to keep you three close..
The reason is,
we can't leave anyone who know's about medical mechanica.."

Avalisk : "shin doesn't know about m.m, only about the gratze..
but these guys do, so it's only logical.. right, sensai..?"

Naota : " right..
for the time being, i want everyone to get ready to leave..
pack you're things, and lock you're door's guys..
anyone ask's what's going on ?
tell them you're going on a long, vacation.."
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FL CL - 2nd co M.M. ing...
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OST : Bleach * Head in the clouds.

Sota : " well..
..we really don't have a choice, now do we taru..?"
Taru : " it's obvious - grins -..he needs our help.."

Gaku adjusts his glasses and all three stand up..

Gaku : " we've been waiting for a long time,
to hear you say that, nao san.."
Taru : " we here, whenever you need us.."
sota : " I know that's right.."
the trio stands up and each begins to make there pledge..
Gaku : " as a master in medical adversities,
i think my skill's can come quite in handy.."

Taru : " my skills are in, demolitions.."
Haruko : " hmm.. gotta thing, for fire..?"
Taru : "naw.. just love, blowing stuff up.."

Haruko : - oh, i'm in love..!!! -

Sota : "Taru,
you've been blowing off cherry bombs since you were six..
anyways, ..my scientific skills can come in handy too,
since i've been studying to become a scientist in quantem phisics..."

amarao : " great, we'd need a doctor along the the way."

Naota - ho, boy.. -

Eri slides closer to naota, and speaks with a solom tune..

Eri : " I'm happy.. you decided to take, all of us with you..
Gaku, sota, and taru..
have been really worried about you, nao -kun.."

Naota : " -sigh- i know.. everyone is.. but..
I just hope we don't live, to regret this.."

Haruko : " what'cha two talkin about, hmm..?"
Naota : " haruko, do me a favor...
i want you to transport both the vissago,
and the vespa to the stumi.."
Haruko : " but.. what if they don't like it in that cargo bay..?
they wont listen, if there confined..?"

amarao : " ..put them in the jumper bay..
they should be fine there.."
Tasuku : " ahh -SNAP - i forgot, you guy's have ships.."

amarao : " what are you, blind ?
I was riding in one, just yesterday.."
Tasuku : " sorry.. I kind of got caught up,
what with saving the earth and all.. heh.."
cherry : - oh tasuku.. -

Kit : " well it's obvious the commander is suggesting this,
incase we're attacked along the way.."

Amarao : " medical mechanica is all over,
the four quadrants of the universe.. "
Naota : " yeah, but mother sit's in one spot..
..and if, we destroy her.."
Travis : " they'll all come tumbling down, like dominos.."
naota : " and these bio exparaments of mother's, will cease.. "

Avalisk : " well.. better tell my mom i'm leaving on a journey,
she'll probably understand if i can keep in contact.."

Mamimi : " I'll speak with her.."

Avalisk becomes slightly suprised at mamimi's suggestion.
Avalisk : - yeah sure, my mother and girlfriend..
becomming chummy, with eachother.. -
Avalisk : "heh... hun, no thanks.. but I think I'll chance it alone.."

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OST : *The Pillows - Weekend.

Mamimi : " ..I'm comming along, avi kun..
plus, i have to get my things and it's right around the corner.."
Avalisk : " oh great my mother and girlfriend..
goodie.. lots to talk about, there.."

Mamimi : " avi kun.. you're stuttering.."

Avalisk : "- gasp - I umm.. yeah, we should do that.."
Avalisk - to think..
if this goes as well as i think, there should be no problem.. -
Mamimi : " I knew you'd see it, my way.."

amarao watching at the specticle, sighs and shakes his head..
then turns to nicole, and speaks.
Amarao : " kit, make a list of supplies..
and make sure it's everything we need, this time.."
Kit : " I'm on it.."

Travis : " i'll continue readjusting the configurations,
on the central hub.. I could use you're help, douglas.. if you want.."
amarao : " yeah sure.."
everyone begins to leave the room..
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FL CL - 2nd comming...
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OST : *Bleach - Compassion..

Naota still sitting on his bed, look's forward..
trying to space what happoned out..
and place his thoughts, on the back burner.. for now..

Eri sitting by him grips a hand and holds it tightly..
she looking to him, with silent thought..

eri : " ..naota.." - continues folding clothes, whille talking. -

Naota : " yeah..?" - continues spacing thoughts, out of his mind . -

eri : " what's gonna happon,
when we find what you're looking for..?"

Naota : " -sigh - "hopefully?
an end, to this madness..
..this, burden of ages.." - tries to forget, but can not. -


Naota - with everyone making arrangements to leave earth,
all I could do was sit, as eri packed our things..
continuing to think if this was really, ..the right thing to do.. -

Eri :" let's see now.. there's this, and this..
oh, i can't for get this..
and this.. oh these shoes are adorable..
i think I'm going to take these, and this..
oh, i need hair clips too.. "
Naota -
at that moment..
looking at eri,
whille she packed away things we needed, brought some comfort..

I couldn't explain fully about my relationship, with her.
she made me smile sometimes, when things wern't funny..
yes, the sex was encredible.. but i didn't care..
It was simply being with her, that made me feel happy.
She alwyes listens to my problems, and never get's angrey.. -

Eri : " naota..
you thinking about something, again..?
or am i hearing things in my head, again.?"

naota : "- sigh - no,
I'm thinking about us, eri..
and.. how happy, you make me feel.."

Eri turns her head to naota, with a coky attitude.
Eri : " and that's all because, you want it.."

Naota : " not as much as you want it.."
Eri : "mmhmm, yeah.."

they begin to embrace and kiss..
we leave them through the second floor window..
as we see them continue to embrace,
..before falling onto the bed..

-- fooly cooly --
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FL CL 2nd comming.. till, the next epsiode..
And enjoy the new ost.
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*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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ACT 64 : Days long past.. - ACT 2 -

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Fri Dec 05, 2008 1:29 am

here's my weekly post for my story, all..
still working on later acts, so enjoy.
I'll Be back in january.


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OST :*Bleach OST#3 - Nailing the sword.

Naota : " Previously, on FLCL 2nd comming.."

Naota gather's everyone together..
In hopes that his idea of leaving earth, and heading to sillios..
wouldn't burden, everyone's mind..

Naota and haruko discuss there events, leading to the assault..
lead by the first encounter, with the dreded signa..

Dravendell
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Haruko : " anyways, we got outta there..
and headed for the gambling planet,
of zerious 4..
I figured.. naota needed to see some of the dark side, to the universe.."

amarao: " was that before, or after..
you decided to rob the bank, and steal half a million seroids.?"

haruko : " before, of course..
and to that, I say.. i saw it, it was there, and it was mine.."

Naota : " that was right about the time i met you, travis."

Travis : " you made the right choice,
by going for the eye of atomsk.. first.
by defeating korban kalax,
you've managed to recover one half of the key..
It was only when haruko triggered,
the phaser bot within mamimi..
did the chain reaction, begin to overwhelm us..."

With that, Travis continues to explain minor details to the crew..
but the ultimate decission was when naota, told everyone..

Naota : "For the time being, i want everyone to get ready to leave..

pack you're things, and lock you're door's guys..
anyone ask's what's going on ?
tell them you're going on a long, vacation.."
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Avalisk : " And now, the conclusion.. "
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fifth, opening.
( Scryed - Magma Remix.)
- thank you for the donation. -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite..
**Shrio Sagisu** And
**Shoji Meguro **

Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -
FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 4 * Galactic Revelations. - 1 -

ACT 65 : Day's long past, act two..
- someone's past.. slightly, revieled.. -

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OST : The Pillows - sad, sad.. kiddie.

Sota : " you really think naota, is the savior of the universe..?

Taru : " i dunno.. but if he wants us to go with him..
i mean.. he's been our friend for a long time now..
sota, do you really think he is leading us on to something.?"

Sota : " beat's me..
but i'm sure he was dealing with those giant mechas, that kept comming to earth..
so far, it's that avalisk kid.. that took over for him, whille he was away."

Sota : " i don't trust it, taru.. is all I'm saying.."

Taru : " this is naota, we're talking about..?!"
Taru : - but.. i got this errie feeling, he's right about this..
what if this channel open's and he's not here,
to stop it from sliding off it's own axis.. -

Taru : " -sigh - I want to trust him..
and if it mean's traveling with him to avoid damaging,
the timeline here any further.. then, I have to go.. "

Sota : " ...you're right..
in all things logical about this turn of our lives, we must..
naota wouldn't of asked us otherwise, but.. "

taru : " but what, sota..?
he's our friend.. least he's alwyes been mine.."

Sota : " he's alwyes been, so quiet you know..?
he keeps to himself, doesn't say much, then all of the sudden..
he drop's this ball on us like it's nothing to him,
just another thing.. or burden.."

Taru : " I'm sure he doesn't concider us a burden, sota..
otherwise, why would he ask us to go with him.?"

sota : " oh boy.. " - here we go again.. -

Taru : " sota.. everyone has there place in this life..
doesn't matter where you go.. who you're with..
change, is what you want.. what if.. i want things to change too..?
What if this.. isnt the only thing, i want so see..? "

sota : " you we're alwyes fasinated, with going into space.."

Taru : " then, if not for naota.. do it, for me.?"
sota : " taru.."
Taru : " we're basically family..
and i don't want you to think you're a burden, at all..
even if naota did drop this bomb on us, what else can we do.?
stay here,
defend the earth whille he searches for this.. deliverance, of peace.?"


Taru : " I don't wanna sit back on this little planet,
now that i know there is other life out there..
I want to explore, and see sights i've never seen before..
I want to examine alien planets, live stock, and predetors..
see how they live, and record them.."

Sota : " yeah taru.. you're as hell bent on this, as collage.."

Taru : " screw collage.. I'm getting some real feild training.." - grins -

Sota - taru's going.. then I can't let him down, damn it..
who else can i relay on.? -
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FL CL - 2nd co M.M. ing...
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OST : FL CL the pillows - The moon, is MINE. !

Haruko begins to stuff things into a backpack, whille talking to naota.
the middays sun hits the window to the kitchen, as the two converse.
Haruko : " I picked some things up from the mall, tak -kun..
hope you didn't mind, I kind of charged them..?"

Naota : " ..how much..?"

Haruko : " only about, 600 dollars.."

Naota : "Wait.. What ? 600 dollars..?
Tisk.. fine.. tasuku, can you take care of that.. right?"

Tasuku : " yeah, cherry has a personal account..
she she'll be able to pay that off, no problem.."

- sings -
Cherry : " but you'll owe me one, nao -san.."

Eri : " wow, these bags are kind of big.."

Naota : " well.. we are leaving the planet, besides..
who know's how long exactly we'll be gone. "

Canti : " master.. you're father, wishes to speak with you.."

Naota : " thank you, canti.."
Eri and the others remain silent, and continue to pack away..
As naota begins to leave the room and heads up the stairs.
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Naota heads up the stairwell and into the room..
- knock, knock, knock.. -
Naota : " dad..? "

Kamon : " naota kun.."
Naota : " dad.. if it's.."
Kamon : " naota.. I want you to know, I love you.."

Naota : " dad.. I'm not trying to leave, for good.."
Kamon : " you have a destiny to fullfill, naota..
I've raised you, to the best of my abillity..
I've done my part the best i could, and now.. you're leaving.."

Naota : " father.. I know, i'm not what you wanted me to be.."


Kamon : " I couldn't be more proud, to have a son like you..
you, follow you're heart..
and not other peoples perceptions, of you..
It's.. one of you're best, quallities..
I've been trying to hide something from you,
..for a long time now..
and I feel, well..
you should know, now that you're old enough.."

Naota : " father.. what.?"

Kamon : " it's about you're mother, cleria.."

Naota : " mom..? oh.." - lower's head -
" You're gonna, finally tell me.. how she died. right..?"

Kamon : " no, son.. I wanna tell you, ..how she lived.."

Kamon continues to speak, wrapping his arm around his son..
even though we don't hear anything, the conversation continues..

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- FL CL - 2nd co M.M. ing.. -
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OST : *Bleach #3 - Magot's dance.
mamimi and avalisk share a small conversation of their own,
whille packing to leave.
Mamimi : " avi -kun.. let's do it, before we leave..?"

Avalisk : " well.. you're lucky my mother even let me come along,
she thinks this is some sort of feild trip..
or like i'm going to camp, or something.."
- shakes his head -

Mamimi : "she's just thankfull,
you have a responsible adult around at all times.."

Avalisk : " she wanted me gone, that was the problem..
she thinks i'm not getting enough out of life.."

Avalisk - if only she knew..
I was in a relationship, with this women..-

Mamimi : " so.. you wanna.?"
- avalisk turns to find mamimi standing in the archway of the bedroom,
in a teddy and nylon stalkings. -

Avalisk : -grins from ear to ear -
" why are you so playfull toight..?"

Mamimi : -giggles -
"that's just like asking you, why you'd be playfull..
Or asking why the sky is so blue..
you know the reason.. "
- grip's the collar of his shirt, gently -
Mamimi : " now... let's go.."

- a moment later -
Mamimi : " you know.. you really gotta keep up, avi -kun.."

Avalisk : " you better run.."

Mamimi : " oOoo, ..hee, hee.. "
-- fooly cooly --
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FL CL - 2nd co M.M. ing...
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(Meanwhille : Aboard the stumi.. )
OST : *Death Note - L's Theme.

Travis : " busted ..damn, thing..!! -grunts- "
- throw's wrench - - clang.. clang, clang, clang.. -

Kit : " you.. really need to take a break, travis -san.."

Travis : " tell that to the damned voice, in my head..
that keeps repeating, build it.. and it'll come..! "

Travis becomes overly frustrated.. and sits down to calm himself..
Kit : " I'm sure, noone's expecting you to have this finished overnight.."

Travis : " no, noone said.. this would be easy, ither.. "

kit out of frustration,
closes her eyes and sighs before speaking again.
Kit : " you really need, time off.."

travis turn's his head toward her, and sighs..
Travis : " if only there was, some way..
I maybe a timelord, but a master of time it's self.. I am not.."

kit cups her chin before, speaking out of thought.
Kit : " you underestimate you're self.."


Travis : - sigh, she's right. -
Travis : " I alwyes have questioned my own theroies,
on the perception of this mess..
but noone ever told me
what to expect, or how to confront it.. "

Kit : - travis must be really scarred, being left.. alone.. -

Travis : " you must be thinking, that i'm scarred to be here ..now.."
nicole perks up, as travis speaks about her thought.
Kit : " yes.."
Travis : - sigh - " well.. you're right.. I am scarred.."

A moment of silence passes before nicole speaks..
Nicole : " why..? you did really well, back there..
you put up a marvilous, fight.."

Travis cut's nicole's thought off, as he speaks.
Travis : " no.. i was lucky naota saved me..
if it wasn't for him I would of been, ..pancake batter.."

Kit - he's looks completly bombed about this..
it literally crushed him.. -

Travis : " you know.. no matter how many times,
I've tried to get out there and fight with them..
they alwyes told me, that it wasn't my fight.. "

Kit - he is, totally bombed.. about this..-
-gasp -

Travis :" maybe I am better off, being in here.. and building this thing..
heh.. even i dunno what it is, really.."

travis continues to go through scematics of the machine,
and continues to work on small pieces on the console desk.

kit simply stares toword's him in silence..
then suddenly, she walks up and slap's him..
he simply looks to her, with no expression..

- tears -
Kit : " how dare you, abadon you're people..!!
you're friends.. !!"

travis : " ..you have no clue.. about what i'm saying. do, you.."

- cries -
Kit : " I don't know why.. you think, you're nothing..
I ..care about you.."

Travis : " please, nicole.. I'm sorry.."

- whines -
Kit : "..no you're not.. if you wern't..
you wouldn't be thinking of youreself, as nothing..
you need to think about youreself, for once..
instead, of everyone else.."
she leaves travis..
as the brunette continues to sink deeper,
into his depressive thoughts.

Travis - ..what the fuck, is wrong with her..? -
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- FL CL 2nd comming.. -
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OST : FLCL - the pillows : High Risk.
haruko abruptly walks inside of the garage,
as naota continues to tune his guitar in silence..
- slam -
Haruko : "ok tak -kun, we need to talk.. "
Naota : " what about ? "
naota continues tuning his guitar,
paying no mind to haruko.

Haruko : " well, let's see..
one, about you're attitude these past few days..
Two, about the way we're traveling..
and three.. why are we bringing everyone along, again..?"

Naota : " - sigh - number one, my attitude is fine..
my method of traveling, will save us alot on fuel for the bikes..

Two we've basically got our own battlestation for defense.
Incase we do run into more of mother's drones..
And three,
bringing everyone along was the logical choice..
We won't fuck with the timeline,
and we'll have back up when we need it.."
- continues tuning -

Haruko : " not about eri, and the other's tak-kun..
i'm talking about sota, and taru..
why bring them along, they don't have nothing ta' do with this.?"

Naota : " taru, sota and gaku have everything to do with this..
they stumbled upon us douring our training, in the forests..
where I thought you said, noone would find us.."

Haruko : " so they found us,
it's not gonna trigger the channel.."

Naota : " still.. i can't allow the risk, once the damage has been done..
there's no, undoing it..
you.. of all people, should realize that.. haruko.."

Haruko : " okey, okey.. you're right about that..
but.. how are we gonna protect everyone.?"

Naota : " amarao has the ship, he can go whereever, at any givin time..

eri, avalisk, mamimi, and the rest..
will just have to stick, with him..
you, I, and travis.. are the only one's,
who can breathe in space.. noone else can do it.."

Haruko : " well.. you're kind of wrong about that one, tak -kun..
there are more pills, we just gotta find the right people.."

Naota : " and how do you propose that one, huh?
it's not like we can find any desoliean's running around."

Haruko : " we did manage to find travis..
who's to say noone else is flying around some galaxy..
the universe is pritty big, tak -kun.."

Naota - Sigh - ..here we go,
with another of haruko's big plans.. - rolls eyes -
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OST : *Bleach - Cop's N' Robbers.

Haruko : " well.. what i think you should do,
is plot a course for Scapios.."

Naota : " and where is that located, hot shot..?"
Haruko : -moopy look -
well.. I'm sure it's around here somewhere..
we'd just, haf'ta find it.."

naota - oh.. great, send me on another wild goose chase.. -
Naota : " no, i don't think that's wise.. haruko -san.."

Haruko : " well.. if we travel to dargon,
the brotherhood will keep us there as long as possible.."

Naota : " ..what do you expect me to do, huh?
leave everyone here, and come alone with you..?
even travis said, it was unwise to split apart. "

Haruko : " yeah..?
and you know, ..not everything he said, was true.."
naota : - how the hell did she know,
about his repressed memeories..? -

Haruko : " you know, you really are nieve about some things..
but that's what I alwyes liked, about you.."

Naota : " haruko, please..
don't try to kiss my ass, right now.."

Haruko : " so says you,
mr. I am tough.. and I don't need, to show my feelings.."

Naota speaks with sarcasem, toward haruko.
Naota : " oh.. stop it, you're killing me.. ha, ha, ha.. "

Haruko begins on a diffrent subject, concerning eri.
haruko : " eri's really worried about, you.."

Naota sighs, and continues to tune his guitar..
Naota : " i don't know what i can do,
to make her feel relieved.."

Haruko : " maybe.. it's not what you can do, for her..
but.. maybe, ..what she can do, for you..?"

haruko paces to the window..
she then stops and looks out for a long time..
Haruko : - naota, just love her.. that's all, she wants.. -

Naota : - At first.. I thought, I herd haruko say something..
but, maybe it was me..
I sitting at the bed, and thinking to myself..
maybe haruko was right about, eri..
but i was so depressed by the recient events of literally destroying,
the only possible person capable of showing me a true path..

How was I able to open up to eri so easily, in the first place..?
Then things began to grow cold..
Haruko gazing out of the window ,gave me chills..
as if she knew what to do, but wasnt telling me..
or even hinting at the fact, of truth she has choosen to obide by.

I grew ever impacient, at the awnser's swimming in my head..
I couldnt take, the thoughts any longer.. -

Naota : " haruko.."

Haruko : " hmm.?"
Naota : " honestly.. what would you have done, diffrently then I.? "
Haruko : "-sigh- give it up, tak-kun.. the thought, is a lost cause.."

Naota
- and yet.. she still remains baffled to the same awnser..
that I sought. -

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F L C L - *2nd* comming.
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Meanwhille..
OST : The pillows - Stalker in babylon.

Tasuku : " cherry what's going on with haruko, and nao -san.? "
cherry : " umm, dunno..
maybe there sneaking off to make some tactical adjustments.
if you catch my drift.."
Tasuku : " don't think that way..
it's bad enough hara -san's got feelings for naota still..
not to mention naota's with eri, and she doesn't have a clue.."

cherry : " all the same..
I still think traveling together, isn't such a bad idea..
it'll help us track down the remaining signa, within the milky way..."

Tasuku : " but still, naota isn't acting like himself...
It's like he's thinking without fully comprehending,
the serious reprocussions of the timeline. "

Cherry : " quit babbling..
if things change, they simply change, it's not threatining anything long term..

besides..
I'm sure by now with everything that has happoned so far,
naota's got a good idea about why atomsk choose him to begin with."

Cherry : " Tasuku, you know as well as I...
you alone, couldn't handle atomsk untamed powers..
The only one capable is naota,
he's the only one who remained calm about it.
naota maybe going through some things, we still don't know about..
I'm almost scarred to think of it..
but maybe he's going mad, the same way atomsk did eons ago.?"

Tasuku : " -sigh- we've been over this a thousand times, cherry..
and still I don't get the understatement of, 'proidealogical.' "

cherry : " you have to understand it, from his point of view..
Naota has the mind, but lack's the strength of will..
He hasn't found his resolve to even face mother yet..?!"

Tasuku : " I.. guess you're right.. it's times like these though..
i really envy him..
he pushes himself more then i ever could..
his deturmination, show's remorse toward his inner self..
whatever the case maybe, Im afraid he's tearing himself apart..
He's deffinetly hell bent on sacrificing himself, just to end this.."

- This last battle though had me really worried..
how we would of gathered and combined our efforts..?
-sigh - guess somethings are better left unawnsered.. -

cherry - I wouldn't worry about any future events..
not with that unexplainable move, naota has.. -
Tasuku - I still don't fully understand..
how it's even possible, to erase a person from existiance..? -

As tasuku thinks long and hard, about the single action naota makes..
The only thought is of his brother simply waving his hand..
as if the reaction.. was completly natural..
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FL CL - 2nd comming..
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Elsewhere..
OST : *Bleach - start to investigate.
Amarao and dravendell now converse,
about the previous events leading to the core.

Amarao : " you'd really lead me to believe that,
there are more signa comming towards our position.? "

Dravendell : " believe what you wish but its the truth,
the signa have already infiltrated caprica 4."

Amarao : " oh ? and i suppose you would also have me believe,
that the only ones to stop them are the ones onboard this ship."
Dravendell : " affirmative."

amarao : " it's just like you..
all you ever do is lie through you're own faulsehood,
to lead other organics to believe, what you are saying is the truth.
it's simple manipulation..
how ever mother plan's to turn her little orginization of replicas,
of basics is unruly..
and how you managed to survive the last encounter, is even more strange..
what's mother got going on out there, hmm?
A hybrid ship, capable of ressurecting you guys..?
or, is it more complex then that..?
do you're memories simply transfer like data, into a computer..?
Or do you actually feel the pain, once being ressurected..? "

Dravendell : " you expect me to awnser questions,
which are none of you're own damned concern..
I've spent countless life times inside that matrix..
you have no idea, how it feel's to crave.. wanting, to be let out."

Amarao : " humph you act like it's a damn box.. "
dravendell : " you thought it more, then just a box.?"

Amarao : " well, yes..
it houses an unlimited source of information, doesnt it.?"

Dravendell : " i'm no longer under mother's controll.
nor is my body capable of producing, any kind of defense mechanism.
I will exchange the information you are requesting, under one condition."

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OST : *Bleach - Recollection 3

Amarao : " and what is you're condition.?"
Dravendell : " I will only request to speak,
with one person.. and that, is the king."
Amarao : " you know..
haruko will never except these terms of you, speaking to him alone.?"

Dravendell : "that is for her to toss and turn in bed, about."

amarao : " I don't like it myself..
especially when you already tried to kill him.."
amarao turns and points a gun toward dravendell.
though bound to the floor,
dravendell's words speak deep truth onto the commander..

amarao : " as much as i'd like to do you in myself,
I cannot.. that decision.. is completly up to him.."
douglas places the gun back in his shoulder holster, and covers it back up.

amarao : " we've got time. guess that's all that really matters.."

amarao begins to walk away..
as the doors close, dravendell thinks secluded thoughts..
only to herself.

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FL CL - 2nd co M.M. ing...
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OST : Bleach #3 - Your's Truly
Date : november 21st 2008 -

Naota - Today is our final day of preperation..
Everyone has finally gathered..
at the designated spot in which, commander amarao had provided us..
Travis, amarao, and kitsurubami meets us there..
their ship is cloaked under a feild,
making the illusion a complete forest.

I'm afraid though.. leaving home again for the first time..
this planet, I may never see.. again.
the sky, the trees, the smells, the sights..
everything i knew from my childhood, on up till this moment..
was all i knew..
the adventure with haruko around the milky way, was nothing compared..

To what awaited me, out there..

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OST : *FLCL - The pillows* Sleepy head.

Amarao : " what's taking them so long.. "-eyetwitch-

Kit : " they said they'd be here, any minute.."
they now standing outside the docked,
s.s. stumi outside of the city..
the masked ship, only barly visable..
the cloaking device working perfectly.
the only visible part.. the opening, in which they stand outside of.

amarao : " damnit we dont have time.. theres a schedule to keep.. "
Travis : " relax.. they'll be here.."

sure enough.. as travis mentions, the crew..
the crew soon begin to arrive, driving forward from the bakery..

tasuku leads the pack in his jeep, cherry aside of him..
and some of the others.. huddled inside..

Naota, Eri and Haruko follow,
as kamon drives with canti in the passenger's seat...
Mamimi drives her own vehicle, avalisk sitting aside of her..
gaku, driving his truck brings sota, and taru along..
and thus.. all 13 people gather..

Amarao : " bout, damn time.."
Kit : " commander.. please.."

amarao : " it's my ship, you all are boarding..
..and I'm going to set, a few ground rules.. "

Travis - sigh.. yeah, sure..
amarao.. you make this journey more complicated, by the minute.. -

Tasuku : " is this gonna happon all the time,
or am I looking forward to both of you're consistiant bickering.?
god.. even you're thoughts are annoying, douglas.."

amarao : " it's not my fault you have a wondering mind.
but i'll keep that to myself.. "
Travis : " Duely noted.."
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OST : Bleach #3 - Can't Back down.

Naota : " ok.. quit the chit, chat.. let's get ready, for departure.. "
Haruko : " nughh.."
Haruko pushes the vespa, but the vespa struggles to go inside..
the wheel's scretch, and push her back as haruko uses brute force..
and tries to overwhelm the bike..

Haruko : " Nao.. ta.. I, Told you.. This, wouldn't WORK !! "
As haruko speak's the last word, and crashes inside of the docking area..
she soon chains the bike up, to a near by beam..
she dusts her hands off.
as she look's down to the now chained vespa.
-clap clap clap-

Haruko : " there.. this should work for now.."
The bike continues to struggle and squirm out of the chains,
but to no avail.. it soon simmer's down, to a stand still..

Naota slowly pushes the bike upward, toward the ramp..
and begins to feel the brute force of his bike, as well..
it struggling in his hands, as the handle bars flex and wrap around his hands..

the bike flip's and tosses naota, into a near by tree....
the bike flip's again back upright, and sit's still half way up the ramp..
Naota emmerges from the bushes,
as he looks to haruko.. haughing her head off, at the sight..

Haruko : " you really gotta handle you're bike better, tak -kun..
ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! "

Naota begins to dart toward the bike, after lifting himself over the hedges..
and rushes to the bike, this time rolling his sleaves up as he rushes forth..
the bike begins to tremble as naota gain's ground..
as soon as he leap's the bike rushes inside..
and naota lands half way up the ramp..

Naota glares to the bike and screams..
Naota : " YOU BETTER GET IN THERE.. !! "
the bike dart's toward a pillar of the jumping bay,
and begins to quiver and cower as naota screams to it.


haruko smierking to naota as he lands, aside of her..
Haruko : " well.. guess you showed it, dominance.. "
Naota : " a machine like this isn't supposed to react, to antaginism.. "

Haruko : " you have to think of it more like a pet, then a machine..
you know.. feed it, clothe it, give it love..
I give a scrub to my baby, every week.."
Naota : " yes..
but you also trash it, smack it around, abuse it to it's fullest extent..
and you somehow manage to never, ever blow it up.. "
Haruko smierks then begins to walk away, as she speaks..
closing her eyes and speaking, with a sarcastic tone.

Haruko : " guess in a way, I'm lucky it hasn't.. ..yet.. "

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OST : *Bleach - Catch 22.

Amarao : " is everyone on board.?"

Nicole : " yes commander.."

Amarao : " ..good..
..prepare for impulse power on my mark,
after we've cleared the atmosphere.. "

Kit : Acknoweldged."

The ship slowly begins it's assent, into the outer atmosphere of the planet..
the huge ship skyrockets, and bursts with fury toward space.

everyone remains locked into their seats,
as they feel the pull of the ship..
soon the ship clears the clouds and then the sky..

only blackness surround the ship, as it passes the few satilites..
and heads off, passed the moon..
the ship soon clears the planet, and soon bursts off passed mars..


Amarao : It's been ten years since I left this place,
sort of feel's like I'm leaving home again.."

Tasuku : " from here on out, we can only trust eachother.."

Naota : " don't you feel an odd emotion, guys..?
as if something is pulling you, toward caprica.? "
Eri : " nao-san.?"

haruko : " naota is right, head for caprica first..
we never did find anything, about what happoned over there.."

amarao : " right.. we're deturing to caprica 4, nicole..
change baring, to mark '114.60403."


Nicole : " Compliance.."
the large mother ship begins it's slow movement,
toward's the edge of the solarsystem..

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FL CL - 2nd comming.
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OST : *Bleach - Invasion..

Mother looking back, from a fair distiance..
continues to monitor the movements of the crew, undetected..
The begins to ponder thoughts to herself,
as small replicant canti's work around her face and legs..

Mother - I can not allow this Incompitance to go on, any longer.. -
Mother then channel's her thoughts to awaken yet, another being.
Mother : " Arise.. Zeromus.."

Mother - Something, has to be done.. -

Soon a smaller being raise from a small rejuvination chamber,
hidden within the floor..
The shaft slowly opens, as the being awakens..

Zeromus : " ..what is thy will, mother..?"
Zeromus - The Desisive Combatant.


The short white hair comes to a stand still,
as his head raises out of the chamber..
the pale complexion, and black clothing..
resembled the symbols of medical mechanica..
clearly someone, mother held in high reguard.

zeromus raises his body to stand, he smiling to her..
as he begins to hear the words spoken from his creator.
the chamber begins to reassemble back,
into the section of flooring as mother speaks..


Mother : " Soon, they will find out about the capricans..
you will track down this, Naota.. Nandaba..
and deliver A ...preasent.... "

Mother - I cannot allow them to disrupt my plans, any further.. -

Zeromus looking onto the giant screen, gazes in silence.
whille the face of naota show clearly, back to him.

Mother : "..If you have any resistiance..
whille attempting to Infect him..
then, destroy all who stand in you're path..
you may activate my awaiting children,
once you've reached the planet."

zeromus turns to her,
and plunges a fist to his chest..
he slowly, bowing before her.

Zeromus : " ..As, you wish.. mother.."

Mother turn's back, to the still life picture of naota..
and gazes silently, whille thinking to herself.

Mother : " perhaphs.. this isn't so bad, after all..
- miniacle laugh -
..with these kids out of the way, I can continue my works..
rest assured, atomsk..
you may have escaped my grasp, once before..
But you're incarnation know's..
mheh, mm.. nothing of this universe.. "

As the screen flickers off..
More bodies are shown animating,
and slowly raising from inside large blue tubes..

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- To be continued -
Happy holidays. ( 2008. )
*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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ACT 66 : - The Crew's Journey, Begins.. ( Pt. 1 ) -

Postby N.O._creator_ATOMSK » Thu Dec 11, 2008 10:04 am

ok fans,
hope you find this week's act interesting,
as the crew begins to leave the earth.

Some of you have found the poll i've posted,
please vote today on you're favoriate sub character.

Now, without further to do.. Here's this weeks act.
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*Previously, on FLCL 2nd comming..*
OST : Bleach #3 Twist* Quincy's Craft - Remix
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Naota after a long exillerating battle, captures the traitor signa..
dravendell reharu.
the crew continues their journey off of their homeplanet of earth..
and begins heading toward their sister galaxy, of caprica.

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Dravendell : " believe what you wish, but it's the truth..
the signa have already infiltrated,
and abducted the citizens of caprica 4."

Amarao : " oh ? and i suppose you would also have me believe,
that the only ones to stop them are the ones onboard this ship."

Dravendell : " affirmative."
amarao : " It's just like you..
all you ever do is lie through youre own faulsehood..

To lead other organics to believe, what you are saying is the truth.
it's simple manipulation..
however, mother plans to turn her little orginization of replicas..
of basics is unruly.. "

Amarao : " how you managed to survive the last encounter,
is even more strange..
what's mother got going on out there, a hybrid ship?

Or, is it more complex then that..?
..Do you're memories simply transfer like data, into a computer..?
..Or do you actually feel the pain, once being ressurected..? "

Dravendell : " you expect me to awnser questions,
which are none of youre own damned concern..
I've spent countless life times inside that matrix..
you have no idea, how it feels to crave.. wanting, to be let out."

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Meanwhille the rest of the crew ponders,
and trails thoughts of their own..
as they paciently await the s.s.stumi..
the only known mother ship, occupying the milkyway..
To saftly guide them, to their destination.
But mother has plans, that are already in motion..
causing a chain of events that will now.. unfold..
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*And now.. the conclusion.. *
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fifth, opening.
( Scryed - Magma Remix.)
- thank you -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite.. And
**Shrio Sagisu**
Along with **Shoji megruo**
Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 4 : *Galactic Revelations. 1

ACT 66 :The Crew's journey, begins.
- Leaving Earth. -

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OST : *Bleach - Start to investigate.
( Somewhere in space. )


Mother - for years i've tried to locate every planet,
capable of inhabited life.
To annilate the humans..
because they, are a pleague on this universe..

They suck dry, every resource with out remorse..
effecting of the ecosystem, and rotting the planet's out..
they, have failed for eons..
to acheive a greater, source of power..
Oil.. I, crave oil..
Blood, water.. air.. earth..
minerals of every kind, Elements, and combustion..
I, crave it all.. the very essance of a living planet..

I must sustain myself a little longer..
soon..
my body, will be complete..
I'm just missing..
One, Key, Ingredient..

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F L C L - 2nd comming..
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( Leaving Earth. - Destination : Caprica. )

OST : Hack - liminallity - the story, where you are.


As the mother ship slowly progress, out of the solarsystem..
the small impulse engines,
show exaust as the bright light comes into view.
the ship slowly moves passed pluto,
and a small resonance begins to illuminate around the ship's haul..
then as amarao look's to the lutennant he speaks..
amarao : " engage.."

and as kitsurubami complies with the commander's order,
the ship begins to jump into hyperspace..

With a loud burst, the rear of the ship dissapears with a trail of light.

the screen show nothing, but illuminating colors of every kind..
as they begin speeding passed gas planets,
and galaxies far away.

amarao smiles as he once again,
begins to enjoy the sight of the colors passing by..
in blinding speeds..
the aray of colors, shine brightly through the monitors.


naota : " amasing.. I've never seen, anything.. like this.."
Eri : " It's.. beautiful.."

Amarao : " you know this is the one thing,
I alwyes found cool about hyperspace..
It look's like an acid trip,
only without the reprocussions from drug abuse.."

Haruko : " who said anything about trippin..?"

Tasuku : " - sigh - leave it to haruko.."

Haruko gets frustrated, by tasuku's sarcasem..
Haruko : " what's that supposed to mean.?!" >.<

Cherry comments with a happy expression.
cherry : " it's ok you know, we all saw you.."

Haruko : " what ?! you're crazy, I did nothing of the sort.."

Mamimi : " don't deniy it, hara san..
everyone saw you before we got on.. it's ok.."
- stick's tounge out, to reviel a small dot. -
avalisk turns and speaks to mamimi, with a worried look.
Avalisk : " mamimi..
I thought you wern't gonna do one of those.."
Mamimi waves a hand toward avalisk,
showing a smierk upon her face.
Mamimi : " I'm fine.. don't worry.."

Avalisk rolls his eyes, and speaks with sarcasem himself.
Avalisk : " you're body.." - shrugs shoulders.. -


Naota explains to the crew, of his concerns.
Naota : " keep a clear head, whille we're on caprica..
there's no telling what else, is creeping around in the dark down there...
Eri, you ok.?"
Eri begins to feel the peeking,
of the dot in her mouth and speaks about it.
Eri : " I'm, fine.. it's just.. wow..
I've never saw a sight like this, ever.."

Naota smiles and silently looks forward..
as the streams of light continue to burst through the screen, at the crew..
the crew continue their journey, toward the sister galaxy of caprica..


The ship travels acrossed the vastness of the colors..
travis tinkering with the console infront of him,
looks out of the bay porthole.. and into the vastness, of colors..
Travis : " finally, we're underway..
half way on schedule, to boot.."

Canti helping travis as best the mecha can speak in question.
Canti : " sir if i may..
you'll need to reboost partical barings, to the correct frequency.."

Travis : " right.. sorry, I was mearly distracted.."
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FL CL - 2nd Comming..
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- Caprica 4 : Satarus galaxy. -
OST : The pillows - one life.

Soon..
the ship arrive at it's destination..
and the crew finally makes it to caprica..

The ship slowly pulls into orbit, around the large blue planet..
as thew ship slowls to a near hault,
it begins to orbit around clockwise..
aginst the rotation of the planet.
Amarao turn's toward the crew and speaks calmly,
folding his arm's in and speaking with seriousness.

Amarao : " ok gang we're here.. the rest is up to you..
i can maintain orbit, as long as you need.
but, fuel issues will have to come up.. at a later time. "

Naota bows to amarao and speaks,
then turns toward the crew and begins to issue orders.
Naota : " thanks douglas..
ok gang..
let's head down there, and see what we can scrounge up."

The crew in a group begins to agree with naota,
all speaking at the same time.
Crew : " right.."
Then..
One by one, the crew in single file,
begins to leave the ship for the planet below...


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FL CL - 2nd comming...
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OST : Bleach #3 - Anguish - Remix 1:39

The crew for hours,
search seperatly the remains of each city caprica 4 held..

16 capitals, and 14 minor districts..
was all maped out, by the stumi's computer..
each member, held a compad for comunications..
but also, each had a tracking system..
for signature resonance from any mecha,
mother had hidden within the bush.

naota was deturmined to figure out, what exactly happoned here..
it bothered him, ever since he and haruko first left.

naota - whatever happoned here, wasn't an attack from mother..
or any signa, for that matter..

some other species, or life form..
had to of assaulted, these people..

but, the question is..
where did everyone flee too..?
the only person left around was the bike shop owner,
and he had no clue the citizens were even attacked..? -

Eri - I'm just as confussed, and no luck on my end ither.. lover.. -

Tasuku - cherry and I are heading to the next city..
we still havnt found a thing. -
Avalisk - sensai..
mamimi said she's investigating some old ruins, outside of tarus..
we're gonna check and see,
If it's the same as writtin on the caprica's main hall.
Naota - alright, but be carefull..
there's no telling what mother may have hiddin..
or, anyone else for that matter."

Avalisk : - Hai ! Sensai. -

Naota - Eri..
get a fix on my position for now.
I'm heading back to the capital,
and checking that silo again ..just in case.. -
Haruko - you.. really think that's wise, takkun..? -

Naota - right now..
we've basically, checked everything else..
plus, amarao basically assured me of the no threat limit.. -

Haruko : - yeah, youre right.. I forgot about that.. -

Eri - ok love, be carefull you're self.
I'm heading back to base.. -
Canti : " sir?
there seems to be relivance..
between the capital literature, and the literature ive found,
on the southern end of the continent.. "
Naota : " good.. keep at it, canti.
we're getting closer to understanding how they speak..
I'm heading to the underground central hub,
to download as much as i can."

Canti : " Compliance. "

Travis : " hmm..? "
- looks down to a fragment of rubble, the scriptures match the capitals..
and travis begins to use the compad as a scanner..
Travis : - ok.? but where did they go.?
- sigh- downloading the information, will take too long.
-grints - I need a central hub..-

Eri - naota had a tough time, decyphering the language..
but i see, where he was struggling..
hmm.. there is no light, beyond the great reif..?
whats that mean..?
-investigates further,
and begins to scan the glyphs and downloads a library.. -


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FL CL - 2nd comming..
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OST : *Bleach #2 - Remix - Terror's masqurade.
( Above caprica : Zobu zon assault vessal - )
Meanwhille..

Crutos : " Majesty..
the rebels are on caprica 4..
and it seem's they are beginning to understand,
exactly what has happoned.. "


Kordos : " Sounds like we have a big problem..
if they find out, exactly what happoned..
not only will the brotherhood be down,
our throats but the sorority as well.
the galactic trade alliance, will not stand for this terrony.
Do everything in you're power,
to stop those rebels from discovering our plans.
If you fail, you know what will happon..

Crutos : - I will not fail, Majesty.. -

Crutos : - damn him... majestrate overthrows my athority..
how can I deal with these fools..?
I know.. ..destroy their vessal.. -
Crutos : -speaks an unknown language. -
" Helm, plot course for that mother ship orbiting caprica 4.
commander..
target all weapons and propulsion systems, to the mother ship..
and fire, on my command.."
the two speak the same unruly language, to their captain.
Commander and Helmsmen : " Compliance.."

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OST : *Bleach #3 - Black Cloud.

Suddenly..

Amarao : " Their taking too damn long, being down there.
and with no satilite orbiting the planet, it's even harder to contact them..

nicole : " well be pacient,
I'm sure someone will contact us soon enough.. "

suddenly..
emergency sirens go off within the stumi,
and a recorded voice command follows the sirens.

Recorded voice : warning..
approchng vessal already has weapons charged,
initiating tacion force sheild..
initiating tactical menuvers.."

Nicole : " who's attacking us.?!" - Blast.. -

Amarao : " great..
not even seven hours in, and we're already making enemies.. "
- BLAST -

nicole : " it's a zobu -zon assault crusier,
but.. their usually not this far out.
I wonder if there is some link,
to the dissappearance of the capricans.? -

amarao : " i see them, baring '517 - mark 3' "

nicole : " fighters are beginning to emmerge from the bottom haul,
What do we do.?! "

Amarao : "their all controlled by, who ever is on that ship..
hold them off for as long as possible..
i've got to try to commune with the crew, down below.. "

- BLAST -

Recorded voice : " Warning.. dampening sheilds down to 60%
sub melecular discharges have been located,
on decks.. ten, eleven, twelve.
secondary systems are offline. "
amarao : " damn computer..
use propulsion systems to back up the tacion emmiters,
and reroute all power except life support to e.m.p..
- it's our only chance aginst the zobu zon for now,
knock everything out in one fail swoop.

As amarao looks onto the monitor, looking out to the attacking ship.
a grim look appears upon his face.

Ships computer : "Warning,
secondary partical generators are offline.. "

amarao - ..this is deffinetly.. Not Good. -


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OST : Bleach - Recollection 2

( Caprica 4 : mining planet, of the satarus galaxy )

Meanwhille..
the crew continue to search for some clue,
as to the dissapearance of the planet's population.

Naota :" tasuku, cherry.. anything.?"
Tasuku : " nothing yet, naota.. don't worry..
I'm sure whatever happoned, that the caprican's are fine. "

Naota : " i duno..
i've got some strange feeling,
that not all of this has to do with medical mechanica. ? "

Haruko : - that's because it doesn't, tak -kun..
there are other species, fighting for dominance
throughout the universe.. -

eri : " well.? what is you're assumption, nao -san.?"
Naota : " haruko claim's there's someone else,
or another species behind the dissapearances."

naota suddenly becomes silent,
and rethinks long and hard about the mystery.
Eri : " nao -san.?"
Naota : " my assumption wouldn't be sound,
there is more we just need to look.."

Eri : " don't over estimate you're knoweldge, love.
tell me what it is ?

Naota turns and speaks to her..

naota : " ok.. i don't think it is any rivaling planet..
instead, i believe the caprican's were kidnapped..
probably for some diobolical sceme,
another race has set up.. but this is only theroy.. "


Eri : " so do you think anyone is still linguring, in the shadows.? "

Naota : " hard to say, but it's worth looking into.."
suddenly a beeping sound goes off on naota's compad..
he takes it out of his left pocket,
and awnser's the incomming transmission.

Naota : " yes..?"
-scrambeled staticy sounds on the channel,
begin to over whelm amarao's voice. -
Amarao : " .... kid.... under..ack . .youre.. ass...and..eal..with.. "
suddenly the comunications channel, is closed.. ending the call.
Naota - something doesn't add up, here.. -

Naota : " what the hell is going on, up there..?"

Tasuku : " nao -san.. did you just, get an incomming transmition.?"

Naota : " yeah..why..?"
Tasuku : " sounds like trouble above, brother.. "
Naota : "Tasuku, get to travis..
Whille l get to haruko..
tell him we're on our way to the stumi on bike,
and to meet us up there."


Tasuku : " right.. be carefull, little bro.."
Eri : " what can i do in the meantime, nao -san.?"
Naota : " remain here and pray that there not under attack.."

Eri : " be carefull, naota..
i know i cant survive out there.. just, dont get hurt."
Naota : " don't worry, eri -kun.."

Eri : " i love you.? "
Naota : " i love you too, eri -kun. "

The crew for hours,
search seperatly the remains of each city caprica 4 held..

16 capitals, and 14 minor districts..
was all maped out, by the stumi's computer..
each member, held a compad for comunications..
but also, each had a tracking system..
for signature resonance from any mecha,
mother had hidden within the bush.

naota was deturmined to figure out, what exactly happoned here..
it bothered him, ever since he and haruko first left.

Naota - things dont add up..
why did the capricans flee, other then they were attacked.?
and it sure doesn't look like,
mother was influencing any of the population here..?
just, what the hell is going on.? -

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*To be continued.*
*see you next week* n.n
*ATOMSK :
Everyone has the ability to choose,
There own destiny lay ahead of themselves.
You have the choice naota,
Of when and where to say ..Enough..
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