A most awsome Fan Fic : - FL CL - 2ND CO M.M. ING.

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

well crew, this is it..
the final weeks of the old year,
and we're all about to ring in the new one.

*just hope you all ring it in right.*

**..In other news..**
** bleachexile**
is experiencing a new server change,
so no telling when there going to be fully operational.

But dayne assures the fans that,
"this new change will not take very long..
and the server should be running again,
after the turn of the new year.
also the site is becomming more user friendly,
which means new fancy upgrades for the web designers to create.."

**hope it's good dayne.**

For the death note fans :
The servers are still down at :
**deathnotesupremacy.org**
but the admin of that site has still to respond.
you can still catch the new comming saga #3/4
on animeboy.org
untill the server is back online.


I'm still looking for a great artist
who can captivate the ongoing fan fic,
I've been writing for nearly two and a half years.
**woot woot** Go Me.!
but alas, noone has come forth with any good pics...
I'm urging YOU, the fans too help me out here..
get too work, do some drawings !
and post em online here.
oh and by the by......
..kazuya is still reading posts, on this site...
..sometimes..

- Not bad for someone who submitted a letter.. nearly two years ago. - n.n

Without further to do,
here's my writtin submission of flcl 2nd comming.
AND.. thanks for the tip's crew.

*Previously, on FLCL - 2nd comming..*
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OST : *Bleach #3 - Quincy's Craft

Naota nandaba has gained the powers,
of the late pirate king atomsk les'case.
and plans to use his new found abilities,
to rid the universe of the mechanical menace.

Naota takes the crew, along with sota, taru, and gaku..
off of the planet,
so noone could ever effect the earth's n.o. channel again.

Douring their travels..
naota takes the crew to the demolished capital of caprica.
to find out how, or why the citizens had been abducted..

However,
douring their investigation..
a zobu zon assault crusier, unseemingly attacks the stumi..
and leaves commander amarao to fend for himself.

Meanwhille..
the crew turns up nothing as to any leads,
to the dissapearance of the planet's population.
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Naota : " i dunno..
i've got some strange feeling,
that not all of this.. has to do with medical mechanica. ? "

Naota : " haruko claim's there's someone else,
or another species behind the dissapearances."

naota suddenly becomes silent,
and rethinks long and hard about the mystery.

naota : " ok.. i don't think it is any rivaling planet..
instead, I believe the caprican's were kidnapped..
probably for some diobolical scheme,
another race has set up.. but this is only theroy.. "

Eri turns to look toward naota, and gives her thought.
Eri : " so do you think anyone is still linguring, in the shadows.? "

Naota : " hard to say, but it's worth looking into.."
suddenly a beeping sound goes off on naota's compad..
he takes it out of his left pocket,
and awnser's the incomming transmission.

Naota : " yes..?"
-scrambeled staticy sounds on the channel,
begin to over whelm amarao's voice. -

Amarao : " .... kid.... under.. Attack.. ..youre.. ass...and.. eal..with.. "
suddenly the comunications channel, is closed.. ending the call.
Naota - something doesn't add up, here.. -

Naota : " what the hell is going on, up there..?"

Tasuku : " nao -san.. did you just, get an incomming transmition.?"

Naota : " yeah..why..?"
Tasuku : " sounds like trouble above, brother.. "

Eri : " what can i do in the meantime, nao -san.?"
Naota : " remain here, and pray that there not under attack.."

Eri : " be carefull, naota..
I know I wouldn't survive out there.. just, dont get hurt."
Naota : " don't worry, eri -kun.."

Eri : " i love you.? "
Naota : " i love you too, eri -kun. "

naota was deturmined to figure out, what exactly happoned here..
it bothered him, ever since he and haruko first left.

Naota - things don't add up..

why did the capricans flee, other then they were attacked.?
and it sure doesn't look like,
mother was influencing any of the population here..?
just, what the hell is going on.? -
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*And now, the conclusion..*
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fifth, opening.
( Scryed - Magma Remix)
- thank you -


Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite..
**Shrio Sagisu** And
**Shoji meguro **
Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -

FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 4 : *Galactic Revelations. 1

ACT 67 :The Crew's journey, begins. ( ACT 2. )

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OST : The pillows - Sleepy head.
( Caprica 4 : mining planet, of the satarus galaxy. )
- Meanwhille.. on Caprica.. -


Naota smiles and turns back to eri, before speeding off..
Naota : " I love you too, eri -kun..."
Eri - be carefull.. nao -san.. -

Naota speed's off from the position of eri and tasuku,
and continues racing into the horizion..
soon..
we see him racing acrossed a large mass of water, in his wake..
large waves of water compell themselves,
on top of the smaller waves, rushing the water around.

The large waves splash upward then fall like rain..
as naota's speeds reach almost super sonic.

haruko looking to his direction, as soon as the sounds catch up..
she gives an eirry look, looking onto the speeding hellion..

Naota : " haruko.. get on the vespa, the stumi's under attack..!"
- muffled by the roar of his engine. -
Haruko : " what.?!"

Naota : " the stumi's, under attack..!!"
- still muffled. -
Haruko look and cups her ear, then screams to naota.
haruko : " WHAT.?!"

Naota suddenly stops nearly hitting haruko.

Haruko : " what did you say.?!"

Naota : " I said, the stumi's under attack.!!!"

haruko : " why didn't you tell me, before.?!
let's go!! ..blockhead.!!?"

Naota - oh god.. tell me I didn't just scream, for nothing.? -

Haruko : " well.?"
she slams her foot on the kick start to the vespa,
reving the engine up she looks to Naota and speaks..
Haruko : " ..what are yah waiting for ?..LET'S GO, LET'S GO. !!! "

Naota simply sighs and begins to speed off,
as haruko shortly follow..

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FL CL 2nd comming

OST : *Bleach #3 - Party of war.
( Above caprica 4 : Zobu zon assault vessal )

Meanwhille an assault begins on the stumi by an unknown force..
small fighters begin to pour out,
from the docking bay of the asault crusier.. and begin to attack the stumi..
thew zobu -zon leader begins to issue orders,
as soon as he recieves a status report.

Crutos : " status report.."

Helm : " their sheilds are down to 60%
looks like their re-routing power,
to their main propulsion systems.."

Commander : " captain, incomming torpedo.. !"

Crutos : " from where.!?"
As the battle rages onward a larger ship, streams out of hyperspace..
with a small group of fighters, tailing it's end.
the small fighters break formation and begin to attack the zobuzon.
as the much larger ship, begins to fire upon the assault crusier.

- BLAST -


suddenly a transmission comes through the channel,
and contact is made with the zobuzon.

Trask : " I am general trask,
of the galactic police brotherhood.
stand down, or prepare for combat. "

crutos runts in frustration, and begins to spit orders about his ship.
Crutos : " never !! I'll never surrender, to the brotherhood.!!"

Crutos turns to his helmsmen, and spits a direct order..

Crutos : " helmsmen, tactical menuvers..
commander prepare for combat.!"

Commmander : "sir!"

Crutos : " i will not give in to the brotherhood, without a fight.! "
Crutos looks to the console beside him and presses a button,
as soon as he does so..
a figure appears on the recieving end,
the darkness shading his face from the screen.
they begin speaking, in their native tounge.

Crutos : - sire.. seems the brotherhood is here as well.. -

Krodos : - you underestimate the ship you are on, crutos.. -
Crutos : - but without the proper perpulsion systems,
we cannot counter the e.m.p. ? -

Krodos : - Let me worry about the e.m.p.
you worry about the hundreds of fighters, heading to the ship. -
Crutos : - but sire..? -

Krodos : " unless you wish to fight for dominence,
I suggest you leave this into more capable hands. "

Crutos : " sir.. i leave this into you're capable hands. "

As the fighters engage one another,
the stumi is hit directly by the assault crusier..
but the small fighters keep the zobu -zon at bay..

As hundreds of fighters begin to surround the ship,
and attack it from all sides..
the sheilds seem to hold,
on the dark black haul of the zobu zon assault vessal.

Beams of red, white, green, and blue..
all ignite from the intense firepower, of the brotherhood fighters.
but the zobu zon assault vessal, maintains it's ground.

Small fighters that were attacking the stumi,
redirect themselves towards the fight.
ingaging in battle with the more larger battleship.

Trask : "Douglas, you really out done you're self this time.!"
Amarao is suprised to see someone familier,
looking back to him on the recieving end of his monitor..
Amarao : " TRASK ! but ..how.?! "

Trask : " never mind that..
how are the kid's comming along,
with finding out what happoned here.?"

Amarao : " progress is slow..
since we can not decypher the language of the capricans."

Trask : " then leave the rest to me,
I'll contact you when this is over."


Douglas shakes his head,
and shrugs his shoulder's before he speaks.
Amarao : " ..be carefull."

- The transmission cut's.. back to the fight -


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The thousands of fighters now engage,
and heavy losses are handed to the zobu zon..
- Blast -
soon.. crutos begins to regret ever attacking the vessal to begin with,
and questions his supirior's decission..

zobu zon computer : " Warning*
sheilds to primary assault vessal ,down to 40%.. - Blast -

fighters taking heavy damage..
some fighters are down, but minor injuries are sustained..
..warning, primary sheild dampeners are offline.
secondary sheild generator initiated.. " - Blast -
Crutos : " we have to back away for now.
we're taking on heavy casulties..!!"
Krodos : " if you flee, I will kill you myself.!!"

Crutos : " then I have no choice..
I will not sacrifice any more lives, for a lost cause..
i'm sorry majesty, but we ARE pulling back for now.. "
- Blast - - Blast -

crutos cuts the channel and begins to make the decission..
Crutos : "commander, call back all fighters, and regroupe..
we are leaving the system.. "
- Blast -
commander : " sir.. understood."
Crutos gives a faulty look outward, toward the monitor on his ship.
the monitor shows alot of the zobuzon becomming overwhelmed,
by the invading force of the brotherhood..

Trask : " all fighters regroup and attack the main vessal,
we cannot allow them to escape.!"

Fighters

Red leader :" Compliance.! "
Gold leader : " Compliance.! "
Green leader :"Compliance.! "
Blue leader : " Compliance.! "
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OST : Bleach OST #3 - Battle Battle. - { Neliel's theme. }
**Thank you shoji.**
The battle rages onward..
as naota, haruko, and travis begin assending into orbit..
they begin to see a clear glimpse of the zobuzon..
and the brotherhood.

Haruko : " looks like the brotherhood has showen up,
later then ever."
Travis : " -sigh - this is really gonna screw, with our objectives.."

Naota soon point's a fingure toward the prometheus, and speaks.

Naota : " ..maybe not.."

Haruko looks to where naota is pointing too.
she notices as he does the remaining fighters regrouping,
and defending the ship.
as the zobuzon begin to flee.
Naota : " the brotherhood, has them on the run. "

Travis : " that ship.. that's a zobu zon assault crusier.."
- but what's an assault vessal doing out here?-
Travis : "..unless..."
Travis - their the ones who stole, the entire population..?! -

Naota : " if you're thinking that these guys have something to do,
with the dissapearance..
I'm not sure ither, but we have to concentrate..
and try probing their minds for info, it's a one shot call..
now or never, travis."

Travis nods to naota..
and naota jumps off the vissago,
haruko emmidiatily taking over driving..
naota holding the solercaster in his hand, aims the head..
toward the zobuzon ship..
Trying to locate the leader, within.

Naota - wow..
there is alot of beings on that ship,
too many are panicing over nothing too..
hmm.. whats this.? -
As naota concentrates he finds the leader of the assault vessal,
and begins listeneing in to the conversation..
then gets a frightining concept,
of what the next move for the zobu -zon would be.

Naota - no.. they cant be thinking that..?! -

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( Zobu-zon assault vessal. )

Ships computer : " *Warning..*
breach in forward stabilizers, attempting to reinitialize..

*Warning..* Sheilds down to 20%.."

Crutos : " someone cut that damn machine off, for a minute..!?"

Commander : " computer, mute voice operations.."

Helmsman : " our evasive manuvers are not helping us much anymore..
their overwhelming the ship, and i'm loosing polaris speeds.. "
crutos : " draw power from the main sheild deflectors,
and revert power to the sub generators.. "
Crutos : " it's time they had a taste, of zobu -zon technology.."
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Meanwhille -
( Above caprica : In orbit. )

Naota looks on with shock, as he hears the conversation taking place..
travis, and haruko looking ahead toward naota's back as he gasp..
Haruko : " what's wrong, tak -kun.?"
Naota : " ..the crew's in trouble.."

Naota points to the main deflectors and cannon systems,
mounted at the front of the zobu -zon vessal..
as the plates shift, from one direction to another..
the frontal cannon's begin charging brightly..
then toward's caprica below..

Naota : " ..big trouble.. "
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*To be continued..*
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ending song : same song. - Nel's Theme -

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

well gang happy new year, to those who rang it in right.

**In current news**
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after long succession between the mods and taki himself, *Not ! lol.*

the results of the polls are in, and the new winner is : harukofan

congrads and let's welcome her,
into the wonderfull world of adiministators.
* good luck hun.. you're gonna need it.*

*Now, on to other news*
deathnote comics have been postponed,
due to a long and undisputed course of events.
* my heart goes out to those who are waiting,
for the new saga to continue.*

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In relevent news
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shounen jumps comics just released a ton,
of leaked issues including :
Bleach chapters 341-350
&
naruto shippuden : chapters 421-430
keep watching this thread every week,
for more upcomming and current news.
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And now, without further detainment.
here is this week's act of : FLCL 2nd co M.M. ing..

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Haruko : " finally, we're getting somewhere..!"
Previously, on FLCL - 2nd co M.M.ing..*

OST : Bleach OST#3 - Quincy's Craft.
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Naota and the crew leave earth to investigate the strange,
and mysterious dissapearance of the entire satarus galaxy.

whille on caprica..
A strange signal disturbes both amarao and nicole,
to scan the area for the retaining resonance..
their leads bring them into contact with a known race of beings..
Called the zobu zon.
an insectizoid race, who rivals medical mechanica.
The battle rages onward..
as naota, haruko, and travis begin assending into orbit..

they begin to see a clear glimpse of the zobuzon..
and the brotherhood.

Haruko : " looks like the brotherhood has showen up,
later then ever."
Travis : " this is really gonna screw with our objectives.."
Naota : " ..maybe not.."
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As the battle between the brotherhood and the zobu zon rage onward,
the distress of the ships commander crutos..
becomes overwhelmed with fury,
with the contiued attempts to bring the brotherhood to it's knees..

General trask of the brotherhood comes to aid amarao in defense,
as the fighters of the zobuzon continue onward..

However, whille comunications with the zobuzon continue..
naota begins to evesdrop on the conversation.

naota does so, when travis gives him the call.
and begins to find some disturbing evidence.
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Naota - hmm.. what's this.? -
As naota concentrates he finds the leader of the assault vessal,
and begins listeneing in to the conversation..
then gets a frightining concept,
of what the next move for the zobu -zon would be.

Naota - no.. they cant be thinking that..?! -
with the unknown evidence and the assault still ongoing..
will naota beable to inturprit the visions in time.?

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*And Now, The Conclusion..*
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OST : Bleach - heat of the battle.
( Zobu -zon assault vessal. )

Ship's computer : " *Warning..*
breach in forward stabilizers, attempting to reinitialize..

*Warning..* Sheilds down to 20%.."

Crutos : " someone cut that damn machine off, for a minute..!?"

Commander : " computer, mute voice operations.."

Helmsman : " our evasive manuvers are not helping us much anymore..
their overwhelming the ship, and i'm loosing polaris speeds.. "

crutos : " draw power from the main sheild deflectors,
and revert power to the sub generators.. "
Crutos : " it's time they had a taste, of zobu -zon technology.."
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- Meanwhille -
( Above caprica : In orbit. )
Naota looks on with shock, as he hear's the conversation taking place..
travis, and haruko looking ahead toward naota's back as he gasp..
Haruko : " what's wrong, tak -kun.?"
Naota : " ..the crew's in trouble.."

Naota points to the main deflectors and cannon systems,
mounted at the front of the zobu zon vessal..
as the plates fhits from one direction to another..
the frontal cannons begin charging brightly..
then toward's caprica below..

Naota : " ..big trouble.. "

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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **

fifth, opening.
Scryed - Magma Remix.
**Yet, another donation. n.n - thank you -**
Special thanks to : shiro sagisu, Kobu tite, and to Shoji meguro.
Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -

Original creator : - Kazuya Tusurumaki -
- where for art, thou ? -
FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I made this, in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 4 : *Galactic Revelations. - 1 -

ACT 68 : - The Zobu -Zon. -
- The Dispicable Act. -
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OST : Deathnote : Action. - short dub version. -

( Caprica 4 : mining planet, of the satarus galaxy. )

- Meanwhille.. on Caprica.. -

Gaku : " whats going on up there..?"
sota : " i dont know, but here comes that robot."
canti : " excuse me sir's..
but at the request of my master he wishes us to keep position,
untill the teleporter's are back online."
Gaku : " understood. but what's going on..?"
Canti : " I am sorry sir's,
but I can not devouche that information yet.."

As canti begins to continue he is aburptly interrupted,
by the sounds of an oncomming vehicle.
Tasuku : " hey..!!"
cherry: "why would naota want us to gather, all in one spot for.?"
Tasuku : " it's a timing thing hun, trust me.."

from the other direct come mamimi, and avalisk..
avalisk carrying mamimi on his shoulders, and back.
Avalisk : " well, least we're all here.."
Tasuku begins to jump out, once cherry stops the vehicle..

Tasuku : " everyones here, that's a good sign.."
cherry : " i'm a little nervous, with the battle above and all.. "
Tasuku : " dont panic, naota has got a plan.."
Tasuku begins to look upward in silence..
as the other's around him converse..

Tasuku - Least.. i hope he does.. -
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( Meanwhille.. )

Naota with a suprised look glances toward the zobu zon vessal..
a slow gasp comes from his lips.. as he tries to speak.. but cannot.

Naota - no..
they plan to blow the planet up..?! -

as naota looks onto the charging beam,
he begins to resonate with extreeme pressure.
Naota : -make sure everyone is gathered tasuku..
there's no telling if I can deflect the blast or not..
The cannon Is.. HUGE..

- FLASH -
Naota's mind flashes him back to his body,
where haruko breaks his concentration..

Haruko : " what is it takkun.? tell us.!"
Travis :" save it haruko i know whats going on..
naota has a choice here, and he better make it quick."

Naota - out of time what do i do.?! -
- save the planet, and destroy the zobu -zon vessal..? that's a must..!!"

Naota : " ESSANCE OF EXCELCIA : SUBLIME LIME LIGHT.!! "
Thus naota begins to terraform, into his new essance.
the redish orange flare colored jacket begins to glow,
as naota's resonance begins to pour out of his body.

the solercaster shine, with the bright gold and red.

Naota : " haruko..
get ot the stumi, and redirect power to the teleporters..
Haruko : " takkun whats going on..?!"

Travis : " just listen.."
Naota : " lock on all or our stuff, and the locations of everyone..
bring them back.. "
Travis : " understood..but.. what if this fails? "

Naota : " I don't need our people,
hurt in the process.. Get to the ship.."

Naota vanishes before another word could be said..
travis turns his head to haruko and sighs..
Travis : " listen lets just get to the stumi.."
Haruko blinking in naota's wake with a spacing thought speaks..
Haruko : " ..naota..?"
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FLCL 2nd comming..
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OST : Bleach *Anguish - Remix.
( Meanwhille, onboard the zobu-zon war vessal. )

Crutos : " uploading the plan's now, sir.. "
crutos : " honestly sir, you are out of you're mind for this."
Krodos : " i understand the situation, and the tacitcs required..
might drain the ship's main generator."

crutos : " i am well aware of this, majesty. "
Krodos : " i have recieved the downloaded information,
on both the stumi and the prometheus..
good luck, captain.. "
crutos : " majesty. "

- The communications link is severed -

commander : " multiple power surges are comming,
from all over the ship, captain..
I suggest we reroute the propulsion systems,
and forward power..
and revert them back throughout the ship.
this drain will eventually, tear us apart.. "

Crutos : " i'm well aware of the effects, of the propulsion cannons..
commander.. and you WILL, fire on my mark.. "
the commander cringes then speaks..
Commander : "Yes captain."

crutos : " target prometheus, and fire.."
as the commander fires..

naota emmerges infront of the blast..
the screaming beam begins to pour out of the cannnons..
naota concentrates and begins to slow time around his body..
the flux begins to effect the space around him..
as the beam races on naota's keen eye, begins to glint.
as he swings..
Crutos : " WHAT?!"


Naota : " not this time, captain.."
naota begins to charge up with a furious suppression..
the time and space begin to fold around his body,
as he continues to scream..
the distortion makes the fighters of both vessals,
back off and regroupe the prometheus..
begins to back off aside of the stumi..
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OST : The pillows - Advice.

general trask looking on with shock.
Trask : " where is this disturbance, comming from.?"

Commander : " baring mark 316.704.. it's above, caprica.?"
Trask : " it's the earthling's, back off.!!"
Naota continues to surge with a blinding fury,
as the beam races closer wildly..

with impact, naota's guitar begins to absorb the energy
spreading around him..
Naota : " I can not allow this beam, to hit the planet..
and i refuse, to let it hit anything else..
come on.. - grunts - absorb it..!"

Travis : "here it is.. the moment of truth.! "
Haruko watches on with a shock as the impact begins to surround naota..
the crew still on caprica begin to witness a bright light..

Tasuku : " naota.!!"
Naota begins to struggle slowly,
but keeps a firm sence of mind about him.

Naota - gotta.. keep.. moving..! -
Naota slowly urges the beam of energy back..
slowly progressing it's speed to a near standstill..


Naota :" gotta push.!! nughh.. "
Naota continues to struggle with the beam,
wildy waving about making the contact with his weapon more unstable..

Naota - can't, let... it, slip..!!!! -
Naota continues to push the beam back with a force..
but, the beam's resistiance overwhelm's our hero...
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Meanwhille...
Amarao : " What's the kid's status, nicole..?"

Nicole : " he's struggling to hold the beam, at bay..
i'm also recieving word from tasuku,
that everyone has gathered..
shall i tell them to wait, or try to get the transporters back online.?"

Amarao begins to stand up from his chair,
looking downward and then back toward the screen.
Amarao :" no remain here ill go do it.. wha..?"
as amarao turns to leave, suddenly..

Dravendell appears from the ships lift.
Dravendell : " whats with the face, amarao..?
it's not like, you knew this would happon.."
amarao : " Dravendell.. how in the hell.?"
Dravendell : " its obvious commander..
subsections 4-14 are offline,
and since you're brig is located on, subsection 8..
well?
need i point out more for you're, fible mind.?"
amarao : " no thanks, i've got a transporter to fix.."
nicole alert security to the bridge..
make sure this, ..signa.. doesn't mess with my ship.."

nicole : " compliance.."
- BLAST -
Ships computer : " Warning.. system paramaters are offset..
unable to access main sheild deflectors..
Warning, oncomming particlebeams..
Warning oncomming torpedos.."
amarao : "nicole evasive menuvers.. hey.!!"
Dravendell : " trying to reinitiallize, main deflectors.."
Nicole : using tacitcal menuver, alpha 54."
dravendell : " targeting sensors are offline as well,
trying to comphensate.. "
nicole : " tactical menuvers are working for now, commander.."
amarao : "Ironize main haul,
and make sure the sheilds are back up.. "
nicole : " commander,
incomming transmission from the prometheus.. "
amarao : " patch it, through.."
Trask : " what is that earthling trying to accomplish.?
and what is that, thing.. doing on you're bridge..?"

Dravendell : " nice to see you too, ...general.."
amarao : " i'm unsure..
but i believe naota is trying to deflect the particle beam,
directly back toward the zobuzon assault vessal.."

Trask : " that kid's insane, he'll blow himself up in the process..!!"
amarao : " you don't realize who exactly he is, do you general.."
Trask : " ither way..
we're sending word to the others, down on the planet..
and we're taking over this little scuffle..
so tell him once we've beamed the other earthlings back,
abord the prometheus.. to let go, of, that, beam.. got it.?!"

amarao : " ....compliance.."

Trask : " there maybe hope for you yet, douglas..
and if i were you..
I'd trying my damndest, to get that deflector back online.."
- the transmission is cut.. -

amarao : " arragant, son of, a bitch.."
nicole : " commander..
naota is pushing the beam, and redirecting it towards the ship again..
I'm going to try to dissipate it,
using the tacion particle beam we have on the stumi.. "

amarao : " don't.. i've got orders, to try and nutrilize this threat..
and i'll do it, my way.. bring main deflectors, online.."
nicole : " compliance.."
Dravendell : " even with this density..
you cannot regenerate this ship, using just the energy from that beam.. "

amarao : " well then.. stand back, and become amasied..

nicole..
aim deflectors toward naota, and that beam..
and fire on my command..
once the beam is stable, prepare for hub regeneration.. "

nicole : " compliance.."

Dravendell : - i still don't understand what he is trying to accomplish,
by draining the force behin this beam..
even if he's successfull ..
he'll accidently strike naota,
then the beam will drain that kid's resonance.. -

Dravendell : " wait !
if you do this, you risk striking that kid.."

amarao : " we're well aware, mecha.. ..fire.!"
nicole punches in the commands,
and presses the single button to fire.
Amarao : " now watch.."
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FL CL - 2nd co M.M. ing..
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OST :Bleach *3 - Principle of flight.

As naota continues to struggle with the beam,
a force begins to pull from all around him..
he notices is right away, and begins to let the force of the beam go..
the beam begin to suck away from him, and toward's the stumi..
naota soon notices another larger ship and small fighters,
fighting by a blackish crusier..

naota : " looks like amarao's idea did the trick..
but why am i still here.?
shouldn't i have been struck with the beam, as well.? -

Travis : " Nao -san.!!"
Haruko : "Tak -kun.!!"
Naota : " travis.. haruko.. you two alright.?"

Travis : " yes, quite..
but we're still in danger, of those fighters..
we should head to the stumi..
ive got a feeling that this ship here, is gonna help us a great deal.."

Haruko : " that's general trask's ship the prometheus..
arragant piss -ant thinks he's gonna take, all the glory.. "

Naota : " travis is right..
let's head back to the stumi, and see how badly it is damaged.."
Haruko : " you sure that is wise, tak -kun..?"

Naota : " i was listening in the their conversation..
and the prometheus is engaged in battle,
there still going to attempt a transportation.. "

Haruko : " this is sick, tak -kun.. we gotta find cover, now.!"
Travis : " I'll agree, least we all get shot in the process.."
Naota : " let's move.!"
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( Meanwhille on the prometheus..)

Eri : " what's going on, why are we here..?"
security captain :
" I'm sorry madam, but we're admist battle at the moment.. "
tasuku : " eri san.. dont worry ok ?
lets just follow this man to the lounge area of the ship,
and await the commander of this vessal to explain his actions.

Mamimi : " is naota aboard this ship.?"
Security captain : " uuh.. naota.?.. naota.. hmm.."

Avalisk : " you know smaller framed then myself,
black long hair.. wears a blue and white flack jacket..?"

Security captain : " i'm sorry.. but noone like that is aboard.."
the security captain open's a bay door,
and offer's his hospitallity to the crew..

Security captain : " this way please, if you will.. "
Tasuku gives the captain an aggressed look,
before following him out of the transporter room.
soon, the rest of the crew begins to follow in silence..

eri tries to look out of one of the windows toward the stumi,
which in turn is slowly backing away from the assault crusier..
Eri - why havnt we backed off of that thing yet.? -

Tasuku : " eri -san.. let's move.."

Eri : "r..right.."
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Bleach #3 - Remix - Shinigami Tango.

Crutos : " where's the fighter's, lead squadren..?"
Commander : " port side of the prometheus..
their attempting a breach, in there main deflectors.."
Crutos : - this is futile..-
" contact the captain, and tell him to retreat..
we're going to have to defuse the particle beam cannon, as well."

Helmsmen : " we're taking on leakage in sectors 5, 6, 9, 12, and 14..
I'm locking all bay doors, and sealing off those sections.. "

Crutos : " now, commander..!!"
commander : " ..compliance.."

As the commander does so..
he is hit by a shock from the cconsoles system, frying out.
he is thrown back and knocked uncontious.."

Crutos:" Status report..!"
Helmsmen." sheilds down to 15% and we're taking on damage..
it's too late, sir.. we're out of luck.."

Crutos screams in defeat,
and begins to collapse to his knees..

crutos : "helmsmen.. activate self destruct, sequences.."
Helmsmen : "sir..?"

crutos : " do it, now..!"

Helmsmen : " activating, self destruct sequence.."

ships computer : "Warning..
self destruct sequence, initiated..
estimated time to activation, 1 minute.. "

Crutos : " it is time we the zobu zon show the brotherhood,
who truly is the rival of medical mechanica.."

Helmsmen : " shall i prepare a shuttle for departure, sir..?"
crutos : " we will not run away, from our destiny.."

Helmsmen : " A.. last stand then, sir..?"

crutos : " target prometheus with photon torpedos,
and fire on my command.. "

helmsman : " sir.."


Crutos - for centuries..
the brotherhood never astablished peace, with us..
this conflict end's, with this simple battle..

If only things could of been diffrent, with us..
maybe then.. the zobuzon, and the basics..
could of lived, in harmony..

Crutos : " ..fire.!"
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*To be continued.. *
Naota : " See you guys, next week. "

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

Well FL CL fans..
this Day marks the ten thousandth view, of my fan fiction conclusion.
FL CL - 2nd co M.M. ing. -
congrads to me for going this long with it.

this week's act is entitled : The unsolved mystery or,
The unabscue absence..

With so much going on before the crew even reaches sillios,
things become a little enthused for them...

Especially for naota and eri, who only begin to figure out..
where there relationship is headed.

meanwhille..
other races begin planning objectives for an up comming battle,
between the unknown zobu zon & medical mechanica.
* looks like the crew is not the only ones battleing for survival,
aginst the mechanical threat.*
but enough spoiling, there's so much more action to explain..

So, without further to do..
here's the newest addition of FL CL 2nd co M.M. ing..

This week's ost is dedicated to my brother, Thomas.
who has inspired me to continue to write this fan fic, no matter what.
* I will through too the end, my brother.*

This week's OST in order.:
1 Bleach* Battle on the beat.
2 fourth, opening. ( Scryed - Magma remix. )
*remixed by your's truly. *
original artist : Ida Yasuaki.
3 Bleach#3 - Quincy's Craft.
4 Bleach* OST 3 - Black Cloud.
5 Bleach* Dark one.
6 Bleach * head in the clouds.
7 the pillows - the moon is mine.!
8 The pillows - swinger's night club.
9 The pillows - high risk.
10 *Bleach - burden of the past..
11 *Bleach* compassion..
12 The pillows. another morning.
13 Bleach* #3 -To not Return.

*K, Here we go..
*Previously on FL CL - 2nd co M.M. ing...*
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OST : Bleach* Battle on the beat.


Naota and the crew leave earth to investigate the strange,
and mysterious dissapearance of the entire satarus galaxy.

whille on caprica..
A strange signal disturbes both amarao and nicole,
to scan the area for the retaining resonance..
their leads bring them into contact with a known race of beings..
Called the zobu zon.

An insectizoid race, who rivals medical mechanica.
however, whille admist an epic battle..
naota discovers that the zobu zon have other plans instore,
for the crew now located on caprica.
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Naota gives a look of shock..
whille stareing toward the on comming charge of light,
emmiting from the cannon of the zobu zon vessal.
Naota - ...NO... *O.O
they plan to blow, the entire planet up..?! -

as naota looks onto the charging beam,
he begins to resonate with extreeme pressure.
Naota : - make sure everyone is gathered, tasuku..
there's no telling if I can deflect the blast or not..

The cannon Is..!! HUGE..!! -

- FLASH -

Travis : "here it is.. the moment of truth.! "
Haruko watches on with a shock,
as the impact begins to surround naota..
the crew still on caprica begin to witness a bright light..

Tasuku : " NAOTA.!!"
Naota begins to struggle slowly,
but keeps a firm sence of mind about him.

Naota - Gotta.. Keep.. Moving..! ..NUGHH!!-
Naota slowly urges the beam of energy back..
slowly progressing it's speed to a near standstill..


Naota :" gotta, push damnit !! RRRRAAAAUUUGHHH!!! "

Naota continues to struggle with the beam,
wildy waving about making the contact with his weapon more unstable..

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with naota deflecing the beam from the near by planet,
his struggle is suddenly haulted by the stumi's tractor beam.
but the zobu zon still have one more trump card up their sleave.
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crutos : " do it, now..!"

Helmsmen : " activating, self destruct sequence.."


ships computer : "Warning..
self destruct sequence, initiated..
estimated time to activation, 1 minute.. "

Crutos : " it is time we the zobu zon show the brotherhood,
who truly is the rival of medical mechanica.."

Helmsmen : " shall i prepare a shuttle for departure, sir..?"
crutos : " we will not run away, from our destiny.."

Helmsmen : " A.. last stand then, sir..?"

crutos : " target prometheus with photon torpedos,
and fire on my command.. "

helmsman : " sir.."

Crutos - for centuries..
the brotherhood never astablished peace, with us..
this conflict end's, with this simple battle..

If only things could of been diffrent, with us..
maybe then.. the zobuzon, and the basics..
could of lived, in harmony..

Crutos : " ..fire.!"
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*Avalisk : " and now, the conclusion.. " *
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fourth, opening.
( Scryed - Magma remix. )
Yet, another donation. n.n - thank you -
Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite..
**Shrio Sagisu**
And Shoji Meguro.
Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -
Original creator : - Kazuya Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -
FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o m m i n g -
Saga 4 * Galactic Revelations. - 1 -

ACT 69 : The unsolved mystery.
- The Unabscue Absence.. -
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OST : Bleach#3 - Quincy's Craft.
( Location : Aboard the prometheus. )


Trask : " what's the assault crusiers status, helmsmen..?"
helmsmen : " sir, the zobuzon assault crusier..
has initiated A, ..self destruct sequence .."
she gasps as the readings turn into information,
right infront of her.
Trask : " one final card to be played, by the zobu zon..
target their cannon's and fire, at will."
Helmsmen : " Compliance.."
Trask : " let us see if this.. assault crusier,
can with stand the full fire power of the prometheus.."

comander : " sir..
the seven members on caprica, have been beamed to the ship..
I'm reinitiallizing the ships ironization haul,
and beginning to inform them of our current situation.. "
Trask : " also inform them once this is over,
we're docking with the stumi.."
commander : "compliance.. "
Trask : amarao has alot, of explaining to do.. -
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amarao : " once the ship's destroyed, hail the prometheus..
and tell them to give our people back..."
Dravendell : " i'm almost cirten,
that the general think's we're helping them.. right.?"

amarao : " even if that's the case,
there is too much suspicion and intelligence lost on this matter.
we all need to regroup, and get the fact's streight.."

nicole : " incomming transmission, from the prometheus.."

- transmission locks up,
before the prometheus's commander speaks.. -
amarao : " get it back.. "

Commander : " this is commander Latrel,
of the brotherhood's prometheus..
we've recovered the seven members located on caprica,
and beamed them to the prometheus..

our fighters are still trying to apprehend the remaining assailants,
so be pacient commander..
the general says we will dock,
as soon as the threat has been nutrillized. "

amarao : " well.. thats some good news, commander..
but, what about the assault vessal ?
shouldn't we move out of range, before that thing blows up.?"

Commander latrel : " sir..
the commander of the stumi wishes,
we move out of range of the assault crusier.."

Trask : " tell amarao, he's as nervous as ever.."
Commander latrel : " please bear with us..
just a little longer, commander..
latrel, over and out. "

amarao : " i dont care, what trask has up his sleave..
we have to move the stumi out of range.. "

nicole : " compliance.. and it's a good thing, too..
naota, haruko, and travis have entered the docking bay.. "
amarao : " great..
we can explain to them, as well.."
Dravendell : " dont be so hasty, commander..
there is still a threat, out there.."

amarao : " no one asked for you're opinion, mecha..
just stay still, and shut it.."
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OST : Bleach* OST 3 - Black Cloud.


Suddenly, without warning..
- BLAST -
the prometheus is struck with a direct hit.

Trask grabs onto his console and begins to scream..
Trask : " Status report.!!"
Helmsmen : " that assault crusier delt a direct hit,
to our starboard necells.
we're not going anywhere for at least a few hours.. "

Trask : " Bring the stumi back online.
Inform them of our situation and tell them to back off..! "
Helmsmen : "sir i thought you said.."

Trask : " I know, what I said helmsmen..
bring us about, and back us away from that assault crusier.!"
Helmsmen : " compliance, initiating impulse power. "
- BLAST -

Trask : " get us away from there, helmsmen..!"
Helmsmen : " sir, sensors are out of allignment
i cannot go any faster then, mark 4..

Commander : " sir.. we're retreiving a signal comming from that ship..
it's the zobuzon.. there surrendering, sir.."

Trask : " we're backing off, commander..
I'm not risking this ship, or it's crew any further. "
Helmsmen : " compliance. "
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amarao : " look's like the zobu zon is giving us one last stand,
before they blow themselves up.."

nicole : " sir, sensor's show 30 seconds till explosion. "
amarao : " back us away from the zobuzon assault crusier,
and get us a fair distiance away lutennant."

nicole : " locking in quardenents."

naota : " whats our status, douglas.?"
amarao : " we've taken heavy damage from the assault crusier,
but we're not crippled yet."

Travis : " what the hell, is she doing out of the brig.? "
Dravendell : " nice, to see you too."

Haruko : Tak -kun !!"

Naota : " I know don't worry about it right now, hara -san.!"

Travis : " a tacion emmiter might be able to sheild us,
from the main blast of that ship..
but the aftershock, may ripple our sensors.. "

amarao : " sheilds are holding, but only at 35% "

Travis : " i'll attempt a tacion fusion to link with the emmiters,
and force a sheild around the stumi.."

Naota : " let's just hope that works.. "

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As the two ships slowly back away from the assault crusier..
they begin to move away as the final moments of the ships life,
draw to an end.

Crutos : " for the glory.. of the, zobuzon.."

Ships computer : " counting down to initiation sequence..
10.. 9.. 8.. 7.. 6..

Crutos : " my final moments,
drawn down.. to this.. heh, isn't life grand.."

Ships computer : 5.. 4.. 3.. 2.. 1.. initiating, self destruct sequence.. "
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FLCL 2nd comming..
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OST : Bleach* Dark one.
( Location : In orbit, around caprica. )


suddenly both ships are rocked from the overwhelming explosion,
of the assault crusier.. and both ships, are forced away..

soon the ships restabilize, but both are badly damaged..

Trask : " what a wild ride.. helmsmen, status..?"
Helmsmen : " sir the ship is destroyed,
and there is no sign of any shuttles leaving the area.. "

Trask : " then it's over, for now."

track turns his head toward his commander, and speak's.
Trask : " commander.. contact the stumi,
and prepare for docking sequence.."
commander : " and what of the others, sir.?"

Trask : " I'll tend to them myself, meanwhille everyone take five..
we may have won a battle, but this war is far from over.."

Commander : - salutes - " sir.."
Trask : " you have the bridge, commander.."

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OST : Bleach * head in the clouds.


A short whille later..

Trask : " people please,
I assure you we're docking with the stumi as we speak.. "
Tasuku begins to increasingly get into trask's face,
tasuku angerly spitting at the general.
Tasuku : " what of my little brother, huh.? where the hell is he.?"

Trask : " i assure you, he is fine..
there aboard the stumi, as we speak.. what is the problem..?"

Mamimi : " our problem is we had no warning,
before beaming to this ship..
We didn't know the zobuzon, were here.. hell..
we didnt even know about the dissapearance of the capricans,
untill we landed.."

Gaku : " something, is a miss here.."
Gaku : - least I got that puzzle naota kun, was talking about.. -

Sota : " my thoughts, exactly.."

Trask : " My sources capture naota and haruko at the sceene of the crime,
two days after the entire population dissapeared..
So you tell me, who i can and can not trust..
untill i get some awnsers, you are to stay aboard this ship."
- Trask walks out of the lounge area.. -

Tasuku - of all the dirty things to pull..
he had to hold us captive, untill he gets facts streight.."

Eri - nao -kun.. -

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Trask : " welcome aboard the prometheus, douglas.."
amarao : " general, trask.. I assume my crew is alright.?"
Trask : " for the time being..
we're still recieving intell from the intersteller transmitors..
but progress is slow.."

Amarao gives a quick sarcastic remark, toward the general.
amarao : " like alwyes.."

Trask sighs and continues to speak.
Trask : " on another note,
I wish to hold you and you're crew,
accountable for this engagement..
dont worry, you're not in trouble..
although, you're crew seems to think, i've been holding them captive.."


Amarao : " well..
you did beam them directly here, instead of the stumi..
and you did mention the facts of haruhara, and nandaba on caprica..
so obviously, they have reason to believe that you are holding them.."

Naota : " enough, chit chat..
general, things are growing vastly out of our reach..
we need to regroup, and devise a tactic aginst these..
what did you call them again, douglas..?"

amarao : " their the zobu -zon..
an insectizoid race that rivals in technology, with medical mechanica.
their just as hell bent on destroying them, as we are..
but, they use more crude methods.."

Naota : " Ither way..
we need to discuss how and why these creatures,
are responsible for the abduction of the planets population.. "

Trask : " well.. with that assault crusier destroyed,
good luck getting the necessary intelligence.. "

Naota : " thats what i mean..

I evesdroped on their conversation,
and it seems that the commander of the crusier..
was infact, working under someone else..
truth is i havnt a clue but.. "

Trask : " identification of the person or being,
may take quite a long time.
we have an extensive library on the zobu zon,
but no Itenerary on it's population. "

Naota : " ither way, I'll need to see my crew..
we need to regain ourselves, before discussing this any further. "

Trask : "agreed, this way please.."
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FL CL - 2nd co M.M. ing.
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OST : the pillows - the moon is mine.!


Naota - with the assault crusier destroyed..
it left me feeling a bit errie,
toward the dissapearance of our planet's cousins.
Travis, myself, haruko, eri, tasuku, and mamimi..
continue to stratigize toward our main goal..

whille the others try their best, to fill in the blanks..
the only one at this time we can really rely upon,
is travis's input and the compad that he carries..


Trask continues to think we had something to do,
with the dissapearance..
but my questions, leave him in the dark.. -

Naota : " you were the one who activated the mecha,
that was dorment in the silo..
so you have to know who was there, before hand..!"

Trask : " like i said, my actions are justifiyable..
the planet's been abandoned for more then six of you're earth months..
which in dargonain time is exactly, 1 cycle.. "

Travis : " that still does not awnser the brotherhood's involvement.. "

amarao : " yes, quite..
trask, we have a big problem to report back to the legislate.. "

Trask : "indeed.."

Naota : "- sigh - we've been arguing for hours, over this..
it's maddening..
to think the brotherhood would have been involved,
in such a covert operation.."

Eri : "nao -san, maybe we should adjurn for now..
and come back refreshed..
there maybe something we missed..
we could go back down there, and.."

naota : " no.. it's clear to us who exactly we're dealing with..
somehow, i have this feeling though..
that mother's involved, in their demise as well..
but i can't go on instinct alone,
i'll need proof of her flaws.. before going, aginst her.."

Travis : "lyra suggests, you contact atomsk again..
and ask him about intell, on the zobu -zon..
he may know more then you think, about this insectizoid race.."

Naota : "I can't right now..
it takes too much concentration, and natural flowing thought..
to contact him, through the void..
i need more time, before i am able to contact him again.. "

Trask : "the prometheus, will continue to guide you toward sillios..
and we will depart,
after you have done you're bisnuess with the sorority.."

Naota : " tasuku, inform the rest of the crew..
we're heading toward sillios,
after obtaining a good amount of intell on caprica..
we're gonna find out, how they all dissapeared..
and, we'll get 'em all back.."

Eri : " nao san.."
- he want's to free them without any hesitation.. -
Travis : - truly, a man of good faith.. -

Naota : " well ? we have our plan, for now..
but one thing, still bothers me.."
- why would the captain of an assult vessal, simply give in so easily ?
why would they try so hard, to hide their true intentions..
if they were hell bent, on destroying the planet..? -

Haruko - don't think so hard on things, tak -kun..
if you let it go for now, it may come back to you.. -

Naota - and yet.. she alwyes seems, so annoying.. -
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FL CL 2nd co M.M.ing..
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OST : The pillows - swinger's night club.


Tasuku begins to inform..
the rest of the remaning crew,
of the current situation and their leave of caprica.
Tasuku : " I'm sorry guys, but no feild training this time.."

Gaku jump's up and scream's toward tasuku, with dissapointment.
Gaku : " oh, you gotta be kidding me.."
Canti replies, to gaku's sudden spazmatic sarcasem..

Canti : " afraid not, sir..
the master is quite serious, about this matter.."
sota begins to speak, as he ponders his thought on the subject.
Sota : " but, what of the planet's population..?
how can we just walk away, from all of this..? "
Tasuku replies, awnsering the confounded question.
Tasuku : " I'm sure naota is thinking something up, as we speak..
but his intentions seem a little off.. "
Tasuku begins to look away, as he thinks a thought of his own.
Tasuku - I just wish he'd share a little but of thought,
so we all can get a little insight..-
Gaku ponders hard trying to comprehend,
the sudden change in characteristics.
Gaku : " this isn't like naota, at all.. "
Gaku - what is he thinking..
just walking away, when we just basically destroyed the main threat..-

Tasuku bring's forth another thought, of his own.
Tasuku - still, naota has been hiding his true emotions so well..
I can hardly even tell, when he's telling the truth or not. -

Inwhich taru finally has a thought of his own.
Taru : " well? what can we do..?
he's our leader, and we better snap too and respect that."
Taru begins supporting his friend's over comming effection.

sota : " don't become so dramatic over it, taru.."

Taru replies with..
Taru : " what ?
i'm simply implying that,
it's best if a person not think on things, so heavily.."
Gaku folds his arms in, and speaks.
Gaku : " leave it to taru, to go gandi on us.."
Taru brings forth a sarcastic grin, repliying with.
Taru : "heh..
my might is stronger, then ten thousand farts.!"

Sota begins waving a hand about, and hold's his nose closed.
Sota : "oh, you're sick bro.."

Taru smiles in silence, giving off a huge grin..
Tasuku sighs,
lowering his head from embarassment and shaking it about.
Tasuku : - *sigh* even as adults,
we still have a tendency to give off an immature vibe. -

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FL CL - 2nd comming..
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OST : The pillows - high risk.
( Sometime later.. )
amarao paces back and forth infront of dravendell,
as she quietly loks up toward him from her holding cell..
he abruptly speaks..
to break some of the long silence, cornering every inch of the cells walls.
amarao : " even though you were usefull on the bridge,
i still have to quarintine you for survailance.. "
dravendell replies with..
Dravendell : " i understand, commander.."

douglas raises an eye brow but then gives a glare toward her,
as she simply sits in silence..
amarao : " you do realize that once were on sillios,
that you are scheduled to be destroyed.?"

Dravendell simply replies, never taking her eyes off the floor.
Dravendell : " i understand full well commander..
but, do you really think that is wise.. ?
after all..
who would point you in the right,
direction toward medical mechanica.?"

Douglas spits back, clearly disgusted with her frame of mind.
amarao : " that isn't my main concern..
My main concern, is getting to sillios and freeing the capricans."

dravendell simply replies, trying to make the commander understand.
dravendell : ": and who better to help, then I.?"


amarao : " save it will yah.? it's not my decision.. it was, naota's."
amarao gives a long silent look toward his prisoner,
dravendell never takes her eyes off of the floor before her.
And with that,
amarao leaves dravendell to her own thoughts.

Dravendell : - he would sacrifice my knoweldge, so easily ?
this is proving to be most intreiguing, by the minute... -

she smiles to herself, as the lights cut off..
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OST : *Bleach - burden of the past..

Naota - All my life..
I've been taught that there is no right awnser, to any choice.

wether it is a sacrifice, or a decission.
I was alwyes taught, to think before I leap.
not alwyes is that the best of choices..

Sometimes, a person has to think of the comming consequences..
and acts that follow..
My choice for now is clear..
Dravendell, clearly is a threat that must be disolved..

But in my head, i continue to think of the following consequences..

Would it really be right to sacrifice, haruko's own sister.?
or in turn, would my decission be a flaw..
that would soon, turn aginst us.?

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OST : *Bleach* compassion..

Suddenly..
The light's cut back on, into the small detention cell..
dravendell hangs her head, as the door open..
haruko slowly walks inside, and shuts the door.
then slowly turn's to her robotic sister sitting on the small cot,
in the middle of the barred cell..

Haruko : " so.. you helped commander amarao, on the bridge did you.?"
Dravendell says nothing as her sister walks toward the bars.

haruko : " still mad huh.?"

Dravendell sits in silence as haruko continues to speak.
Haruko : " well this is really a heart felt moment, now isn't it.?"

dravendell : " what is it you want from me, huh. ?
come to gloat about kicking my ass, half way acrossed the earth.?
or is it something else..?"

Haruko gives a smierk before turning and folding her arms inward..
Haruko : " still stuborn, as alwyes.."

Dravendell : " you alwyes were annoying.."
Haruko : " yeah.."
a long silence follows..
Haruko : " you may not know this..
but mother destroyed our home, sis.."

Dravendell : "i understand fully well and realize, that sinas 4 is long gone.. "

Haruko : "you're still human inside of that robotic shell, sis..
no matter how many times you try to rebuikld youre self, or perfect youreself..
you are, who you are.."

Dravendell again, says nothing in return..
Haruko : " well if you're not gonna speak for youre self, then maybe i should..
god !!
you're so stuborn, you never know when to quit.. do you.?"

Dravendell turns to look but haruko turns her head and looks upwward.

Haruko : " if i'm not mistaken..
i believe someone once said, that its not our faults..
that make us human, rather.. it's our uniqueness.."
dravendell : " you seem to forget that i am no longer, human.."

Haruko : " it's you're funeral, really.. "
haruko begins to walk out of the detention area..
as her sister continue to sit in silence..
but stops abruptly once dravendell speaks again.

Dravendell : " you know this war, will never end..
it'll continue on, forever.. mother, will make sure of it."

Haruko smiles thinking to herself about naotas amasing abillities,
and how much he's progressed.

Haruko : " don't think so..
naota has atomsk's powers, and with that.."
she turns to glare back toward her sister.

haruko : " tak -kun's gotta trump card.."
she wrinckles her nose toward her sister, before walking out..

dravendell again is left to her own thoughts..

Dravendell : - a trump card, huh ?
this is most interesting.. -

she begins to smile, as her thoughts continue to flow.
Dravendell : - ..most interesting.. -
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OST : The pillows. another morning.

Travis continues to scan through the data recieved on the compad..
as naota looks along the long mural and speaks to him,
whille gazing on it's beauty.

Naota : " it's hard to believe that this thing's over, ten-thousand eons old.."
Travis : " it's hard to believe, that i'm the only timelord left.."

naota : " how is it that you came to this date..
how did atomsk know, you would end up at this spacific time frame.?"
Travis : " atomsk was the timelord king of desoliea..
he lived, before even I knew of existiance.."
Naota : " so.. in a way, he's a god of you're race..?"

Travis : " not exactly.. before you're races time, came into being..
we existed..
we were the caretakers of what was left behind,
douring an ancient war between all races..
this was a time before the universe formed, and came into being..
there were others, like us.. but, there was also the creator.."

naota : " you mean..?"

Travis : " yes..
the creator stepped forth, and told us desolieans of the earthlings..
we were never to astablish contact with youre race,
untill the time of maturity came to pass.."

Naota : " the time of maturity.?"

Travis : " n.o is a complex thing, naota..
if a single race is able to wheild this kind of power, there would be no other..
to rival it's power..
so the creator explained to us, that it was thought that pereodically
concealed youre race, from our sensors..
if we would of contacted you sooner, you're race would be utterly defensless..
you would never have been able to open the channel..
nor, would you're race ever know of the existiance of medical mechanica."

naota : - so, in a way..
even god told atomsk, that contacting for help would be unwise..?
how in the hell does he expect me, to overthrow mother.? -
Travis : " its best not to think on such trivial questions..
rather to influence you're mind, and assure you're self of the awnsers.. "
Naota : " whatever that means.."
Travis : " listen..
i have alot of work to cover, before we reach sillios..
and i dont expect you to understand fully, our main objectives..
here..
this should help in some way, but the awnsers you seek..
are inside of you, naota..
noone else can make any decissions, on destroying medical mechanica."

naota sighs from hearing the thoughts, spoken from travis's lips.
his thoughts were sound, but confussing to the nearly 23 yr old male..
naota was panic strikkin on the inside,
but never showed his true emotions on the out side..

travis : " just relax and enjoy the trip, naota..
its still a long way to sillios, and with our previous stop..
its gonna be a whille, before we reach the other side of this galaxy."

Naota nods silently before walking out of the docking bay,
travis continues to fuddle with a small screwdriver
and some more computer chips.
just as the young man turn's and begins walking out..

Travis sighs as he leaves and speaks aloud..

Travis : " he's gone guys you can come out now.."
finally from around the mural, avalisk and mamimi emerge..
and begin, pondering questions of there own.
Mamimi : " tak kun sounds really busted up about this whole mess,
dont you agree avi kun.?"

avalisk : " im not sure mamimi kun..
- this is all too frustrating.. we battle endless enemies,
and we've only got a fraction of info to go on..
winging this, may not be the best option anymore..
we have to stratigize..-
mamimi : " i'm worried.."

Travis : " atomsk was like naota, in alot of ways..
his thoughts seemingly surpass that, of my general kings.
but.."
travis begins to go deep into thought, then snaps as his idea comes into play.
Travis : " its not the controll thats the problem..
it's the amount of stress..!"

travis begins to hop off of his stool,
and begins to run out of the bay door..
both mamimi and avalisk look to eachother as,
the timelord rushes out the room..
Avalisk : " well.. inspiration strikes once again, huh.?"
mamimi simply shakes her head,
confussed as well of travis's sudden change in thought.

as the door opens, travis is herd screaming down the hall towards naota.
Travis : " naota, i've got it.!!"
naota turns to look to him and speaks..
naota : "got what.?"
Travis begins to describe his thoughts, as the screen backs away..
naota finally understands as well..
and the two begin to rush towards the detention cell,
where dravendell was being held..
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OST : Bleach* #3 -To not Return.
meanwhille..

zeromus continues silently along his way,
whille thinking conteigous thoughts to himself..

zeromus : - those kids will pay..
pay, for taking my dear sister away from me..
pay, for destroying those who have come before me..
they will pay, for destroying my robotic brethern.. -

zeromus continues to watch as the vastness of space, fly by him..

the pod speeding along it's way, toward it's destination..

zeromus : " once i've contacted my other brethern..
all things, will come to pass..
mother's will, will.. have no mercy.."
his laughter is echoed thorugh space,
as the pods screames through the vastness of the void.
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* to be continued. *
See you next week. n.n

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

like what you're reading so far FLCL - 2nd comming Fans ?


here's an idea..
for any comments and questions,
please submit then within the discussion forums.

Haruko : " no way..
they could, actually submit an idea and..
you're gonna listen to them.?!"

Naota : "well.. he does need, some kind of feed back.."

Mamimi : " well, why hasn't anyone spoken up yet.?
I mean, it's been six months give or take.."

Tasuku : " The creator of this awsome fan fiction story,
will be checking the Discussion Forum on a regular basis, so..

If you have an idea, or maybe something you with to read about..
go ahead and post them. free minds, all think alike.
and the crerator has one big open mind. "

Cherry : "how else whould we all fit in here.!?"

Haruko : " ok, this time it's for real.
the creator is obviously looking for new material,
so submit you're idea right away. "
Avalisk : " but,
what if the fans don't have time, or maybe just don't wish too..?"

Haruko : " then nuts to them,
i'll just go house hunting for each of them..!"

Naota : "not probable, haruko san..
theres literally millions of fans out there,
and only a handfull visiting the site regularly.."
Haruko :" -cries - BUT, I WANT THEM TO SUBMIT THE IDEAS NOW! "


Eri : " Well, we're just going to have to wait haruhara kun.
dont fret, I'm sure someone will submit an idea or two..
So grab youre thinking cap's gang, and submit today. ! "

Naota : " And see you guys, next week. "

*Hope to be seeing you, all in the forums.* P!

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

Ok gang,
some unfortunate events in my life have come to pass.
there for this act maybe my last post, ..for now..

some of you know the reason why I'm saying this,
and some of you know where my life is headed.
ither way I will continue to try to write this story..
it maybe a whille before i return again, too continue posting.
id like to take this time and thank the readers,
for enjoying my story thus far.
and hope too see you all down the road.

without further too say in the matter, here is my final post.. for now.
see you all down the road.

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* Previously, on FL CL - 2nd comming.. *
OST - Bleach* : Nailing the sword -
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Naota and the crew stumble upon some disturbing evidence,
whille investigating the unknown dissapearance
of the earth's cousin's the capricans.
whille investigating an unknown crusier dessends from hyperspace,
and attacks the brotherhood with no known cause.
naota soon discovers that there is more to the capricans dissapearance,
then meet's the eye.
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However..
whille battling the zobu zon an insectizoid race,
naota discovers that the crew is the race's main target..
with sonic raflexes naota deflect's the propulsion cannon's beam,
mounted on the assault vessal..
and deflect's their attack on the planet.
which inturn causes the zobu zon to destroy themselves,
in an attempt to send the earthling's a simplistic message.
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As the two ships slowly back away from the assault crusier..
they begin to move away as the final moments of the ship's life,
draw to an end.
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Crutos : " for the glory.. of the, zobuzon.."
Ships computer : " counting down to initiation sequence..
10.. 9.. 8.. 7.. 6..
Crutos : " my final moments,
drawn down.. to this.. heh, isn't life grand.."

Ships computer : 5.. 4.. 3.. 2.. 1.. initiating, self destruct sequence.. "
suddenly both ships are rocked from the overwhelming explosion,
of the assault crusier.. and both ships, are forced away..

Soon the two ships restabilize, but both are badly damaged..
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Meanwhille..
The crew reunite's whille on the prometheus,
and zeromus continues silently along his way,
whille thinking conteigous thoughts to himself..
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zeromus : - those kids will pay..
pay, for taking my dear sister away from me..
pay, for destroying those who have come before me..
they will pay, for destroying my robotic brethern.. -

zeromus continues to watch as the vastness of space, fly by him..

the pod speeding along it's way, toward it's destination..

zeromus : " once i've contacted my other brethern..
all things, will come to pass..
mother's will, will.. have no mercy.."
his laughter is echoed thorugh space,
as the pods screames through the vastness of the void.
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**Mamimi : " and now the conclusion.." **
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( Location : Sillios galaxy, On route.. )

As the crew continue along there way toward sillios,
they come to an outpost along the satarian border..
whille slowly pulling into the outer docking stations..
the general of the prometheus, converses with commander amarao...

Trask : " I believe this is a reputable stop..
the people here are quite nice and respectable, towards all cultures.."

amarao : " well thats a good sign,
and we can stock up on quantum Lakquida whille were here.."

trask : "agreed..
I'll contact you once the prometheus has docked,
and inform you're crew of the situation here.."

amarao : " agreed.. stumi out.."
- the screen blinks, before the transmission is cut. -

nicole : " well..
it seems that the general is a little nervous, about this outpost.."

amarao : "agreed..
monitor and scan for any resonance, of replicants..
we have dravendells dna pattern,
try focusing our sensor's,
too pick up any strange enomolies along the outpost.."

nicole : " compliance.."

As the stumi and prometheus speed along..
the outpost is huge, along the prometheus's large haul..
the two ships slowly dock inside of a large corridor..
a space for larger ships to dock, outside of the post..
soon..
small probes are sent along the outirrior,
and small men begin to patch and weild along the large gashes..
of the ships haul.
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!
And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
My fifth, opening.
( Scryed -Magma Reix.)
Yet, another donation. n.n - thank you -
Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite..
**Shrio Sagisu**
And **Shoji meguro**
Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -
Original creator : - Yazuka Tusurumaki - - where for art, thou ? -
FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d c o M.M. i n g -
Saga 4 * Galactic Revelations.
ACT 70 : Outpost of Satarus..
- A Devious Plot, Revieled.. -
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( Satarus outpost - on route toward sillios.)
OST : FLCL The pillows. - Weekend.

As the repair crews begin to work on both ships..
the crew begins to disembark, and stock up on nessesary goods.
Trask is soon seen, informing the earthling's of the outpost's current situation.

Trask : "as you can see this outpost is heavily guarded, at all times..
and that the citizens here, are mearly apart of the trade alliance.. "

naota : " so this is a trade outpost..?"

Trask : "correct.."

amarao : " this place has changed alot, since i've last been here.."

Mamimi : " oh my god, what is that.?"
as they all look..
a small reptillian creature is seen inside of a small cage,
and is pushed along on a large carrage.

the creature let's out a lonely howl, as it passes by the crew..
mamimi simply falls in love, with the gentle creature..

Mamimi : " oh... how adorable.. don't you agree, avi kun.?"
Avalisk : " i ..dont think this is the time..
to be flaunting over such an exotic creature like that, mamimi san.."

but sure enough mamimi begins to tap along the cage,
and pets the creature..
it gives off low sounds, as if it were despratly seeking attention.

Mamimi : " it really likes me, avi kun..!"
Travis : " i wouldnt get too attached.. its being brought up, for bid.."
mamimi : " ooh.. you mean, there selling this creature.?"

Traivs: " the tag says, it's starting bid is at 2,000 seroids.. "
Mamimi : " 2,000? isn't that a little steep.?"

Travis : " dont ask me.. ask the peddler, who's selling it."
he points as the peddler begins to puch the carrage once more..
the little creature begins to howl again, with a very lonely tone..
the peddler strikes the cage, to shut the creature up.
mamimi : " hey..
don't strike at the creature, like that.? god..
that's so annoying.."
avalisk stops mamimi,
from stomping any further toward the peddling zobu-zon,
instead she gives a saddened expression as the creature is pushed away..
Trask gives an odd expression, as to mamimi's current depression.
then proposes a alturnitive.
Trask : " here..
let's forward some credits to my personal account,
and whatever the bid end's to be..
I'll just extract it from amarao's account.. "

amarao jump's up at the phrase, then speaks sarcastically.
amarao : " my account that's over ten years old, how in the hell..?"
Trask cut's the commander's frustrations to a haut,
speaking as he wrap's an arm around his shoulder.

Trask : " now isn't the time..
besides, you know how i hate seeing a beautiful women cry.."

amarao gives a greving sigh then lowers his head as trask pats his back.
trask : " that's the spirit ol boy, now..
let's see what we can do about this creature.."

mamimi's eyes bright up as trask speaks..
she then grips avalisk's hand and snatches the card from trask,
then rushes toward the auction..
in her wake, amarao looks to track and speaks..

amarao : " you ..do realize what you just did, right.?"
Trask smiling toward mamimi as she grab's avalisk,
and runs down the corridor awnser's amarao's question.
Trask : " I made a beautiful women happy.."
amarao giving a sarcastic exprerssion,
speak's with the same manored tone.
Amarao : " no... you just gave a shop'o'holic, you're credit card.."

trask is stunned to hear this from the commander,
and soon lower's his head as well..

amarao smiling pat's his back in sympathy.
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(Satarus Outpost, Arberitum.)
Elsewhere..
OST : Bleach OST 3 Anguish - Remix . 1:39

Naota and eri pase themselves around the observation area,
as they paciently await haruko to return with small goods.

Naota : " this outpost.. its simaler to ours..
but we dont nearly have the technology, like the brotherhood. "

Eri : " so were a few hundred years behind, our ansestors..
big deal right.?"

Naota soon stops to see a large gas planet, raise behind the large sun..
the panels along the observation area,
sheild the ultravoilet rays so the view is clearly seen.

The site is obviously stunning to his eyes..
eri inches closer,
and holds his hand tightly to observe the view with him..
she smiles as she turns to him, naota saying nothing..
just gazing in awe, at the beautiful sight of vibrant colors.

Eri : " that is really cool, huh nao -kun.?"
Naota : " best sight, i've seen so far..
i'm.. glad youre here with me, eri..
I don't know if i could go at this, alone.. "
eri : " what do you mean ?"

Naota begins to go deep into thought,
and begins to describe his situation..
his thoughts, his feelings, towards the destiny that lay before him.

Naota : " all my life..
I've been pushed around, stomped on.. and kicked, like i was dirt..
At first, it seemed like everyone around me..
was controlling my actions..
then once haruko comes back,
everything sort of falls into place..
like nothing bad, has ever happoned..
Its sort of funny when i think about it.. but, eri san.."
Naota turns to her and speaks sensarally.

Naota : " i've.. never felt this way..
this serious feeling, that i've never been able to doubt before.
not from anyone, but you.."

eri turns and asks him..
Eri : " naosan.. I.."

Naota leans in and gives her a passionate kiss..
she begins to feel his embrace and begins to kiss him back,
as the gas planet begins to raise haruko finally comes forth..
Haruko : " ok, ok.. enough with the passion, it sickens me.."

Eri jumps back with a blushing expression,
naota turns back toward the gas planet..
and both are in silence panic striken, from haruko's sudden interuption..
haruko soon leans into eris ear and speaks..

haruko : " you know, a little fooly cooly.. never hurt, ither.."

Naota : " HARUKO.!!?"

Eri gigles at the thought..
and the ignited fury of naota, makes haruko laugh..

soon, naota understands and begins to laugh as well..
Naota - she was, only teasing me.. -

Haruko : " you gotta keep up tak -kun, women hate consistiantcy. "

naota : " yeah.."
Naota speaks as he looks to eri caringly.. and continues once more.

Naota : " heh, I suppose you're right.."

Naota : - at the time, i didn't realize it..
but eri and haruko were pritty much the same..
both were populer, and both had come from very prestigious families.
thought haruko was slightly immature, eri was more confident.
but both were equally, apart of my life.
even if things didnt work out beteen me, and haruko..
she still cared enough to be an essential part of what was my life..
and soon, she would prove that.. to both of us.
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( Vato's bar : Satarus outpost. )
OST : Bleach : never ment to belong..

Trask and douglas begin to sit down at a near by pub,
both drinking alchol they consume it slowly.
after taking the drink from the waitress..
douglas begins sipping his slowly,
then begins asking the general a simple question.
amarao : " my crew, is a little worried about you're,
..sudden change in hospitallity, general.."
Trask looks to his brandy and slowly takes a drink of it.
trask : " tell them to get over it, commander.. now, on to bisnuess.."
he looks to the glass again, then set's it down on the table.

Trask : " tell me..
douring the past ten years of observation..
did you witness any.. hostillities, whille on that mudball of a planet.?"
Douglas clearly puzzled by the question, awnser's with one of his own.

Amarao : " huh.?"
trask replies, trying not to insult the commander.
Trask : " forgive me commander..
I'm simply implying, were there any odd occurances..
whille in contact with the massive, n.o. readings..?"
Amarao baffeled, soon tries to connect with his n.o. abillity.
amarao : " if youre implying about any enomolus acitivites..
then yes,
there deffinetly was a sudden and rappid incrase,
of n.o. activity.. arised on the planet earth.."

Douglas then give's trask a sudden look..
but before the general realizes it,
douglas turn's his gaze toward something else..
trask : " interesting.."
takes yet another drink..

Trask : " then tell me commander..
what makes you sure that those two crew members of your's,
were in fact not involved in the caprican inncodent.."

amarao slams his fist upon the table and glares toward trask..
amarao : " o..k.. thats it, general..!!!
Just what the hell are you implying.?!"
Douglas clearly suspicious of the general,
slam's his fist down and glares toward him.
trask raises his hand ever so calmly and speaks with a civil tone.
Trask : " commander, please..
this is not an interrogation, nor is it an interview..
please i'm just trying to get a good grasp,
of whats gone on in the last ten years.."
- obviously being on that planet, lowered his intelligence somewhat.. -
amarao : " i herd that general, and no.
my intelligence has risin higher then being home..
and I like it that way, thank you..
now, too awnser you're question."

amarao takes the drink, slamming the shot glass on the table.

amarao : " ten year's ago...
we managed to free the pirate king known as atomsk,
using a channel inbedded within a twelve year old boy's head..

that boy is now the man that stand's between,
total and complete annilation of the universe..
and complete and ever lasting peace, between all races..
to tell the truth general, I'm not sure how to describe it.."

amarao stop's in his sentance,
to invision the forgotton memories laying dorment withhin his mind..
then speaks once the flashes stop.


Amarao : " ten years later..
atomsk returned to basically hand the torch,
too someone with capabillities of handling the extreeme,
and emmense pressure channeled within the void...

Naota nandaba, maybe the only one..
who can channel it's extreeme pressure,
and focus it at one spacific point in time..
there is no telling when or where it will happon..
all we know is we have to keep an eye on him,
least he fall's into mother's hands..
I'm sick of explaining this time, and time again."

Trask waves a hand whille taking another sip of his drink,
not totally confiding in amarao's explination.

Trask : " rubbish..
noone with n.o. capabililities, can handle such extreeme pressure.."
amarao continues to explain, his side.
amarao : " that's exactly my point, general.. noone has..
you have to figure with all the pressure surrounding the user,
the user has to have a consequential balance..
to counteract and bring order to the unstable channel..
untill now.. noone has been able, to do so.."

Trask : " you're making no sence, commander.. "
speak's trask assure of his thoughts..
Trask : - sounds to me like a bunch of rubbish,
blended in to manipulate my thoughts.. -
amarao continues with his gaze,
trying to focus more emphisis on the subject.
amarao : " correction..
I've been making perfect sence, this whole time..
youre the one failing to understand the consequential,
reprocussions of this matter.!!"

Trask has another thought to himself..
Trask - better play along with this,
till I can find out what really happoned. -
Trask : " ok then ?
explain the situation with haruhara, and nandaba..
why were they on caprica, two days after the abduction of our cousins. ?"

amarao grow's strangely quiet,
trying to calm himself from becomming frustrated..

amarao : " I believe..
it was you whom initiated the first contact with the capricans, general..
after all,
wasnt it you whom awoken the sleeping giant within the silo..?"

amarao beginning to see the general's game of wits,
begins to understand why the questions trask was asking..
were beginning to bother him.
to amarao it looked as if the fingure of the dissapearances,
were beginning to point toward naota.
amarao knew better, and was observing whille still orbiting earth.
Trask stumped with his own thoughts sits quietly,
sipping on his drink not really paying amarao any attention.
amarao : " you going to sit there and continue to get tanked?
or, you going to awnser my question.. general..!?"

Trask slam's his drink down,
and glares toward amarao with a furious expression and scream's at him.

Trask : " I HAVE NOTHING FURTHER TO CONFIRM, COMMANDER..
NOW I'LL BE THE ONE ASKING QUESTIONS..!"

The two begin to look around, as the races of beings around them..
begin to look oddly toward them,
then simmer down and begin to converse once more.

amarao : " this is getting rediculous, general..
you assume that nandaba and haruhara,
had something to do with the dissapearances.?"

Trask : " commander.. I, am implying..
that not only did the two have something to do with the dissapearances,
but infact..
both returned two days later,
to confirm that there mission was a success.. "

amarao : " that's an outreigous lie and you know it, trask..
and i'll fight you tooth and nail to the bitter end, on that..
even if i have to go all the way to the top.!!"

Trask smiles before taking his shot fully..
then slams the glass down onto the table, before speaking..

Trask - finally.. he understands our situation.. -
Trask : " good..
cause that's exactly what i'll expect when time comes,
to go infront of the galactic trade federation.."

amarao : " what are you implying..?"

Trask : " the galactic trade federation has issued a sapina,
to naota and haruko for there involveement in the dissapearances..
but rest assured,
i'll have my end covered.. i was mearly testing you.."
Trask - biggs will have my head, if I don't bring the two into custody.. -
amarao : " why the hell would you do that to me.?!"
amarao simply puzzled by trask's sudden change in thought,
ask's his question with a grim lok.

Trask : " hey, I have to keep you on you're toe's somehow right.?
what better way then to question who's in command..?
besides what kind of general would I be,
if I didn't have you're back on this..? "
Trask - He's going to be angrey for a whille..
but he'll get over it, once the commity agrees with his terms. -

trask smiles before tipping to the commander,
and leaving whille tossing a few seroids onto the table before walking out..
by now the commander is steeming out his ears..
but the general makes one final comment,
before leaving him to his thoughts.

Trask : " just be sure to not loose you're head,
whille stating the facts to the head of the board.."

amarao spit's back sarcastically, before the general walks away..

amarao : " thanks.. i'll keep that in mind.."
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FLCL 2nd comming...
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( Aboard the S.S. Stumi.. )
OST : *Bleach OST#3 - KO

Some time later...
haruko, sota, and taru continue to lug objects,
toward the docking bay of the stumi..
with little effort comming from sota..
he continues to watch the now risin gas planet,
raising toward the space station.

sota :" wow.. the planet's really look diffrent,
this far away from home.."
Haruko struggling on the other end of the crate,
sarcastically spit's at sota.
haruko : " you, gonna gawk..nughh..
at that, nugghh..!
pathedic, glimmer of gas?
or you.. nughhh!
gonna help me.. nughh..!!!
lug this thing upstairs.?!?!"
Taru helping with the smaller boxes and some bags,
struggles to lift them whille standing and waiting on the stairwell..
Taru : " nughh !!!
these are heavy..
what the hell you got, nugghh!!
in these, anyways..?"
Haruko : " nuggghh!!
quit squawking, and push.!!!"

by now both taru and haruko's faces are beat red.
sota can not take his eyes off of the sight..
the beautiful gas planet raises around,
the near by sun and into view..

sota : " so.. beautiful.."
Haruko scream's at sota not being able to hold the crate any longer,
sota catches his side before she slip's back and struggles to rebalance it.
Haruko : " S... S-SOTA.?! "

Sota shakes his head and scratches it a bit with a smile,
before helping taru and haruko up the steep stairs with a heavy box..
the two alone can not manage the presure, but once sota join's and pushes..
the box becomes a little lighter..

Suddenly without warning,
cherry grab's the box from the other side..
and lift's it with no problem, what so ever..
she simply carries it on her shoulder,
and look's back down the stare's with a frown..

Cherry : " I understand the problem of no elevator, but damn girl..?
why would it take you nearly 45 minutes,
too even get this thing up one flight,
thought you were stronger then this.?!

Haruko : " cause cherry kun, this thing's heavy..
what's in there, anyways..?!"
haruko speaks, whille scratching her head.

Taru : " you mean..?!?!?
YOU JUST MADE US PUSH, THAT THING.?!?!?
WITHOUT KNOWING, WHAT WAS IN THERE..?!?!"
..ugghh.. - passes out -

sota : "-sigh- women.." -.-*

cherry and haruko : "WHAT, DID YOU SAY.??!"

sota cringes from the sight, of the terrifiying duo..
Sota : " uhh.. ....n - nothing...."
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Meanwhille...
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OST : *Bleach - diago 45 degrees tango.
Location : Out post

Auctioneer : "ladies and gentlemen..
welcome to the satarus outposts semi annual acution..
weve had many items and rare anticuities up for bids so far,
and now we will begin the live and exotic species..
the first creature up for bids is this rare specimin..

todays bid is a rare and unique reptile from the sillios galaxy,
a rare rhinock. the bid will commence at 2,000 seroids.
Dargonian : " opening bid at 3,000 seroids. "

Auctioneer : " opening bid is 3,000 seroids, do i hear 4,000.?"

Mamimi : " ..4,000 ! "

auctioneer : " bid stands at 4,000 seroids, do i hear 5,000.?"

dargonian : " 5,000 "
the dargonian looking toward mamimi at first then goes back to his mindset.
mamimi looks over to the dargonian and waits paciently..

auctioneer : " thats 5000 do i hear 6,000.?"

draxian : " 6,000.."
the draxian gives a smierk toward mamimi as she glares back..
auctioneer : " thats 6,000 do i hear 7,000.?"
noone speaks for a moment then suddenly mamimi again speaks..

Mamimi : " 7,000.."

auctioneer : " thats 7,000 seroids do i hear 8,000.?"
the announcer look's around before hearing from the right corner,
A smaller being speaking, with a more highly pitched voice..

Laxian : " 8,000.."

auctioneer : " 8,000 seroids people do i hear 9,000.?"
again.. noone speaks for a moment,
then another begins to speak..
sor -rodan : " 9,000 seroids.."

auctioneer : " I hear 9,000 seroids, do i hear any bids for ten..?
going once..? going twice..?"
Mamimi :" Ten Thousand Seroids..!"
the group begins to whisper a mnutter under there breath,
as mamimi sit suprised at the reaction of the small crowd.

auctioneer : " ten thousand seroids.. people, any other bids.?
going once, going twice..?
sold, for an whopping ten thousand seroids..!!!
thank you, to the mysterious lady in orange..

and now people, may i direct youre eyes to this exotic creature..
a rare wallamaloo do i hear 2,000?"

mamimi thinks to herself before making her call,
and whispers to avalisk,
who has been sitting behind her for quite a whille now..

Mamimi : " avi kun, i think we're done here.. let's go get, our friend.."
avalisk : " W-wait a minute mamimi chan..
this was you're idea, it's you're friend.."

mamimi : " ither way..
we should get out of here, these beings are looking at me funny.."
avalisk begins to look about the room..
and realizes the beings are whispering amoungst themselves,
about there appearance.

avalisk suddenly grabs mamimi by the hand,
and escorts her to the back room..

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FL CL - 2nd comming...
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OST : The pillows - Little busters..

Soon..
mamimi is met at the rear center room, with the same peddler as before..
she slides a card through a slot and the amount shown,
begins to decline slowly..
once the ten thousand seroids were extracted,
mamimi shows a smile..
as the crate with the creature inside, is slowly wheeled out.
the small creature recognises mamimi immediatly,
and begins to cry with joy.

mamimi : " yes my little friend its me.."
rhinock : " mewww.... "
the sounds are like whale calls, very light, and suttle..
mamimi smiles even wider,
once the creature begins to rub it's head aginst her hand..
and she stands up looking to the peddler..
mamimi : " may i ask where you have, aquired this creature..?"
peddler : " i recieved this douring a medical transport,
from the sillios homeworld..
the young lady there, was, very... helpfull.."

mamimi : " thank you.."
avalisk soon awaits for the peddler to leave,
then turn's and asks mamimi, in a quiet manor..

avalisk : "you find anything ..strange, about that.?"
mamimi : " yeah but... let's not talk about this, here..
let's get back to the ship.."
avalisk gives a grimm look, once mamimi begins to walk away..
she turns and points her fingure toward the crate,
and looks to him.. then turns, and begins to walk away once more.

avalisk sighs then begins to push the crate behind mamimi.
avalisk - damn it..
why am i alwyes stuck, carrying her things.?! -
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Meanwhille..
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OST :*Bleach *3 - Soundscape To Ardor.

Amarao slam's his jacket down on the floor in his quarters..
soon as he begins to make coffie the door announces with a slight tone..

amarao : " enter.."
soon as the small door opens,
nicole is seen walking inside and looking to her right,
toward the commander.. her expression is grimm..
and she begins to explain, why.
nicole : " sir.. we've had a breach in the main haul,
and our sensors are going haywire..
i hate to disturb you, but the teams here are over worked..
and, we could use some help.."

amarao : "- sigh - contact the prometheus and tell trask,
to send us a few more teams..
tell him repairs are going slow,
and we could use help..
by no means tell him our equipment has been tampered with,
let him find this out on his own.."

nicole : "understood.."
as she walks out she begins to hear screaming from the commander..

Amarao : " why does this alwyes happon ?!
as soon as something legit lands in my lap,
the general has to take it and make calls aginst it..
what the hell do i do, for a living anyways..
so predictable..!!! FUCK!!"

with sudden shock, nicole begins to turn toward the door..
but then second guesses her decission.
instead she begins to run down the ahll and toward the docking bay..
soon.. she meets with travis, who is currently finishing a large console..
nicole : " -huff huff-
Travis immediatly recieves the thought of nicole,
and begins to grip her tightly..

Travis : " what's wrong, nicole san..?"

nicole : " travis, i'm so scarred..
it's like, the commander is going mad..?!"
Travis begins to steer his eyes from nicole, and over to the door..
then begins to calmly walk toward it..
nicole holding her arm,
and looking downward as he walks away from her..

Travis : " don't worry, ok.? ..i'll handle this..
you continue on, with contacting the prometheus.."

As travis walk's out of the docking bay,
nicole is left with a saddened expression...
she holds her hand to her chest,
as she watches travis walk off. her thoughts racing as she looks on..
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Meanwhille...

Amarao : " God damn it..
every time my mind is set on one goal in life,
that damned general just has to take it away.!!!"
- CRASH -
amarao : " too think..
i trusted that man for years,
and he let's me down with a single act.!! what the fuck!!"

Suddenly travis open's the door to amarao's quarters,
whille amarao continues throwing things aginst the wall.
- CRASH -

Amarao : " he wanted me to believe he was on our side,
...but NNOOOO.!!!
- Crash -
Things of amarao's personal properties are thrown about,
crashing upon the wall's of his quarters.

Amarao : "He had to go and fuck all of our plans up,
and we're falling right into this uneventfull trap of his.!!!
Stupied, rotton, son of a...!!
..oh, it's you.."

Travis tap's his foot,
Impaciently awaiting the commander to finish his tantrum.

Travis : " seem's we have, a little problem.. "
Travis very aggitated begins to quark his intrest,
toward the frustrated commander..

amarao : " this doesn't concern you, travis.. "
Travis : " correction..
it does have everything to do with me, and the rest of the earthlings..
so what is it now, that the brotherhood now betray's our trust.?"

Amarao : " I'm not telling you anything no way, no - uh.. "

Travis : "be carefull of you're actions, commander..
I am afterall, a desoliean.."

Amarao : " no way, i'm not saying shit to you.!
you and the kids are under my protection, and this is my matter..!!"

Travis : " SIT DOWN, AND SHUT UP..!!! "

Amarao : " yes sir.."

Travis : " i see..
you're worried that the brotherhood, may infact betray naota.."

Travis begins to smile, once amarao open's his mind to the timelord.

Travis :" come on commander..
you really don't have faith, in us desolieans..? "

Amarao : " I'm scarred..
scarred, that the earth may infact be consumed by the mechas..
scarred, of the fact that the earth may fall just like the ancients did.."

travis cup's his chin whille walking behind the commander,
and around the small couch.
travis : " youre hiding something from me, commander.. what is it..?"
Amarao cringes and grips a pillow,
whille trying to block travis from his enbedded memories..
Travis leans down next to the commander,
whille cupping his hands and looking forward..
Travis : " you, ..were there.. wern't you..?"

amarao : " ..don't make me, remember.. PLEASE..!"

travis begins to smile.. keeping silent,
he continues to purge the commander's thoughts..

Travis : "So, you really we're there..
and yet there was nothing, you could do..
so you protect the boy, in a mean's to make amends..
well.. this is VERY, interesting.."

amarao : " you have.. n-no right, to purge my memories.."
travis : " i'm sorry commander,
but this is necessary for me to figure out the correct calculations.."
amarao : " calculations..?"
travis : " every memory has a cirten set of calculation's,
that a brain's wave link is set up on..
to configure the correct course of action..
one must think on the same wave link as that of the person,
who's blocking the thought to begin with.

In youre case, the more you struggle..
the more I could purge you're mind..
but i can not deturmine the correct course of action, that will follow..
not with you're feeble channel.. "

Travis smiles whille looking onto the commander..
his eyes now swirl like galaxies..
again.. that errie feeling, reaches amarao's spine..

amarao : " tell me, it didn't happon..
tell me, I...I-i havn't lived, that long..?"

Travis : " ..I'd be liying, if i did.."

Amarao : " ..THIS, ISN'T HAPPONING!!!!"

Travis : "it already has commander..
I'm sorry, to leave you in this state..
..but trust me, you will harden you're true resolve.."

Travis begins to walk out of amarao's quarters,
whille the commander continue to sit gripping the pillow close..
his eyes show thoughts of insanity.. ..and soon, douglas begins to cry..

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FLCL - 2nd comming..
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*To be continued..*

[Cup~of~Tea]

No. Just no. First: Learn to spell and use grammar. There are so many typos in the this is makes me sick. Furthermore: The name don't match up with the Japanese nature of the show. "Travis"? Honestly? The time skip thing gets stupid if you stretch out. And you changed it from regular writing to a screenplay. The only reason I read it was to laugh at the horrible writing. Fix up all the text errors and then maybe you can actually start calling it "literature".

On the other hand, it an okay premise. But a good premise doesn't equal a good story. You had great idea but developed poorly.

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

well.. you should be the one to talk,
you who say " is " instead of " it make's me sick..
or this make's me sick.."
is does not apply here..

and for the screenplay.
granted there are a few typos, comes with posting..
the site does not take it in right,
i try my damndest to make sure there are no typos..
but, eh' what can you do..
I purposly write this way,
so when you follow the song list i post each week, it's more enjoyable..
try it some time.. you may think a diffrent way about this fan fic.


for everyone else..
sorry to worry you all, i will try to continue posting as i go.
but this story, is far, "FAR" from finished..
sorry for any advance typos and such along the way,
just bare with me right now.. times are very tough.

and with me moving to a new place, ect, ect..
it'll be very tough to post on a regular basis..
ill try to bring in another act sometime before : saturday the 25th. "
till then, happy m.l.k. day..
and to those who don't celabrate it, happy days to you..
**see you this weekend.**

[dennis20014]

Damn bro, your still chugging along on this huh?
Well thumbs up. I was wondering do you post on fanfiction.net?

I don't like posting here (though it's the only place I do) simply for the fact that I have to edit all the type when I copy and paste (I.e the italics and such)

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

yes i do currently post on ff.net.
but as of late i have had other things to deal with,
mainly moving and resituating myself, lifestyle and ect.

too those who do read and have continued intrest,
expect me to continue posting again come the 25th of feburary.
sorry for any advanced misinformation i've posted about.

but this project of a manga continuation,
has grown vastly slower then expected.

not to say this is not currently in the works..
but it's hard to find others who would donate their time and effort,
into this amasing : screenplay/ fan fic.

too those still waiting to read, go back to the past acts.
for they may come in handy in the act's to come.
Have a happy valintines day.
*N.O._Creator_ATOMSK*

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

I'm still around, trucking along and submitting acts to this story,
whenever I can..

Ever trying to keep all you bookworm's entertained,
whille enjoying the warm spring weather..

hope this act helps. enjoy.

* Previously, on FLCL - 2nd comming.. *
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OST : * Bleach #3 - Soundscape To Ardor.

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Trask and douglas begin to sit down at a near by pub,
both drinking alchol they consume it slowly.
after taking the drink from the waitress..
douglas begins sipping his slowly,
then begins asking the general a simple question.

Amarao : " my crew, is a little worried about you're,
..sudden change in hospitallity, general.."
Trask looks to his brandy and slowly takes a drink of it.
trask : " tell them to get over it, commander.. now, on to bisnuess.."
he looks to the glass again, then set's it down on the table.

Trask : " tell me..
douring the past ten years of observation..
did you witness any.. hostillities, whille on that mudball of a planet.?"

Douglas clearly puzzled by the question, awnser's with one of his own.
amarao : " huh.?"
trask replies, trying not to insult the commander.
Trask : " forgive me commander..
I'm simply implying, were there any odd occurances..
whille in contact with the massive, n.o. readings..?"
Amarao baffeled, soon tries to connect with his n.o. abillity.
amarao : " if youre implying about any enomolus acitivites..
then yes,
there deffinetly was a sudden and rappid incrase,
of n.o. activity.. arised on the planet earth.."

Trask raises an eyebrow before speaking, again.
Trask : " interesting.."
Trask takes yet another, sip of his drink..
amarao continues to speak as the general calmly,
sip his shot of alchol.
douglas then give's trask a sudden look..
but before the general realizes it,
douglas turn's his gaze toward something else..

amarao : " ten years ago...
we managed to free the pirate king known as atomsk,
usaing a channel inbedded within a twelve year old boy's head..

that boy is now the man that stands between,
total and complete annilation of the universe..
and complete and ever lasting harmony, between all races..
to tell the truth general, i'm not sure how to describe it.."

amarao stops in his sentance,
to invision the forgotton memories laying dorment withhin his mind..
then speaks once the flashes stop.

Amarao : " ten years later..
atomsk returned to basically hand the torch off..
to someone with much the same capabillities,
of handling the extreeme and emmense pressure,
channeled within the void.
naota nandaba maybe the only one who can channel,
its extreeme pressure and focus it at one spacific point in time.."

Trask : " rubbish..
noone with n.o. capabililities, can handle such extreeme pressure.."

amarao : " that's exactly my point, general.. noone has..
you have to figure with all the pressure surrounding the user,
the user has to have a consequential balance..
to counteract and bring order to the unstable channel..
untill now.. noone has been able, to do so.."

Trask : " youre making no sence, commander.. "
speaks trask assure of his thoughts..

amarao : " you going to sit there and continue to get tanked?
or, you going to awnser my question.. general..!?"

Trask : " I HAVE NOTHING FURTHER TO CONFIRM, COMMANDER..
NOW I'LL BE THE ONE ASKING QUESTIONS..!"
The two begin to look around, as the races of beings around them..
begin to look oddly toward them,
then simmer down and begin to converse once more.

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( Location : Satarus outpost - Docking bay area. )

Travis taps his foot,
paciently awaiting the commander to finish his tantrum.
Travis : " seem's we have, a little problem.. "
Travis very aggitated begins to quark his intrest,
toward the frustrated commander..

amarao : " this doesn't concern you, travis.. "
Travis : " correction..
it does have everything to do with me, and the rest of the earthlings..
so what is it now, that the brotherhood now betray's our trust.?"
Amarao : " Im not telling you anything no way, no - uh.. "
Travis : "be carefull of you're actions, commander..
I am afterall.. a am, desoliean.."

Amarao : " no way, i'm not saying shit to you.!
you and the kids are under my protection, and this is my matter..!!"

Travis : " SIT DOWN, AND SHUT UP..!!! "

Travis : " I see..
you're worried that the brotherhood, may infact betray naota.."
Travis begins to smile, once amarao open's his mind to the timelord.

Travis :" come on commander..
you really dont have faith, in us desolieans..? "

travis : " youre hiding something from me, commander.. what is it..?"

Amarao cringes and grips a pillow,
whille trying to block travis from his enbedded memories..
Travis leans down next to the commander,
whille cupping his hands and looking forward..

Travis : " you were there.. wern't you..?"

amarao : " don't make me remember, please..!"

amarao : " tell me, it didn't happon.. tell me, i havnt lived that long..?"
Travis : " id be liying, if i did.."

Amarao:"THIS, ISN'T HAPPONING!!!!"

Travis : " it already has, commander..
I'm sorry, to leave you in this state..
..but trust me, you will harden you're true resolve.."

Travis begins to walk out of amarao's quarters,
whille the commander continue to sit gripping the pillow close..
his eyes show thoughts of insanity.. ..and soon, douglas begins to cry..

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* And now.. the conclusion.. *
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For the *DeathNOTE* fans.!

And the one's who stuck through, to read this one.
**THANK YOU **
fifth, opening.
( Scryed - Magma Remix.)
Yet, another donation. n.n - thank you -
Special Thanks to : ** Creator's of Death NOTE **
to Kobu tite.. And
**Shrio Sagisu**
Basied off of the hit, anime saga.
- FL CL -
Original creator : - Yazuka Tsurumaki -
FL CL - 2nd comming : Story By - Jason Davis -
- I, made this in tribute. -
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F L C L - 2 n d C o M. M. i n g -
Saga 4 * Galactic Revelations.
ACT 71 : Fallout, of the brotherhood.
- Trask's decission.. -
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OST :*Bleach - To not Return - Remix.

Travis begins to walk back inside the docking bay area,
where he is soon met by eri and naota..
the two trying as best they can do, to calm the frustrated lutennant.

Travis : " good timing guys, we've come to a roadblock in our journey.."

Naota : " yes, nicole has informed us of our situation.. "
Eri : " shes still really shaken up, by the commander.."
Travis : " i am aware of our current situation with the brotherhood..
amarao was most, cooperitive.. "
Travis begins to sit down, as naota speaks..
Naota : " so, what's wrong..? why is amarao raving on, like a lunatic.?"

Travis : " seem's our host feel's we're the ones to blame,
for the current dissapearance of the capricans..
also.. i have a feeling that this isnt the first time,
the brotherhood has gone aginst the board of directors..
for the galactic trade federation.
- sigh -
also, lyra has nothing to suggest for an alternitive course of action.. "

Eri : " so we're basically, stuck between a rock and a hard place..?"
travis : " not necesserally.."
Travis begins to operate the controlls to the newly installed console,
remotly from the confinds of his desk..
soon, an image of the pulse cannon comes into view..

travis : " This cannon condenses a nutronic energy from the sun,
and comphresses it.. fueling the cannon's drive matter..
if we can alternate the drive's impulse systems..
then we might be able to stop the cannon from firing..
but our problem lie with the brotherhood and there.. escort survice.. "
as travis finishes speaking, the image of the cannon fades..

Naota ; " so.. the general thinks me and haruko has something to do,
with the dissapearances..
what the hell do i gotta do, to make these people understand ?
it wasn't me, it was the zobu-zon..?!"

travis : " there far more resilliant, then i first suspected..
especially when i came out of the vortex, the first time.. "

Eri : " what is he talking about, nao -san..?"

Naota : " travis has been helping us maintain a fraction of the timeline,
since i first left to orbit caprica..
me and haruko were kind of on a recognisance mission,
when haruko decided to try my patience,
by playing on as if she didn't know what was going on..

I have to admit, she's smarter then i give her credit for..
but she did infact know what exactly, was going on.. didn't she, travis..?"


Travis : " correct..
whille on the planet, the brotherhood first decided to test naota..
to see if what had happoned on earth, was infact true..
they wanted to know, if naota truly was a desendant of atomsk.. himself..

which was confirmed,
once naota used the eon flux to destroy both.. jaiden, and toki.. "


Naota squint's his eyes, fatheming what travis just explained.
Naota : " This, is frustrating..
they have the same capabillities, as us.."

travis continues on, knowing naota had his idea in mind.
Travis : " Not in a sence..
we can controll the flux of the void, they on the other hand cannot..
they maybe hybrids with far more powerfull genes then you..
you're race evolves just like the brotherhood,
but they lack the manipulitive capabillities..
That is the only diffrence between the hybrids, and the humans..
they will fear you're kind, and they probably retalliate..
more likely, they will try to rage war between the two races..
We maybe the only ones who can convince the board of directors,
and to say, otherwise.."

naota ponder's a question of his own..
naota : " but how..? what can i do to sway an entire race, ..no..
an entire republic that consists of, billions of lifeforms.?"
Travis : " all things in due time, my friend.. the question is..
what do you have, to offer them.?"

As travis says this, naota begins to go deep into thought.
eri gives naota a caring look, as she gently squeeses his hand..
she wondering, the same thing.
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FL CL - 2nd comming -
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( Location : S.S. prometheus )
OST : Bleach - Cops N' Robbers.

Some time later..

Trask enter's the bridge of the prometheus,
and looks around quietly at his crewmembers..

they all quietly at work, diognosing the ship's equipment..
trask then gives a sigh, and walks slowly to his seat..

The commander lifts his head to see the general take his seat,
and soon look's back to his work..

Trask : " ..commander..?"
commander : " yes sir..?"

trask : " if you were in my position and had to choose wether to assume,
the earthlings had something to do with the recient dissapearance..
or you choose that they might afterall,
be the ones who are in fact ..Innocent..
what would you're thoughts be on the concept of motive.?"

the commander replies,
with the knoweldge repeating it's self within his mind.
commander : " sir.. the turnout would be the correct, and obvious awnser..
the earthlings are not infact the ones responcible,
for the sattarian's dissapearance.. "

Trask holds a fingure up, whille explaining his hypothisis.
Trask : " correct.. but truth be told,
we did have a hand in ressurecting the mecha..
laying dorment inside of the caprican's silo.. "

commander : " well..
you did give the order, to reactivate that thing..
ontop of which, the young king did destroy.."

Trask : " -sigh- but was it the right choice..?
I mean, the manipulitive thoughts of amarao really got me sturring inside.."
Trask continues to go deeper into thought, as his subordinant speaks..
commander : " sir..
if you believed you've done something out of order,
with the brotherhood's code of commerance, then.."
Trask : " - sigh - never mind that, commander..
all i was asking for was you're opinion.."
commander : " then.. permission to speak freely, general.."
Trask : " it's ok commander.."
commander : " I believe amarao is correct so far, sir..
they havn't shown any signs of collaberating with the zobu -zon..
nor have they been manipulitive, in there personallities.."

Trask : " I know.. i know.. but how can i explain this, to the senate..?"
Commander : " sir..
my suggestion would be to continue escorting the earthlings,
to sillios simply to monitor there current situation..
what are they looking for anyways,
what are there intentions once they find what they are seeking.?"

Trask : " good thing i don't pay you to think, ..commander.."

The commander becomes distraught.
commander : " last time i give you, advice.."
Trask : " duely, noted.."
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FLCL - 2nd comming..
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( Location : The Stumi's infermary.)

OST : *Bleach - Enemy unseen..

Gaku continues hard at work monitoring heather..
ever since comming into contact with naota,
and witnessing her brother's demise.

Travis stands by naota with a puzzled expression..
now scrolling through the compad,
for any kind of histroy on the subject at hand.


Heather had been placed in stasis by amarao himself..
gaku has been monitoring her vital signs,
soon after amarao taught gaku everything he knew..
about the medical technology of the stumi.

Gaku continues checking off the current status, of our comatized victum.
then begins to write on the clip board..
soon after.. gaku retires to his chair, and begins to read a large book.
he fiddles with a pen in hand,
as he continues reading the paragraph at hand..
then stops as soon as the door opens..
naota soon walks in alone and gaku raises from his chair,
looking onto our hero with quiet awe.

Naota with a solom expression..
walks toward the stasis chamber, and look's onto the now sleeping heather..
he places a hand onto the glass casing and then looks down..
turning toward gaku he begins to speak..
Naota : " something's been bothering me, gaku san.."

Gaku : " what is it.?"

naota : " what happoned on earth, the timeline,
and everything surrounding earth..
all of the events, lead to this one simple act.."
gaku : " what are you saying..? "
Naota : " im afraid by using the eon flux..
i may have tampered with the capricans timeline, as well.."
Gaku : " impossible..
but i thought, you could only access ..the earth's timeline..?!"

naota : " that may not be true.."
- douring the course of the maybase menace,
and the terrorist's acts by the gratze..
I.. may have cause a chain reaction,
that may have initiated a dire impact on the entire universe..
by erasing jaiden and toki..
i could have initiated the zobu -zon attack on the capricans,
before even realizing what i had done. "
Gaku : " but from you discribed to us, that would be impossible..
y-you said so you're self..
you and haruko were on the planet, and it was already destroyed.."

Naota : " that doesn't disclude the chain of reactions..
it could of happoned, way before this too..
it could of happoned whille we were still kids..
gaku do you understand..?
it could of even strained, from haruko herself.."

Gaku : " if it wasn't for haruko..
you wouldnt of gained atomsk's powers,
and restored the timeline for the earth.. to begin with.."

Naota : " so the question is.. was that the right or wrong choice.?"
- Those what if's, are really annoying..
there has to be some logical explination, for this occurance..
I'll have to start with eri, then get to haruko..-
Gaku : " i can't awnser that, i wouldn't even know where to start.."

Naota : " then.. maybe, it is time.. "
Gaku : " naota ?! where are you getting at with this.?"

Naota : " it.. never came to me before, untill now..
all of this time whille fighting,
I've only been concerned with resolving this maddening battle.
but every time we run into trouble,
it seems not only is mother hell bent on erradicating us..
but it seem's that other parties uneffected by the timeline,
have been colaberating with her but inder faulse pretences..
don't you see ?
If medical mechanica isn't the only ones involved,
doesn't this mean there are other races of beings..
just as porwefull, as mother herself.?"
Naota - by now..
after the kelido star inncodent, there must be.. -

Gaku is completly lost by now..
with the idea's poping out of naota's head,
like he knew of the impending doom..
naota continues to pinpoint, the exact origin of the abductions.

Gaku : " honestly..
I've been pondering the same thing myself, reciently..
why would the zobuzon want to kidnap an entire race of beings,
only for the sole benifit of destroying medical mechanica.?"

naota continues to explain, as if gaku is on the same page.
naota : " would it be hard to believe they might want to become,
the most powerfull race in the universe..?
and maybe this single act could be what they need,
to prove this information to the senate.?"

gaku finally understands,
and decides to place his two cents in on the subject.
Gaku : " well.. this kind of warfare wouldn't be uncommon..
amarao has already shown us, that much.."

and naota begins to ponder, yet another thought.
naota : "but what of the brotherhood..?
why would trask insist about escorting us toward sillios,
if not to monitor our progress.?"

Gaku : " beat's me.. i dont understand it, as much as you. ..hell..
I barly caught what you were thinking about, a second ago.."

Naota - and it's harder, when he mask's his thoughts..
-sigh - this is gonna be one hell of a ride.. -

suddenly over the intercom, travis's voice could be herd.
Travis : " naota could you come here, a moment..?
there is something you must see.. "
naota turn's to gaku and then solomly walks away,

gaku continues to ponder the theroy that he and naota came up with..
he slowly turns to heather who is still within the stasis chamber..
then quietly goes back to reading..
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FL CL - 2nd comming...
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OST :Bleach #3 - KO

After ten minutes of wondering through the haul of the ship,
naota finally find the docking bay area and begins to walk inside..
the door's sutomatically open then close as soon as naota is inside..
naota slowly walks to travis who is tirlessly hard at work,
with some program on the newly designed console..

Travis : " good, you made it..
here, I'll pull it up for you.."
Naota : " Sure..
but first there is something i've been meaning to ask you..
why is it you continuolsly mask youre resonance from me,
even when i try to reach out to you.. you seem so distiant..?"

Travis : " forgive me my friend, it's this damn console..
it's been calling to me, ever since we first met the gratze..
it may have seem like i was distiant ,
but infact i was concentrating all of my power into this machine.."

naota : " so..? what did yah wanna show me.?"

travis begins to pull up records of the final stages of mother..
then the 3d image brings mother's original form, into display.
Travis : " this was mother's original form, before the inncodent.."

naota : " so.. this is mother.."
Travis : " not at all..
this was mother, unfortunetly the effects and mergance with the ship..
and the chemicals bursted a new being..
one probably mutating,
from the combined mixture of whatever that ship was carrying..
the ultra-voilet ray's heavily boiled that vat,
making whatever cohisive properties combine and come alive..
whatever she looks like now, this isn't it.."

travis cups his chin then begins to speak aloud for a breif moment..
Travis : " maybe it wasn't the mixture of chemicals..
maybe it was the container incasing the a.i. that broke first,
whatever the case maybe..
she's alive, and with that.. she has a concious, that is corrupt.. "

Naota : " ok..?
but what does this have to do with our current situation..?"
Travis : " nothing absolutly nothing.."
Travis : - least, that's what the signa want us to think.. -

Travis : " from what i've witnessed douring our battles, these.. signa..
have capabillities of terraformation, just like us..
but with a more negitive effect.."
Naota : " I see..
so, with that they could grow in power expanentially.. just like us..
they feed off negitive n.o., like we feed off the positive..
it's like yin and yang.."

Travis :
" I don't know if our weapon's maybe strong enough to destroy her,
once you've used the sitar to destroy her barrior.. "

naota : " which make this journey all the more harder on us..
tell me, when was the last time you checked through lyra about this.?"

Travis : " about twenty minutes ago..
i tried to converge the mainframe with this ships computer,
though the reprogram to do so is corrupt.."

Naota : " have you devised a script yet.?"
Travis: " i was just getting to work on that..
you really are, getting quite fast at this.."
Naota smiles and pats travis's shoulder,
as he continues to work on the script..
naota then walks away and out of the docking bay..

Leaving travis to some steady work ahead.
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FL CL - 2nd comming....
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Ost : * Bleach - Can't back down.

amarao : " you did, WHAT ?!?!? "
amarao scream's to mamimi ,
as she hands douglas trask's credit card..
Mamimi : " you don't have to scream at me, god.."
Mamimi rolls her eyes as steam pours from amaraos ears..
the burning of his hot face continues to pleague mamimi comically,
before he calms himself and speaks..
amarao : " you spent ten.."
amarao cut's himself off and grip's mamimi's arm,
then pulls her in close as two of his officers walk by..
then whispers, as he glares toward her.
amarao : " you spent ten thousand seroids, on a frikkin dinosaur.?!"

Mamimi : " trust me, i have a feeling that this will pay off..besides.."
she begins to cuddle with the rhinoks head,
as it brushes its self aginst mamimi making cooing sounds..

Mamimi : " it's just a baby..
- she speaks with a pout -
think of how scarred you would be,
locked in a cage in a strange place.."

amarao stomps his foot an anger,
then points his fingure towards the small dino.

amarao : " i don't care.. and, besides..
this is rediculous, you know this will come outta my pay..?!"

amarao - speaking of pay.. maybe i should check my bank account,
and see if its still active.. -
the small dino watches the fingure pointing towards it's self and bites it,
shocking amarao..
amarao keeps himself from screaming in agony,
as the creature soon let's go when mamimi turns..

Mamimi : " See..? ..I knew, you would understand.."
she says with a smile on her face..
amarao just sighs and drops his head..
amarao : " alright say if this thing comes in handy,
how do you plan on paying the general back.?"
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OST : Bleach #3 - Turkish Delight.

Mamimi : - winks an eye -
"I have my ways.."
she saunter's toward her room walking away,
whille amarao simply drop's his jaw with the thought..

now giving her a suspicious expression,
amarao continues questioning mamimi's motives.
Amarao : - oh, great..
..now she's playing the innocent one.. -

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FLCL - 2nd comming..
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( somwhere in space.. )
OST : *Bleach - Blast..

Zeromus continues his course toward sillios,
paciently awaiting to meet his rival at his destination..
the pod races onward as zeromus calmly look toward the monitor,
now viewing his progress....
Zeromus : " very interesting.. seem's this man has quite an arm..
too bad i couldnt see, the results.."

he continues to watch untill the display image dissapears,
he then presses a button on his left console..
and proceed's with a transmission..
Zeromus : " are you there brother..?"
unknown zobuzon. : " yes brother.. i've seen the footage..
there manipulitive capabillities are strong, but they lack in resolve.."

Zeromus : " that shall not be a problem for me, brother...
just make sure that cannon, is completed for mother..
she need's power, to fuel her cause.."

Unknown zobu zon : " i shall assist you by any mean's necessary.. "

Zeromus : " good.. i shall see you, once i've taken care of.. these.. "

Zeromus smiles deviantly, once he speaks the name of our race..
" ..Earthlings.."
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* To be continued. *
*next act, coming up in near future.*

[zilabus]

Where's the classic FLCL random humor?

[Medical_Mechanica]

hahah, there is none. this dude has been doing this stuff for ages and idk why the hell he keeps posting it on here. No one barely ever comes on here anymore and when they do, no one is gonna read this. It hurts the eyes... I congrats him for this, but dude, time to hang it up and at least trying to publish your first draft...

(and look at his avatar picture. he's obviously obssesed with FLCL and obssesions leads people to major exagerations, like this "continuation")

[N.O._creator_ATOMSK]

yes i've been going back into the story, ..and..
yes I understand that it's getting a little boring and hurting your eyes.
that's why I'm revamping this story.

not to say i'm completly changing the plot. its a sound plot.
but yes i've lost the mojo for the fanatics.
ill be trying to correct that, within the comming months.

medical mechanica says i should hang this story up. peroid !

sounds to me like someone has nothing more to do,
then to critisize someone else's work.

so i'm going to issue you a challange.. medical mechanica..

if you can think something better up? post it. i'll read it.
if not ? ..then why bug the hell outta me.?

And yes, i'll post my thoughts about it.
though to you.. they really wouldn't matter, right.?
so.. what do you think, I'm thinking about your post right now.?

And P.S. dude.. that's not me in the pic.
I found the avatar on the net.

So peace out for now, flcl fans.. be back in september.

[FLCL Freak]

I dig it. Keep it up.

[dennis20014]

Yea there's a difference between someone telling you to stop and constructive criticism. I'm glad to see your still writing. Your story is definitely not of FLCL flavor, but you've expanded it into something of your own. You've done great, and there is still people coming on here, I don't know what that dude is talking about.

It's a sweet story MM, you just have to give it time.

I finally posted up a bunch more on my story NO, if you have time to read please feel free, I'm reading your stuff right now! =]