Episode 7
(Noata speaking) “Its bin four years since the incident with medical mechanica my dad left for America to see my brother Tasku and said and he said he’s never coming back”. “My grandfather died of unknown causes”. “Mamimi hasn’t written back or called since she left and I’ve turned the bakery into a restaurant”. “My life is back to its old boring self”.
“Hey who sent me a letter, Canti?”
(Noata opens the letter and reads)
Hi Tak-kun
Sorry I haven’t written back in a while. I was going to write back when I got a job but I was to busy. It’s lonely here out on the road takune. I have bin making quite a bit of money I enclosed some in the letter. I might move back home soon,
Hope to see you soon!
Mamimi
“Mamimi enclosed a strange coin inside this letter she must of mistook it for money”. “Oh well lets go Canti we have customers”.
(Noata speaking) “I kept getting letters with the same coin but they were all anonymous.” “I couldn’t stop thinking about who wrote those letters” “Eventually I got a different kind of letter”.
“A package?” “Wow this person must really like me
(After opening the package) A bracelet I could swear I’ve seen this before, were have I seen a black bracelet with a chain before.” “Ahh never mind”.
“AHHHHH MY HEAD’!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Monster pops out of Noata’s head.)
“OH MY GOD WHAT IS THAT”!!!!!!!
(Noata speaking) “Just then at that moment I remembered everything I grabbed the guitar and pulled out the motor string and went after it as I got closer to it I jumped of the scooter and hit it with my guitar after only three hits the monster was defeated.” “Then I heard I a familiar voice,”
\ “Hey Tak-kun you learned how to use the guitar just like me”.
“Haruko is that you”!?!
“Yep Atamisk is back on earth and I’m not stopping till I get his power”. “And plus I was starting to miss you”. “It was starting to get boring without you, Tak-kun.”
“I missed you too Haruko”. (Noata blushes) “Why did you send me all those coins”?
“Those are some rare coins there worth a lot”
“Oh that makes sence”.
(Noata speaking)
“And just like that Haruko was back into my life”. “After four years she just came back”. “I’m glad she did I mean I am in well…. Love with her.” “In the process I even learned how to use her guitar”. “Things would just keep looking up too”. “The next day Mamimi even came back.”
[Mamimi's voice]
"Tak-kun? Tak-kun are you there?"
"Mamimi? You're back too?"
"Too? What do you mean too?"
"Haruko got back recently too. She's at the house right now."
"Oh well that's nice."
"I really missed you Mamimi."
"I missed you too Tak-kun."
(Haruko suddenly appears)
"HEY! I thought you missed ME Tak-kun!"
"Well......I.......uh......."
"NO he missed ME!"
(Haruko gets furious and takes out her guitar)
"TAKKUN!!!!!!!" AHHHHHHHHHHHHH
(Naota runs away)
(Mamimi and Haruko) "GET BACK HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And heres part 2
Episode 8
(Noata Talking) “Haruko and Mamimi have bin fighting for a week about who I missed more”. “Haruko usually wins with threats from her guitar”. “The restaurant hasn’t bin to busy with there constant fighting”. “I’ve bin trying to avoid Haruko and Mamimi but they always seem to find me”. (Sigh) “I just hope it stops soon”.
“Finally dinner time I wonder what I should”. (Noata walks into kitchen and sees his brother) “Hi little bro”.
“OH MY GOD”!!!!!!!!! (Haruko storms in) “So this is the infamous
“WHAT WAIT HARUKO LEAVE NOW”!!!!!!! “Why does she have to leave little bro?” “Something… personal?” “WHY ARE YOU EVEN HERE”!!!!!!!
“The baseball season is over I had some free time so I decided to come for a visit.
(Noata speaking)”After dinner things kinda calmed down a bit” “So I took a shower and got ready for bed”.
“I still can’t believe u came back sorry about earlier I was just shocked I guess you could say.”
"Where’s Kamon?”
"He’s looking after our house in America”.
“How is America”? “I mean how it is like there”?
"It’s a lot different from Japan”
”What about your baseball are you doing well”?
"Ya I already have my own baseball card hehe”
“Wow you must be great.”
"Yep I’m afraid to walk in the street paparazzi follow me everywhere”
You have paparazzi following you”? Are you famous there”?
“Umm ya.”
“Is it bad there?”
"Yea I have to put practically 5 locks on every door.”
"Yep”
“Wow there hasn’t been anything happening in Mabase only the norm.”
“Well it’s pretty exciting there.”
“When do you have to leave again?
“In a month”
“That soon? Is baseball played all the time there”?
"No but I can't trust dad with the house for to long."
“Ya I suppose your right.”
"Man he comes home with a different women every night.”
“I believe that. Is he still that much of a pervert?”
“You don’t no the half of it.”
“Yeah must be different living there with him and his *guests*.Guess who came back to Mabase the other day?
"Who?"
“Mamimi”!!!
"OH MY GOD YAY.”
"WHER IS SHE?”
“Ya ill bet she'll be happy to see you. She became a photographer.”
"Wow I always thought shed be a photographer.”
“Yeah she was always taking pictures with her camera of everything. “I wonder where she is in Mabase”?
"Well the bridge would make a pretty good picture maybe she’s there
Probably right. Think she has Takune?
"Who’s Takune”?
“The cat”
"She got a cat wow”
"Haruko runs in"
"HIIIIII!!!”
”AHHHHHHHHHHH”!!!!!!! “WHAT ARE YOU DOING”!!!!!!
"Whacks Noata with guitar"
*wired black and white clip*
“WHHAHHHAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!”
*CRASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!*
“OH MY GOD RUN IT’S HER AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!”
*Noata storms out of the house*
*Tasku sits very perplexed*
"What’s going on"???
“I hit him on the head what does it look like”!?!?
"IT LOOKS LIKE YOU JUST ESCAPED FROM AN ASYLUM “
“Why”?*starts her guitar*
(TASKU RIPS OUT BAT) GET THE HELL AWAY
*looks quite confused and put her guitar down*
“so your takuns brother?”
"Yep....Wait isn’t his name Noata?”
“Ya but everyone calls him Takune now.”
"Wait I sleep in your bed were am I gonna sleep now?”
Later that night
"Stupid Tasku making me sleep on the couch.”
(Scene moves to Noata’s room)
“I haven’t seen you in five years Tasku.”
“I’ve missed you little bro.”
“So what did I miss?”
“Id rather not talk about it.”
“It could take weeks to explain.”
“Wow a lot of crazy stuff must have
happened here well I was gone.”
“Oh you have no idea.”
“Who was that girl anyway?”
“Her name is Haruhara Haruko”
“She changed my life……..a lot”
“How”?
“I don’t want to get into it”
“Why”
“Cause that’s what could take
weeks to tell you.”
(Noata) *Sigh*
“It’s so boring here in Mabase”
(Mammi knocks on door)
“Who is it?”
“It’s Mamimi.”
“YAY IT’S MAMIMI”!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
“IS THAT TASKU”
“OH MY GOD”
“I’LL BE RIGHT THER”
(Tasku opens door)
“It’s bin so long”
“I know Tasku but now you’re here”
(Mamimi falls into Tasku’s arms)
Im working on ep number 9 im already almost done
My script..
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by Maskan » Wed Oct 25, 2006 2:45 am
that was very good
zilabus wrote:Maskan, you never make mistakes. Ever.
cd wrote:Steamer of Cleveland wrote:Durandal wrote:I've done it at least ten ti- is that Machieavdelalellsielsiamnism? fapfapfapfapfap
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by Maskan » Wed Oct 25, 2006 3:28 am
yes i think this is worth linking
zilabus wrote:Maskan, you never make mistakes. Ever.
cd wrote:Steamer of Cleveland wrote:Durandal wrote:I've done it at least ten ti- is that Machieavdelalellsielsiamnism? fapfapfapfapfap
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by Azmount Aryl » Wed Oct 25, 2006 7:44 pm
Yes, we most defenitaly need more options....
Personally 'I' wouldn't mind to be able to fly. And my brother always wanted X-Ray vision so he could look at pretty female bodies.
Lets ask God, i bet if we all scream about it at the same time - he will give us more options.
Personally 'I' wouldn't mind to be able to fly. And my brother always wanted X-Ray vision so he could look at pretty female bodies.
Lets ask God, i bet if we all scream about it at the same time - he will give us more options.
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by cd2220 » Wed Oct 25, 2006 9:13 pm
heres the latest installment in my new flcl series once again let me about mistakes hope u like it
Fooly Cooly 9
(Noata Speaking) “I was glad Mamimi and Haruko had stopped fighting”. “Finally I could get some rest and I’m also extremely happy my brother came back because I just don’t think I could have chosen between Haruko and Mamimi.” “Haruko already got to a bad start with my brother so I better fix that before she hits him with her guitar.” “It may sound weird but I’m loving the craziness”.
“GET IT UP”
“AHHHHHHHHHHHH”
“WHATS GOING ON!!!!!!!!!”
*Opens eyes and sees guitar over head*
“OH MY GOD GET AWAY!!!!!!!!”
*Jumps out of bed*
“HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII”
*Gets hit with guitar*
“NO NO NO NO NO NO NO”
“I’M NOT HAVING MORE ROBOTS COME OUT OF MY HEAD”
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO”
*Noata Blacks out and falls to the ground unconscious*
“Yes I win round three”
*Tasku walks into the room*
“WHAT THE HELL, OH MY GOD WHAT DID YOU”
“THAT’S IT WERES MY BAT”
*Haruko pulls her guitar in the air and swings at Tasku*
*Tasku ducks and finds his bat on the ground near Noata*
*Tasku swings for Harukos head but misses*
*Haruko swings at his leg but he blocks with his bat*
*Tasku swings at her leg but she jumps*
*Haruko swings at his legs hits it and he falls to the ground writhing in pain*
*As he is on the ground he swings at her legs she falls*
*Tasku whacks her in the head and she faints*
“Maybe I shouldn’t have come back”
*Tasku faints on the ground*
6 Hours Later
“Get up”
*Noata wakes in a hospital bed*
“Huh AHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT HAPPENED IS SHE STILL HERE”
“Calm down Takun”
“She’s not even conscious”
“Phew, wait who I is that”?
“It’s Mamimi”
“How long have you bin here”?
“For 6 hour when I came in all of you were
unconscious and beat up when I came in I called
an ambulance.
“All of us I thought it was only me and Haruko”
“Nope your brother has broken leg and a fractured
Nose and Haruko has a broken leg and a broken
ankle.
“I couldn’t even count all the cuts they had”
“Wow, I really wished I new they would hate
Hate each other so much then I we could’ve
avoided all this”
“Yea some crazy things happened there”
“Please remind me to get up early from now on”
“I think I will, we don’t want this happing every
Morning”
“Yaaaaa I don’t either.”
“Where’s my brother?”
“He’s in the room next to you number 124 but you’re in to bad condition to even get up”
“What are you talking about I’ve bin hit with that guitar one to many times to be that messed up”
*Noata gets up and walks out of the room*
“Room Number 124”
“I hope he’s not to messed up”
*Noata opens the door walks into the room*
*Noata stops in astonishment on how messed up his brother is*
“ARE YOU OKAY?”
“What do you think” he says in a straining voice
“Why aren’t you Noata?”
“I just got used to it”
“YOU MEAN THIS HAPPENS ALL THE TIME!!!!”
“Yep so you better get used to it”
“By the way be pre-pared for giant monsters, her, and other crazy stuff that shouldn’t happen”
“But you’ll get used to it soon”
“Maybe I’ll go home early”
END OF EPISODE THREE
Fooly Cooly 9
(Noata Speaking) “I was glad Mamimi and Haruko had stopped fighting”. “Finally I could get some rest and I’m also extremely happy my brother came back because I just don’t think I could have chosen between Haruko and Mamimi.” “Haruko already got to a bad start with my brother so I better fix that before she hits him with her guitar.” “It may sound weird but I’m loving the craziness”.
“GET IT UP”
“AHHHHHHHHHHHH”
“WHATS GOING ON!!!!!!!!!”
*Opens eyes and sees guitar over head*
“OH MY GOD GET AWAY!!!!!!!!”
*Jumps out of bed*
“HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII”
*Gets hit with guitar*
“NO NO NO NO NO NO NO”
“I’M NOT HAVING MORE ROBOTS COME OUT OF MY HEAD”
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO”
*Noata Blacks out and falls to the ground unconscious*
“Yes I win round three”
*Tasku walks into the room*
“WHAT THE HELL, OH MY GOD WHAT DID YOU”
“THAT’S IT WERES MY BAT”
*Haruko pulls her guitar in the air and swings at Tasku*
*Tasku ducks and finds his bat on the ground near Noata*
*Tasku swings for Harukos head but misses*
*Haruko swings at his leg but he blocks with his bat*
*Tasku swings at her leg but she jumps*
*Haruko swings at his legs hits it and he falls to the ground writhing in pain*
*As he is on the ground he swings at her legs she falls*
*Tasku whacks her in the head and she faints*
“Maybe I shouldn’t have come back”
*Tasku faints on the ground*
6 Hours Later
“Get up”
*Noata wakes in a hospital bed*
“Huh AHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT HAPPENED IS SHE STILL HERE”
“Calm down Takun”
“She’s not even conscious”
“Phew, wait who I is that”?
“It’s Mamimi”
“How long have you bin here”?
“For 6 hour when I came in all of you were
unconscious and beat up when I came in I called
an ambulance.
“All of us I thought it was only me and Haruko”
“Nope your brother has broken leg and a fractured
Nose and Haruko has a broken leg and a broken
ankle.
“I couldn’t even count all the cuts they had”
“Wow, I really wished I new they would hate
Hate each other so much then I we could’ve
avoided all this”
“Yea some crazy things happened there”
“Please remind me to get up early from now on”
“I think I will, we don’t want this happing every
Morning”
“Yaaaaa I don’t either.”
“Where’s my brother?”
“He’s in the room next to you number 124 but you’re in to bad condition to even get up”
“What are you talking about I’ve bin hit with that guitar one to many times to be that messed up”
*Noata gets up and walks out of the room*
“Room Number 124”
“I hope he’s not to messed up”
*Noata opens the door walks into the room*
*Noata stops in astonishment on how messed up his brother is*
“ARE YOU OKAY?”
“What do you think” he says in a straining voice
“Why aren’t you Noata?”
“I just got used to it”
“YOU MEAN THIS HAPPENS ALL THE TIME!!!!”
“Yep so you better get used to it”
“By the way be pre-pared for giant monsters, her, and other crazy stuff that shouldn’t happen”
“But you’ll get used to it soon”
“Maybe I’ll go home early”
END OF EPISODE THREE
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by Maskan » Wed Oct 25, 2006 11:37 pm
that was awsome man your still doin good 
zilabus wrote:Maskan, you never make mistakes. Ever.
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