not only can i draw,but i can write poetry! [UPDATED!]

[one_armed_scissor]

a selection of poems i did.
tell me what you think?


"...then morpheus envelops"

crime this can be developed
a simple sign of silouhette
a cataclism of pompeii
to remain the same song

sliced into simple veins
jagged pulp quenches the thirst
no body has the tone to regain the lance
of our souls

then morpheus envelopes
a crime to commit inside out
horse and carridge came out
crying to comfort

tungsten cough drops erode
if the memory is turned off
love and peace is so hard to regain its ground

make it so
make it so
make it so and so

chance is not a simple quest
an answer is hard to find
tide is blood letting
is the key to youth

little girl has dilemas
but she has questions of love
the man named morpheus begins to lecture off and on

make it so
make it so
make it so and so

stay with me to regain control
smile and cry to please the masses
make it so


"concept to reality"

when these leaves
collapse into stone
i gain new concept

turn into salt
and break fire rain
i gain new concept

no ones here to find my true someone
maybe the red fog will
send me an angel
and with all do respect
soldiers are here bless this beautifull mural

i have failed(have failed)
to be here with you
i lose reality
and she died(she died)
and i am the cause
i lose reality

no ones here to find my true someone
maybe the red fog will
send me an angel
and with all do respect
soldiers are here
bless this beautifull mural
no ones here to find my true someone
maybe the red fog will
send me an angel
and with all do respect
soldiers are here
bless this beautifull mural


"a beautifull angel playing a golden harp"

sitting on a park bench
staring at the tourqoise blue sky
noticed the tiniest twinkle
relaxed on a little white cloud

a beautifull angel playing a golden harp

and she played
from the day till the
dead of the night all the time

she floats in the air
hair as black as the dim moon
smiles with rosey lips
as bright as the glowing sun
she plays with no end
maybe till the end of time

the beautifull angel playing a golden harp





more to come!

[adam]

Hey man that's pretty deep.....

[one_armed_scissor]

Hey man that's pretty deep.....

yay! i thought i was gonna get a
"that doesnt rhyme. or i dont get it" kinda thing
i try to have em in a complicated way
cuz i am sorta like that.

[adam]

Well I like it! I like it's depth you know when you say "Crime this can be developed a simple sign of silouhette a cataclism of pompeii to remain the same song." The visionary is great along with the transitions.

[one_armed_scissor]

Well I like it! I like it's depth you know when you say "Crime this can be developed a simple sign of silouhette a cataclism of pompeii to remain the same song." The visionary is great along with the transitions.

thanks,thats very complimentary of you.!

[adam]

Yeah no problem so who are your role-models in poetry?

[one_armed_scissor]

Yeah no problem so who are your role-models in poetry?

cedric bixler zavala
lead vocals for
the mars volta

[adam]

ah never heard of them/him. Cool though!

[one_armed_scissor]

ah never heard of them/him. Cool though!

check the mars volta on google,youtube,myspace,facebook/
there pretty much in every web thingie.

[yellowrock]

really more like song lyrics than a poem, cause of the chorus...but hey...

[adam]

ah never heard of them/him. Cool though!

check the mars volta on google,youtube,myspace,facebook/
there pretty much in every web thingie.

I just listened to them on itunes. A very interesting group indeed.....

[one_armed_scissor]

really more like song lyrics than a poem, cause of the chorus...but hey...

uhuh.
thats pretty much it.

and adam,
thats my inspiration!

[adam]

very cool, but chorus's are actually also commonly found in poetry.

[one_armed_scissor]

very cool, but chorus's are actually also commonly found in poetry.

yep.
im also thinking of writing
an epic poem.
like "partadise lost"

maybe about
a girl whos just wandering.
cool huh?

[adam]

Yeah sounds like a work in progress keep at it!